Comments received on poems by janetaylor
las nubes saben
rrodriguez said:
Jane, awesome poem about the clouds and the stars. Translate it and work it to fit the English rhyme. You have a beautiful poem here. There\'s a sister website in Spanish called Poemas-del-alma.com. Go there and you can get your poems published in Spanish. By the way, I invite you to read my poem, Tears. Be blessed!
January 25th, 2017 11:48
rrodriguez said:
Jane, awesome poem about the clouds and the stars. Translate it and work it to fit the English rhyme. You have a beautiful poem here. There\'s a sister website in Spanish called Poemas-del-alma.com. Go there and you can get your poems published in Spanish. By the way, I invite you to read my poem, Tears. Be blessed!
January 25th, 2017 11:48
las nubes saben
Michael Edwards said:
Ya estoy casada pero las estrellas siguen brillando para mí
January 25th, 2017 11:37
Michael Edwards said:
Ya estoy casada pero las estrellas siguen brillando para mí
January 25th, 2017 11:37
returning west
Pintu Mahakul said:
Chills reverberate up and down. Imagery is so strong with companion of nice picture in this poem. I find deepness through expression of majestic rocky mountains. An amazing and excellent poem is shared here.
January 24th, 2017 02:51
Pintu Mahakul said:
Chills reverberate up and down. Imagery is so strong with companion of nice picture in this poem. I find deepness through expression of majestic rocky mountains. An amazing and excellent poem is shared here.
January 24th, 2017 02:51
returning west
ron parrish aka wordman said:
your whole being seems to liquify with all the colors of nature as you gently blend into your write,lovely
January 23rd, 2017 22:55
ron parrish aka wordman said:
your whole being seems to liquify with all the colors of nature as you gently blend into your write,lovely
January 23rd, 2017 22:55
returning west
WriteBeLight said:
I agree with Fay. So many wonderful images!
January 23rd, 2017 09:55
WriteBeLight said:
I agree with Fay. So many wonderful images!
January 23rd, 2017 09:55
returning west
Fay Slimm. said:
The depth your poem reaches through fabulous imagery touches the essence of going west Jane - your home being there gives scope for such interesting features that readers like me will never see. First class writing my friend.
January 23rd, 2017 09:50
Fay Slimm. said:
The depth your poem reaches through fabulous imagery touches the essence of going west Jane - your home being there gives scope for such interesting features that readers like me will never see. First class writing my friend.
January 23rd, 2017 09:50
hints of ivory
WriteBeLight said:
The innocence of being very young. I saw that recently in a co-worker\'s child\'s face. My heart melted. I tried not to think that one day this beautiful child might grow into a tough-to-handle teenager. :)Wonderful work.
January 22nd, 2017 15:51
WriteBeLight said:
The innocence of being very young. I saw that recently in a co-worker\'s child\'s face. My heart melted. I tried not to think that one day this beautiful child might grow into a tough-to-handle teenager. :)Wonderful work.
January 22nd, 2017 15:51
hints of ivory
Pintu Mahakul said:
Preciousness of soul is well reflected in this poem. No earthly matter touches soul. Soul carries wisdom. Sage’s breath is wonderful. An excellent poem is shared here.
January 22nd, 2017 13:57
Pintu Mahakul said:
Preciousness of soul is well reflected in this poem. No earthly matter touches soul. Soul carries wisdom. Sage’s breath is wonderful. An excellent poem is shared here.
January 22nd, 2017 13:57
hints of ivory
Jarid said:
Love the way this is woven together into a great poem!
January 22nd, 2017 13:20
Jarid said:
Love the way this is woven together into a great poem!
January 22nd, 2017 13:20
hints of ivory
ron parrish aka wordman said:
it reads almost spiritual, a masters soul cannot be forged in paradise,but here and now
January 22nd, 2017 13:18
ron parrish aka wordman said:
it reads almost spiritual, a masters soul cannot be forged in paradise,but here and now
January 22nd, 2017 13:18
wildly homesick
Pintu Mahakul said:
Subtle hint is glittering. Beautiful Imagery is drawn here. I stand and look upon thine hallowed face the rocky mountains. The beautiful image magically accompanies this poem. An outstanding poem this is.
January 20th, 2017 03:05
Pintu Mahakul said:
Subtle hint is glittering. Beautiful Imagery is drawn here. I stand and look upon thine hallowed face the rocky mountains. The beautiful image magically accompanies this poem. An outstanding poem this is.
January 20th, 2017 03:05
wildly homesick
ron parrish aka wordman said:
a seasoned poet,and photographer
both are beautiful..
January 19th, 2017 23:19
ron parrish aka wordman said:
a seasoned poet,and photographer
both are beautiful..
