Comments received on poems by Jooles



That hole in my heart (where you use to be)
Jooles said:

Thank you 😊

March 18th, 2017 09:20

That hole in my heart (where you use to be)
WriteBeLight said:

Heart wrenching write Jooles. Very true about loss.

March 18th, 2017 07:21

That hole in my heart (where you use to be)
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks JOOLES for a lovely tribute to a very every dear loved one ! In a sense it made me sad too as I thought of all my near and dear ones who have been called home to Glory. As each one passes the hole in our grieving heart gets bigger. There are two compensations for me ~ ONE ~ I know I will meet them all again in the SWEET SWEET BYE-&-BYE and ~ TWO ~ the Good Lord keeps adding new babies to our Extended Family to compensate. Thanks for caring & sharing ~ HUGS BRIAN

March 18th, 2017 05:44

That hole in my heart (where you use to be)
Edthepoet said:

Wow! Excellent write.

March 17th, 2017 19:17

women\'s rights? what is that?
WriteBeLight said:

Could not agree more ! Totally unfair the way women are seen. Not much has changed😟

March 8th, 2017 06:55

women\'s rights? what is that?
Goldfinch60 said:

Throughout our married life my wife and I have shared the work in the house we both cooked, cleaned and I do all the ironing. I am a great believer in equality for all but now it is all down to my as my wife is unable to do these things any more due to ill health. So I know where you are coming from Jooles. Good write.

March 8th, 2017 02:45

women\'s rights? what is that?
Michael Edwards said:

This seems to be the lot of so many of our lovely women - enjoyed the read - from language used (knackered, Pankhurst etc) are you in the UK - sounds like it.

March 8th, 2017 00:14

women\'s rights? what is that?
Augustus said:

I love women and you did a fine job with the poem. I too feel that the rights got carried a little overboard especially when the movement started creating eunuchs in stead of men.

March 7th, 2017 19:35

women\'s rights? what is that?
ron parrish aka wordman said:

what would we do without our women

March 7th, 2017 19:17

The soul eater
WriteBeLight said:

Ha Ha. I am sure the bad things touched upon here are not that evil. Good job Jooles.

March 2nd, 2017 12:27

The soul eater
Goldfinch60 said:

Demons can come in many guises. Good write.

March 2nd, 2017 02:02

The soul eater
Augustus said:

What a great way to express what a lot of us have experienced.

March 1st, 2017 20:38

The soul eater
willyweed said:

if there is a hell we are living in it here when you die you judge yourself alone just don\'t be to harsh on yourself and you\'ll be fine Plus I \'ll be next door if you need a cup of sugar or whatnot great write. WW

March 1st, 2017 18:27

Neverland
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write, if only?

March 1st, 2017 03:08

Neverland
Augustus said:

Perfectly understandable. The inner child wants to play. Peter Pan is a great example.

February 28th, 2017 21:22

Neverland
WriteBeLight said:

Hit the nail on the head Jooles. Would love to just play Hooky from responsibilities sometimes! Ha Ha pun intended. :)


February 28th, 2017 19:16

The moon
WriteBeLight said:

Love it!

February 21st, 2017 19:34

The moon
Augustus said:

Celestial! Well done.

February 21st, 2017 18:55

The moon
notapoet said:

Awesome write, a very enjoyable read.

February 21st, 2017 17:52

The moon
P.H.Rose said:

Another cracking poem
Well done lassie!!!!

February 21st, 2017 16:50

when your alone with Bon Jovi
P.H.Rose said:

Jooles it\'s great...
I like you love to
Sing in the kitchen
But in the baths best.
My wife is always telling
Me to shut the F up...
She can be such a killjoy
Sometimes... but I still love
Her... love this poem
Well done girl....

February 20th, 2017 18:51

when your alone with Bon Jovi
MendedFences27 said:

Everyone has \"their\" music and I suppose \"their\" dance, but mostly it all remains behind closed doors, never to see the light of day, unless of course, you leave the blind up and draw a crowd. Nicely expressed and thought out, with real images. Is today\'s music? and dance? even palatable? - Phil A.

February 20th, 2017 12:44

when your alone with Bon Jovi
Tony36 said:

Bon Jovi Rocks! Love that group and Love this write

February 20th, 2017 09:11

when your alone with Bon Jovi
Michael Edwards said:

Bon who? Joking aside I can relate with this - Many the time I have been caught conducting a Mahler symphony. keep dancing and good on yer. .

February 20th, 2017 08:33

when your alone with Bon Jovi
WriteBeLight said:

So cute and I can relate. Used to dance and sing with the kids when they were little. So much fun reading this!

February 20th, 2017 08:02

Christmas = chunkiness.....the continuing story
Jooles said:

Thank you

February 19th, 2017 18:45

Christmas = chunkiness.....the continuing story
Augustus said:

Extra helpings is what gets to me. Thanks for a fun piece.

February 19th, 2017 15:58

Christmas = chunkiness.....the continuing story
ron parrish aka wordman said:

lol,i think maybe we all feel like this

February 19th, 2017 13:08

Christmas = chunkiness.....the continuing story
WriteBeLight said:

HA HA that is great!

February 19th, 2017 09:50

Christmas = chunkiness.....the continuing story
Jooles said:

Lol

February 19th, 2017 09:27

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