Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60



Walking The Beach,
arqios said:

There beauty lay within the centre of love’s daily outworking; no matter the season, no matter the clime.

January 4th, 2024 06:30

Walking The Beach,
orchidee said:

A fine write Gold.

January 4th, 2024 05:56

Walking The Beach,
Tom Dylan said:

I really enjoyed this poem. On a miserable January morning, it was nice to read about the sun and beach. :-)

January 4th, 2024 03:08

Line Dancing.
Teddy.15 said:

Line dancing is a very structured dance so I guess the concentration takes away the joy lol oh Andy and Mary Happy New Year. 🤗

January 3rd, 2024 16:53

Line Dancing.
Michael Edwards said:

Well its very difficult dancing on a line - but good fun or so I\'m told.


January 3rd, 2024 03:36

Line Dancing.
orchidee said:

Yep, they look a miserable lot! lol.

January 3rd, 2024 03:09

Line Dancing.
Bobby O said:

I’m very glad that you take time to teach the youngsters that the music and the dance is ageless

January 3rd, 2024 03:04

Line Dancing.
2781 said:

Might be concentrating on the steps?

January 3rd, 2024 02:10

The Checkout.
arqios said:

At the check out today at the chemist’s was a larrikin at the till. Made for a pleasant errand and a light feeling at the beginning of 2024. Happy New Year!

January 2nd, 2024 09:46

The Checkout.
Cassie58 said:

A reminder why I never use those self-service checkouts.. I am a people person and I enjoy the contact with a cashier. I like to see smiles and have a greeting when I pay for my shopping. Shopping day today. Good morning.

January 2nd, 2024 03:24

The Checkout.
orchidee said:

In some shops I take basket (with wheels on) right thorough the checkout, and pack up my bags after paying.
Occasionally, cashier says \'Please don\'t take basket out of the shop\'. Understandable, as people leave trollies in the street, far from the shop.
Another hazard is when a new till opens, and they all dash there, and we may be left in a long queue still. We can play \'Guess which till will open\'. But a little patience won\'t hurt us.
Could you pop in to see that prisoner on the IOW? He is being released in February - ooh!

January 2nd, 2024 03:13

Let Love Be The Way Tanka.
Neville said:


a fine Tanka & one that I would most surely subscribe to ..

January 1st, 2024 04:55

Let Love Be The Way Tanka.
Bragee said:

One can only help!
Thanks for sharing and Happy New Year!

January 1st, 2024 04:28

Let Love Be The Way Tanka.
Rocky Lagou said:

That last line is simple yet so impactful. “Let love be the new way.” Indeed, wars both internal and external act as roadblocks to our progress. So this poem speaks volumes in regard to its application, we should all embrace a loving spirit.

January 1st, 2024 03:23

Let Love Be The Way Tanka.
Lorenz said:

This year will be worse than the last but much better than the next ...

January 1st, 2024 03:04

Let Love Be The Way Tanka.
orchidee said:

Good write Gold.
Sometimes a bit like that tomorrow/yesterday/today thingy. Tomorrow is the yesterday...... oh, you knows it. lol.
Hope we feel the old year was good too, or else we\'re continually wishing it happy when a new year starts, then bidding it good riddance when it ends! Doh!
How have the past millions of years been for us two?

January 1st, 2024 02:54

Me? A Rugby Nut!
David Wakeling said:

What a wonderful thought.I don\'t think anyone would argue with that.Fun poem

December 31st, 2023 20:44

Me? A Rugby Nut!
sorenbarrett said:

Yes and a world where Americans spoke proper English.

December 31st, 2023 05:04

Me? A Rugby Nut!
Neville said:



in the words of the late great Lou Reed, .. Oh\' what a perfect day ..

December 31st, 2023 04:32

Me? A Rugby Nut!
orchidee said:

Thanks Gold.
Yes, and they all run indoors in a cricket match, at the first drop of rain.
But there\'s a lot of standing about in that sport.

December 31st, 2023 03:23

Generous Life.
Dev Parth said:

The poem beautifully reflects on the passing year, expressing gratitude for its beauty and love. The imagery of darkness and the full moon symbolize hope,the light continuing into the next year, grateful for the generous life experienced and hopeful for many more years to come.

Well 👍 written I enjoyed it 😀

December 30th, 2023 09:34

To Eternity And Beyond.
Neville said:



a page filled with both sorrow and so much love ..

December 30th, 2023 04:01

To Eternity And Beyond.
orchidee said:

A poignant write Gold.
A now elderly friend is carer to his wife, a bit younger than him I think, but she has dementia sadly.

December 30th, 2023 03:35

Generous Life.
sorenbarrett said:

Indeed my friend for many many more.

December 29th, 2023 05:10

Generous Life.
Neville said:



you are indeed a lucky fella ..

December 29th, 2023 04:26

Generous Life.
orchidee said:

Good write Gold.

December 29th, 2023 02:51

Breakfast Music.
Neville said:



News to me tho\' .. but what a treat ..

December 28th, 2023 10:38

Breakfast Music.
John Prophet said:

Here I sit 7:30 am coffee in hand listening to this beautiful piece.
Nice!
John


December 28th, 2023 07:33

Breakfast Music.
sorenbarrett said:

Funny how classics in any genre are unknown to younger generations. It makes me wonder what I have missed and I spend hours reviewing older as well as newer music. Good write Gold

December 28th, 2023 03:43

Breakfast Music.
orchidee said:

Cornflakes with Beethoven?!
Good write Gold.

December 28th, 2023 03:01



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