Comments received on poems by Jooles
The evil of drink
swingline said:
I used to drink but not anymore
The wife kicked me out
and bolted the door
I told the dog his house now was mine
He bit me severely on my behind
I stumbled down to where my best friend be
I beat on his door , he leaned out the window ,
\"Get away now from me \"
So I made my way down to the jail
Nice warm bunks , but crossing the street
A truck smacked me and now I\'m in Hell .
June 10th, 2017 05:27
swingline said:
I used to drink but not anymore
The wife kicked me out
and bolted the door
I told the dog his house now was mine
He bit me severely on my behind
I stumbled down to where my best friend be
I beat on his door , he leaned out the window ,
\"Get away now from me \"
So I made my way down to the jail
Nice warm bunks , but crossing the street
A truck smacked me and now I\'m in Hell .
June 10th, 2017 05:27
Livin on the edge
Poetic Dan said:
Fantastic! The pirate was so stong in me head, to finishing with a cuppa nearly nocked be fa 6 and then biscuits....
Thank you
June 9th, 2017 17:48
Poetic Dan said:
Fantastic! The pirate was so stong in me head, to finishing with a cuppa nearly nocked be fa 6 and then biscuits....
Thank you
June 9th, 2017 17:48
The forgotten
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, my wife has just been diagnosed with dementia and your words apply just the same.
May 12th, 2017 08:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, my wife has just been diagnosed with dementia and your words apply just the same.
May 12th, 2017 08:35
The forgotten
P.X. Vexxus said:
My grandfather suffers from Alzheimer\'s as well. I wrote this poem for him:
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-63083
I\'m glad to see other people showing some respect, and compassion, to those who suffer from Alzheimer\'s. Yours was better than mine, I think :)
May 12th, 2017 04:01
P.X. Vexxus said:
My grandfather suffers from Alzheimer\'s as well. I wrote this poem for him:
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-63083
I\'m glad to see other people showing some respect, and compassion, to those who suffer from Alzheimer\'s. Yours was better than mine, I think :)
May 12th, 2017 04:01
The no poem
willyweed said:
wow Jooles your playing hard to get?
must be a Scottish thing eh? nice poem though! ww
April 6th, 2017 06:54
willyweed said:
wow Jooles your playing hard to get?
must be a Scottish thing eh? nice poem though! ww
April 6th, 2017 06:54
The no poem
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks JOOLES ~ I am very flattered to be your MUSE Monorhyming poems are not easy to write ~ but you did an excellent job and maintained the metre ! I will try reciting it at our next poetry reading ~ it looks very recitable to me ! Loved your use of BLACK & BLUE ~ hope yer didna clock him one wi\' yer baggie ? Nay on\'y a wee lass frae Glasgae would do that ! Love the coquetishness in your wee ode and I\'m goin\' ter send ye a HUG and then duck. Hugs ~ BRIAN
April 6th, 2017 06:02
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks JOOLES ~ I am very flattered to be your MUSE Monorhyming poems are not easy to write ~ but you did an excellent job and maintained the metre ! I will try reciting it at our next poetry reading ~ it looks very recitable to me ! Loved your use of BLACK & BLUE ~ hope yer didna clock him one wi\' yer baggie ? Nay on\'y a wee lass frae Glasgae would do that ! Love the coquetishness in your wee ode and I\'m goin\' ter send ye a HUG and then duck. Hugs ~ BRIAN
April 6th, 2017 06:02
Shake your rear end
willyweed said:
rock that booty! shake! shake! shake!
funny business!
April 5th, 2017 19:05
willyweed said:
rock that booty! shake! shake! shake!
funny business!
April 5th, 2017 19:05
Life .... doesn\'t come with a guide
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, life is full of ups and downs all we need to do is deal with them.
April 5th, 2017 01:31
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, life is full of ups and downs all we need to do is deal with them.
April 5th, 2017 01:31
Life .... doesn\'t come with a guide
poetboy123 said:
This... is just incredible. I\'m in awe.
April 4th, 2017 20:25
poetboy123 said:
This... is just incredible. I\'m in awe.
