Comments received on poems by janetaylor
walking into the light
WriteBeLight said:
I bet you that he read this poem and is smiling brightly in the light!
January 30th, 2017 10:21
WriteBeLight said:
I bet you that he read this poem and is smiling brightly in the light!
January 30th, 2017 10:21
walking into the light
Corey said:
Wow, an absolutely beautiful and heartfelt tribute. Wonderfully well done!
January 30th, 2017 10:18
Corey said:
Wow, an absolutely beautiful and heartfelt tribute. Wonderfully well done!
January 30th, 2017 10:18
walking into the light
Christina8 said:
What a beautiful poem! That last stanza really got me. Your poem is so full of description and admiration for this man. It shines through. Really nice picture too! Fantastic! Christina
January 30th, 2017 09:57
Christina8 said:
What a beautiful poem! That last stanza really got me. Your poem is so full of description and admiration for this man. It shines through. Really nice picture too! Fantastic! Christina
January 30th, 2017 09:57
looking glass
RAJ NANDY said:
A reflective and a thoughtful poem , - like the mirror speaking to me! Thanks for sharing! - Raj, New Delhi.
January 29th, 2017 14:13
RAJ NANDY said:
A reflective and a thoughtful poem , - like the mirror speaking to me! Thanks for sharing! - Raj, New Delhi.
January 29th, 2017 14:13
looking glass
Augustus said:
The vital force speaks deeply, passionately and eloquently. Abrazos.
January 29th, 2017 13:09
Augustus said:
The vital force speaks deeply, passionately and eloquently. Abrazos.
January 29th, 2017 13:09
looking glass
Michael Edwards said:
I\'m a lover of word associations and words where the meaning is stretched and pulled in different directions and we have them here by the bucket load - I am in awe - a top notch piece of work
January 29th, 2017 12:00
Michael Edwards said:
I\'m a lover of word associations and words where the meaning is stretched and pulled in different directions and we have them here by the bucket load - I am in awe - a top notch piece of work
January 29th, 2017 12:00
looking glass
P.H.Rose said:
Beautiful poem Jane
Well done and for
Seeing the light....
January 29th, 2017 11:26
P.H.Rose said:
Beautiful poem Jane
Well done and for
Seeing the light....
January 29th, 2017 11:26
las nubes saben
ron parrish aka wordman said:
well jane if the poem is as good as the image,then it is very lovely
January 29th, 2017 07:15
ron parrish aka wordman said:
well jane if the poem is as good as the image,then it is very lovely
January 29th, 2017 07:15
gods in motion
ron parrish aka wordman said:
i wonder what we all express behind the scars,lovely thoughts
January 29th, 2017 07:10
ron parrish aka wordman said:
i wonder what we all express behind the scars,lovely thoughts
January 29th, 2017 07:10
gods in motion
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
What a sweet poem in great rhyme. Lovely muse as u sip. Keep on writing. Thumbs up.
Pls do comment on my latest poem too, u r most welcome to. Even one line will do.
January 29th, 2017 03:41
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
What a sweet poem in great rhyme. Lovely muse as u sip. Keep on writing. Thumbs up.
Pls do comment on my latest poem too, u r most welcome to. Even one line will do.
January 29th, 2017 03:41
gods in motion
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
MORNING TEA ~ Very English Jane ! We are all People Watchers ~ especially at AIRPORTS (sometimes I go to my local Airport ~ just to watch !). However this poem hints at a surreptitious tryst ? Are you watching a particular ONE or the whole plethora ? Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
January 28th, 2017 17:58
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
MORNING TEA ~ Very English Jane ! We are all People Watchers ~ especially at AIRPORTS (sometimes I go to my local Airport ~ just to watch !). However this poem hints at a surreptitious tryst ? Are you watching a particular ONE or the whole plethora ? Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
January 28th, 2017 17:58
gods in motion
P.H.Rose said:
This is so very good
Jane.. I love a short
Poem that tells a story
With so few words.
I have done that self
Same thing on a few
Occasions, watched
Someone that has a
Story written on them
And it is just waiting
For someone to read
It.. I once watched
A man on a bicycle
With hundreds of
Plastic shopping bags
Stuffed into 4 large ones.
2 on each handlebar..
His clothes were torn,
His jacket was tied
together with string.
