Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
LIMERICKS 70 and 71
Suresh said:
Loafer, is what my father would say,
Seeing my expression of sheer dismay.
Thanks for the laughs
December 29th, 2020 06:06
Suresh said:
Loafer, is what my father would say,
Seeing my expression of sheer dismay.
Thanks for the laughs
December 29th, 2020 06:06
TWO SHORTIES
L. B. Mek said:
a wonderful gem you\'ve shared dear friend, the artwork would have been enough for me to favourite, with those juxtaposed set of \'peak\'s\',
one pair at that low colourless tide - by the edge on the \'left\' of life...
and the other off-kilter \'couple\' towering high on the right - coloured in-full and imposing,
as if saying: at all times, we are one - we wait it out, intrusting in that level foundation we built our life\'s musical of love upon...
hope that brave certain \'someone\' in your life gleans all the meaning you\'ve imbued into your wonderful dedication Michael,
a great write as well!
(though I may be interpreting your meaning in my own self-centred way, to find I\'m grasping at straws you never planted, if so: forgive my overzealous nature my friend)
December 29th, 2020 05:33
L. B. Mek said:
a wonderful gem you\'ve shared dear friend, the artwork would have been enough for me to favourite, with those juxtaposed set of \'peak\'s\',
one pair at that low colourless tide - by the edge on the \'left\' of life...
and the other off-kilter \'couple\' towering high on the right - coloured in-full and imposing,
as if saying: at all times, we are one - we wait it out, intrusting in that level foundation we built our life\'s musical of love upon...
hope that brave certain \'someone\' in your life gleans all the meaning you\'ve imbued into your wonderful dedication Michael,
a great write as well!
(though I may be interpreting your meaning in my own self-centred way, to find I\'m grasping at straws you never planted, if so: forgive my overzealous nature my friend)
December 29th, 2020 05:33
LIMERICKS 70 and 71
orchidee said:
Good writes M. lol. You all dressed up with nowhere to go?
I only spoil New Years Eve anyway. I turn up at parties with me water syphon - the Phantom Whisky-Waterer!
December 29th, 2020 02:29
orchidee said:
Good writes M. lol. You all dressed up with nowhere to go?
I only spoil New Years Eve anyway. I turn up at parties with me water syphon - the Phantom Whisky-Waterer!
December 29th, 2020 02:29
LIMERICKS 70 and 71
Goldfinch60 said:
The second one is so very true in these Strange Times (though not so strange anymore).
Andy
December 29th, 2020 01:45
Goldfinch60 said:
The second one is so very true in these Strange Times (though not so strange anymore).
Andy
December 29th, 2020 01:45
THE CHIC MURRAY COLLECTION 4 - 6
FineB said:
Hi Michael
A superb write and a gorgeous picture.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
December 28th, 2020 11:50
FineB said:
Hi Michael
A superb write and a gorgeous picture.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
December 28th, 2020 11:50
A SERRY VERRY WISTMAS
FineB said:
Hi Michael,
A jolly good write.
Glad that you are having a good time over Xmas!
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
December 28th, 2020 11:46
FineB said:
Hi Michael,
A jolly good write.
Glad that you are having a good time over Xmas!
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
December 28th, 2020 11:46
TWO SHORTIES
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
The swan of legend, of course, sings once before she dies. Back in the days when I was trying to learn to sing madrigals, of course I sang \"The Silver Swan\" (Orlando Gibbons, 1610):
The silver Swan, who, living, had no Note,
When Death approached, unlocked her silent throat,
Leaning her breast upon the reedy shore,
Thus sang her first and last, and sang no more:
“Farewell, all joys! O Death, come close mine eyes!
More Geese than Swans now live, more Fools than Wise.”
A friend of mine had a professor in college who was an inadvertent master of malaprop and mixed metaphor. On the last day of class he announced \"I\'ll do my swan dance today.\"
Love your graphic (I just stole it). When I saw your previous one, I thought \"Is that Joan Miró or Paul Klee\"?
December 28th, 2020 09:49
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
The swan of legend, of course, sings once before she dies. Back in the days when I was trying to learn to sing madrigals, of course I sang \"The Silver Swan\" (Orlando Gibbons, 1610):
The silver Swan, who, living, had no Note,
When Death approached, unlocked her silent throat,
Leaning her breast upon the reedy shore,
Thus sang her first and last, and sang no more:
“Farewell, all joys! O Death, come close mine eyes!
More Geese than Swans now live, more Fools than Wise.”
