Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
ASSURANCE NURTURES JOY
orchidee said:
Good wrtie and pic M.
Miss Berles has her serious head on too. She asks how are syllables these days? Are there enough in stock?!
November 4th, 2020 02:46
orchidee said:
Good wrtie and pic M.
Miss Berles has her serious head on too. She asks how are syllables these days? Are there enough in stock?!
November 4th, 2020 02:46
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Neville said:
these unsame\'s are summat else .. as is the art work ... how do you do that .. the art that is ?
November 3rd, 2020 13:00
Neville said:
these unsame\'s are summat else .. as is the art work ... how do you do that .. the art that is ?
November 3rd, 2020 13:00
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L. B. Mek said:
in your picture I find the muscle, within your words I hear each pulsating beat - both meaningful individually, combined: a shower of insightful observations that entreat us to dwell on the wisdom of your song,
great pic and write Michael
November 2nd, 2020 05:30
L. B. Mek said:
in your picture I find the muscle, within your words I hear each pulsating beat - both meaningful individually, combined: a shower of insightful observations that entreat us to dwell on the wisdom of your song,
great pic and write Michael
November 2nd, 2020 05:30
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Neville said:
three of the best Michael .. and like GF60, I too like the last one an awful lot ........................................................... :)
November 1st, 2020 16:58
Neville said:
three of the best Michael .. and like GF60, I too like the last one an awful lot ........................................................... :)
November 1st, 2020 16:58
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FineB said:
Hello Michael,
An interesting, good write.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
November 1st, 2020 13:20
FineB said:
Hello Michael,
An interesting, good write.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
November 1st, 2020 13:20
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ANGELA & BRIAN said:
A & B & C here Uncle Mike ~ Good Sunday ~ Three Good Political SENRYU !
No. 1. Bioris\' Brain @ full stretch !
No. 2. Corbin trying to speak YIDDISH !
No. 3. Nicola Sturgeons Cabinet !
Love the Geometric Visual ! Biosynthesis (in a Human Host) of COVID 19 !
Blessings & NO NO NOVEMBER to You & Yours
Lockdown Lovin* A & B & Smokey 💛💛💛💛💛
WE*re back postin* ! Pleas check ODE & FUSION ~ Ta !
November 1st, 2020 10:25
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
A & B & C here Uncle Mike ~ Good Sunday ~ Three Good Political SENRYU !
No. 1. Bioris\' Brain @ full stretch !
No. 2. Corbin trying to speak YIDDISH !
No. 3. Nicola Sturgeons Cabinet !
Love the Geometric Visual ! Biosynthesis (in a Human Host) of COVID 19 !
Blessings & NO NO NOVEMBER to You & Yours
Lockdown Lovin* A & B & Smokey 💛💛💛💛💛
WE*re back postin* ! Pleas check ODE & FUSION ~ Ta !
November 1st, 2020 10:25
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dusk arising said:
I agree, three good ones and clever. Beyond my scope to contribute this morning.
Creating a picture like today and yesterday must be very difficult, achieving the pleasing finished article is lots more than geometry.
November 1st, 2020 03:29
dusk arising said:
I agree, three good ones and clever. Beyond my scope to contribute this morning.
Creating a picture like today and yesterday must be very difficult, achieving the pleasing finished article is lots more than geometry.
November 1st, 2020 03:29
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orchidee said:
Good writes and pic M.
Sometimes though we might wish we had a bit of time to be bored. \'I should like to have the time\' says Miss Berles, \'but I gotta keep constant watch on these syllables!\' lol.
November 1st, 2020 02:56
orchidee said:
Good writes and pic M.
Sometimes though we might wish we had a bit of time to be bored. \'I should like to have the time\' says Miss Berles, \'but I gotta keep constant watch on these syllables!\' lol.
November 1st, 2020 02:56
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jarcher54 said:
One should never ignore suspicions!
Blends of catarrh? Sounds like some sort of homemade watercolors. At my job we do not lock our grey men in. They lock their doors from within!
November 1st, 2020 02:08
jarcher54 said:
One should never ignore suspicions!
Blends of catarrh? Sounds like some sort of homemade watercolors. At my job we do not lock our grey men in. They lock their doors from within!