He\'d not shaven for
Years..he was basically
A tramp or a hobo as you
Americans call them.
I found my self looking
at him for a long time
And wondering what his
Life was like as a young boy
And how he\'d got to where
He was that day...
For no reason at all I
Started to cry....
The thing was he wasn\'t
That old..30s maybe..
When I got home all
I could do was hold my
Children... I\'ve never told
Anyone that story
Until now...
Beautiful poem Jane.
Thank you...
January 28th, 2017 17:52
P.H.Rose said:
This is so very good
Jane.. I love a short
Poem that tells a story
With so few words.
I have done that self
Same thing on a few
Occasions, watched
Someone that has a
Story written on them
And it is just waiting
For someone to read
It.. I once watched
A man on a bicycle
With hundreds of
Plastic shopping bags
Stuffed into 4 large ones.
2 on each handlebar..
His clothes were torn,
His jacket was tied
together with string.
He\'d not shaven for
Years..he was basically
A tramp or a hobo as you
Americans call them.
I found my self looking
at him for a long time
And wondering what his
Life was like as a young boy
And how he\'d got to where
He was that day...
For no reason at all I
Started to cry....
The thing was he wasn\'t
That old..30s maybe..
When I got home all
I could do was hold my
Children... I\'ve never told
Anyone that story
Until now...
Beautiful poem Jane.
Thank you...
January 28th, 2017 17:52
gods in motion
Michael Edwards said:
I might be English but I prefer coffee however it has to be properly made - none of that Starbucks stuff for me!! Great write
January 28th, 2017 12:38
Michael Edwards said:
I might be English but I prefer coffee however it has to be properly made - none of that Starbucks stuff for me!! Great write
January 28th, 2017 12:38
whispers
Pintu Mahakul said:
This is very pleasing poem shared here. The chill in the frigid night air
casts tremors of lingering shadows. An excrescence of wisdom has broken the weathered mold. Beautiful imagery fills mind with interesting sense. This mesmerizes mind really.
January 28th, 2017 00:16
Pintu Mahakul said:
This is very pleasing poem shared here. The chill in the frigid night air
casts tremors of lingering shadows. An excrescence of wisdom has broken the weathered mold. Beautiful imagery fills mind with interesting sense. This mesmerizes mind really.
January 28th, 2017 00:16
whispers
Augustus said:
I\'m listening. It\'s a wondrous awesome place. Elegant style.
January 27th, 2017 18:00
Augustus said:
I\'m listening. It\'s a wondrous awesome place. Elegant style.
January 27th, 2017 18:00
whispers
Michael Edwards said:
Oh the joy of reading the language as it should be written - Magic.
January 27th, 2017 17:42
Michael Edwards said:
Oh the joy of reading the language as it should be written - Magic.
January 27th, 2017 17:42
utah
P.H.Rose said:
You paint a portrait
And put us right there
Beautiful.....
I love autumn my
Favourite season
Or fall as you call it.
This is such a good
Poem and very descriptive
Well done... J.T.H
Ps.. that picture is stunning
January 26th, 2017 19:45
P.H.Rose said:
You paint a portrait
And put us right there
Beautiful.....
I love autumn my
Favourite season
Or fall as you call it.
