Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60



Long Life Pleasure.
orchidee said:

Good write Gold.
Meanwhile - Ohh, why does one want to live long - when Orchi is around to sing? It\'s a living agony! heehee.

December 10th, 2022 03:01

Joy And Freedom.
Doggerel Dave said:

Hallelujah,
You all did sing -
Next year, ‘see ya
Can’t wait for spring.

Late again, Andy - Apologies (I\'m working on a shorter \'quatrain\' next time....)


December 9th, 2022 08:06

Joy And Freedom.
arqios said:

I know I queried about a video clip but a sound recording can be put up on soundcloud. An idea rather belatedly but there you go, a long about way of saying wish we were there with you Andy!

December 9th, 2022 07:03

Joy And Freedom.
sorenbarrett said:

Andy I have always loved music, it can reach deep into the soul and heart, maybe more than poetry. It is poetry with a beat and melody. Nicely done.

December 9th, 2022 06:55

Joy And Freedom.
John Prophet said:

Wonderful to hear such joy.
Great write!

December 9th, 2022 06:27

Joy And Freedom.
L. B. Mek said:

I come for the poetry and fall in love with your choice, music
every time
thank you!
let your lungs enjoy their well-earned break my friend
help\'em along with a sip or two of the good stuff
just to keep them warm, 😉
🍻

December 9th, 2022 05:44

Joy And Freedom.
orchidee said:

I was not there - or you all drowned me out? ither way - hence the title of your fine poem?! lol.

December 9th, 2022 03:01

The New Watch.
Neville said:



old habits die hard ....... very funny tho\' :)

December 9th, 2022 01:07

The New Watch.
sorenbarrett said:

Habits are a hard thing to break even when one wants to. A great story Gold.

December 8th, 2022 18:55

The New Watch.
Saxon Crow said:

Son? Son?! Is there something I should know?

December 8th, 2022 06:05

The New Watch.
Doggerel Dave said:

I ain’t got no phone.
Double negative?
Means I ain’t got one;
I manage to live….

Plus Dave Allen...My cup runneth.... thanks Andy.


December 8th, 2022 03:58

The New Watch.
arqios said:

Been there, done that, still there! Just the other day I needed to know the time, wristwatch on my free hand found myself fishing for my phone which has a working clock on its homescreen wallpaper. LOL. Faved!

December 8th, 2022 03:23

The New Watch.
Crowns4Christ said:

HAHAHA,I\'m guilty of doing the same thing, yesterday actually, HAHAHA 🤣😂😂

December 8th, 2022 03:21

The New Watch.
orchidee said:

Oh lol good write Gold.

December 8th, 2022 02:56

Moon Of Love.
Crowns4Christ said:

Sweet heartfelt piece My dear Andy ,may your love blossom and grow all the days of our lives

December 7th, 2022 23:51

Moon Of Love.
Jon Nakapalau said:

Wonderful meditation Andy!

December 7th, 2022 20:10

Nature\'s Life.
Poetic Dan said:

Perfect read, thank you for walking and sharing!

December 7th, 2022 04:02

Moon Of Love.
arqios said:

Been too cold to pull the drapes and look out but sure it would be clear this time of year. Oh and it has been raining as well so not much when one looks up. Perhaps tonight as there\'s not a drop and not a puff of cloud.

December 7th, 2022 03:52

Moon Of Love.
Doggerel Dave said:

Of course you do arise,
(Your love is so strong)
Before the day flies
The moon goes along….

(Much to do, Andy – don’t let the day run away from you…)


December 7th, 2022 03:28

Moon Of Love.
orchidee said:

We were on that moon over 50 years ago, when we welcomed the first astronauts. Are we earthlings, you and I?! Cue for a daft poem, of my singing scaring them away?

December 7th, 2022 03:02

Nature\'s Life.
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good write, Andy.
Nature keeps her bargain.

December 6th, 2022 16:32

Nature\'s Life.
Saxon Crow said:

Best medicine there is. That and a single malt.

December 6th, 2022 05:30

Nature\'s Life.
arqios said:

We had to travel a bit to get a good bit of nature to surround us but that is needed in the balance of life!

December 6th, 2022 04:32

Nature\'s Life.
Doggerel Dave said:

You are lucky you still have some my friend;
Not sure your grandchildren will find it so.
Soon, too soon, but after we’re gone - the end:
You have timed it right - enjoy and then go…


December 6th, 2022 03:34

Nature\'s Life.
orchidee said:

You got those long johns on now for that walk? Or in shirt sleeves?!

December 6th, 2022 02:59

Daily Teacher.
Jerry Reynolds said:

Well done, Andy.

December 5th, 2022 16:38

Daily Teacher.
Bella Shepard said:

The sun is indeed our center. It rises to tell us that the day is ours to make. And when it sets it may speak of a day well done. With all that we\'ve learned in that day, there is hope for each successive one. Thank you dear Andy for this wonderful reflection.

December 5th, 2022 15:15

Daily Teacher.
arqios said:

Today the teacher hid behind the curtains and the slip tells us it would be so until around noon tomorrow. The scholars await its shining.

December 5th, 2022 06:49

Daily Teacher.
L. B. Mek said:

so true Andy
(every new day\'s sun we glimpse
is a lesson in hope, manifesting
to affirm the value in this
our gifted lives
since, that warmth on our cheeks
is often enough to remind us
however dark
our clouds will make way, eventually
and that sunshine will light-up our path
once again...)
btw
how was your performance?
hope you had fun

December 5th, 2022 05:55

Daily Teacher.
Doggerel Dave said:


When? It’s cloudy with possible showers;
Don’t tell me it doesn’t happen to you:
I know the English while away hours
Complaining of the latest weather too…..

Bottle up your sunshine and send it over here, post haste, Andy.
(Prepared to forget the beer and whisky you promised…… )


December 5th, 2022 03:54



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