Comments received on poems by ANGELA & BRIAN
💛 F R E E D O M ? 💛 AN ACROSTIC 💛
dusk arising said:
I\'m not ill at ease at all WHAT? who said that... i\'m hearing voices... and the wallpaper pattern chased me up the stairs on friday. I think the eggs in my fridge are breeding... nobody warned me about that. do you think i should separate their whites? Am i being racist?
April 27th, 2020 01:42
dusk arising said:
I\'m not ill at ease at all WHAT? who said that... i\'m hearing voices... and the wallpaper pattern chased me up the stairs on friday. I think the eggs in my fridge are breeding... nobody warned me about that. do you think i should separate their whites? Am i being racist?
April 27th, 2020 01:42
🧡 A VIRUS 🧡 CURTAIN 🧡 HAS DESCENDED 🧡 ON PLANET EARTH ! 🧡
Gary Edward Geraci said:
An enjoyable read and form and lacking any sense of despair, Angela & Brian. We go forward with our hands clasped and our heads heavenwards knowing how this all ends for those who will but believe.
April 26th, 2020 16:49
Gary Edward Geraci said:
An enjoyable read and form and lacking any sense of despair, Angela & Brian. We go forward with our hands clasped and our heads heavenwards knowing how this all ends for those who will but believe.
April 26th, 2020 16:49
🧡 A VIRUS 🧡 CURTAIN 🧡 HAS DESCENDED 🧡 ON PLANET EARTH ! 🧡
Michael Edwards said:
Great poem \'reflecting\' the reality of CV.
April 26th, 2020 13:47
Michael Edwards said:
Great poem \'reflecting\' the reality of CV.
April 26th, 2020 13:47
🧡 A VIRUS 🧡 CURTAIN 🧡 HAS DESCENDED 🧡 ON PLANET EARTH ! 🧡
dusk arising said:
Thank you for including a track from KIng Crimson\'s \"In the court of the Crimson King\" album one of my all time favourites. Lyrically poetic songs have certainly influenced some of my more fanciful poetry very strongly.
An apt choice choice for these times.
Will we cure this disease and prevent re-infection or will we all end up walking around wearing helmets and respirators? The latter would certainly change our lives, or are we destined for that anyway on a polluted planet?
Will you be buying products made in China in future?
April 26th, 2020 03:17
dusk arising said:
Thank you for including a track from KIng Crimson\'s \"In the court of the Crimson King\" album one of my all time favourites. Lyrically poetic songs have certainly influenced some of my more fanciful poetry very strongly.
An apt choice choice for these times.
Will we cure this disease and prevent re-infection or will we all end up walking around wearing helmets and respirators? The latter would certainly change our lives, or are we destined for that anyway on a polluted planet?
Will you be buying products made in China in future?
April 26th, 2020 03:17
🧡 A VIRUS 🧡 CURTAIN 🧡 HAS DESCENDED 🧡 ON PLANET EARTH ! 🧡
orchidee said:
Good write A&B. Sometimes now on walks, it comes to mind more the verse \'And the land shall enjoy her Sabbaths\'.
Meanwhile - get the bleach out - to clean with, not poison ourselves with. I told you about that dodgy barnet on another comment. Doh!
April 26th, 2020 02:28
orchidee said:
Good write A&B. Sometimes now on walks, it comes to mind more the verse \'And the land shall enjoy her Sabbaths\'.
Meanwhile - get the bleach out - to clean with, not poison ourselves with. I told you about that dodgy barnet on another comment. Doh!
April 26th, 2020 02:28
💛 COVID 19 💛IN WORDS 💛 N to Z ~ A POEM 💛
dusk arising said:
And there i was thinking G was for \'gargle with disinfectant\' the corvid-19 cure as recently recommended by Dr Trump. (Whilst his accompanying medical experts were seen to squirm).
