Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
The Poem What I Wrote (Sorry Ernie).
Audrey A. said:
The line breaking is the punctuation. Breathe there.
April 26th, 2023 07:50
Audrey A. said:
The line breaking is the punctuation. Breathe there.
April 26th, 2023 07:50
The Poem What I Wrote (Sorry Ernie).
Doggerel Dave said:
Thanks, Andy for M and W; I\'m not so PC (only just a little) that I couldn\'t enjoy that.
Your poem may be not a massive work of art, but it is my kind of stuff and hugely entertaining.....
April 26th, 2023 06:41
Doggerel Dave said:
Thanks, Andy for M and W; I\'m not so PC (only just a little) that I couldn\'t enjoy that.
Your poem may be not a massive work of art, but it is my kind of stuff and hugely entertaining.....
April 26th, 2023 06:41
The Poem What I Wrote (Sorry Ernie).
2781 said:
That was a delightfully easy read.
April 26th, 2023 02:09
2781 said:
That was a delightfully easy read.
April 26th, 2023 02:09
The Poem What I Wrote (Sorry Ernie).
orchidee said:
Good write Gold. lol.
Nothing much worse though than being in a Poetry Group, and some waffling on.
There was spare time, so we had to endure more, when some said \'I will just read one more!\'
April 26th, 2023 02:08
orchidee said:
Good write Gold. lol.
Nothing much worse though than being in a Poetry Group, and some waffling on.
There was spare time, so we had to endure more, when some said \'I will just read one more!\'
April 26th, 2023 02:08
The Poem What I Wrote (Sorry Ernie).
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
This is a light-hearted and humorous piece that pokes fun at the different styles of poetry while also acknowledging their rich history and evolution.
April 26th, 2023 01:59
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
This is a light-hearted and humorous piece that pokes fun at the different styles of poetry while also acknowledging their rich history and evolution.
April 26th, 2023 01:59
The Heartbeat Of The Universe.
Rocky Lagou said:
Stupendous, dear poet! I couldn’t agree more. Earth’s love towards its inhabitants is manifested through nature and song. I adore your words!
April 25th, 2023 09:17
Rocky Lagou said:
Stupendous, dear poet! I couldn’t agree more. Earth’s love towards its inhabitants is manifested through nature and song. I adore your words!
April 25th, 2023 09:17
Letting Go.
John Prophet said:
Written by a seasoned experienced soul.Nine work.
JP
April 25th, 2023 07:36
John Prophet said:
Written by a seasoned experienced soul.Nine work.
JP
April 25th, 2023 07:36
Letting Go.
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
Often writing them down, can get troubles out of our mind, I find. The troubles may still be there, not disappear as wave of a magic wand, but they are \'out\' of our mind, as it were.
Or going for a walk can help too. But not if you meet me singing on the walk. lol.
April 25th, 2023 01:53
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
Often writing them down, can get troubles out of our mind, I find. The troubles may still be there, not disappear as wave of a magic wand, but they are \'out\' of our mind, as it were.
Or going for a walk can help too. But not if you meet me singing on the walk. lol.
April 25th, 2023 01:53
Letting Go.
Doggerel Dave said:
Always enjoyed Glen Miller, Andy. thanks for that.
So what is your secret formula for the release of big worries?
April 25th, 2023 01:20
Doggerel Dave said:
Always enjoyed Glen Miller, Andy. thanks for that.
So what is your secret formula for the release of big worries?
April 25th, 2023 01:20
Letting Go.
David Wakeling said:
Gotta love the big band sound.The poem has so much wisdom.Well done. Good luck in the new life of wonder
April 25th, 2023 01:17
David Wakeling said:
Gotta love the big band sound.The poem has so much wisdom.Well done. Good luck in the new life of wonder
April 25th, 2023 01:17
The Heartbeat Of The Universe.
MendedFences27 said:
Great words Andy. Love the comparison to the \"heartbeat of the Universe.\" Music transcends the boundaries of our Earth.
And then you added \"Love\" to the mix. Can I get an Amen? Words of wisdom, Andy. - Phil A.
April 24th, 2023 16:33
MendedFences27 said:
Great words Andy. Love the comparison to the \"heartbeat of the Universe.\" Music transcends the boundaries of our Earth.
And then you added \"Love\" to the mix. Can I get an Amen? Words of wisdom, Andy. - Phil A.
April 24th, 2023 16:33
The Heartbeat Of The Universe.
Bella Shepard said:
Dear friend you found the sweetest spot in my heart with this poem, one of my favorite songs coupled with your beautiful verse. The emotion was building as I read, and when I got to the last three lines the tears were just there, and they felt so good. I remember seeing Love Is A Many Splendored Thing years ago, and it has always been the quintessential love story for me. Thank you for triggering such welcome memories.
April 24th, 2023 16:27
Bella Shepard said:
Dear friend you found the sweetest spot in my heart with this poem, one of my favorite songs coupled with your beautiful verse. The emotion was building as I read, and when I got to the last three lines the tears were just there, and they felt so good. I remember seeing Love Is A Many Splendored Thing years ago, and it has always been the quintessential love story for me. Thank you for triggering such welcome memories.
