Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
I Have A Dream.
MendedFences27 said:
Love your \"dream.\" Wish it could be true, but still hopeful. \"Where nations befriend each other.\" Greatest wish of all. Keep on \"dreaming,\" Andy, - Phil A.
P.S. - Great bit of music also. - loved it.
April 22nd, 2023 12:07
MendedFences27 said:
Love your \"dream.\" Wish it could be true, but still hopeful. \"Where nations befriend each other.\" Greatest wish of all. Keep on \"dreaming,\" Andy, - Phil A.
P.S. - Great bit of music also. - loved it.
April 22nd, 2023 12:07
I Have A Dream.
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful dream indeed. I too, like John Lennon can only \"Imagine\" what a difference this would be. Maybe, someday, if the race lasts long enough this will come true. Until then we can only dream. Such a beautiful thought, dream and poem.
April 22nd, 2023 07:12
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful dream indeed. I too, like John Lennon can only \"Imagine\" what a difference this would be. Maybe, someday, if the race lasts long enough this will come true. Until then we can only dream. Such a beautiful thought, dream and poem.
April 22nd, 2023 07:12
I Have A Dream.
Fay Slimm. said:
May your dream one day become a reality dear caring friend.
April 22nd, 2023 05:40
Fay Slimm. said:
May your dream one day become a reality dear caring friend.
April 22nd, 2023 05:40
I Have A Dream.
Accidental Poet said:
A dream you share with many like minded people Andy. Very well written. 👍
April 22nd, 2023 02:33
Accidental Poet said:
A dream you share with many like minded people Andy. Very well written. 👍
April 22nd, 2023 02:33
I Have A Dream.
David Wakeling said:
I don\'t think anyone would disagree with that dream.Wonderful writing
April 22nd, 2023 01:11
David Wakeling said:
I don\'t think anyone would disagree with that dream.Wonderful writing
April 22nd, 2023 01:11
Only By Giving.
Bella Shepard said:
I\'m so glad dear friend that this \"something\" came to mind. Good things come in small packages, in this case something truly wonderful. Thank you!
April 21st, 2023 13:36
Bella Shepard said:
I\'m so glad dear friend that this \"something\" came to mind. Good things come in small packages, in this case something truly wonderful. Thank you!
April 21st, 2023 13:36
Only By Giving.
arqios said:
Right up there! There is only receiving in the giving. So good this stuff you bear forth.
April 21st, 2023 07:58
arqios said:
Right up there! There is only receiving in the giving. So good this stuff you bear forth.
April 21st, 2023 07:58
Only By Giving.
Accidental Poet said:
Always something positive to look forward to Andy. Even if its only to pay it forward. 😉
April 21st, 2023 06:14
Accidental Poet said:
Always something positive to look forward to Andy. Even if its only to pay it forward. 😉
April 21st, 2023 06:14
Into A Darkened Room.
L. B. Mek said:
\'I am sure it looked at me
With a puzzled expression\'
lol
love this! slice of life realism, Andy
\'that same Spring, revisits
one more
and that youthful verve, we harbour
jumps into life, again
till our limited adrenalin, is exhausted
then that quite room, and a little nap
is all the energetic Spring
we\'ll ever, need
for the next hour or ten...
lol)
April 21st, 2023 04:10
L. B. Mek said:
\'I am sure it looked at me
With a puzzled expression\'
lol
love this! slice of life realism, Andy
\'that same Spring, revisits
one more
and that youthful verve, we harbour
jumps into life, again
till our limited adrenalin, is exhausted
then that quite room, and a little nap
is all the energetic Spring
we\'ll ever, need
for the next hour or ten...
lol)
April 21st, 2023 04:10
Only By Giving.
L. B. Mek said:
loved this, Andy
so very true
(we inhale, to exhale
we intrust, to be rewarded with warmth
we reciprocate, to reward those
who gift us the small mercies
we treasure in our life..
there\'s a reason, why there\'s no
stock exchange
for the humane in our society
it\'s too personalised, to be afforded
a collective value
thus, it\'s up to us
to appreciate, value and \'pass it forward\'
at every opportunity!)
