Comments received on poems by MaxWritesPoems
The Pieces
olivergreenwood20 said:
This is a constant mood of mine and you described it so well. Great Write!
November 27th, 2018 15:53
olivergreenwood20 said:
This is a constant mood of mine and you described it so well. Great Write!
November 27th, 2018 15:53
Let Us Just Forget
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Let us forget instead that we are merely a product of our intransigent, fleeting, feelings and that we are truly capable of much, much, more. Let us forge ahead as truth seekers! For your friends whom are having a really tough go of it...refer them to NAMI.
October 12th, 2017 23:08
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Let us forget instead that we are merely a product of our intransigent, fleeting, feelings and that we are truly capable of much, much, more. Let us forge ahead as truth seekers! For your friends whom are having a really tough go of it...refer them to NAMI.
October 12th, 2017 23:08
What No One Ever Talks About
FredPeyer said:
Well penned poem. About the subject, what can i say!
August 29th, 2017 21:46
FredPeyer said:
Well penned poem. About the subject, what can i say!
August 29th, 2017 21:46
I\'m Fine
vivi said:
This is great. A thousand words may often not be enough to explain what\'s hiding beneath the phrase \"I\'m fine\"...
March 21st, 2017 19:25
vivi said:
This is great. A thousand words may often not be enough to explain what\'s hiding beneath the phrase \"I\'m fine\"...
March 21st, 2017 19:25
I\'m Fine
stephanieh1996 said:
Love this! It really relates to a lot of people. Me included every one can ask how I feel and even if I don\'t think I\'m okay I\'ll lie and say I\'m fine!
March 20th, 2017 20:10
stephanieh1996 said:
Love this! It really relates to a lot of people. Me included every one can ask how I feel and even if I don\'t think I\'m okay I\'ll lie and say I\'m fine!
March 20th, 2017 20:10
Grey
anoldwoman said:
Your poem does remind me of someone who is bipolar - either very high and happy or very down and sad. there is only black and white. My mother was bipolar and I have known others like this. Hope you can obtain balance in the seesaw of life
February 11th, 2017 21:08
anoldwoman said:
Your poem does remind me of someone who is bipolar - either very high and happy or very down and sad. there is only black and white. My mother was bipolar and I have known others like this. Hope you can obtain balance in the seesaw of life
February 11th, 2017 21:08
It hurts...
berdnt_victoria said:
I hope everythings okay. I\'m here if you ever need me.
January 11th, 2017 12:07
berdnt_victoria said:
I hope everythings okay. I\'m here if you ever need me.
January 11th, 2017 12:07
Minority.
WriteBeLight said:
You speak so much truth in this poem. Well done.
January 10th, 2017 19:37
WriteBeLight said:
You speak so much truth in this poem. Well done.
January 10th, 2017 19:37
Death of it All
WriteBeLight said:
Broken crayons are just fine and help us color \"outside the lines.\" And, all good things do come to an end, so we must live in the moment. Enjoyed your poem.
December 31st, 2016 12:09
WriteBeLight said:
Broken crayons are just fine and help us color \"outside the lines.\" And, all good things do come to an end, so we must live in the moment. Enjoyed your poem.
December 31st, 2016 12:09
Death of it All
willyweed said:
they do but with a bit of imperfection.
good poem! peace ww
December 31st, 2016 11:23
willyweed said:
they do but with a bit of imperfection.
good poem! peace ww
December 31st, 2016 11:23
Spare a Moment
Benny Selph said:
I do love the idea of this poem. Similar to some things I\'ve written in my notebook. As I see it you are writing for yourself, and no one else. However, i believe in constructive criticism. If you would like to make your writing more complex, try messing with your rhyming patterns. I do love the peice, and enjoy poetry of all types. I like the writing style. Sorry if this was rude, just speaking my mind and trying to help you with your writing.
December 31st, 2016 00:35
Benny Selph said:
I do love the idea of this poem. Similar to some things I\'ve written in my notebook. As I see it you are writing for yourself, and no one else. However, i believe in constructive criticism. If you would like to make your writing more complex, try messing with your rhyming patterns. I do love the peice, and enjoy poetry of all types. I like the writing style. Sorry if this was rude, just speaking my mind and trying to help you with your writing.
December 31st, 2016 00:35
Anxiety.
Christina8 said:
Well written poem. I get what you mean. I have anxiety too. Just try to keep writing and expressing yourself and you\'ll find it helps other people as well. Thanks for sharing!
December 24th, 2016 02:16
Christina8 said:
Well written poem. I get what you mean. I have anxiety too. Just try to keep writing and expressing yourself and you\'ll find it helps other people as well. Thanks for sharing!
December 24th, 2016 02:16
Family Oh Family...
P.H.Rose said:
I really like this poem.
Well done . Max
December 20th, 2016 18:25
P.H.Rose said:
I really like this poem.
Well done . Max
December 20th, 2016 18:25
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