Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60



Don\'t Feel Bad.
Bobby O said:

That’s the best and most clever spin snd I’m gonna go with that.

August 19th, 2023 01:24

The Dahlias.
MendedFences27 said:

Very sentimental. A fond memory brought to life from your pen. We could all feel the emotion in this one. Nice work. - Phil A.

August 18th, 2023 15:10

The Dahlias.
Garth Rakumakoe said:

Very musical at the same time. I can almost hear the music!

August 18th, 2023 08:58

The Dahlias.
Doggerel Dave said:

You\'ve done for me now, Andy...childhood recollections... Dad\'s favourite flower ...brother and I co-opted to patrol Dad\'s Dahlias, locate the matchboxes set up as earwig nests, turf inhabitants out onto the concrete path and...

Thanks for the memory, ...so they say....

August 18th, 2023 05:53

The Dahlias.
LIZ said:

This is so heartfelt ♥️ They are beautiful! I\'m glad they hold such great memories for you!

August 18th, 2023 05:14

The Dahlias.
Neville said:



writ with seemingly justifiable pride

August 18th, 2023 04:29

The Dahlias.
David Wakeling said:

Very respectful.Gotta love dahlias.I have some in my garden as well.Quite a moving write.

August 18th, 2023 02:45

The Dahlias.
Saxon Crow said:

I remember sunday mornings grandad in the front room listening to his music.

August 18th, 2023 02:34

The Dahlias.
orchidee said:

A sensitive write Gold.

August 18th, 2023 01:48

Can We Live Happily.
sorenbarrett said:

Yes I have noticed that those who have less tend to give more. A great message and nicely written.

August 17th, 2023 23:33

Can We Live Happily.
Bella Shepard said:

You present a question that doesn\'t seem to have a logical answer, since logic is something that eludes us, when we live in a world of plenty and yet allow those who have so little, to go with out. Great Write my friend!

August 17th, 2023 11:43

Can We Live Happily.
Bella Shepard said:

You present a question that doesn\'t seem to have a logical answer, since logic is something that eludes us, when we live in a world of plenty and yet allow those who have so little, to go with out. Great Write my friend!

August 17th, 2023 11:42

Can We Live Happily.
Doggerel Dave said:

Better ask the buggers with all the dosh.

August 17th, 2023 05:04

Can We Live Happily.
Neville said:



I so wish .. and wish that so would everybody sir .. ⭐

August 17th, 2023 02:24

Can We Live Happily.
LIZ said:

I\'m with you! It starts with us!

August 17th, 2023 02:03

Can We Live Happily.
orchidee said:

A fine write Gold.
Bit unfortunate clip - of course Doddy was happy, I say, hiding all that money under his mattress, while everyone else paid their taxes. Doh!
And my recent poem: \'He couldn\'t take it with him!\'.

August 17th, 2023 01:49

Need To Be Right.
Bigguy said:

Really interesting subject matter. It would be cool to see further exploration on the topic in other poems.
I enjoyed it!

August 16th, 2023 21:54

Give What You Can.
Neville said:



it takes two to tango but it takes all sorts to make the world go round ..

August 16th, 2023 12:49

Need To Be Right.
Doggerel Dave said:

Got that right Andy.

August 16th, 2023 07:38

Need To Be Right.
sorenbarrett said:

So few people can seer that there are more than one side to an issue. Often there is no right or wrong, black or white only shades of gray. A good write with some interesting rhyme

August 16th, 2023 06:59

Need To Be Right.
LIZ said:

I agree Andy! Everything is easier when we\'re able to see things from another\'s perspective. Respect!!!!

August 16th, 2023 06:55

Need To Be Right.
John Prophet said:

So true Andy. Many times we don’t hear but just wait for the moment to jump in

August 16th, 2023 06:25

Need To Be Right.
orchidee said:

You are right! :)

August 16th, 2023 02:07

Give What You Can.
orchidee said:

Argghh! I could have married CV instead - just as ghastly! lol.

August 16th, 2023 02:05

Need To Be Right.
Neville said:

You are most decidedly not wrong sir G .......... Neville

August 16th, 2023 01:55

Give What You Can.
Mottakeenur Rehman said:

The simplicity of the language and the repetitive structure contribute to the poem\'s effectiveness in conveying its message clearly and directly.






August 15th, 2023 15:12

Give What You Can.
orchidee said:

Oh nooooo! KP\'s on the front page of a newspaper. Not read all the story yet. Bad enough seeing her pic!

August 15th, 2023 07:24

Give What You Can.
orchidee said:

Good write Gold.

August 15th, 2023 02:28

Give What You Can.
2781 said:

So true. Love your neighbour as yourself. Times are getting tougher and the governments won\'t cope.

August 15th, 2023 02:07

Give What You Can.
Bobby O said:

They struggle but stay generous others filling pockets copius

August 15th, 2023 01:50



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