Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
Together And Forever.
Neville said:
that weren\'t luck mate, that was love to be sure .. you lucky pair of love birds you .................... :)
December 21st, 2022 03:20
Neville said:
that weren\'t luck mate, that was love to be sure .. you lucky pair of love birds you .................... :)
December 21st, 2022 03:20
Spring Approaches Haiku.
Doggerel Dave said:
How can you only hope it’s on its way
When you know there can be no guarantee.
Climate change (heard of it?) is here today
And so your poem now should be a plea….
December 20th, 2022 04:21
Doggerel Dave said:
How can you only hope it’s on its way
When you know there can be no guarantee.
Climate change (heard of it?) is here today
And so your poem now should be a plea….
December 20th, 2022 04:21
Spring Approaches Haiku.
orchidee said:
But we have not started Winter yet, so my diary says. It starts tomorrow!
But it may help us keep our spirits up, in knowing Spring is on the way.
Feels Spring-like this week, with temps jumping about? We had, e.g. -10C, now it\'s +10C.
I took me gloves OFF. Don\'t usually do that until about April. lol.
December 20th, 2022 03:10
orchidee said:
But we have not started Winter yet, so my diary says. It starts tomorrow!
But it may help us keep our spirits up, in knowing Spring is on the way.
Feels Spring-like this week, with temps jumping about? We had, e.g. -10C, now it\'s +10C.
I took me gloves OFF. Don\'t usually do that until about April. lol.
December 20th, 2022 03:10
Why Can’t We Always be Like This.
Rocky Lagou said:
Ahhhh!!
Omg that final line was literally legendary.
\"Does chaos bring us together?\"
So true in so many ways.
Like what is romance without the drama and hardships?
I think \"chaos\" balances the serenity of life.
December 19th, 2022 12:57
Rocky Lagou said:
Ahhhh!!
Omg that final line was literally legendary.
\"Does chaos bring us together?\"
So true in so many ways.
Like what is romance without the drama and hardships?
I think \"chaos\" balances the serenity of life.
December 19th, 2022 12:57
Why Can’t We Always be Like This.
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes a sad state of affairs that our connections with others have to meet chaos before we unbend - - a well-penned reminder my friend.
December 19th, 2022 12:32
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes a sad state of affairs that our connections with others have to meet chaos before we unbend - - a well-penned reminder my friend.
December 19th, 2022 12:32
Why Can’t We Always be Like This.
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(word distilling that most unhealthy element of modernity
where unity, is only deemed necessary
in times of travesty..
time was, someone could make your day
by offering a cheery \'mornin\'
or \'this darn\'d weather we\'re havi\'n\'
while passing-by or waiting
at that terminal or station..
now, its eyes warding-off any approach
assuming, everyone is a danger
to what little, peace
we\'re afforded in our lives
what a sad state, but hey
at least our pixel rates are getting ever more
life like, that heightened HD awareness
from behind screens
our future generations, are sure to be safe...
right?
I mean what could hurt us, behind
our closed doors)
December 19th, 2022 07:22
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(word distilling that most unhealthy element of modernity
where unity, is only deemed necessary
in times of travesty..
time was, someone could make your day
by offering a cheery \'mornin\'
or \'this darn\'d weather we\'re havi\'n\'
while passing-by or waiting
at that terminal or station..
now, its eyes warding-off any approach
assuming, everyone is a danger
to what little, peace
we\'re afforded in our lives
what a sad state, but hey
at least our pixel rates are getting ever more
life like, that heightened HD awareness
from behind screens
our future generations, are sure to be safe...
right?
I mean what could hurt us, behind
our closed doors)
December 19th, 2022 07:22
Why Can’t We Always be Like This.
Doggerel Dave said:
Competition – an essential component
Which artificially constructs a base,
Upon which a powerful proponent –
Ideology keeps us in our place.
That’s why, Andy. It is beyond belief that people suck up to it other than in circumstances you relate.
December 19th, 2022 03:17
Doggerel Dave said:
Competition – an essential component
Which artificially constructs a base,
Upon which a powerful proponent –
Ideology keeps us in our place.
That’s why, Andy. It is beyond belief that people suck up to it other than in circumstances you relate.