November 1st, 2020 02:08
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Goldfinch60 said:
Three good one Michael, I especially like the last one as I have seen that in my working life, they just sit at their desks looking so bored.
Andy
November 1st, 2020 01:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Three good one Michael, I especially like the last one as I have seen that in my working life, they just sit at their desks looking so bored.
Andy
November 1st, 2020 01:43
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FineB said:
Hi Michael,
A witty write.
Great.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
October 30th, 2020 04:59
FineB said:
Hi Michael,
A witty write.
Great.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
October 30th, 2020 04:59
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FineB said:
Hello Michael,
A wonderful write with some very valid home truths.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
October 30th, 2020 04:57
FineB said:
Hello Michael,
A wonderful write with some very valid home truths.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
October 30th, 2020 04:57
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Fay Slimm. said:
Whooooo - Michael that artwork is more than superb - love your wit in unsameness too......... thanks for sharing them.
October 29th, 2020 05:11
Fay Slimm. said:
Whooooo - Michael that artwork is more than superb - love your wit in unsameness too......... thanks for sharing them.
October 29th, 2020 05:11
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L. B. Mek said:
thanks for teaching me a new word Michael (colicky),
I found this a revealing and brave write but those first two lines are reassuring, I truly hope all, \'will be all right\', soon
October 29th, 2020 05:03
L. B. Mek said:
thanks for teaching me a new word Michael (colicky),
I found this a revealing and brave write but those first two lines are reassuring, I truly hope all, \'will be all right\', soon
October 29th, 2020 05:03
ARBOUR RHYMES WITH BARBER
L. B. Mek said:
fun read,
found your pic a bit psychedelic even if only black n white
October 29th, 2020 04:25
L. B. Mek said:
fun read,
found your pic a bit psychedelic even if only black n white
October 29th, 2020 04:25
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dusk arising said:
She went to the therapist to discuss her recurring nightmare until.... she realised the letter spacing upon his door was incorrect.... all she could see was the rapist.
Later she had her doubts about allowing a practicing surgeon access to her appendix. Had practice yet made perfect?
Distracted and running late one sunday morning the very reverend Hardy was caught in bed and recited the sermon on the mount.
Yes, I love our language both written and spoken.
October 29th, 2020 02:22
dusk arising said:
She went to the therapist to discuss her recurring nightmare until.... she realised the letter spacing upon his door was incorrect.... all she could see was the rapist.
Later she had her doubts about allowing a practicing surgeon access to her appendix. Had practice yet made perfect?
Distracted and running late one sunday morning the very reverend Hardy was caught in bed and recited the sermon on the mount.
Yes, I love our language both written and spoken.
October 29th, 2020 02:22
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Goldfinch60 said:
My first grin of the day Michael, thank you.
How were your eyes after creating that image?
Andy
October 29th, 2020 02:19
Goldfinch60 said:
My first grin of the day Michael, thank you.
How were your eyes after creating that image?
Andy
October 29th, 2020 02:19
ARBOUR RHYMES WITH BARBER
Fay Slimm. said:
I wholly agree with the irks you feel Michael on bad pronunciation - - -there are many versions of numerous words that seem to appear different each week on the radio etc....... hey -ho that is today\'s code for saying it their way eh ?
October 28th, 2020 03:47
Fay Slimm. said:
I wholly agree with the irks you feel Michael on bad pronunciation - - -there are many versions of numerous words that seem to appear different each week on the radio etc....... hey -ho that is today\'s code for saying it their way eh ?
October 28th, 2020 03:47
ARBOUR RHYMES WITH BARBER
dusk arising said:
I could be here as critic,
something parasitic
but last night was paralytic
and now my wrists arthritic
have slowed my brain syphilitic needing a charge electrolytic
or is that too psychoanalytic?
(hic!)
Have you noticed that in the south of the country, over the last couple of decades, the simple word \'no\' has become extended but a taint of Australian accent and now become \'no-ooo\'. It used to be a monosyllable but with the addition of \'ooo\' it has grown another syllable. ...... or is it just me?