April 21st, 2023 04:05
L. B. Mek said:
loved this, Andy
so very true
(we inhale, to exhale
we intrust, to be rewarded with warmth
we reciprocate, to reward those
who gift us the small mercies
we treasure in our life..
there\'s a reason, why there\'s no
stock exchange
for the humane in our society
it\'s too personalised, to be afforded
a collective value
thus, it\'s up to us
to appreciate, value and \'pass it forward\'
at every opportunity!)
April 21st, 2023 04:05
Sorry I Am Alive.
L. B. Mek said:
\'I don’t roll into hospital
Drunk on a Friday or Saturday night!\'
an important, well considered and timely write
dear cherished Poet
(ain\'t it absurd, how statistics
are now merely a weaponised, tool
for agenda driven politicised
\'trending topics\'
where did all that societal outcry
during covid, go
when government, ignorance
endangered such a large portion
of our elderly
and now what... how ludicrous
ageism, just another
BRAND
of systemic segregation, implanted
into our daily lives, just to make
our situations, that little bit harder)
April 21st, 2023 03:59
L. B. Mek said:
\'I don’t roll into hospital
Drunk on a Friday or Saturday night!\'
an important, well considered and timely write
dear cherished Poet
(ain\'t it absurd, how statistics
are now merely a weaponised, tool
for agenda driven politicised
\'trending topics\'
where did all that societal outcry
during covid, go
when government, ignorance
endangered such a large portion
of our elderly
and now what... how ludicrous
ageism, just another
BRAND
of systemic segregation, implanted
into our daily lives, just to make
our situations, that little bit harder)
April 21st, 2023 03:59
Only By Giving.
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
I\'m gonna GIVE more water for...... you know what.
Is it time for Ch......poems yet?!
April 21st, 2023 01:47
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
I\'m gonna GIVE more water for...... you know what.
Is it time for Ch......poems yet?!
April 21st, 2023 01:47
Sorry I Am Alive.
sorenbarrett said:
As is usually the case, the problem is being shifted to distract from what the real problem is. Cost of medical care is too high, with technology trying to achieve immortality. Some treatments have proportionately too high of a cost to be practice. Also with the drop in birth rate a smaller group or people are supporting the care of a larger group due to a government that spent the money previously contributed for other things. Don\'t take it personal I am in the same boat and will go down with the ship.
April 20th, 2023 05:37
sorenbarrett said:
As is usually the case, the problem is being shifted to distract from what the real problem is. Cost of medical care is too high, with technology trying to achieve immortality. Some treatments have proportionately too high of a cost to be practice. Also with the drop in birth rate a smaller group or people are supporting the care of a larger group due to a government that spent the money previously contributed for other things. Don\'t take it personal I am in the same boat and will go down with the ship.
April 20th, 2023 05:37
Sorry I Am Alive.
David Wakeling said:
Its tough when you get older and have medical problems.I know from personal experience.Its time to get in touch with family.they can be a comfort at this time.
April 20th, 2023 04:22
David Wakeling said:
Its tough when you get older and have medical problems.I know from personal experience.Its time to get in touch with family.they can be a comfort at this time.
April 20th, 2023 04:22
Sorry I Am Alive.
Accidental Poet said:
Just keep smiling Andy, you\'re ahead of the game everyday. 😉👍
April 20th, 2023 03:39
Accidental Poet said:
Just keep smiling Andy, you\'re ahead of the game everyday. 😉👍
April 20th, 2023 03:39
Sorry I Am Alive.
2781 said:
I read your stories on most days,they are a joy to read. Lives lived to the full, the blessed die in their sleep.
April 20th, 2023 03:11
2781 said:
I read your stories on most days,they are a joy to read. Lives lived to the full, the blessed die in their sleep.
April 20th, 2023 03:11
Sorry I Am Alive.