December 19th, 2022 03:17
Why Can’t We Always be Like This.
orchidee said:
Oh, I met an anti-social guy (did I? lol).
I said \'Hello\'? He said \'Hello? What do you mean Hello? What do you want? I will punch you on the nose for saying Hello\'.
Best avoid those types.
I made all that up! lol.
December 19th, 2022 03:02
orchidee said:
Oh, I met an anti-social guy (did I? lol).
I said \'Hello\'? He said \'Hello? What do you mean Hello? What do you want? I will punch you on the nose for saying Hello\'.
Best avoid those types.
I made all that up! lol.
December 19th, 2022 03:02
Why Can’t We Always be Like This.
Saxon Crow said:
It shows our true nature\'s GF. Break the conditioning and voila! A perfectly nice human being appears.
December 19th, 2022 02:23
Saxon Crow said:
It shows our true nature\'s GF. Break the conditioning and voila! A perfectly nice human being appears.
December 19th, 2022 02:23
Music In Life.
Doggerel Dave said:
All you want is music! music! music!
No worries Andy, you’re in good company;
You have many fans who attend to your pick,
And one of those just happens to be me!
https://www.google.com/search?q=all+you+need+is+music+musdic+music&rlz=1C1UEAD_enAU1019AU1019&oq=&aqs=chrome.0.69i59i450.357524392j0j15&sourceid=chrome&ie=UTF-8#fpstate=ive&vld=cid:37916159,vid:eoQBmL8_myo
December 18th, 2022 03:25
Doggerel Dave said:
All you want is music! music! music!
No worries Andy, you’re in good company;
You have many fans who attend to your pick,
And one of those just happens to be me!
https://www.google.com/search?q=all+you+need+is+music+musdic+music&rlz=1C1UEAD_enAU1019AU1019&oq=&aqs=chrome.0.69i59i450.357524392j0j15&sourceid=chrome&ie=UTF-8#fpstate=ive&vld=cid:37916159,vid:eoQBmL8_myo
December 18th, 2022 03:25
Gratefulness.
Crowns4Christ said:
That\'s true Andy,we should always be grateful and give thanks even in the worst of times,because we honestly never know what is coming,or if it could be worse than we already experienced,no matter what it was,Merry Christmas my dear friend!!
December 17th, 2022 20:46
Crowns4Christ said:
That\'s true Andy,we should always be grateful and give thanks even in the worst of times,because we honestly never know what is coming,or if it could be worse than we already experienced,no matter what it was,Merry Christmas my dear friend!!
December 17th, 2022 20:46
Gratefulness.
Bella Shepard said:
Dear friend, your poem is especially meaningful today. It\'s been a rough few weeks, and I thank you for your words of wisdom, and comfort. Take care and God bless.
December 17th, 2022 15:55
Bella Shepard said:
Dear friend, your poem is especially meaningful today. It\'s been a rough few weeks, and I thank you for your words of wisdom, and comfort. Take care and God bless.
December 17th, 2022 15:55
Gratefulness.
Dr. Soma said:
Absolutely truth, dear Poet. We should always be grateful for our every second of breathing.
December 17th, 2022 07:49
Dr. Soma said:
Absolutely truth, dear Poet. We should always be grateful for our every second of breathing.
December 17th, 2022 07:49
Gratefulness.
Doggerel Dave said:
I do enjoy being here,
I’ll be sorry to depart
When life for me is so dear.
Go gently now – that’s an art.
December 17th, 2022 07:20
Doggerel Dave said:
I do enjoy being here,
I’ll be sorry to depart
When life for me is so dear.
Go gently now – that’s an art.
December 17th, 2022 07:20
Gratefulness.
sorenbarrett said:
It is one thing that defines people, those that are positive, or negative, self focused and other, and those that are grateful and those that are not. It is so much more pleasant to associate with those that are positive, other oriented and grateful.
December 17th, 2022 06:57
sorenbarrett said:
It is one thing that defines people, those that are positive, or negative, self focused and other, and those that are grateful and those that are not. It is so much more pleasant to associate with those that are positive, other oriented and grateful.
December 17th, 2022 06:57
Gratefulness.
Saxon Crow said:
And be even more grateful when you actually wake up in the morning!
December 17th, 2022 02:41
Saxon Crow said:
And be even more grateful when you actually wake up in the morning!