January 19th, 2017 23:19
wildly homesick
Terry dailey said:
Wonderfully written relatealbe to many... Very intelligent and your words speaks volume. Good job. Obviously your a seasoned poet you made reading this poem a pleasure.
January 19th, 2017 19:35
Terry dailey said:
Wonderfully written relatealbe to many... Very intelligent and your words speaks volume. Good job. Obviously your a seasoned poet you made reading this poem a pleasure.
January 19th, 2017 19:35
deluged in epiphany
ron parrish aka wordman said:
being one with nature,is being one with God and all his beauty in which you captured it well in your words and the beautiful image,,,
January 18th, 2017 12:58
ron parrish aka wordman said:
being one with nature,is being one with God and all his beauty in which you captured it well in your words and the beautiful image,,,
January 18th, 2017 12:58
deluged in epiphany
Jarid said:
This is beautiful! The whole puece gives me a sense of calm. Well done!
January 18th, 2017 12:03
Jarid said:
This is beautiful! The whole puece gives me a sense of calm. Well done!
January 18th, 2017 12:03
deluged in epiphany
Fay Slimm. said:
Nowhere like nature to bring us to heel Jane - the poem so cleverly lined and formed has a last line that says it all. Thanks for this first class write with such an apt image.
January 18th, 2017 11:04
Fay Slimm. said:
Nowhere like nature to bring us to heel Jane - the poem so cleverly lined and formed has a last line that says it all. Thanks for this first class write with such an apt image.
January 18th, 2017 11:04
deluged in epiphany
Michael Edwards said:
And another super posting - which I thoroughly enjoyed.
January 18th, 2017 11:00
Michael Edwards said:
And another super posting - which I thoroughly enjoyed.
January 18th, 2017 11:00
crystals of light
Pintu Mahakul said:
Night is still shining in the light. This has created a transfiguration of splinters to crystals. Very worthy wisdom this carries. This is mesmerizing. An outstanding poem this is. Beautiful colorful picture accompanies this poem and makes this specially philosophical.
January 17th, 2017 12:34
Pintu Mahakul said:
Night is still shining in the light. This has created a transfiguration of splinters to crystals. Very worthy wisdom this carries. This is mesmerizing. An outstanding poem this is. Beautiful colorful picture accompanies this poem and makes this specially philosophical.
January 17th, 2017 12:34
crystals of light
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME JANE ~ Thanks you for your first poem which is a beautifully crafted free verse poem presented in six matching quintets. The content of the poem and your linguistic mastery is also exemplary. In Stanza 1. We meet a restless Universe seeking to know itself. S 2. Its wholeness shatters itself into tens of millions of \"splinters\". S 3. The \"splinters\" are ~ piqued at separation ~ and go into free fall ! S 4. Having lost their unity they agonise resulting in an epiphany which leads us into S 5. in which the \"fragments\" are transfigured into crystals (gems) which when magnetized together form an Omnipotent World ! S 6. Completes the poem and informs the reader that the beauty of the New Universe ~ formed by the reintegration of the crystals ~ far exceeds the original ! The firmament is flooded with rainbow strobes cascading the sky. WISDOM said let there be LIGHT and the LIGHT burst forth and it could never be diminished. That was how I saw it ~ thanks for caring and sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
January 16th, 2017 16:13
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME JANE ~ Thanks you for your first poem which is a beautifully crafted free verse poem presented in six matching quintets. The content of the poem and your linguistic mastery is also exemplary. In Stanza 1. We meet a restless Universe seeking to know itself. S 2. Its wholeness shatters itself into tens of millions of \"splinters\". S 3. The \"splinters\" are ~ piqued at separation ~ and go into free fall ! S 4. Having lost their unity they agonise resulting in an epiphany which leads us into S 5. in which the \"fragments\" are transfigured into crystals (gems) which when magnetized together form an Omnipotent World ! S 6. Completes the poem and informs the reader that the beauty of the New Universe ~ formed by the reintegration of the crystals ~ far exceeds the original ! The firmament is flooded with rainbow strobes cascading the sky. WISDOM said let there be LIGHT and the LIGHT burst forth and it could never be diminished. That was how I saw it ~ thanks for caring and sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
January 16th, 2017 16:13
crystals of light
Michael Edwards said:
Wordman has it spot on - a beguiling read.
January 16th, 2017 16:08
Michael Edwards said:
Wordman has it spot on - a beguiling read.
January 16th, 2017 16:08
crystals of light
ron parrish aka wordman said:
you painted a beautiful image with your words,and the layout was picture perfect,but you didn`t post one of your outstanding imaes
January 16th, 2017 14:59
ron parrish aka wordman said:
you painted a beautiful image with your words,and the layout was picture perfect,but you didn`t post one of your outstanding imaes
January 16th, 2017 14:59
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