Comments received on poems by sarah
cheers!
baj-a said:
cheers dear poet to a wonderfully crafted and beautifully written poem.
March 14th, 2013 07:48
baj-a said:
cheers dear poet to a wonderfully crafted and beautifully written poem.
March 14th, 2013 07:48
PARADOX…
baj-a said:
Sarah, what an intriguing poem! I love the way beauty is used in each verse to have a different meaning.
March 12th, 2013 07:49
baj-a said:
Sarah, what an intriguing poem! I love the way beauty is used in each verse to have a different meaning.
March 12th, 2013 07:49
THE HEART OF MY HEART
colin said:
Beautifull your emotions are powerfull in your words
February 28th, 2013 23:57
colin said:
Beautifull your emotions are powerfull in your words
February 28th, 2013 23:57
myself in you
rajat mahaych said:
amazing
i hope i could put it on strings of guitar
January 9th, 2012 02:05
rajat mahaych said:
amazing
i hope i could put it on strings of guitar
January 9th, 2012 02:05
wild flower
rajat mahaych said:
its a really nice rhythmic work
well done
you have good sense of making such words
January 9th, 2012 02:04
rajat mahaych said:
its a really nice rhythmic work
well done
you have good sense of making such words
January 9th, 2012 02:04
early autumn
Cheeky Missy said:
Excellent imagery expressing the mental state of many, in the perfect context of autumn! Wow. I really like it. Beautiful and rather bitter, sweetness being but a faded, jaded memory from a disheartening past.
October 1st, 2011 21:44
Cheeky Missy said:
Excellent imagery expressing the mental state of many, in the perfect context of autumn! Wow. I really like it. Beautiful and rather bitter, sweetness being but a faded, jaded memory from a disheartening past.
October 1st, 2011 21:44
12 TEARS
Belinda AMeharry said:
How absolutely lovely.
Loved reading it.
Thankyou
August 11th, 2011 05:07
Belinda AMeharry said:
How absolutely lovely.
Loved reading it.
Thankyou
August 11th, 2011 05:07
THE HEART OF MY HEART
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. You write very well! Excellent, heart-wrenching dilemma! La, I cannot but wish she might be erased, eliminated, escaped, and your love take you forever! My, but you depicted it marvelously well!
March 12th, 2011 23:18
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. You write very well! Excellent, heart-wrenching dilemma! La, I cannot but wish she might be erased, eliminated, escaped, and your love take you forever! My, but you depicted it marvelously well!
March 12th, 2011 23:18
GIVE ME...
sarah said:
thank you very much...esp dolphin29 4 ur sincere concern
March 12th, 2011 20:09
sarah said:
thank you very much...esp dolphin29 4 ur sincere concern
March 12th, 2011 20:09
ITS HEAT AND THE LUST
Cheeky Missy said:
Lust has such vile connotations that I would far prefer to call it "love," though you have doubtless aptly classified it. This is so beautifully expressive of the overwhelming passions and love, so delightfully descriptive and pleasantly rhymed. Excellent! Well-written, and very enjoyable in all it depicts.
March 12th, 2011 00:46
Cheeky Missy said:
Lust has such vile connotations that I would far prefer to call it "love," though you have doubtless aptly classified it. This is so beautifully expressive of the overwhelming passions and love, so delightfully descriptive and pleasantly rhymed. Excellent! Well-written, and very enjoyable in all it depicts.
March 12th, 2011 00:46
GIVE ME...
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating, slightly intriguing, bittersweet. Rather poignant, it sounds like the cry of an almost unknown lover, whose ever been there for the receiver, breathing and bleeding, sharing and keeping, seeking only the receiver's best, yet the receiver never realizes it. Rather reminiscent of a Taylor Swift song, but I've forgotten the title. Rather beautiful, yet sad.
March 10th, 2011 21:04
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating, slightly intriguing, bittersweet. Rather poignant, it sounds like the cry of an almost unknown lover, whose ever been there for the receiver, breathing and bleeding, sharing and keeping, seeking only the receiver's best, yet the receiver never realizes it. Rather reminiscent of a Taylor Swift song, but I've forgotten the title. Rather beautiful, yet sad.
March 10th, 2011 21:04
GIVE ME...
Dolphine29 said:
Hi Sara, I felt at the beginning elated, then curious and then worried. But mostly touched and well, I want to say I enjoyed your poem and I hope that you are ok.
Best
Dolphine
March 10th, 2011 16:27
Dolphine29 said:
Hi Sara, I felt at the beginning elated, then curious and then worried. But mostly touched and well, I want to say I enjoyed your poem and I hope that you are ok.
Best
Dolphine
March 10th, 2011 16:27
never together i know
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. Very expressive, excellent depiction of a used woman and broken-hearted love. Your imagery is great and the end-rhyming too; the story you wove is bitter, of a misused, abused, trampled love. Beautifully bittersweetly expressed!
March 9th, 2011 22:36
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. Very expressive, excellent depiction of a used woman and broken-hearted love. Your imagery is great and the end-rhyming too; the story you wove is bitter, of a misused, abused, trampled love. Beautifully bittersweetly expressed!
March 9th, 2011 22:36
WIND
Cheeky Missy said:
Excellent! This is impressive. Beautiful in its tender sentiments and longing, as well as so well-crafted, a very sweet and fascinating love poem. Lovely and well-written! I quite like it!
March 9th, 2011 22:23
Cheeky Missy said:
Excellent! This is impressive. Beautiful in its tender sentiments and longing, as well as so well-crafted, a very sweet and fascinating love poem. Lovely and well-written! I quite like it!
March 9th, 2011 22:23
WIND
Emi said:
Wow... This was just amazing! I don't know what else to say, but wow. I simply loved it!
March 8th, 2011 21:35
Emi said:
Wow... This was just amazing! I don't know what else to say, but wow. I simply loved it!
March 8th, 2011 21:35
WIND
Shyam said:
this is an honest tune of love and care,
Wind, always a messenger for love.
Great work Sarah!.
March 8th, 2011 10:47
Shyam said:
this is an honest tune of love and care,
Wind, always a messenger for love.
Great work Sarah!.
March 8th, 2011 10:47
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