Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60



Golden Girl.
Neville said:


just a little bit special this GF60 .. just like the woman who evidently inspired it ................................ Neville

May 16th, 2021 11:41

Golden Girl.
Accidental Poet said:

Very provocative Andy. ; )

May 16th, 2021 10:49

Golden Girl.
Andy Hunter said:

A haunting poem. A ghostly vision. Great writing Andy.

May 16th, 2021 05:58

Golden Girl.
Fay Slimm. said:

A description not to be forgotten this lady - your words live on in tribute to the lovely song and that beautiful woman dear Andy.

May 16th, 2021 04:48

Golden Girl.
orchidee said:

A fine write Gold.

May 16th, 2021 02:07

Golden Girl.
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Beautiful words , goldfinch πŸ™‚ really liked reading this

May 16th, 2021 01:25

Golden Girl.
dusk arising said:

A mist of mystery surrounds your fascinating piece today Goldfinch. Such poise and grace present when a beautiful woman single mindedly makes her way.

May 16th, 2021 01:18

She Found Herself.
myself and me said:

She is definitely a lucky one and a strong one too. How many got lost and never came back. Nice writing.

May 15th, 2021 22:15

She Found Herself.
Accidental Poet said:

A great write and read from an even greater man. ; )

May 15th, 2021 07:20

She Found Herself.
dusk arising said:

It\'s sad how people can be dominated by a relationship and lose what they are. I have seen it and been it in the past. It happens all too readily. At my stage in life I have decided not to risk it again and to carry on to my final years being the unfettered \'me\'.

There\'s a good message in your words today and i hope very few readers find themselves in a restrictive relationship such as you describe.

May 15th, 2021 05:30

She Found Herself.
orchidee said:

Good write Gold.
meanwhile - did I find \'Me\', \'Myself\', or \'I\'? (Do shut up Orchi. lol).

May 15th, 2021 01:58

She Found Herself.
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Listening is so important ! πŸ™‚great that she got her strength and power back

May 15th, 2021 01:39

Unjustified Violence.
Andy Hunter said:

Had me puzzled until I got to the end. Very good πŸ™‚

May 14th, 2021 17:16

Unjustified Violence.
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good story Andy. Love the suggestions the images make.

May 14th, 2021 14:06

Unjustified Violence.
dusk arising said:

If you had to choose, which colour croquet ball would you be?

May 14th, 2021 10:52

Unjustified Violence.
L. B. Mek said:

a fun read to help inject that Friday feeling Andy,
thanks!
although, I suggest
there\'s much worse Manmade things to be, than a ball
in a sport,
like a fish hook, maybe or a bullet
accessories both, to that other type
of hunting sport
where those who get knocked down
never get to see the Sun, again...
(please note: commentary is on
hunting for Pleasure not need)

May 14th, 2021 06:16

Unjustified Violence.
Accidental Poet said:

Sounded to me like the life of Orchi. ; ) Great write Andy.

May 14th, 2021 05:05

Unjustified Violence.
orchidee said:

Oh lol. good write Gold.

May 14th, 2021 01:32

Love Day
myself and me said:

A love beyond life long. So touching and wonderful.

May 13th, 2021 21:12

Love Day
dusk arising said:

A song and a poem, both about perfection.

May 13th, 2021 02:26

Love Day
Neville said:


... Hey you beautiful little golden bird, I reckon you just poemed my most very favourwritest GF60 posts of all time ...
and it aint hard to see where you are coming from neither ...
... such cool memories of the one you love and are no doubt still loved by ...
... great music n sounds and living life at four miles an hour ...
... what more could an old fella ask for ...
... cor blimey, you even got sheep thrown in ...
a brilliantly composed, most meaningful and heart-felt bit o poetry ...

All Good Things Andy,

Neville


May 13th, 2021 01:58

Love Day
orchidee said:

A poignant write Gold.

May 13th, 2021 01:30

Work Enjoyment.
Accidental Poet said:

In 51 years of working, I\'ve learned many things. At 13 I really had no idea what I wanted to do, and not a lot of influence in how to work. But over time I did begin to learn that I was starting to know what it meant to want to make a difference. And from various people I\'ve learned that I need to hold myself accountable for what I do. And you\'re right Andy, loving what you do is a happy life. Beautiful write. ; )

May 12th, 2021 18:53

Work Enjoyment.
SureshG said:

If we love what we do, then we do what we love
and then, even the hardship of our work, melts away.

May 12th, 2021 14:20

Work Enjoyment.
dusk arising said:

I\'ve been working 54 years (the last 40 yrs working self employed) and I am just giving up on it.... all NI stamps fully paid since day one.
I\'m looking forward to enjoying retirement.

May 12th, 2021 07:44

Work Enjoyment.
Andy Hunter said:

Very true Andy some jobs were more a vocation which were a pleasure, whilst others were simply dire. Great piece of writing πŸ‘

May 12th, 2021 07:21

Work Enjoyment.
John Prophet said:

Creating with our minds and hands,
can be a fulfilling thing.

May 12th, 2021 07:04

Work Enjoyment.
Doggerel Dave said:

Give me retirement (in comfortable circumstances) any day - and preferably for as long as possible.
Good attempt to get \'em productive again though, Andy.

May 12th, 2021 05:12

Work Enjoyment.
Neville said:


my word tis good to hear .. and read of course .. well done you .. and by the way, those last two lines are quite brilliant and true ....... N

May 12th, 2021 03:11

Work Enjoyment.
orchidee said:

Good write Gold.

May 12th, 2021 01:57



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