Comments received on poems by Jooles
Livin on the edge
Poetic Dan said:
Fantastic! The pirate was so stong in me head, to finishing with a cuppa nearly nocked be fa 6 and then biscuits....
Thank you
June 9th, 2017 17:48
Poetic Dan said:
Fantastic! The pirate was so stong in me head, to finishing with a cuppa nearly nocked be fa 6 and then biscuits....
Thank you
June 9th, 2017 17:48
The forgotten
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, my wife has just been diagnosed with dementia and your words apply just the same.
May 12th, 2017 08:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, my wife has just been diagnosed with dementia and your words apply just the same.
May 12th, 2017 08:35
The forgotten
P.X. Vexxus said:
My grandfather suffers from Alzheimer\'s as well. I wrote this poem for him:
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-63083
I\'m glad to see other people showing some respect, and compassion, to those who suffer from Alzheimer\'s. Yours was better than mine, I think :)
May 12th, 2017 04:01
P.X. Vexxus said:
My grandfather suffers from Alzheimer\'s as well. I wrote this poem for him:
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-63083
I\'m glad to see other people showing some respect, and compassion, to those who suffer from Alzheimer\'s. Yours was better than mine, I think :)
May 12th, 2017 04:01
The no poem
willyweed said:
wow Jooles your playing hard to get?
must be a Scottish thing eh? nice poem though! ww
April 6th, 2017 06:54
willyweed said:
wow Jooles your playing hard to get?
must be a Scottish thing eh? nice poem though! ww
April 6th, 2017 06:54
The no poem
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks JOOLES ~ I am very flattered to be your MUSE Monorhyming poems are not easy to write ~ but you did an excellent job and maintained the metre ! I will try reciting it at our next poetry reading ~ it looks very recitable to me ! Loved your use of BLACK & BLUE ~ hope yer didna clock him one wi\' yer baggie ? Nay on\'y a wee lass frae Glasgae would do that ! Love the coquetishness in your wee ode and I\'m goin\' ter send ye a HUG and then duck. Hugs ~ BRIAN
April 6th, 2017 06:02
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks JOOLES ~ I am very flattered to be your MUSE Monorhyming poems are not easy to write ~ but you did an excellent job and maintained the metre ! I will try reciting it at our next poetry reading ~ it looks very recitable to me ! Loved your use of BLACK & BLUE ~ hope yer didna clock him one wi\' yer baggie ? Nay on\'y a wee lass frae Glasgae would do that ! Love the coquetishness in your wee ode and I\'m goin\' ter send ye a HUG and then duck. Hugs ~ BRIAN
April 6th, 2017 06:02
Shake your rear end
willyweed said:
rock that booty! shake! shake! shake!
funny business!
April 5th, 2017 19:05
willyweed said:
rock that booty! shake! shake! shake!
funny business!
April 5th, 2017 19:05
Life .... doesn\'t come with a guide
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, life is full of ups and downs all we need to do is deal with them.
April 5th, 2017 01:31
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, life is full of ups and downs all we need to do is deal with them.
April 5th, 2017 01:31
Life .... doesn\'t come with a guide
poetboy123 said:
This... is just incredible. I\'m in awe.
April 4th, 2017 20:25
poetboy123 said:
This... is just incredible. I\'m in awe.
April 4th, 2017 20:25
Life .... doesn\'t come with a guide
willyweed said:
yes the good the bad and the ugly everyday we live it like a ride on the roller coaster, good poem Jooles and fun to read. peace WW
April 4th, 2017 19:48
willyweed said:
yes the good the bad and the ugly everyday we live it like a ride on the roller coaster, good poem Jooles and fun to read. peace WW
April 4th, 2017 19:48
Life .... doesn\'t come with a guide
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhhhhhhhh JOOLES ~ this is beautiful and so full of flowing emotion ~ straight from your heat ! Love the structure rhyming couplets in balanced quatrains ~ perfect pulsating poetry. The theme that life is unscripted and spontaneous and full of highs & lows is something we can all empathise with. You have expressed it perfectly ! I am a performance poet and I will recite it at our next poetry reading ~ OK Thanks for caring ~ Poetic Hugs ~ BRIAN
April 4th, 2017 17:10
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhhhhhhhh JOOLES ~ this is beautiful and so full of flowing emotion ~ straight from your heat ! Love the structure rhyming couplets in balanced quatrains ~ perfect pulsating poetry. The theme that life is unscripted and spontaneous and full of highs & lows is something we can all empathise with. You have expressed it perfectly ! I am a performance poet and I will recite it at our next poetry reading ~ OK Thanks for caring ~ Poetic Hugs ~ BRIAN