April 25th, 2020 02:22
dusk arising said:
And there i was thinking G was for \'gargle with disinfectant\' the corvid-19 cure as recently recommended by Dr Trump. (Whilst his accompanying medical experts were seen to squirm).
April 25th, 2020 02:22
💛 COVID 19 💛IN WORDS 💛 N to Z ~ A POEM 💛
orchidee said:
Why don\'t we jump in the washing machine then, if bleach can cure it? But then it would only clean us outwardly! Doh!
April 25th, 2020 01:51
orchidee said:
Why don\'t we jump in the washing machine then, if bleach can cure it? But then it would only clean us outwardly! Doh!
April 25th, 2020 01:51
🧡 WONDERFUL 🧡 WORDS 🧡 ABOUT CORVID 19 🧡 AN ABCDARIAN POEM 🧡
orchidee said:
Eh? One of you said recently of the usefulness of repetition in Taize.
Yet is the repetition in some \'tired\' choruses called battology, cos it will drive you batty?!
A church was \'lazy\'. Just strummed on with almost the same choruses for 3 weeks in row. Enough to make me say \'OMG, not that chorus again!\' (though I should not say OMG - say OMD - Oh My Days).
April 24th, 2020 01:57
orchidee said:
Eh? One of you said recently of the usefulness of repetition in Taize.
Yet is the repetition in some \'tired\' choruses called battology, cos it will drive you batty?!
A church was \'lazy\'. Just strummed on with almost the same choruses for 3 weeks in row. Enough to make me say \'OMG, not that chorus again!\' (though I should not say OMG - say OMD - Oh My Days).
April 24th, 2020 01:57
🧡 HOW MUCH 🧡 DO I LOVE YOU ? 🧡 BRIAN 🧡 A 4 4 4 2 SONNET 🧡
Michael Edwards said:
Ah - sweet.
April 22nd, 2020 13:16
Michael Edwards said:
Ah - sweet.
April 22nd, 2020 13:16
🧡 HOW MUCH 🧡 DO I LOVE YOU ? 🧡 BRIAN 🧡 A 4 4 4 2 SONNET 🧡
dusk arising said:
There you GO! Full blossom of love has brought out the romantic poet in you. Long may it remain within you too.
So lets see some more love poetry from your heart.... go-on, get all gooey... there\'s no better time and place.
April 22nd, 2020 10:01
dusk arising said:
There you GO! Full blossom of love has brought out the romantic poet in you. Long may it remain within you too.
So lets see some more love poetry from your heart.... go-on, get all gooey... there\'s no better time and place.
April 22nd, 2020 10:01
🧡 HOW MUCH 🧡 DO I LOVE YOU ? 🧡 BRIAN 🧡 A 4 4 4 2 SONNET 🧡
FredPeyer said:
Well written, but since we don\'t really have seasons here, I just tell my wife that I love her every month of the year!
April 22nd, 2020 03:29
FredPeyer said:
Well written, but since we don\'t really have seasons here, I just tell my wife that I love her every month of the year!
April 22nd, 2020 03:29
🧡 HOW MUCH 🧡 DO I LOVE YOU ? 🧡 BRIAN 🧡 A 4 4 4 2 SONNET 🧡
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful loving poem, that love will be forever with you.
Andy
April 22nd, 2020 03:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful loving poem, that love will be forever with you.
Andy
April 22nd, 2020 03:27
🧡 HOW MUCH 🧡 DO I LOVE YOU ? 🧡 BRIAN 🧡 A 4 4 4 2 SONNET 🧡
orchidee said:
Aww, lovely write A&B. I sing this to Fido. He growls at me otherwise! lol. (ahh, he wouldn\'t - only on his 18+ duties).
April 22nd, 2020 02:07
orchidee said:
Aww, lovely write A&B. I sing this to Fido. He growls at me otherwise! lol. (ahh, he wouldn\'t - only on his 18+ duties).
