Comments received on poems by ANGELA & BRIAN



I LOVE ANGELA BECAUSE ๐Ÿงก BRIAN ๐Ÿค LOVE SONNET ๐Ÿ’™
Goldfinch60 said:

You are both blessed in your love for each other.

As an aside many, many years ago Joyce and I went out to lunch at a restaurant on a boat that was an ex lightship, Joyce was wearing a red dress, there was a singer in the restaurant and as we were eating he came over and stood in front of Joyce and sang \'Lady in Red\' to her - a special moment in our lives.

Andy

May 7th, 2020 00:57

CARRY ON CAMPING ~ BRIAN ~ TRUE STORIES ?
orchidee said:

A fine write A&B.

May 5th, 2020 07:18

R E H A B I L I T A T I O N ~ An Acrostic Sonnet
Fay Slimm. said:

The love and compassion shown to others in these testing times may we never forget - -- loved your acrostic sonnet dear duo -- keep safe and well as you tend to the needy.

May 4th, 2020 16:22

R E H A B I L I T A T I O N ~ An Acrostic Sonnet
orchidee said:

A fine write A&B. I notice the complementariousness of the poem and the video too, but then swooned at such a long word! Fido knew the word before me of course, seeing as he is 99% omniscient (if that\'s possible?).lol.
How am I ever gonna fit that 7 syllable word into me metres? It may take up a whole line!

May 4th, 2020 10:43

R E H A B I L I T A T I O N ~ An Acrostic Sonnet
Goldfinch60 said:

Helping each other has really come to the fore in these current times.

I am interested in the third line, does Brian cause strife. LOL

Andy

May 4th, 2020 05:27

BLUEBELLS ๐Ÿ’™ RING IN THE SPRING ๐Ÿ’™ AN ACROSTIC
Edward Charles McDevitt said:

Nice Acrostic!!! If you check, a lot of my poems are in that style. I enjoyed it immensely!

May 3rd, 2020 05:13

PSALM FOR SUNDAY ~ 117 ~ PRAISE THE LORD !
orchidee said:

A fine and true write A&B.
A Psalm to use if we are aiming to memorise Scriptures - a little one!
I saw cartoon - the Devil outside a church saying to passer-by: \'I get blamed for everything in there!\' Doh!
Some folk do such foul things to animals, leading to many others suffering - the \'wet markets\'. Who could doubt if such disgusting places are sources of contamination, infection, etc?
Yet lots of help too - RSPCA, etc.

May 3rd, 2020 02:34

BLUEBELLS ๐Ÿ’™ RING IN THE SPRING ๐Ÿ’™ AN ACROSTIC
Fay Slimm. said:

A most interesting video on one of my favourite spring flowers along with your verse on bluebells and our native heritage. Thanking you dear duo.

May 3rd, 2020 02:32

BLUEBELLS ๐Ÿ’™ RING IN THE SPRING ๐Ÿ’™ AN ACROSTIC
Nafis Light said:

I\'m quite attracted by the picture of the Bluebell and watching the video, it is like something that I didn\'t get to experience for quite a while. At the workplace, the culture (language, food, community, and all) is very...local (even there is someone who agreed with me on this). So, I go things differently when I\'m not there...because I don\'t go that way. There were a few times when I felt like I was pretending to be something that I\'m not for being there. Well, some things are like...necessary. Anyway, cool video...I really admire it.

May 2nd, 2020 23:07

BLUEBELLS ๐Ÿ’™ RING IN THE SPRING ๐Ÿ’™ AN ACROSTIC
ForeverJesus7 said:

This is a nice piece. I live in Dania, Fl, where it is full of nature preserves (mostly mangroves). To be honest, I am not sure what bluebells are. I would however like some bluebell icecream (haha).
Persistence is key

May 2nd, 2020 17:07

BLUEBELLS ๐Ÿ’™ RING IN THE SPRING ๐Ÿ’™ AN ACROSTIC
orchidee said:

A fine write A&B.
We have a bluebell wood nearby. Can only walk the perimeters now, as overgrown tracks.
But another wood has bluebells in places.
On of our (five) guinea pigs is Bronze Bluebell - has a bronze patch on her side. Aahhh!

May 2nd, 2020 11:19

ANGELA ~ VISION OF LOVELINESS ~ BRIAN ~ AN APPRECIATION
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good passionate write Brian. may that passion never fail.

Andy

May 2nd, 2020 00:43

ANGELA ~ VISION OF LOVELINESS ~ BRIAN ~ AN APPRECIATION
orchidee said:

Enflamed? Fido will be round with the syphon to dampen any enthusiasm, whatever tense it may be! lol.

May 1st, 2020 10:20

ANGELA ~ VISION OF LOVELINESS ~ BRIAN ~ AN APPRECIATION
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Gracias ANGEL por La Tua Respuesta a mi Poema d\'Amor.! It wasnt too difficult to write ~ Perche tu eres muy bonita ! I have taken two juicy steaks out of the freezer and am prparing Mash & Mixed Veg and a secret Sweet. The Rioja Tinta is at ambient temperature ! I love being a House Husband during Lockdown and I know you are taking extra care @ work. See You @ 18:30 horas !

