Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
Ten Sixty Six.
Doggerel Dave said:
Collapse of historical archives will be imminent
Once the truth of your account is verified and revealed:
For those who must care, history has no equivalent
Of witnessed events whose honesty cannot be appealed.
How can we be sure that all those history books will be recycled, rather than go to landfill, Andy?
October 14th, 2022 03:41
Doggerel Dave said:
Collapse of historical archives will be imminent
Once the truth of your account is verified and revealed:
For those who must care, history has no equivalent
Of witnessed events whose honesty cannot be appealed.
How can we be sure that all those history books will be recycled, rather than go to landfill, Andy?
October 14th, 2022 03:41
Ten Sixty Six.
arqios said:
At ten sixty-six I usually have a mid morn cuppa tea. Of course historical ticbits usually accompany the bikkies.
October 14th, 2022 03:30
arqios said:
At ten sixty-six I usually have a mid morn cuppa tea. Of course historical ticbits usually accompany the bikkies.
October 14th, 2022 03:30
Ten Sixty Six.
orchidee said:
Good write Gold. lol. Boo hoo, they all blame me!
October 14th, 2022 01:55
orchidee said:
Good write Gold. lol. Boo hoo, they all blame me!
October 14th, 2022 01:55
Ironing Goldiku.
Doggerel Dave said:
I cannot understand this one at all:
Please do clarify this and give a call…
Your clothing doesn’t wick after you smooth;
Cloth should be full - this no more than the truth.
Three weeks after I left home, a very long time ago, I gave up ironing. Don\'t waste your life, Andy.... LOL.....
October 13th, 2022 06:08
Doggerel Dave said:
I cannot understand this one at all:
Please do clarify this and give a call…
Your clothing doesn’t wick after you smooth;
Cloth should be full - this no more than the truth.
Three weeks after I left home, a very long time ago, I gave up ironing. Don\'t waste your life, Andy.... LOL.....
October 13th, 2022 06:08
Ironing Goldiku.
arqios said:
What filled the basket just before this great feat!?
Rock n Roll!
October 13th, 2022 01:26
arqios said:
What filled the basket just before this great feat!?
Rock n Roll!
October 13th, 2022 01:26
Forever Memories.
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Memeories actually outlive us! - Very nice one hey... Kudos
October 12th, 2022 08:05
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Memeories actually outlive us! - Very nice one hey... Kudos
October 12th, 2022 08:05
Brilliance Or Kindness.
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes kind people still do exist -
And found everywhere in our midst.
I fall over and am injured:
Strangers there, assistance rendered.
I have very bad balance.
October 12th, 2022 07:08
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes kind people still do exist -
And found everywhere in our midst.
I fall over and am injured:
Strangers there, assistance rendered.
I have very bad balance.
October 12th, 2022 07:08
Brilliance Or Kindness.
orchidee said:
A fine write Gold.
A heart that listens to all - except me singing! heehee.
October 12th, 2022 02:11
orchidee said:
A fine write Gold.
A heart that listens to all - except me singing! heehee.
October 12th, 2022 02:11
Brilliance Or Kindness.
arqios said:
A heart that listens, now there is a heart that is kind and sought after! Timely reminder Andy!
October 12th, 2022 01:28
arqios said:
A heart that listens, now there is a heart that is kind and sought after! Timely reminder Andy!
October 12th, 2022 01:28
Forever Memories.
Fay Slimm. said:
Memories both good and troublesome I am sure last for as long as we do my friend.
October 11th, 2022 12:40
Fay Slimm. said:
Memories both good and troublesome I am sure last for as long as we do my friend.
October 11th, 2022 12:40
Forever Memories.
Neville said:
One certainly likes to think so Andy .. or at least for a long while :)
October 11th, 2022 10:06
Neville said:
One certainly likes to think so Andy .. or at least for a long while :)
October 11th, 2022 10:06
Forever Memories.
Doggerel Dave said:
Sometimes I do,
But not often.
Mostly I rue –
This don’t soften…..
Occasionally something comes in and causes toe curling embarrassment ...so thanks for reminding me, Andy.
October 11th, 2022 03:32
Doggerel Dave said:
Sometimes I do,
But not often.
Mostly I rue –
This don’t soften…..
Occasionally something comes in and causes toe curling embarrassment ...so thanks for reminding me, Andy.
October 11th, 2022 03:32
Bad To Better.
Neville said:
Ah\' yes indeed the trilogy ..
I would argue maybe not choices, as such, but I quite understand where you are coming from and the message contained herein ...
Neville :)
October 11th, 2022 01:16
Neville said:
Ah\' yes indeed the trilogy ..
I would argue maybe not choices, as such, but I quite understand where you are coming from and the message contained herein ...
Neville :)
October 11th, 2022 01:16
Bad To Better.
Thekkinkkattil said:
Very true Andy and those who be come stronger are the real winners
October 10th, 2022 09:12
Thekkinkkattil said:
Very true Andy and those who be come stronger are the real winners
October 10th, 2022 09:12
Bad To Better.
Doggerel Dave said:
A self-help book by yourself is needed:
Then ”See page seven four nine of my book”.