April 22nd, 2020 02:07
🧡MARRIED BLISS ? 🧡 IN SUCH A TIME AS THIS ? 🧡
Goldfinch60 said:
Getting married in these Strange Times was certainly different but married you are and that is the most important thing. Your life together will be wonderful no matter who is doing what, sharing your life a one soul will be so meaningful.
Keep well
Andy
April 22nd, 2020 00:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Getting married in these Strange Times was certainly different but married you are and that is the most important thing. Your life together will be wonderful no matter who is doing what, sharing your life a one soul will be so meaningful.
Keep well
Andy
April 22nd, 2020 00:09
🧡MARRIED BLISS ? 🧡 IN SUCH A TIME AS THIS ? 🧡
Christina8 said:
I never got to congratulate you on your wedding vows!! Congrats!!!!!! I know that it\'s not the typical wedding you had imagined......but it\'s the love that counts.
April 21st, 2020 12:56
Christina8 said:
I never got to congratulate you on your wedding vows!! Congrats!!!!!! I know that it\'s not the typical wedding you had imagined......but it\'s the love that counts.
April 21st, 2020 12:56
🧡MARRIED BLISS ? 🧡 IN SUCH A TIME AS THIS ? 🧡
orchidee said:
A month? Does time fly when you\'re enjoying yourself? Nothing swoony in reply, please! heehee.
You a stranger to Ajax, as the saying goes?! Aww, you deserve it, waiting that whole year too!
April 21st, 2020 07:21
orchidee said:
A month? Does time fly when you\'re enjoying yourself? Nothing swoony in reply, please! heehee.
You a stranger to Ajax, as the saying goes?! Aww, you deserve it, waiting that whole year too!
April 21st, 2020 07:21
🧡MARRIED BLISS ? 🧡 IN SUCH A TIME AS THIS ? 🧡
dusk arising said:
Well now it\'s your turn to have exceptional stories to pass along to your offspring. Stories of mum and dad\'s romance during WW2 will be all too familiar to us older poets. Covid 19 may well be considered to be a world war too. Keep good notes about these days for in the years to come you\'ll be entertaining folk with stories.
April 21st, 2020 04:00
dusk arising said:
Well now it\'s your turn to have exceptional stories to pass along to your offspring. Stories of mum and dad\'s romance during WW2 will be all too familiar to us older poets. Covid 19 may well be considered to be a world war too. Keep good notes about these days for in the years to come you\'ll be entertaining folk with stories.
April 21st, 2020 04:00
🧡 HORNS OF A 🧡 DILEMMA 🧡 MIRROR DIAMOND ! 🧡
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever write Brian.
April 21st, 2020 00:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever write Brian.
April 21st, 2020 00:38
🧡 HORNS OF A 🧡 DILEMMA 🧡 MIRROR DIAMOND ! 🧡
Fay Slimm. said:
Great diamond-form and I love that poem too - Kipling had it nailed when troubles prevail - keep in mind that time goes at its own pace but this too will pass one day soon......... hugs for you two .............. from Fay
April 20th, 2020 16:24
Fay Slimm. said:
Great diamond-form and I love that poem too - Kipling had it nailed when troubles prevail - keep in mind that time goes at its own pace but this too will pass one day soon......... hugs for you two .............. from Fay
April 20th, 2020 16:24
🧡 HORNS OF A 🧡 DILEMMA 🧡 MIRROR DIAMOND ! 🧡
Michael Edwards said:
You\'ve done more than good - clever write.
April 20th, 2020 12:57
Michael Edwards said:
You\'ve done more than good - clever write.
April 20th, 2020 12:57
🧡 HORNS OF A 🧡 DILEMMA 🧡 MIRROR DIAMOND ! 🧡
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Well done Uncle Steve ~ I award you an A for trying ! If one mirrors the Poem the shape is always symmetrical. However getting the Poem to make sense BACKWARDS as well as FORWARDS is a problem of a diferent magnitude.
Blessing to You & Your Freewheeling Fido !
