Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60



The Shadows Were Back.
orchidee said:

Ohh, days of proper music, not garbage of today!

April 14th, 2024 01:45

Custer.
Doggerel Dave said:

Well if you wrote this some time ago, I do hope you utilised your spare Saturday time constructively, Andy😊

As for Bella\'s exhumation of that word - you can wear it with pride.

April 13th, 2024 20:40

Custer.
Bella Shepard said:

Thank you for the poem, the video, the fun iof all of it. Your comedic poems are classics, and I felt there must be a technical for them, so I googled and found
\"paraprosdokian\". No joke, it\'s a real word. \"A paraprosdokian is a figure of speech in which the latter part of a sentence, phrase, or larger discourse is surprising or unexpected in a way that causes the reader or listener to reframe or reinterpret the first part. It is frequently used for humorous or dramatic effect, sometimes producing an anticlimax. For this reason, it is extremely popular among comedians and satirists\". You are the king my friend.

April 13th, 2024 16:15

Custer.
David Wakeling said:

Holy guacamole.Very well constructed and good fun punch line.Enjoyed

April 13th, 2024 15:34

Weak To Strong
Teddy.15 said:

I don\'t now how I missed this yesterday it\'s inspiring dear Andy. You always seem to soothe with your wisdom. 🌹

April 13th, 2024 04:38

Custer.
sorenbarrett said:

I can imagine several other images less holy that he could have painted but we will leave that for another day. A great story that brought a smile and that is the best type of poetry.

April 13th, 2024 03:23

Custer.
orchidee said:

Oh lol. Ahh, I see why he painted that! heehee.

April 13th, 2024 02:10

Weak To Strong
E.J. Waling said:

My favorite personal philosophy.
“Undaunted, I press on”
Nice write ✍️ Andy
John

April 12th, 2024 18:37

Weak To Strong
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful.

April 12th, 2024 09:42

Weak To Strong
sorenbarrett said:

A message that many need to hear. I do believe in giving up on a method once tried that doesn\'t work but not on the search for another to accomplish the goal.

April 12th, 2024 04:19

Weak To Strong
David Wakeling said:

Will do.Some wise words here.

April 12th, 2024 03:46

Weak To Strong
orchidee said:

Good write Gold.
I must use my strength with KP then. lol.

April 12th, 2024 02:13

Weak To Strong
2781 said:

The spirit of a man can sustain his infirmity...

April 12th, 2024 01:52

Unitarians.
Desdichado said:

Unitarianism: the \"church\" where you can believe anything EXCEPT the Gospel of salvation through faith in Christ.
But Ralph Waldo E. is still a cool poet !

April 11th, 2024 16:55

Unitarians.
sorenbarrett said:

I too feel that religion is more of a problem than a gift. Even the symbol of Christianity supposedly defied the religions of the time and as far as I remember never organized a formal religion simply using his followers to spread his teachings. A write I can identify with Andy.

April 11th, 2024 04:36

Unitarians.
Teddy.15 said:

It brings war and hate, I believe we should all take faith in what we believe in, and would never take away the beliefs of others it\'s just my own reflection and observation that I as a non believer believe. lol I shall now go back to Limbo. Brilliant subject dear Andy, peace and love dear friend. ❤️

April 11th, 2024 03:40

Unitarians.
David Wakeling said:

It sounds like a reasonable religion.I think we all seek meaning in different ways.Well written poem.

April 11th, 2024 03:11

Unitarians.
orchidee said:

I will agree that \'religion\' is the problem, or one of the problems. It\'s why I prefer to label my poems \'spiritual\' and not \'religion\'.

April 11th, 2024 01:53

Unitarians.
2781 said:

I see it was formed in Transylvania. Must be better than Rome.

April 11th, 2024 01:27

Cheltenham Croquet.
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent work.

April 10th, 2024 21:04

Cheltenham Croquet.
Teddy.15 said:

Ah, and for the rest of the season the rain came down lol 😆 ❤️

April 10th, 2024 11:41

Cheltenham Croquet.
sorenbarrett said:

A long anticipated celebration and enjoyment as well as tribute to a wonderful day.

April 10th, 2024 04:01

Cheltenham Croquet.
David Wakeling said:

I enjoyed this especially the note about the members accepting you.Great write

April 10th, 2024 03:10

Cheltenham Croquet.
orchidee said:

A fine write Gold.

April 10th, 2024 02:00

My World.
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful.

April 9th, 2024 18:38

My World.
Bella Shepard said:

I have only one word for this poem: Sweeeeeeet!!

April 9th, 2024 15:30

My World.
Meera Mere said:

That was so beautiful. Always wished to be someone like that calling it delusions.
Loved the poem.

April 9th, 2024 09:20

My World.
E.J. Waling said:

Wow, you sweet talker you.
Nicely done.

April 9th, 2024 06:56

My World.
Teddy.15 said:

Mr Andy, this almost made me cry Sir, Mary is surely the luckiest lady in the world. ❤️ ❤️

April 9th, 2024 06:51

My World.
sorenbarrett said:

An element of poetry often forgotten the twist at the end that makes sense of all that was said before. Well done Andy.

April 9th, 2024 03:36



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