But poems here would be superseded
And MPS collapsed – not a good look.
Stay on Andy – don’t go nowhere……
October 10th, 2022 04:12
Doggerel Dave said:
A self-help book by yourself is needed:
Then ”See page seven four nine of my book”.
But poems here would be superseded
And MPS collapsed – not a good look.
Stay on Andy – don’t go nowhere……
October 10th, 2022 04:12
Bad To Better.
arqios said:
Help us to choose to be strengthened rather than to be defined (caged) or be destroyed by it. Ayaiyai!
October 10th, 2022 02:00
arqios said:
Help us to choose to be strengthened rather than to be defined (caged) or be destroyed by it. Ayaiyai!
October 10th, 2022 02:00
Turn That Page.
Doggerel Dave said:
I find a conundrum presented here:
How can I avoid a turn of the page?
To turn that page and then cark it, I fear,
is something with which I must sometime engage ……………………………………………….But not that day if you don’t mind too much, Andy….😀
October 9th, 2022 23:14
Doggerel Dave said:
I find a conundrum presented here:
How can I avoid a turn of the page?
To turn that page and then cark it, I fear,
is something with which I must sometime engage ……………………………………………….But not that day if you don’t mind too much, Andy….😀
October 9th, 2022 23:14
Turn That Page.
arqios said:
Such an adventure it is Andy! And via lines and verse we are able to traverse together and individually. Thanks for sharing
October 9th, 2022 08:55
arqios said:
Such an adventure it is Andy! And via lines and verse we are able to traverse together and individually. Thanks for sharing
October 9th, 2022 08:55
Turn That Page.
Neville said:
just as well we don\'t always know what lies around the corner though ..
October 9th, 2022 02:28
Neville said:
just as well we don\'t always know what lies around the corner though ..
October 9th, 2022 02:28
Turn That Page.
orchidee said:
Us two must be at about Chapter 8,456,394 by now! lol.
October 9th, 2022 01:53
orchidee said:
Us two must be at about Chapter 8,456,394 by now! lol.
October 9th, 2022 01:53
Good Friends.
Neville said:
Ah\' you can beat an egg, but you just can\'t beat a good friend can ya ............. :)
October 8th, 2022 02:28
Neville said:
Ah\' you can beat an egg, but you just can\'t beat a good friend can ya ............. :)
October 8th, 2022 02:28
Good Friends.
orchidee said:
A good friendship write Gold.
I had millions of friends, being millions of years old - as you and I are.
Oh woe, I lost them all. I only said \'And now a song\' and saw a cloud of dust as they scarpered! lol.
October 8th, 2022 02:24
orchidee said:
A good friendship write Gold.
I had millions of friends, being millions of years old - as you and I are.
Oh woe, I lost them all. I only said \'And now a song\' and saw a cloud of dust as they scarpered! lol.
October 8th, 2022 02:24
Good Friends.
Doggerel Dave said:
A friendship such as yours is without peer:
History, understanding and respect -
The company left you with so much cheer,
A poem here as homage was perfect.
Good for you, Andy.
October 8th, 2022 02:12
Doggerel Dave said:
A friendship such as yours is without peer:
History, understanding and respect -
The company left you with so much cheer,
A poem here as homage was perfect.
Good for you, Andy.
October 8th, 2022 02:12
Reality From My Dream.
bellflower said:
O I was reading it with an open mouth. I always had fascination for 1920s cars.....their beautiful models....I was thinking of them only when I happened to see it at one of the poetry contests .....That was a fun to pen it and treasure it in my life....that was not the end i was travelling in my city when i happened to see it with my own eyes.....that was really a blessing....one day i took a shot of it though little far....another time i\'ll go little closer to it.....Your poem refreshed all those memories and experiences of mine....thank you.
October 8th, 2022 00:26
bellflower said:
O I was reading it with an open mouth. I always had fascination for 1920s cars.....their beautiful models....I was thinking of them only when I happened to see it at one of the poetry contests .....That was a fun to pen it and treasure it in my life....that was not the end i was travelling in my city when i happened to see it with my own eyes.....that was really a blessing....one day i took a shot of it though little far....another time i\'ll go little closer to it.....Your poem refreshed all those memories and experiences of mine....thank you.
October 8th, 2022 00:26
Reality From My Dream.
Doggerel Dave said:
There’s always hope old lad - why not?
Your mantle piece is full of dreams;
And now there is no other spot -
Just rob a bank - go to extremes.
My full apologies, Andy. My solution is totally impractical. In this digital age, banks no longer carry large amounts of cash. I don’t want to be accused of leading you astray..
Love the surprise, the humour – great write.
October 7th, 2022 05:24
Doggerel Dave said:
There’s always hope old lad - why not?
Your mantle piece is full of dreams;
And now there is no other spot -
Just rob a bank - go to extremes.
My full apologies, Andy. My solution is totally impractical. In this digital age, banks no longer carry large amounts of cash. I don’t want to be accused of leading you astray..
Love the surprise, the humour – great write.
October 7th, 2022 05:24
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