This is such a good
Poem and very descriptive
Well done... J.T.H
Ps.. that picture is stunning
January 26th, 2017 19:45
utah
Michael Edwards said:
I\'ve never got to Utah in my travels but you have almost convinced me - mind you it would have to be in summer as I suffer physically from the cold - yet another superb offering Janey
January 26th, 2017 16:11
Michael Edwards said:
I\'ve never got to Utah in my travels but you have almost convinced me - mind you it would have to be in summer as I suffer physically from the cold - yet another superb offering Janey
January 26th, 2017 16:11
utah
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW JANE ~ Thanks for one of the most beautiful illustrated scenery poems I have read on MPS. I can see why JOSEPH SMITH chose UTAH ~ God\'s Own Country ! Surrounded by Arizona ~ Nevada ~ Idaho ~ Wyoming and Colorado ~ The perfect centre of five beautiful States. Because the USA is 40 times bigger than the UK everything is bigger ~ brighter ~ better and more beautiful in the USA ~ but we are older ! Would you be an ANGEL (you are one already !) and post a UTAH poem on my FUSION ~ MY FAVORITE AMERICAN STATE ~ Gracias ~ Besos y Abrazos ~ BRIAN (UK)
January 26th, 2017 14:28
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW JANE ~ Thanks for one of the most beautiful illustrated scenery poems I have read on MPS. I can see why JOSEPH SMITH chose UTAH ~ God\'s Own Country ! Surrounded by Arizona ~ Nevada ~ Idaho ~ Wyoming and Colorado ~ The perfect centre of five beautiful States. Because the USA is 40 times bigger than the UK everything is bigger ~ brighter ~ better and more beautiful in the USA ~ but we are older ! Would you be an ANGEL (you are one already !) and post a UTAH poem on my FUSION ~ MY FAVORITE AMERICAN STATE ~ Gracias ~ Besos y Abrazos ~ BRIAN (UK)
January 26th, 2017 14:28
utah
NB said:
such a beautiful poem.. your descriptions are always excellent.. masterfully done! :)
January 26th, 2017 13:48
NB said:
such a beautiful poem.. your descriptions are always excellent.. masterfully done! :)
January 26th, 2017 13:48
utah
Christina8 said:
Very descriptive poem. I felt like I was there. Breathtaking artwork! This duo is a masterpiece! Christina
January 26th, 2017 11:46
Christina8 said:
Very descriptive poem. I felt like I was there. Breathtaking artwork! This duo is a masterpiece! Christina
January 26th, 2017 11:46
las nubes saben
Augustus said:
Es muy difícil escribir poesía en otra idioma. Lo he estudiado durante 7 años y sólo una vez he intentado escribir poesía. Los cielos hablaban contigo cuando escribiste este poema. Abrazos.
January 25th, 2017 17:42
Augustus said:
Es muy difícil escribir poesía en otra idioma. Lo he estudiado durante 7 años y sólo una vez he intentado escribir poesía. Los cielos hablaban contigo cuando escribiste este poema. Abrazos.
January 25th, 2017 17:42
las nubes saben
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GRACIAS JANE ~ Por Las Nubes Saben ! Es una poema muy hermosa y en mi esperiencia tambien verdad ! There are many Spanish speakers on MPS as you will have already gathered ~ it is my second language ! Thanks for the translation. It is customary on MPS if one posts a poem ~ in a language other than English ~ to add a translation ~ OK. Thanks for the picture and audio ~ the Spoken Spanish is so so Angelic ! Abrazos ~ BRIAN
January 25th, 2017 14:48
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GRACIAS JANE ~ Por Las Nubes Saben ! Es una poema muy hermosa y en mi esperiencia tambien verdad ! There are many Spanish speakers on MPS as you will have already gathered ~ it is my second language ! Thanks for the translation. It is customary on MPS if one posts a poem ~ in a language other than English ~ to add a translation ~ OK. Thanks for the picture and audio ~ the Spoken Spanish is so so Angelic ! Abrazos ~ BRIAN
January 25th, 2017 14:48
las nubes saben
Fay Slimm. said:
An astoudingly beautiful picture dear Jane and I am sure the poem in Spanish follows with wonderful phrasing - - the translation to English leaves a beautiful feeling of peace after sunset - so clever of you to post it in Spanish which as you comment is a most romantic language. Thank you dear Jane.
January 25th, 2017 13:03
Fay Slimm. said:
An astoudingly beautiful picture dear Jane and I am sure the poem in Spanish follows with wonderful phrasing - - the translation to English leaves a beautiful feeling of peace after sunset - so clever of you to post it in Spanish which as you comment is a most romantic language. Thank you dear Jane.
January 25th, 2017 13:03
las nubes saben
Christina8 said:
Just beautiful with the poem and the image! Great job! (my spanish isn\'t what it used to be, but I read the poem on the authors notes--just a fascinating write!)
January 25th, 2017 13:02
Christina8 said:
Just beautiful with the poem and the image! Great job! (my spanish isn\'t what it used to be, but I read the poem on the authors notes--just a fascinating write!)
January 25th, 2017 13:02
las nubes saben
WriteBeLight said:
Very nice Jane. I read the Author\'s note. Thanks for doing that.
January 25th, 2017 12:04
WriteBeLight said:
Very nice Jane. I read the Author\'s note. Thanks for doing that.
January 25th, 2017 12:04
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