Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60



Our Undying Love.
dusk arising said:

You\'re right I loved that and to see Alba Esteban cooly waiting with the bari crook and mouthpiece over her shoulder really made me smile. Two superb horn players.

Special people shine in the eyes of special people and together their shine brightens the lifes of all who see... just as you two do for your pals here on mps. (dusk reaches for sunglasses)

April 7th, 2022 12:27

Our Undying Love.
Neville said:



wow ... you are such a deserving pair my old fruit .. I am absolutely delighted for you ..................... N


April 7th, 2022 07:03

Our Undying Love.
John Prophet said:

Beautiful write

April 7th, 2022 06:14

Our Undying Love.
orchidee said:

A fine write Gold.

April 7th, 2022 02:02

Our Undying Love.
Crowns4Christ said:

Your love for each other helped you both heal

April 7th, 2022 01:35

Differing Words.
Bella Shepard said:

I love the symbolism of this poem, I can visualize each drop forming a word. The constant churning of thoughts, so much to share, so much to write.

April 6th, 2022 14:10

Differing Words.
Christina8 said:

Great write Andy!! A lovely thought.

April 6th, 2022 13:44

Differing Words.
dusk arising said:

The evil and destruction going on today in Ukraine has zapped my creativity for the time being.
Although arguments took place within the animals as to which member wrote house of the rising sun there were much older versions of it floating around long before the 60\'s UK blues revival movement.

April 6th, 2022 08:23

Differing Words.
Katrina D said:

lovely poem, thanks

April 6th, 2022 07:38

Differing Words.
orchidee said:

Good write Gold.

April 6th, 2022 02:28

Escape to the Dark.
Crowns4Christ said:

I think think that shadows are our inner selves trying to be brought forth into the light

April 5th, 2022 13:31

Escape to the Dark.
Vamsi Sudha said:

Dear Andy,

Very interesting poem and loved your conceptualization !!

April 5th, 2022 12:09

Escape to the Dark.
Rocky Lagou said:

Wow quite the observation. Shadows are so strange, it’s like a replica of us just silently watching. Wonderful job!


April 5th, 2022 10:09

Escape to the Dark.
Christina8 said:

Very good write andy!

April 5th, 2022 05:07

Escape to the Dark.
L. B. Mek said:

light, is a concept
that\'s so complex, like
which came first
shadow or light
if no light
would we know
darkness exists
if no darkness
would we need light,
why do we fear darkness
but spend six to eight hours
everyday
in self-induced, complete darkness
and cherish
the dreams, it gifts...
(thanks Andy
an intriguing read)

April 5th, 2022 04:46

Escape to the Dark.
dusk arising said:

But do you see shadows in daylight beneath an overcast sky. Shadows fear dissipated light and hide in cupboards and beneath cars.

April 5th, 2022 03:09

Escape to the Dark.
Neville said:



I rather like the innocent childlike quality you have captured here Andy ..

April 5th, 2022 02:00

Escape to the Dark.
orchidee said:

Good write Gold.

April 5th, 2022 01:45

Escape to the Dark.
Michael Edwards said:

Reminds of one of my dhildren who ased when we put off the light: \'Who put the dark light on?\'

April 5th, 2022 01:33

Ageless Love.
Bella Shepard said:

Now, technically the word fogey comes from the French fougeux, which translates to fiery, ardent, spirited, enthusiastic. Link that with old and I\'d say you have a dynamic duo. So love on, \"Old Fogies\", may your fire burn bright. Great write!

April 4th, 2022 11:24

Ageless Love.
Neville said:


as far as I can see, it was just meant to be ............... be happy the pair of ya ....

April 4th, 2022 10:32

Ageless Love.
dusk arising said:

Aha... now we have it \"born again fogeyism\". I applaud it, we should all sign up for some of it.

Admit it, you\'ve become a pair of spring lambs.

Twenty twenty two
the year of
her and you.

April 4th, 2022 10:03

Ageless Love.
L. B. Mek said:

the symmetry between the little scribble I shared today and your write makes me proud..
just so happy for you, my friend


April 4th, 2022 05:18

Ageless Love.
orchidee said:

Good write Gold.

April 4th, 2022 01:55

Ageless Love.
Crowns4Christ said:

Two old fogies Andy,nah, love keeps you two young at heart, love knows no bounds,nor age

Love and hugs to you both Melissa Crown

April 4th, 2022 01:43

Four Seasons In A Day.
Crowns4Christ said:

Sounds like the weather here in Oregon, USA
It was hot yesterday, supposed to snow tomorrow, weather is crazy nowadays

April 3rd, 2022 11:26

Another Wonderful Day,
Accidental Poet said:

May the Sun always rise with the music you love best Andy. πŸ˜‰

April 3rd, 2022 10:10

Four Seasons In A Day.
Accidental Poet said:

As we say here in New England, \"If you don\'t like the weather, wait a minute till it changes\" Great write Andy. πŸ‘

April 3rd, 2022 10:02

Four Seasons In A Day.
FallenAngel1πŸ•Š said:

Sounds like Canada. We have a saying here. β€œIf you don’t like the weather,..wait 15 minutes πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ₯‚πŸ•ŠπŸŒžπŸ€ͺβ›ˆβ›…οΈπŸŒˆπŸŒ€πŸ’¨πŸŒ¬β›…οΈπŸŒ€πŸŒˆβ˜€οΈπŸŒ¨β„οΈβ˜ƒοΈβ›…οΈπŸŒ€β˜€οΈπŸŒˆπŸ€ͺπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

April 3rd, 2022 09:35

Four Seasons In A Day.
Christina8 said:

I can relate to the changing of seasons in one day, with michigan weather being so unpredictable as well, we go through snow and spring and fall but never warm enough for summer......we\'ll get there. Very nice write, Andy!

April 3rd, 2022 09:31



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