October 28th, 2020 03:40
dusk arising said:
I could be here as critic,
something parasitic
but last night was paralytic
and now my wrists arthritic
have slowed my brain syphilitic needing a charge electrolytic
or is that too psychoanalytic?
(hic!)
Have you noticed that in the south of the country, over the last couple of decades, the simple word \'no\' has become extended but a taint of Australian accent and now become \'no-ooo\'. It used to be a monosyllable but with the addition of \'ooo\' it has grown another syllable. ...... or is it just me?
October 28th, 2020 03:40
ARBOUR RHYMES WITH BARBER
Michael Edwards said:
Another one which really gets me going is pronouncing garage as garidge - the introduction of the \'d\' is subtle but grrrr
October 28th, 2020 02:55
Michael Edwards said:
Another one which really gets me going is pronouncing garage as garidge - the introduction of the \'d\' is subtle but grrrr
October 28th, 2020 02:55
ARBOUR RHYMES WITH BARBER
orchidee said:
A previous Vicar said \'On no, it\'s not Chewsday, it\'s Toosday\' (for Tuesday\').
Some folk take a mid-word break, saying \'Thirt-teen\' or \'Fort-teen\', with emphasis on the middle \'t\'.
Will Miss Berles allow these things?
October 28th, 2020 02:39
orchidee said:
A previous Vicar said \'On no, it\'s not Chewsday, it\'s Toosday\' (for Tuesday\').
Some folk take a mid-word break, saying \'Thirt-teen\' or \'Fort-teen\', with emphasis on the middle \'t\'.
Will Miss Berles allow these things?
October 28th, 2020 02:39
ARBOUR RHYMES WITH BARBER
Goldfinch60 said:
There was a comment on the radio yesterday as to why some people pronounce new as noo.
Andy
October 28th, 2020 02:25
Goldfinch60 said:
There was a comment on the radio yesterday as to why some people pronounce new as noo.
Andy
October 28th, 2020 02:25
I KID YOU NOT AT ALL
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Sab bath ~ Uncle Mike - Angela here - Thanks for the Pastiche ! Friends of ours have just bought a *Second Home* in the Costwolds can*t wait to see it & stay. Im Olive Skinned & Black Hair (My Papa being Spanish) - BUT - having been born & raised in England ~ I have a *Middle English Class* accent so I have never experienced any Racial Discrimination. Some of the 100% Spanish Nurses in the Hospital do have Spanish Accents like Manuel from Fawlty Towers which differeniates them ! People are singled out for being DIFFERENT ! For US altering Blackpool or Black Pudding or my Beloved *All Blacks* is a *Bridge too far !* Please check our latest FUSION *What are your Christmas Plans ?* and (if you wish) add a Poem !
Blessings & Peace & Prayers for Joanne
Love Angela - Brian & Smokey 💛💛💛
October 24th, 2020 14:10
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Sab bath ~ Uncle Mike - Angela here - Thanks for the Pastiche ! Friends of ours have just bought a *Second Home* in the Costwolds can*t wait to see it & stay. Im Olive Skinned & Black Hair (My Papa being Spanish) - BUT - having been born & raised in England ~ I have a *Middle English Class* accent so I have never experienced any Racial Discrimination. Some of the 100% Spanish Nurses in the Hospital do have Spanish Accents like Manuel from Fawlty Towers which differeniates them ! People are singled out for being DIFFERENT ! For US altering Blackpool or Black Pudding or my Beloved *All Blacks* is a *Bridge too far !* Please check our latest FUSION *What are your Christmas Plans ?* and (if you wish) add a Poem !
Blessings & Peace & Prayers for Joanne
Love Angela - Brian & Smokey 💛💛💛
October 24th, 2020 14:10
I KID YOU NOT AT ALL
L. B. Mek said:
wait until the Hispanic regions begin their version of \'cancel culture\' self-sanctification, see: at least our vocabulary has dark, tinted, sun-kissed etc
all they got is \'negro\'... \'yikes\', for the poor librarians
PC in of itself is all good, until its being used as a mouthwash to undo all the wrong in peoples mind\'s...
