Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
Focus On Yourself.
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant. Such a simple concept, but very hard to practice. Thanks for the reminder.
October 23rd, 2023 00:13
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant. Such a simple concept, but very hard to practice. Thanks for the reminder.
October 23rd, 2023 00:13
Nelson Went To Battle.
rhmn_7 said:
Ahahaha maybe brown-yellow trousers would be best suited.
October 22nd, 2023 08:43
rhmn_7 said:
Ahahaha maybe brown-yellow trousers would be best suited.
October 22nd, 2023 08:43
Nelson Went To Battle.
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"Nelson went to battle\" by Goldfinch60.
From the poem :
“Then across the horizon did he see
Three hundred ships bear down.
So again he called to Hardy;
“Fetch my trousers coloured brown!”
Nelson spoke two memorable sentences on that day from his flagship HMS Victory on 21 October, 1805 :
(a) “England expects that every man will do his duty.”
(b) Nelson expects these brown trousers to do their duty.”
Soman Ragavan. 22 October, 2023. //
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October 22nd, 2023 03:48
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"Nelson went to battle\" by Goldfinch60.
From the poem :
“Then across the horizon did he see
Three hundred ships bear down.
So again he called to Hardy;
“Fetch my trousers coloured brown!”
Nelson spoke two memorable sentences on that day from his flagship HMS Victory on 21 October, 1805 :
(a) “England expects that every man will do his duty.”
(b) Nelson expects these brown trousers to do their duty.”
Soman Ragavan. 22 October, 2023. //
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October 22nd, 2023 03:48
Nelson Went To Battle.
orchidee said:
Oh lol, good write Gold.
Were we there in 1805, as well as in 1066? Did I play any part in Nelson losing his arm or eye?
October 21st, 2023 02:04
orchidee said:
Oh lol, good write Gold.
Were we there in 1805, as well as in 1066? Did I play any part in Nelson losing his arm or eye?
October 21st, 2023 02:04
Our Future Being.
2781 said:
I believe there\'s an even bigger problem.
Not suffering them to come unto him.
October 20th, 2023 06:10
2781 said:
I believe there\'s an even bigger problem.
Not suffering them to come unto him.
October 20th, 2023 06:10
Our Future Being.
arqios said:
Hurt people hurt people. It isn\'t only just a contemporary proverb but demonstrated horrifically in our society. It\'s not an excuse but could show us to nip at the bud wherever and to whomever. Such a moving poem.
October 20th, 2023 05:31
arqios said:
Hurt people hurt people. It isn\'t only just a contemporary proverb but demonstrated horrifically in our society. It\'s not an excuse but could show us to nip at the bud wherever and to whomever. Such a moving poem.
October 20th, 2023 05:31
Our Future Being.
Teddy.15 said:
So powerful and so well heard in this poem, children are the future and we should protect every last one. Thank you Andy ❤️
October 20th, 2023 02:19
Teddy.15 said:
So powerful and so well heard in this poem, children are the future and we should protect every last one. Thank you Andy ❤️
October 20th, 2023 02:19
Our Future Being.
LIZ said:
AMEN!!!!!!! I feel this!!!! Oh the things I would do!!!! It\'s Unexplainable!
October 20th, 2023 02:07
LIZ said:
AMEN!!!!!!! I feel this!!!! Oh the things I would do!!!! It\'s Unexplainable!
October 20th, 2023 02:07
Our Future Being.
orchidee said:
Those who do will suffer. Even Jesus said if we offend \'little ones\' (could mean literal children, or people new in the faith) it\'s better if a millstone was tied round their neck, and they cast into the sea\'. This from the not-always meek and mild One.
Also - who could hurt animals?
October 20th, 2023 01:54
orchidee said:
Those who do will suffer. Even Jesus said if we offend \'little ones\' (could mean literal children, or people new in the faith) it\'s better if a millstone was tied round their neck, and they cast into the sea\'. This from the not-always meek and mild One.
Also - who could hurt animals?
October 20th, 2023 01:54
Focus On Yourself.
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
yes, I must stop focusing on KP and giving in to her every demand! lol.
October 19th, 2023 02:08
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
yes, I must stop focusing on KP and giving in to her every demand! lol.
October 19th, 2023 02:08
Calliope Inspiration.
John Prophet said:
WOW, you romantic son of a gun!
Nice work.
JP
October 18th, 2023 07:23
John Prophet said:
WOW, you romantic son of a gun!
Nice work.
JP
October 18th, 2023 07:23
Calliope Inspiration.
Teddy.15 said:
The voice of reason and grace, she does I fact influence your muse. ❤️ Beautiful.
October 18th, 2023 02:38
Teddy.15 said:
The voice of reason and grace, she does I fact influence your muse. ❤️ Beautiful.
October 18th, 2023 02:38
Calliope Inspiration.
David Wakeling said:
I always feel good when I read your poems.Thank you compadre
October 18th, 2023 02:24
David Wakeling said:
I always feel good when I read your poems.Thank you compadre
October 18th, 2023 02:24
Calliope Inspiration.
orchidee said:
Good write Gold. When did we first meet her in person?! lol.
October 18th, 2023 01:32
orchidee said:
Good write Gold. When did we first meet her in person?! lol.
October 18th, 2023 01:32
Our Love Goes On And On. (Written by Mary).
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful. That has to feel good.
October 18th, 2023 00:20
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful. That has to feel good.
October 18th, 2023 00:20
Our Love Goes On And On. (Written by Mary).
LIZ said:
So romantically beautiful!!
October 17th, 2023 09:57
LIZ said:
So romantically beautiful!!
October 17th, 2023 09:57
Our Love Goes On And On. (Written by Mary).
orchidee said:
A fine write Mary. Did you know Andy and I are millions of years old!?! lol.
October 17th, 2023 01:44
orchidee said:
A fine write Mary. Did you know Andy and I are millions of years old!?! lol.
October 17th, 2023 01:44
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