Yours Brian & Angela 💛💛💛
April 20th, 2020 08:30
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Well done Uncle Steve ~ I award you an A for trying ! If one mirrors the Poem the shape is always symmetrical. However getting the Poem to make sense BACKWARDS as well as FORWARDS is a problem of a diferent magnitude.
Blessing to You & Your Freewheeling Fido !
Yours Brian & Angela 💛💛💛
April 20th, 2020 08:30
🧡 HORNS OF A 🧡 DILEMMA 🧡 MIRROR DIAMOND ! 🧡
orchidee said:
A good write A&B, I say; Say I, A&B, write good A. Erm, that\'s my attempt!
April 20th, 2020 01:50
orchidee said:
A good write A&B, I say; Say I, A&B, write good A. Erm, that\'s my attempt!
April 20th, 2020 01:50
🧡 RED WINE 🧡 ELIXIR OF LIFE 🧡 A 5 5 4 SONNET 🧡
Michael Edwards said:
Thank you for this - it helps remove some of the guilt - now I must put another order in.
April 18th, 2020 03:32
Michael Edwards said:
Thank you for this - it helps remove some of the guilt - now I must put another order in.
April 18th, 2020 03:32
🧡 RED WINE 🧡 ELIXIR OF LIFE 🧡 A 5 5 4 SONNET 🧡
orchidee said:
A fine write A&B. I took it to extremes. Paul told Timothy to take a little wine. I took a gallon! heehee. With my water added of course! I cannot commentsh furthersh. Hic! Good acting, innit?
April 18th, 2020 02:00
orchidee said:
A fine write A&B. I took it to extremes. Paul told Timothy to take a little wine. I took a gallon! heehee. With my water added of course! I cannot commentsh furthersh. Hic! Good acting, innit?
April 18th, 2020 02:00
🧡 RED WINE 🧡 ELIXIR OF LIFE 🧡 A 5 5 4 SONNET 🧡
Goldfinch60 said:
Cheers. Rioja is my favourite wine.
Andy
April 18th, 2020 01:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Cheers. Rioja is my favourite wine.
Andy
April 18th, 2020 01:45
🧡 RED WINE 🧡 ELIXIR OF LIFE 🧡 A 5 5 4 SONNET 🧡
dusk arising said:
Do you invent \'facts\' on the fly? Red wine prevents cancer and diabetes?
Fiction... are you a scientist with an L plate? I can\'t disagree that red wine is good for you though. I haven\'t dared to drink a glass of it since my cancer treatment though.
April 18th, 2020 01:44
dusk arising said:
Do you invent \'facts\' on the fly? Red wine prevents cancer and diabetes?
Fiction... are you a scientist with an L plate? I can\'t disagree that red wine is good for you though. I haven\'t dared to drink a glass of it since my cancer treatment though.
April 18th, 2020 01:44
💛 WHAT WE SOW 💛 WE REAP 💛 FIVE TANKAS 💛
Poetic Dan said:
Interesting take as ever but the extra gear is by humans, not nature in my opinion. This is just another cycle but we are definitely not getting all the info, again in my opinion...
The cure is not fitting the problem that\'s for sure!
Keep up the write
Much peace and respect
April 17th, 2020 03:13
Poetic Dan said:
Interesting take as ever but the extra gear is by humans, not nature in my opinion. This is just another cycle but we are definitely not getting all the info, again in my opinion...
The cure is not fitting the problem that\'s for sure!
Keep up the write
Much peace and respect
April 17th, 2020 03:13
💛 WHAT WE SOW 💛 WE REAP 💛 FIVE TANKAS 💛
orchidee said:
A fine write A&B.
Who is Karma? Is he/she a good guy/good gal?! I not got the hang of Karma, as you can see!
April 17th, 2020 02:04
orchidee said:
A fine write A&B.
Who is Karma? Is he/she a good guy/good gal?! I not got the hang of Karma, as you can see!
April 17th, 2020 02:04
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