Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60



Darkness To Light.
Doggerel Dave said:

My favourite anthem for years, but if it ain\'t working, why?

March 16th, 2022 06:10

Darkness To Light.
orchidee said:

A fine write Gold.
A dafter version: \'Ohhh, all would be wonderful, if only Orchi stopped singing!\' lol.

March 16th, 2022 03:02

Darkness To Light.
dusk arising said:

\"You may say I\'m a dreamer, but I\'m not the only one. I hope someday you\'ll join us and the world will be as one\" John Lennon\'s words

So many great words have been written and tossed into the wind of fate only to resurface as a blood-stained litter on a bayonet.

March 16th, 2022 02:35

Taunting Muse.
Crowns4Christ said:

This is So TRUE Andy,oh my goodness, this happens all the time,we can\'t always have something to write with handy

March 15th, 2022 20:46

Taunting Muse.
FallenAngel1πŸ•Š said:

This is why I always have pens and paper within my immediate reach at all times,..without exception. Tip: if you sit like a girl while you pee,it really frees up your handsπŸ˜‚ Cheers Andy,always a pleasureπŸ»πŸŒžπŸ•Š

March 15th, 2022 20:19

Taunting Muse.
Rocky Lagou said:

Exactly. Literally perfect epitome of us poets trying to find that inspiration. It\'s elusive.

March 15th, 2022 13:49

Taunting Muse.
Fay Slimm. said:

Ha - - I buy pens that can write upside down for when the Muse wakes me during the night - - oh what a life us poets must lead. Its when words appear as I am under the shower that touble can start.

March 15th, 2022 07:10

Taunting Muse.
L. B. Mek said:

so true Andy, sometimes
that ephemeral poetic, light
of inspiration, dissipates
between our imagination\'s, thought conjuring
and the time it takes us, to pull out
our notepads and mobile devices..
(loved the scenic video btw)

March 15th, 2022 06:37

Taunting Muse.
Doggerel Dave said:

Need to find a heavy duty kind of bog paper, Andy. Write round the instruction to \'Now wash your hands\' (but note carefully and obey as appropriate). this gives you time, and can ease the urgency of your evacuation.
Alternative strategies with respect to the other situations you posit are available upon application.

March 15th, 2022 03:43

Taunting Muse.
dusk arising said:

And I sometimes try to capture my thoughts on a notepad app on my phone. Writing this I just realised I could actually record it on my phone. Isn\'t technology wonderful - if only us old gits could work out how to use it.
It\'s taken me years to work out how to transfer files from my phone to laptop. It\'s a blumming phone for gawds sake, for phoning people, thats why it\'s called a phone..... shut-up dusky, he doesn\'t want to hear your rant.

March 15th, 2022 03:40

Taunting Muse.
orchidee said:

Good write Gold.
Yes, by the time we come to write down, it\'s gone from our minds! Sometimes we may recall the words though.

March 15th, 2022 02:58

Les Mis Took Me.
John Prophet said:

Beautiful all the way around!

March 14th, 2022 21:03

Les Mis Took Me.
Christina8 said:

A sweet and loving tribute to Joyce. I got goosebumps just reading it. Great Job!

March 14th, 2022 14:49

Bridge Chatter.
Rocky Lagou said:

Yes! What a fun poem and I\'m glad to see things are brighter!

March 14th, 2022 08:56

Les Mis Took Me.
Rocky Lagou said:

Wow what an emotional bundle of words. I enjoy your wistful tone and loss is one of the most difficult aspects of life. I hope you and your new partner will bask in the memories happily! πŸ’–

March 14th, 2022 08:32

Les Mis Took Me.
Neville said:



.. this is seriously good my friend .. & in more ways than one ......... Neville

March 14th, 2022 07:33

Les Mis Took Me.
L. B. Mek said:

beautiful Andy!
(\'Life has to be Lived!
We carry those we cherish
within each choice, step
yet still, that path awaits
so we must, find a way
to progress and find
what awaits, at that next
unexpected twist
or overcome obstacle, in life)
what a powerful message
and you don\'t just write it
you, my friend
live it...
Awesome!

March 14th, 2022 06:31

Les Mis Took Me.
orchidee said:

A sensitive write Gold.
Me being less sensitive - yep, it happens to lots of folk, when they hear me sing, they weep tears - of anguish! lol.

March 14th, 2022 02:51

Bridge Chatter.
myself and me said:

How lovely it is.

March 13th, 2022 19:28

Bridge Chatter.
Crowns4Christ said:

When you, you know, when you find the love of your life

March 13th, 2022 17:08

Bridge Chatter.
Bella Shepard said:

You put a smile on my face and a chuckle in my heart. You\'re a lucky fella. Beware though, you may be in for ballroom dancing lessons (just kidding).

March 13th, 2022 12:39

Bridge Chatter.
Accidental Poet said:

And she\'ll learn from the best! πŸ˜‰

March 13th, 2022 09:42

New Life Together.
Accidental Poet said:

See what happens when I\'m not looking? Love shows up when least expected. All the very best to you both Andy. πŸŒΉπŸ’•πŸŒΉ

March 13th, 2022 09:41

Bridge Chatter.
sorenbarrett said:

A very pleasing read that conveys the message so well that our own likes conform to those we care about,

March 13th, 2022 09:24

Bridge Chatter.
Paul Bell said:

That girl knows what good for her.

March 13th, 2022 06:19

Bridge Chatter.
Rozina said:

Wonderful times ahead!

March 13th, 2022 04:35

Bridge Chatter.
Neville said:



I am delighted that things are finally looking up for you GF60 ............. N :)

March 13th, 2022 03:14

Bridge Chatter.
orchidee said:

Good write Gold.

March 13th, 2022 02:52

Love FIBS
myself and me said:

Such day is so precious or luxury to have.

March 12th, 2022 12:51

Love FIBS
Bella Shepard said:

I love the symmetry of your presentation. It starts as one, swells, and ends as one. Like a beautiful deep breath, held, then exhaled. Each love is a beautiful breath each day, and we need to breath deeply. A truly lovely piece!

March 12th, 2022 12:35



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