A friend of mine had a professor in college who was an inadvertent master of malaprop and mixed metaphor. On the last day of class he announced \"I\'ll do my swan dance today.\"
Love your graphic (I just stole it). When I saw your previous one, I thought \"Is that Joan Miró or Paul Klee\"?
December 28th, 2020 09:49
TWO SHORTIES
dusk arising said:
I have a blackbird who comes to me in milder evenings to sing. His music is the root of all the music i hear elsewhere. Music is emotion brought into the audible sphere and that birds song brings all sorts of emotion to mind.
The blackbirds song is my tap on the reality of how i personally relate to the natural world around us.
December 28th, 2020 08:43
dusk arising said:
I have a blackbird who comes to me in milder evenings to sing. His music is the root of all the music i hear elsewhere. Music is emotion brought into the audible sphere and that birds song brings all sorts of emotion to mind.
The blackbirds song is my tap on the reality of how i personally relate to the natural world around us.
December 28th, 2020 08:43
TWO SHORTIES
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha- ha - -- your mind is a hive of originality dear Michael - -- I love the clever line-drawing too.
December 28th, 2020 06:37
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha- ha - -- your mind is a hive of originality dear Michael - -- I love the clever line-drawing too.
December 28th, 2020 06:37
TWO SHORTIES
Goldfinch60 said:
I have seen swans singing pop, mind you they were Whooper Swans! 🦢🦢🦢.
I very much relate to the second one Cecil.
Another intriguing artwork Michael.
Andy
December 28th, 2020 04:31
Goldfinch60 said:
I have seen swans singing pop, mind you they were Whooper Swans! 🦢🦢🦢.
I very much relate to the second one Cecil.
Another intriguing artwork Michael.
Andy
December 28th, 2020 04:31
PAINTING SNOW
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
You\'re unusual on MyPoeticLife in that you write metrical verse. Iambic tetrameter couplets are something I\'m very interested in - see my Christmas Fete poem posted on Christmas Day.
December 27th, 2020 18:08
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
You\'re unusual on MyPoeticLife in that you write metrical verse. Iambic tetrameter couplets are something I\'m very interested in - see my Christmas Fete poem posted on Christmas Day.
December 27th, 2020 18:08
PAINTING SNOW
Jerry Reynolds said:
Like both the painting and the poem Michael. Poured gesso on a canvas moved it around a bit with a pallet knife. Wrote in small letters in the center TUNDRA it sold.
December 27th, 2020 14:12
Jerry Reynolds said:
Like both the painting and the poem Michael. Poured gesso on a canvas moved it around a bit with a pallet knife. Wrote in small letters in the center TUNDRA it sold.
December 27th, 2020 14:12
PAINTING SNOW
FineB said:
Merry Xmas Michael,
A good write on snow.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
December 27th, 2020 06:42
FineB said:
Merry Xmas Michael,
A good write on snow.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
December 27th, 2020 06:42
PAINTING SNOW
dusk arising said:
I tried my hand at writing slush
gave it up, knocked down by a bus.
wrote a sonnet on the canal top ice
but the ice was thin, i paid the price
so i turned at last to compose in fog
stupidly i wandered into a bog
so still i try, here at my pooter
dumbstuck as usual, in a stupor
December 27th, 2020 06:33
dusk arising said:
I tried my hand at writing slush
gave it up, knocked down by a bus.
wrote a sonnet on the canal top ice
but the ice was thin, i paid the price
so i turned at last to compose in fog
stupidly i wandered into a bog
so still i try, here at my pooter
dumbstuck as usual, in a stupor
December 27th, 2020 06:33
PAINTING SNOW
Neville said:
Sleet ... Snow joke that ... but funny as summat that rhymes with stuck........
December 27th, 2020 05:19
Neville said:
Sleet ... Snow joke that ... but funny as summat that rhymes with stuck........
December 27th, 2020 05:19
PAINTING SNOW
Goldfinch60 said:
You could always sculpt snow but it still would not last . God fun write Michael.
Another very intriguing artwork and as you know I love things that intrigue me and this one is no exception.
Andy
December 27th, 2020 03:24
Goldfinch60 said:
You could always sculpt snow but it still would not last . God fun write Michael.
Another very intriguing artwork and as you know I love things that intrigue me and this one is no exception.
Andy
December 27th, 2020 03:24
PAINTING SNOW
orchidee said:
Oh lol, good write and pic M.