Doggerel Dave said:
Who told you that? Wouldn\'t take it personally. There\'s a whole cohort of baby boomers about to drop off the twig with you when you are ready. In the meantime you will require more medication and surgery (unless you are extremely lucky) before you pop off.
The answer is not to personalise the issue (just who told you that?) But for a halfway decent government to provide extra care or a simple way to check out when you have had enough.
April 20th, 2023 02:41
Doggerel Dave said:
Who told you that? Wouldn\'t take it personally. There\'s a whole cohort of baby boomers about to drop off the twig with you when you are ready. In the meantime you will require more medication and surgery (unless you are extremely lucky) before you pop off.
The answer is not to personalise the issue (just who told you that?) But for a halfway decent government to provide extra care or a simple way to check out when you have had enough.
April 20th, 2023 02:41
Sorry I Am Alive.
orchidee said:
Us two know - we\'re millions of years old. Was there NHS 10 million years BC?
Yes, it\'s a bit inconvenient still being alive sometimes - for others, not for us. Doh!
April 20th, 2023 01:37
orchidee said:
Us two know - we\'re millions of years old. Was there NHS 10 million years BC?
Yes, it\'s a bit inconvenient still being alive sometimes - for others, not for us. Doh!
April 20th, 2023 01:37
Into A Darkened Room.
MendedFences27 said:
With a bit of music no doubt. I used to hate mowing. Mine was a lot of uphill/downhill. Amazed by the first- pull start. Here\'s wishing you a green lawn. Don\'t overdo it. - Phil A.
April 19th, 2023 14:03
MendedFences27 said:
With a bit of music no doubt. I used to hate mowing. Mine was a lot of uphill/downhill. Amazed by the first- pull start. Here\'s wishing you a green lawn. Don\'t overdo it. - Phil A.
April 19th, 2023 14:03
Into A Darkened Room.
arqios said:
The joy of getting the mowing done is sublime!
April 19th, 2023 07:58
arqios said:
The joy of getting the mowing done is sublime!
April 19th, 2023 07:58
Make Love Not War Acrostic.
Bella Shepard said:
This is beautiful in both message and wonderful verse. I thank you for introducing the acrostic poem to me, I love it. You always amaze dear friend, and remind us of what it truly matters.
April 18th, 2023 14:15
Bella Shepard said:
This is beautiful in both message and wonderful verse. I thank you for introducing the acrostic poem to me, I love it. You always amaze dear friend, and remind us of what it truly matters.
April 18th, 2023 14:15
Make Love Not War Acrostic.
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
This poem is a wonderful example of how poetry can be used to express important ideas and messages in a beautiful and memorable way.
April 18th, 2023 11:11
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
This poem is a wonderful example of how poetry can be used to express important ideas and messages in a beautiful and memorable way.
April 18th, 2023 11:11
Make Love Not War Acrostic.
Accidental Poet said:
A finely penned write Andy. 👍
April 18th, 2023 05:42
Accidental Poet said:
A finely penned write Andy. 👍
April 18th, 2023 05:42
Sculpture Of Happiness.
MendedFences27 said:
Remove all the badness and leave only the good. I have often marveled at the skill of sculptors. To take a large stone and chip away at it to create a piece of beauty. \"How does he do it.\" Indeed! - Phil A.
April 17th, 2023 16:03
MendedFences27 said:
Remove all the badness and leave only the good. I have often marveled at the skill of sculptors. To take a large stone and chip away at it to create a piece of beauty. \"How does he do it.\" Indeed! - Phil A.
April 17th, 2023 16:03
Sculpture Of Happiness.
Rocky Lagou said:
My Lord!!! Such a precise and wonderfully written poem. This metaphor is so exact, and I applaud you for thinking up such a vivid image to illustrate the inner beauty each being possesses.
April 17th, 2023 11:20
Rocky Lagou said:
My Lord!!! Such a precise and wonderfully written poem. This metaphor is so exact, and I applaud you for thinking up such a vivid image to illustrate the inner beauty each being possesses.
April 17th, 2023 11:20
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