Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60



Life With Nature.
Laura🌻 said:

Andy,

As I read your beautifully penned poem,
‘being one with nature’ resonates throughout my mind creating a wonderful, peaceful feeling.

Thank you for sharing.

Laura🌻

August 9th, 2021 01:42

Life With Nature.
orchidee said:

Good write Gold.
And now the hymn: \'When morning gilds the sky\'.

August 9th, 2021 01:37

Incoming Waves.
Accidental Poet said:

I love the metaphor here Andy. And may those days yet to come bring you all the joy your heart can hold. 😉

August 8th, 2021 19:11

Incoming Waves.
Neville said:



waving to you for shore ... (excuse the pun) but not waving goodbye sir .. Not yet, any waves ..................................... :)

August 8th, 2021 06:07

Incoming Waves.
orchidee said:

Good write Gold.

August 8th, 2021 01:43

Winner Takes All.
Jon Nakapalau said:

Really much to meditate on - nicely penned.

August 7th, 2021 15:59

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Jon Nakapalau said:

Wonderful - inspired!

August 7th, 2021 15:58

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Dove said:

I guess instead of a salmon you got a (flounder) well dear one, nice set of couplets and lovely story telling! Hope the incident was make believe! A bloody tale lol


August 7th, 2021 08:43

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Accidental Poet said:

Well at least you have a well written poem to remember the day by and laugh at. Glad you survived And. 😉

August 7th, 2021 07:52

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Doggerel Dave said:

And I know how you feel you ‘old duffer’
I’ve fallen over more often than that.
I know it’s difficult but I suffer
As I go down very hard with a splat.

Balance shot and always has been, Andy - my favourite spectator sport is surf board riding,their baletic skills then more so – they are gods to me - ..none of this should detract fromthe point that you have produced a great rhymer full of self deprecating comedic action.


August 7th, 2021 06:42

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John Prophet said:

Hope this was fictitious.
If not hope you’re feeling better!

August 7th, 2021 06:12

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BusyB said:

Brilliant, hope the thumb is on the mend

August 7th, 2021 04:11

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Neville said:


... this aint just one o them fishermen\'s tales now is it ....

... I hope someone had the sense to open a tin ..........

... any old how, you get the thumbs up from me ...

.................................................. :)

August 7th, 2021 02:17

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orchidee said:

Did you go a**e over elbow? Or summat like that. Woof! Fido says \'Steady on there, old chap\' meaning me, saying such things! lol.

August 7th, 2021 01:45

Winner Takes All.
Accidental Poet said:

The champion we all knew you are Andy. 😉

August 6th, 2021 23:23

Winner Takes All.
Trenz Pruca said:

Good you you Andy. Keep on winning.

August 6th, 2021 16:40

Winner Takes All.
SureshG said:

It’s a fallacy to believe we compete for the sake of playing, but rather we play for the sake of competing - so hurray for your win!

August 6th, 2021 12:02

Winner Takes All.
Saxon Crow said:

Congratulations that man! Smug rights galore

August 6th, 2021 11:48

Winner Takes All.
L. B. Mek said:

lol
Congrats, Andy
I\'m guessing, you\'ll be having
a weekend, with a spring
in your step...

August 6th, 2021 05:21

Winner Takes All.
Doggerel Dave said:

Do you get your gold lettered name on the Wall of Fame in the club house, Andy? I really like the unabashed pride in your achievement you exhibit here.
The form your poem takes definitely has trophy like qualities - that took hard work didn\'t it?

August 6th, 2021 03:30

Winner Takes All.
orchidee said:

Good write Andy.
I was about eight hours singing, but I didn\'t win anything!

August 6th, 2021 02:16

Another Fine Day Haiku.
Accidental Poet said:

Don\'t know much about haiku or senryu, but I do know a great write, even if it\'s a short one. 👍

August 5th, 2021 19:41

Another Fine Day Haiku.
SureshG said:

YES!!!!!!

August 5th, 2021 13:48

Love Is There.
Freni Karaluthara said:

Nicely penned poem dear Goldfinch.
i liked the the last lines more:
One day I will be with her
But I feel that life is still there,
Still there for me.
I know will join her one day,
But there is no rush.

August 5th, 2021 11:01

Another Fine Day Haiku.
L. B. Mek said:

Amen!

August 5th, 2021 04:38

Another Fine Day Haiku.
orchidee said:

Good write Gold.

August 5th, 2021 01:18

Love Is There.
Accidental Poet said:

She knows you have to live your life here Andy. But as you do, she walks beside you until your time comes to join her. With love and pride, she smiles for you. 😉

August 4th, 2021 20:08

Love Is There.
Jon Nakapalau said:

Nice - inspired.

August 4th, 2021 16:40

Life Storms.
Coyote said:

As therapy for the blues, dancing in the rain cannot be underestimated. Nice write.

August 4th, 2021 12:07

Father And Son Togther.
Coyote said:

From one father to another, this is BEAUTIFUL! The bond between parent and child only grows stronger as time passes.
Nicely done sir.

August 4th, 2021 12:03



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