Besos y Abrazos y Todo de Mi Amor
Tu Oso Grande Amorado ~ Brian
๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’›

May 1st, 2020 10:02

ANGELA ~ VISION OF LOVELINESS ~ BRIAN ~ AN APPRECIATION
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Hola BRIAN Mi Oso Grande. Gracias por esta Poema d\'Amor muy bonita. It came as a pleasant surprize during my Lunch Break we all loved it. Im so pleased DA critiqued you yesterday. Erotic Poetry is not our syle so I am pleased you managed sensuous (which we are) and avoided the erotic. Loved the Video very appropriate. The information about Fido & Suzie certainly is a reveletion. Please have something tatsy for Dinner see you soon. I\'m in the Aquatherapy Pool this afternoon which always gives me an appetite for red meat & Rioja Tinta.
Muchos Abrazos y Besos solomente per Tu
Tu Esposa Amorada ANGELA
๐Ÿงก๐Ÿงก๐Ÿงก๐Ÿงก๐Ÿงก๐Ÿงก๐Ÿงก

May 1st, 2020 07:23

ANGELA ~ VISION OF LOVELINESS ~ BRIAN ~ AN APPRECIATION
dusk arising said:

There you go! Ya red blooded stud! Gret to read some passion in your post. (I\'d suggest you change \"she did enflame\" to \"she does or doth enflame\" otherwise she might think you are no longer enflamed)

May 1st, 2020 04:25

ANGELA ~ VISION OF LOVELINESS ~ BRIAN ~ AN APPRECIATION
orchidee said:

Oohh no, don\'t expand on the last verse - TMI - Too Much Info. It\'s private for you two anyway, apart from Fido being up in arms, if you were to elaborate. Do shut up sometimes, Fido! lol.
I hear of some celebrities \'carryings-on\'. It makes me shudder. I think \'Oh, just don\'t let me see it, that\'s all!\' Or hideous things like an an affair in EastEnders.
Well, I am married to KP, so I say.....

May 1st, 2020 03:50

ANGELA ~ VISION OF LOVELINESS ~ BRIAN ~ AN APPRECIATION
orchidee said:

Oohhh - a bit of a swoony, but lovey write A&B.
Now Fido can\'t heave \'libido being raised\' - it\'s all too much for him! heehee.
Maybe he does know, when he sees Suzie, the lady Jack Russell up the road. lol.

May 1st, 2020 03:46

๐Ÿ’› KEY WORKER STAMPS ๐Ÿ’› ISLE OF MAN ๐Ÿ’› AN ADULATION ๐Ÿ’›
Fay Slimm. said:

Yes love will win the fight at this troubled time and praise for all those showing care - -- may we never forget the hardships suffered .

April 30th, 2020 16:56

THINGS WE HAVE FAITH IN !
dusk arising said:

Aww i\'m disappointed but 10/10 to you for sticking to yer guns. I wasn\'t suggesting erotica you know... that\'s too personal.... wouldn\'t catch me doing anything like that in print... well not unless i was wearing gloves.

April 30th, 2020 09:28

THINGS WE HAVE FAITH IN !
orchidee said:

Noooo! - now we know Fido don\'t allow anything Exotic or Erotic. It sends him into a frantic fury. heehee. Mind you, he\'s rather a dour wet blanket at times.
Can\'t see anything wrong with this poem - and Fido checked it with his blue pencil too!

April 30th, 2020 09:18

THINGS WE HAVE FAITH IN !
dusk arising said:

Brian in the nicest possible way i\'m laughing at you....why?... yes i must tell you why.
On this wonderful MPS site we see so many posts involving love... mostly love gone wrong (which i hope i never see you two post!) and often expressions of true love and passion from a poet. Theyre full of passion and devotion and oouze sensual closeness. But yours didn\'t do any of that this time!
Come on you red blooded beast of a male... today\'s post says its a LOVE song for your partner in love. But where are the love words, the passion, the need, the desire, the heat..... i don\'t doubt for one moment you both share those emotions so where are they in a love song? They\'re missing mate!
I bet you could make the nations poetic screens sizzle with love\'s passion if you really tried... go-on, show us.


April 30th, 2020 07:50




๐Ÿ’™ RHAPSODY I N B L U E ๐Ÿ’™ ANGELA & BRIAN ๐Ÿ’™ A 6 6 2 LOVE SONNET ๐Ÿ’™
Goldfinch60 said:

In the Blue still air
Of the evening light
Love was upon you
And never took flight.

Andy

April 28th, 2020 04:33

๐Ÿ’› F R E E D O M ? ๐Ÿ’› AN ACROSTIC ๐Ÿ’›
Michael Edwards said:

For us seniors it\'s not the lockdown per se but not knowing when the vaccine will be available which determines when we can come out of it. For us it will go on. Fine write.

April 27th, 2020 15:25

๐Ÿ’› F R E E D O M ? ๐Ÿ’› AN ACROSTIC ๐Ÿ’›
SureshG said:

This pandemic is testing the human mantle:
Are we capable of being compassionate in the interest of all?
Are we able to put self-interest on the shelf, for as long as it takes, for the benefit of all?
Are we able to prove that we are truly an intelligent specie that thinks of others before oneself?
I WONDER!!!!!!!
FREEDOM, is only attainable when others around us also have it.
Thank you for a lovely poem.

April 27th, 2020 15:04

๐Ÿ’› F R E E D O M ? ๐Ÿ’› AN ACROSTIC ๐Ÿ’›
Fay Slimm. said:

Locked down will result in all sorts of complaints and perhaps rightly so but we must remember this is a fight against something both pandemic and virile - - -good points made here dear duo............... x

April 27th, 2020 09:40

๐Ÿ’› F R E E D O M ? ๐Ÿ’› AN ACROSTIC ๐Ÿ’›
orchidee said:

I suppose it\'s worse for some people than others, and worse for some countries than for other countries.
I know a terrible Jehovah\'s Witness joke - it\'s too much really in this crisis. Fido not sure if he will let me tell it.

April 27th, 2020 02:01



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