April 24th, 2023 16:27
The Heartbeat Of The Universe.
sorenbarrett said:
I see love as a far greater force than what any dictionary would describe it as. Vague and hard to describe but nature yes. A wonderful write Gold.
April 24th, 2023 06:22
sorenbarrett said:
I see love as a far greater force than what any dictionary would describe it as. Vague and hard to describe but nature yes. A wonderful write Gold.
April 24th, 2023 06:22
The Heartbeat Of The Universe.
Audrey A. said:
I\'m not so sure love helps the pulse, but sugar makes it wild!
That pulse is your healing power. Move it everywhere and shed your pain.
This poem is beautiful by the way.
April 24th, 2023 05:59
Audrey A. said:
I\'m not so sure love helps the pulse, but sugar makes it wild!
That pulse is your healing power. Move it everywhere and shed your pain.
This poem is beautiful by the way.
April 24th, 2023 05:59
The Heartbeat Of The Universe.
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
\'That gentle pulse that runs through our lives,\'
such lovely wording, dear Poet
(any chance you know what film those scenes were taken from
they have such a classic, moody
vibe
lol)
April 24th, 2023 03:34
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
\'That gentle pulse that runs through our lives,\'
such lovely wording, dear Poet
(any chance you know what film those scenes were taken from
they have such a classic, moody
vibe
lol)
April 24th, 2023 03:34
The Heartbeat Of The Universe.
David Wakeling said:
I love that song.I think it was an inspiration for hundreds of other songs.Certainly is the heartbeat of the universe.Well put
April 24th, 2023 03:23
David Wakeling said:
I love that song.I think it was an inspiration for hundreds of other songs.Certainly is the heartbeat of the universe.Well put
April 24th, 2023 03:23
The Heartbeat Of The Universe.
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
I\'m gonna sing along with that clip. Oh no! lol.
April 24th, 2023 02:25
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
I\'m gonna sing along with that clip. Oh no! lol.
April 24th, 2023 02:25
Thankfully Happy.
John Prophet said:
So true. I wonder if one can be truly happy if always yearning for more.
JB
April 23rd, 2023 12:00
John Prophet said:
So true. I wonder if one can be truly happy if always yearning for more.
JB
April 23rd, 2023 12:00
I Have A Dream.
MendedFences27 said:
Love your \"dream.\" Wish it could be true, but still hopeful. \"Where nations befriend each other.\" Greatest wish of all. Keep on \"dreaming,\" Andy, - Phil A.
P.S. - Great bit of music also. - loved it.
April 22nd, 2023 12:07
MendedFences27 said:
Love your \"dream.\" Wish it could be true, but still hopeful. \"Where nations befriend each other.\" Greatest wish of all. Keep on \"dreaming,\" Andy, - Phil A.
P.S. - Great bit of music also. - loved it.
April 22nd, 2023 12:07
I Have A Dream.
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful dream indeed. I too, like John Lennon can only \"Imagine\" what a difference this would be. Maybe, someday, if the race lasts long enough this will come true. Until then we can only dream. Such a beautiful thought, dream and poem.
April 22nd, 2023 07:12
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful dream indeed. I too, like John Lennon can only \"Imagine\" what a difference this would be. Maybe, someday, if the race lasts long enough this will come true. Until then we can only dream. Such a beautiful thought, dream and poem.
April 22nd, 2023 07:12
I Have A Dream.
Fay Slimm. said:
May your dream one day become a reality dear caring friend.
April 22nd, 2023 05:40
Fay Slimm. said:
May your dream one day become a reality dear caring friend.
April 22nd, 2023 05:40
I Have A Dream.
David Wakeling said:
I don\'t think anyone would disagree with that dream.Wonderful writing
April 22nd, 2023 01:11
David Wakeling said:
I don\'t think anyone would disagree with that dream.Wonderful writing
April 22nd, 2023 01:11
Only By Giving.
Bella Shepard said:
I\'m so glad dear friend that this \"something\" came to mind. Good things come in small packages, in this case something truly wonderful. Thank you!
April 21st, 2023 13:36
Bella Shepard said:
I\'m so glad dear friend that this \"something\" came to mind. Good things come in small packages, in this case something truly wonderful. Thank you!
April 21st, 2023 13:36
Only By Giving.
arqios said:
Right up there! There is only receiving in the giving. So good this stuff you bear forth.
April 21st, 2023 07:58
arqios said:
Right up there! There is only receiving in the giving. So good this stuff you bear forth.
April 21st, 2023 07:58
Into A Darkened Room.
L. B. Mek said:
\'I am sure it looked at me
With a puzzled expression\'
lol
love this! slice of life realism, Andy
\'that same Spring, revisits
one more
and that youthful verve, we harbour
jumps into life, again
till our limited adrenalin, is exhausted
then that quite room, and a little nap
is all the energetic Spring
we\'ll ever, need
for the next hour or ten...
lol)
April 21st, 2023 04:10
L. B. Mek said:
\'I am sure it looked at me
With a puzzled expression\'
lol
love this! slice of life realism, Andy
\'that same Spring, revisits
one more
and that youthful verve, we harbour
jumps into life, again
till our limited adrenalin, is exhausted
then that quite room, and a little nap
is all the energetic Spring
we\'ll ever, need
for the next hour or ten...
lol)
April 21st, 2023 04:10
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