April 4th, 2017 17:10
Oh the weather outside is frightful
Jooles said:
Lol too funny....think Scotland will be the only place global warming has no affect 😅
March 19th, 2017 13:22
Jooles said:
Lol too funny....think Scotland will be the only place global warming has no affect 😅
March 19th, 2017 13:22
Oh the weather outside is frightful
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Och Lassie do yer dinna ken that we keep a\' the Sunny days in London England ! But we a\' need each ither i\' the Union ! We will send yer some bricht Westminster Sun if yer will share ~ yon Haggis ~ yon Kilt and aye even yon Bagpipes an\' Scottish Dancing ! We a\' love Scotia ~ Cymru an\' Ireland (N) Together we are stronger especially after BREXIT an we a\' love Nicola\'s passion ~ she\'s a Bonnie Wee Lassie ! Remember wi\' Global Warmin\' in a few years (2035) Scotland will ha\'e a Mediterranean Climate (like yon South o\' France) and England will be like the GOBI DESSERT and the UK Government will ha\'e to transfer frae Westminster to Auld Reekie ! It was 70F (2iC) last week in London an\' dry as shortbread ~ but i won\'t mention that ~ Hugs BRIAN
March 19th, 2017 11:13
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Och Lassie do yer dinna ken that we keep a\' the Sunny days in London England ! But we a\' need each ither i\' the Union ! We will send yer some bricht Westminster Sun if yer will share ~ yon Haggis ~ yon Kilt and aye even yon Bagpipes an\' Scottish Dancing ! We a\' love Scotia ~ Cymru an\' Ireland (N) Together we are stronger especially after BREXIT an we a\' love Nicola\'s passion ~ she\'s a Bonnie Wee Lassie ! Remember wi\' Global Warmin\' in a few years (2035) Scotland will ha\'e a Mediterranean Climate (like yon South o\' France) and England will be like the GOBI DESSERT and the UK Government will ha\'e to transfer frae Westminster to Auld Reekie ! It was 70F (2iC) last week in London an\' dry as shortbread ~ but i won\'t mention that ~ Hugs BRIAN
March 19th, 2017 11:13
Oh the weather outside is frightful
WriteBeLight said:
Same here. Dreary day. Cheerful write, though.
March 19th, 2017 06:22
WriteBeLight said:
Same here. Dreary day. Cheerful write, though.
March 19th, 2017 06:22
Oh the weather outside is frightful
Jooles said:
Lol thanks...we think it\'s a great day when we\'ve woke up to no rain!!
March 19th, 2017 04:45
Jooles said:
Lol thanks...we think it\'s a great day when we\'ve woke up to no rain!!
March 19th, 2017 04:45
Oh the weather outside is frightful
Hopey_xx said:
Haha I know- come on sun we\'re waiting for you! Great write!
March 19th, 2017 04:34
Hopey_xx said:
Haha I know- come on sun we\'re waiting for you! Great write!
March 19th, 2017 04:34
The phoenix
Jooles said:
I already have five...this would join the family. I love art and expressing myself and I love tattoos...don\'t care if they\'re not for other people. ..they\'re for me (my husband hates tattoos)...I don\'t judge a person for their hair colour. ..clothes style or LACK of ink lol and hell ..they look good on me lol
March 18th, 2017 11:03
Jooles said:
I already have five...this would join the family. I love art and expressing myself and I love tattoos...don\'t care if they\'re not for other people. ..they\'re for me (my husband hates tattoos)...I don\'t judge a person for their hair colour. ..clothes style or LACK of ink lol and hell ..they look good on me lol
March 18th, 2017 11:03
That hole in my heart (where you use to be)
WriteBeLight said:
Heart wrenching write Jooles. Very true about loss.
March 18th, 2017 07:21
WriteBeLight said:
Heart wrenching write Jooles. Very true about loss.
March 18th, 2017 07:21
That hole in my heart (where you use to be)
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks JOOLES for a lovely tribute to a very every dear loved one ! In a sense it made me sad too as I thought of all my near and dear ones who have been called home to Glory. As each one passes the hole in our grieving heart gets bigger. There are two compensations for me ~ ONE ~ I know I will meet them all again in the SWEET SWEET BYE-&-BYE and ~ TWO ~ the Good Lord keeps adding new babies to our Extended Family to compensate. Thanks for caring & sharing ~ HUGS BRIAN
March 18th, 2017 05:44
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks JOOLES for a lovely tribute to a very every dear loved one ! In a sense it made me sad too as I thought of all my near and dear ones who have been called home to Glory. As each one passes the hole in our grieving heart gets bigger. There are two compensations for me ~ ONE ~ I know I will meet them all again in the SWEET SWEET BYE-&-BYE and ~ TWO ~ the Good Lord keeps adding new babies to our Extended Family to compensate. Thanks for caring & sharing ~ HUGS BRIAN
March 18th, 2017 05:44
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