December 17th, 2022 02:41
Gratefulness.
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
Aww, why they not grateful that I still sing?! heehee.
December 17th, 2022 02:33
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
Aww, why they not grateful that I still sing?! heehee.
December 17th, 2022 02:33
Easy Lives.
L. B. Mek said:
its true, we take so many
of everyday amenities? for granted
but those before us
lived perfectly fine without them
for we\'re proof, that they did!
really like the flow and internal rhymes
such a wonderful story telling feel to it all
thank you! Andy
December 16th, 2022 06:28
L. B. Mek said:
its true, we take so many
of everyday amenities? for granted
but those before us
lived perfectly fine without them
for we\'re proof, that they did!
really like the flow and internal rhymes
such a wonderful story telling feel to it all
thank you! Andy
December 16th, 2022 06:28
Easy Lives.
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow - - what a thrill despite the cold hear to hear Apache again - takes me back to battling the winter in the Cotswolds years ago and that area can get really well below zero -- hoping you stay warm with that gas oven on and cooking your meals today Andy.
December 16th, 2022 03:39
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow - - what a thrill despite the cold hear to hear Apache again - takes me back to battling the winter in the Cotswolds years ago and that area can get really well below zero -- hoping you stay warm with that gas oven on and cooking your meals today Andy.
December 16th, 2022 03:39
Easy Lives.
Doggerel Dave said:
Wot no central heating?
That does take some beating:
Gas oven substituting -
Climate change not reducing….
Ok if I term some of these insertions of mine \"mock quatrains? Alternatively , you could consider them a pioneering attempt to extend the form........LOL!
Evokes terrible memories of my childhood until I moved to the Australian tropics aged 13!
December 16th, 2022 03:28
Doggerel Dave said:
Wot no central heating?
That does take some beating:
Gas oven substituting -
Climate change not reducing….
Ok if I term some of these insertions of mine \"mock quatrains? Alternatively , you could consider them a pioneering attempt to extend the form........LOL!
Evokes terrible memories of my childhood until I moved to the Australian tropics aged 13!
December 16th, 2022 03:28
Easy Lives.
orchidee said:
I don\'t know how long a business had been open - probably since the Stone Age - but I read a notice including: \'Staff shall take it on a rota to collect buckets of coal for the fire in the winter season. And ask permission to use the (outside) W.C.\'. Brrr!
Even - pencil sharpeners are available upon request to the Office Manager.
December 16th, 2022 03:09
orchidee said:
I don\'t know how long a business had been open - probably since the Stone Age - but I read a notice including: \'Staff shall take it on a rota to collect buckets of coal for the fire in the winter season. And ask permission to use the (outside) W.C.\'. Brrr!
Even - pencil sharpeners are available upon request to the Office Manager.
December 16th, 2022 03:09
Be That Light.
Doggerel Dave said:
Reciprocal relationships
Are what help to keep us steady
Those significant others’ lips
Can provide verbal or...oh my,,,,
December 15th, 2022 03:34
Doggerel Dave said:
Reciprocal relationships
Are what help to keep us steady
Those significant others’ lips
Can provide verbal or...oh my,,,,
December 15th, 2022 03:34
Be That Light.
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
Arrggh! Who turned out that light? I just fell down the stairs! lol.
December 15th, 2022 03:06
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
Arrggh! Who turned out that light? I just fell down the stairs! lol.
December 15th, 2022 03:06
New Life Of Wonder.
arqios said:
Our state of mind is as important as the state of our heart and other vital organs.
December 14th, 2022 20:51
arqios said:
Our state of mind is as important as the state of our heart and other vital organs.
December 14th, 2022 20:51
New Life Of Wonder.
Doggerel Dave said:
Choice of music sublime today: thanks Andy.
December 14th, 2022 19:07
Doggerel Dave said:
Choice of music sublime today: thanks Andy.
December 14th, 2022 19:07
New Life Of Wonder.
Jerry Reynolds said:
Well said, Andy.
Quoting Neville, \'glad you got the wake up call.\'
December 14th, 2022 09:38
Jerry Reynolds said:
Well said, Andy.
Quoting Neville, \'glad you got the wake up call.\'
December 14th, 2022 09:38
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