I produced a blank sheet of paper. A painting entitled \'A town covered in snow!\' It might be worth millions. heehee.
Do you know that painting of a black sheet of paper: \'A black cat in a coal cellar at midnight\'?
December 27th, 2020 03:13
orchidee said:
Oh lol, good write and pic M.
I produced a blank sheet of paper. A painting entitled \'A town covered in snow!\' It might be worth millions. heehee.
Do you know that painting of a black sheet of paper: \'A black cat in a coal cellar at midnight\'?
December 27th, 2020 03:13
A SERRY VERRY WISTMAS
Goldfinch60 said:
Yppah Samtsirhc ot uoy sa llew Leahcim.
Ydna
December 24th, 2020 01:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Yppah Samtsirhc ot uoy sa llew Leahcim.
Ydna
December 24th, 2020 01:21
A SERRY VERRY WISTMAS
Fay Slimm. said:
Got it and love it my friend and the wery same wishes to - - hic - here\'s to the sheasons great cellebrashons - -whoops jus. gotta fill up me wassail agen.
December 23rd, 2020 12:38
Fay Slimm. said:
Got it and love it my friend and the wery same wishes to - - hic - here\'s to the sheasons great cellebrashons - -whoops jus. gotta fill up me wassail agen.
December 23rd, 2020 12:38
A SERRY VERRY WISTMAS
FredPeyer said:
And the same to you and yours, my MPS friend! Mele Kalikimaka!
December 23rd, 2020 10:43
FredPeyer said:
And the same to you and yours, my MPS friend! Mele Kalikimaka!
December 23rd, 2020 10:43
A SERRY VERRY WISTMAS
dusk arising said:
Lash nite i wash pished as a newt and ish not chrimbo yet. never again....
December 23rd, 2020 06:44
dusk arising said:
Lash nite i wash pished as a newt and ish not chrimbo yet. never again....
December 23rd, 2020 06:44
A SERRY VERRY WISTMAS
orchidee said:
Ahh, you\'ve started early. Gin?
Goodsh wishesh to you and yoursh alsho! And to Missh Berlesh and Co.
December 23rd, 2020 02:45
orchidee said:
Ahh, you\'ve started early. Gin?
Goodsh wishesh to you and yoursh alsho! And to Missh Berlesh and Co.
December 23rd, 2020 02:45
A PAIR OF ANTIQUES
L. B. Mek said:
while I appreciate your skill for crisp imagery: \'patina knicker\'s\', is not something I ever wanted my over-indulgent imagination to picture with such detail... Ahem! lol
btw, your comment on Fred\'s write had me almost in tears (bits of me: indeed) lmao
oh and I took a few minutes to appreciate that beautifully serene scene of \'our everyday\', we sadly take for granted it seems,
thanks for all the chuckles on a dreary Monday morning Michael
December 21st, 2020 06:28
L. B. Mek said:
while I appreciate your skill for crisp imagery: \'patina knicker\'s\', is not something I ever wanted my over-indulgent imagination to picture with such detail... Ahem! lol
btw, your comment on Fred\'s write had me almost in tears (bits of me: indeed) lmao
oh and I took a few minutes to appreciate that beautifully serene scene of \'our everyday\', we sadly take for granted it seems,
thanks for all the chuckles on a dreary Monday morning Michael
December 21st, 2020 06:28
A PAIR OF ANTIQUES
FredPeyer said:
Michael,
your sense of humor does light up this site!
December 20th, 2020 11:57
FredPeyer said:
Michael,
your sense of humor does light up this site!
December 20th, 2020 11:57
A PAIR OF ANTIQUES
Doggerel Dave said:
Where did you wear them? :-)
Dave
PS: testing ..One.. two..three.........Don\';t know how long this will last before deletion.....thought I\'d see...
December 20th, 2020 06:38
Doggerel Dave said:
Where did you wear them? :-)
Dave
PS: testing ..One.. two..three.........Don\';t know how long this will last before deletion.....thought I\'d see...
December 20th, 2020 06:38
A PAIR OF ANTIQUES
Goldfinch60 said:
The patina on antiques is so important according to the experts.
Andy
December 20th, 2020 02:55
Goldfinch60 said:
The patina on antiques is so important according to the experts.
Andy
December 20th, 2020 02:55
A PAIR OF ANTIQUES
jarcher54 said:
Did you wear them? Or are you a collector???
December 20th, 2020 02:55
jarcher54 said:
Did you wear them? Or are you a collector???
December 20th, 2020 02:55
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