How about we just simplify things, like children (before stubborn pride kicked-in): admit our fault\'s, say our apologies, finding a middle ground to make amends for any and all pain inflicted and then Learn: to not do it again!
maybe then, fellow human beings with darker tints of skin wouldn\'t have their entire value of worth: be reduced to a walking litmus test of other\'s racism levels...
(side note, really like the calm you imbue into your water/paint pictures Michael)
October 24th, 2020 04:50
L. B. Mek said:
wait until the Hispanic regions begin their version of \'cancel culture\' self-sanctification, see: at least our vocabulary has dark, tinted, sun-kissed etc
all they got is \'negro\'... \'yikes\', for the poor librarians
PC in of itself is all good, until its being used as a mouthwash to undo all the wrong in peoples mind\'s...
How about we just simplify things, like children (before stubborn pride kicked-in): admit our fault\'s, say our apologies, finding a middle ground to make amends for any and all pain inflicted and then Learn: to not do it again!
maybe then, fellow human beings with darker tints of skin wouldn\'t have their entire value of worth: be reduced to a walking litmus test of other\'s racism levels...
(side note, really like the calm you imbue into your water/paint pictures Michael)
October 24th, 2020 04:50
I KID YOU NOT AT ALL
dusk arising said:
Surely the correct title should be \'pool of mixed race\' - may contain fish (and chips) - definitely contains nuts.
October 24th, 2020 03:26
dusk arising said:
Surely the correct title should be \'pool of mixed race\' - may contain fish (and chips) - definitely contains nuts.
October 24th, 2020 03:26
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orchidee said:
Erm, yes, they cannot rename it Whitepool!
And following Goldie - Miss Berles been discussing the \'price of fish\'? How much is it? \'Quite expensive\' is the answer
October 24th, 2020 02:06
orchidee said:
Erm, yes, they cannot rename it Whitepool!
And following Goldie - Miss Berles been discussing the \'price of fish\'? How much is it? \'Quite expensive\' is the answer
October 24th, 2020 02:06
I KID YOU NOT AT ALL
Goldfinch60 said:
The PC army are as bad as the Health and Safety Army where they insist on putting \"May contain nuts\" on a jar of peanuts!
Mind you the strangest one I have seen is at the Morrisons Fish Counter where there is a label in front of each type of fish showing which fish it is and the price and there in small print below is \"May contain fish\" on of these days I am going to insist on some fish without fish in it and see what happens.
Andy
October 24th, 2020 01:54
Goldfinch60 said:
The PC army are as bad as the Health and Safety Army where they insist on putting \"May contain nuts\" on a jar of peanuts!
Mind you the strangest one I have seen is at the Morrisons Fish Counter where there is a label in front of each type of fish showing which fish it is and the price and there in small print below is \"May contain fish\" on of these days I am going to insist on some fish without fish in it and see what happens.
Andy
October 24th, 2020 01:54
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myself and me said:
How wonderful it could be to live in town like this and have a cup of tea in the colorful afternoon.
October 22nd, 2020 17:20
myself and me said:
How wonderful it could be to live in town like this and have a cup of tea in the colorful afternoon.
October 22nd, 2020 17:20
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L. B. Mek said:
wonderful artwork, I spent a few minutes just engrossed in all its little details, reminiscent of so many little town centres or their equivalent nucleus,
then that last stanza, standalone: one of the best I have ever read on MPS!
I appreciate the idyllic scene depicted in the picture and its purpose as representation of the commonly assumed \'ideal\' fruition of our life\'s efforts,
while simultaneously projecting a semblance of peace - a picture of that perfect average we take for granted, until we lose it all - in search of the better tomorrow our ambition\'s promise...
Genius! \'in my humble opinion\'
October 22nd, 2020 04:24
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful artwork, I spent a few minutes just engrossed in all its little details, reminiscent of so many little town centres or their equivalent nucleus,
then that last stanza, standalone: one of the best I have ever read on MPS!
I appreciate the idyllic scene depicted in the picture and its purpose as representation of the commonly assumed \'ideal\' fruition of our life\'s efforts,
while simultaneously projecting a semblance of peace - a picture of that perfect average we take for granted, until we lose it all - in search of the better tomorrow our ambition\'s promise...
Genius! \'in my humble opinion\'
October 22nd, 2020 04:24
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