Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60



Vacancy.
Neville said:


Spooky sir ... this is far more than just something for Halloween Andy, the trick to this is, its a real treat for Halloween .. N :)

October 31st, 2021 04:06

Vacancy.
Fay Slimm. said:

What an intriguingly spooky tale and told at the right time of year too - shuddery thanks for this scary Halloween posting dear Andy.

October 31st, 2021 04:01

Vacancy.
orchidee said:

Yes, a spooky write Gold.
We shall be smelling our tea before we drink it now!

October 31st, 2021 02:24

Eternal River.
Laura🌻 said:

Andy,

Ah yes…
your River and your beloved Joyce.
One day you will be together again…
together forever. The love for each other that lives on infinitum.

Laura🌻

October 30th, 2021 23:55

Eternal River.
John Prophet said:

Wow, one of your better efforts I think.

JP

October 30th, 2021 21:08

Eternal River.
John Prophet said:

Wow, one of your better efforts I think.

JP

October 30th, 2021 20:38

Eternal River.
SureshG said:

your words prove, true love is never parted

October 30th, 2021 20:14

Eternal River.
John Prophet said:

Wow, one of your better efforts I think.

JP

October 30th, 2021 19:18

Eternal River.
John Prophet said:

Wow, one of your better efforts I think.

JP

October 30th, 2021 19:16

Eternal River.
John Prophet said:

Wow, one of your better efforts I think.

JP

October 30th, 2021 18:22

Eternal River.
John Prophet said:

Wow, one of your better efforts I think.

JP

October 30th, 2021 17:54

Eternal River.
Jerry Reynolds said:

Beautifully written, Andy.

October 30th, 2021 10:55

Eternal River.
John Prophet said:

Wow, one of your better efforts I think.

JP

October 30th, 2021 07:39

Eternal River.
spilleronsheet said:

Very beautiful
And so inspiring
Romantic it is, but it tells me and gives me hope to meet the desired one
It can be a person or accomplishment, giving me hopes…

October 30th, 2021 02:07

Eternal River.
orchidee said:

A fine write Gold.
There\'s a River in Psalm 46, and other Bible verses!

October 30th, 2021 02:02

Eternal River.
dusk arising said:

The spirit of your river combines with your spirit i feel here.... reinforcing your faith onward.

October 30th, 2021 01:31

I Paid For That!
Fay Slimm. said:

I guess those electric ciggies will be found harmful before very long - loved the tone of your poem today dear Andy and agree with your view - strange part of health service eh ?.

October 29th, 2021 15:42

I Paid For That!
L. B. Mek said:

its a catch-22, kinda situation
as I understand it, either the NHS
Pays, to help prevent
the inevitable problems that come from a lifetime of smoking,
or it Pays, trying to heal
the usually Fatal, sickness
that smoking burdens its wards with..
it\'s a very slim line, but
I think, in this specific case
seeing people take advantage of the NHS, is worth putting-up with
when considering
the big picture, the new law is trying to achieve...
(or maybe I\'m just another optimist fool,
but I can understand your frustrations completely Andy)
hope you have a smokeless weekend, my friend

October 29th, 2021 05:25

I Paid For That!
Paul Bell said:

Strangely enough, the vapours are even worse, they disappear into their own fog. Glad I gave that up.

October 29th, 2021 04:08

I Paid For That!
spilleronsheet said:

Congrats dear poet you left the wrong habit and it’s quite commendable to leave that
Smoking harms not only the self but others too
They say a family is destroyed upon a smoke
A cigarette is like a fire that eats the one who smokes
Well penned dear poet
It’s quite the topic that needs to be talked

October 29th, 2021 03:16

I Paid For That!
Neville said:


I forget how long ago it was I quit .. am so glad I did though .. nicotine is one of the most physically addictive substances on the planet .. to be honest, I feel sorry for anyone thus addicted & no doubt in time these so called vapes or whatever will prove harmful too .. I do so enjoy these observational poems Mr. Finch sir .. :)


October 29th, 2021 02:01

I Paid For That!
dusk arising said:

I was in traffic the first time i noticed a huge plume of smoke being exhaled from the car in front of me. Twas like a fog. They\'ll find it harmful sooner or later then we\'ll have to finance all the compensation claims.

Give \'em woodbines it\'s cheaper.

October 29th, 2021 01:54

I Paid For That!
orchidee said:

You seeing? Or you in a fog?!

October 29th, 2021 01:53

Good Times FIB
SureshG said:

And with these words you make us all a part of each other.

October 28th, 2021 20:44

Good Times FIB
dusk arising said:

And there\'s me telling of suffering. oh when will the sun shine, take away the dark clouds...... Nope, that\'s somebody else... i\'m with you on this, good times.

October 28th, 2021 06:59

Good Times FIB
spilleronsheet said:

Clever words wed with Fibonacci series
So extraordinary

October 28th, 2021 04:26

Good Times FIB
L. B. Mek said:

great fun, Andy
a wonderful showcasing of your poetic range

October 28th, 2021 04:05

Good Times FIB
Neville said:


It aint hard to tell you are telling the truth my golden friend and not a single FIB in sight nor either heard .. :)

October 28th, 2021 02:58

Good Times FIB
orchidee said:

Good write Gold.

October 28th, 2021 01:19

Coincidence
James Michael said:

A nice addition to your daily writes.

Coincidence can be a perception of reality. Remember what Outback would write about from time to time?

October 27th, 2021 22:15



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