April 4th, 2017 20:25
Life .... doesn\'t come with a guide
willyweed said:
yes the good the bad and the ugly everyday we live it like a ride on the roller coaster, good poem Jooles and fun to read. peace WW
April 4th, 2017 19:48
willyweed said:
yes the good the bad and the ugly everyday we live it like a ride on the roller coaster, good poem Jooles and fun to read. peace WW
April 4th, 2017 19:48
Life .... doesn\'t come with a guide
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhhhhhhhh JOOLES ~ this is beautiful and so full of flowing emotion ~ straight from your heat ! Love the structure rhyming couplets in balanced quatrains ~ perfect pulsating poetry. The theme that life is unscripted and spontaneous and full of highs & lows is something we can all empathise with. You have expressed it perfectly ! I am a performance poet and I will recite it at our next poetry reading ~ OK Thanks for caring ~ Poetic Hugs ~ BRIAN
April 4th, 2017 17:10
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhhhhhhhh JOOLES ~ this is beautiful and so full of flowing emotion ~ straight from your heat ! Love the structure rhyming couplets in balanced quatrains ~ perfect pulsating poetry. The theme that life is unscripted and spontaneous and full of highs & lows is something we can all empathise with. You have expressed it perfectly ! I am a performance poet and I will recite it at our next poetry reading ~ OK Thanks for caring ~ Poetic Hugs ~ BRIAN
April 4th, 2017 17:10
Oh the weather outside is frightful
Jooles said:
Lol too funny....think Scotland will be the only place global warming has no affect 😅
March 19th, 2017 13:22
Jooles said:
Lol too funny....think Scotland will be the only place global warming has no affect 😅
March 19th, 2017 13:22
Oh the weather outside is frightful
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Och Lassie do yer dinna ken that we keep a\' the Sunny days in London England ! But we a\' need each ither i\' the Union ! We will send yer some bricht Westminster Sun if yer will share ~ yon Haggis ~ yon Kilt and aye even yon Bagpipes an\' Scottish Dancing ! We a\' love Scotia ~ Cymru an\' Ireland (N) Together we are stronger especially after BREXIT an we a\' love Nicola\'s passion ~ she\'s a Bonnie Wee Lassie ! Remember wi\' Global Warmin\' in a few years (2035) Scotland will ha\'e a Mediterranean Climate (like yon South o\' France) and England will be like the GOBI DESSERT and the UK Government will ha\'e to transfer frae Westminster to Auld Reekie ! It was 70F (2iC) last week in London an\' dry as shortbread ~ but i won\'t mention that ~ Hugs BRIAN
March 19th, 2017 11:13
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Och Lassie do yer dinna ken that we keep a\' the Sunny days in London England ! But we a\' need each ither i\' the Union ! We will send yer some bricht Westminster Sun if yer will share ~ yon Haggis ~ yon Kilt and aye even yon Bagpipes an\' Scottish Dancing ! We a\' love Scotia ~ Cymru an\' Ireland (N) Together we are stronger especially after BREXIT an we a\' love Nicola\'s passion ~ she\'s a Bonnie Wee Lassie ! Remember wi\' Global Warmin\' in a few years (2035) Scotland will ha\'e a Mediterranean Climate (like yon South o\' France) and England will be like the GOBI DESSERT and the UK Government will ha\'e to transfer frae Westminster to Auld Reekie ! It was 70F (2iC) last week in London an\' dry as shortbread ~ but i won\'t mention that ~ Hugs BRIAN
March 19th, 2017 11:13
Oh the weather outside is frightful
WriteBeLight said:
Same here. Dreary day. Cheerful write, though.
March 19th, 2017 06:22
WriteBeLight said:
Same here. Dreary day. Cheerful write, though.
March 19th, 2017 06:22
Oh the weather outside is frightful
Jooles said:
Lol thanks...we think it\'s a great day when we\'ve woke up to no rain!!
March 19th, 2017 04:45
Jooles said:
Lol thanks...we think it\'s a great day when we\'ve woke up to no rain!!
March 19th, 2017 04:45
Oh the weather outside is frightful
Hopey_xx said:
Haha I know- come on sun we\'re waiting for you! Great write!
March 19th, 2017 04:34
Hopey_xx said:
Haha I know- come on sun we\'re waiting for you! Great write!
March 19th, 2017 04:34
The phoenix
Jooles said:
I already have five...this would join the family. I love art and expressing myself and I love tattoos...don\'t care if they\'re not for other people. ..they\'re for me (my husband hates tattoos)...I don\'t judge a person for their hair colour. ..clothes style or LACK of ink lol and hell ..they look good on me lol
March 18th, 2017 11:03
Jooles said:
I already have five...this would join the family. I love art and expressing myself and I love tattoos...don\'t care if they\'re not for other people. ..they\'re for me (my husband hates tattoos)...I don\'t judge a person for their hair colour. ..clothes style or LACK of ink lol and hell ..they look good on me lol
March 18th, 2017 11:03
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