Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60



Filthy Acrostic.
Laura🌻 said:

Andy,

The usage of foul/filthy language is not my ‘cup of tea’!

Foul
Indelicate
Language
That should
Hold
You accountable

Thank you for sharing.

Laura🌻


February 18th, 2022 01:12

Filthy Acrostic.
dusk arising said:

Best to
Observe a
Little
Light
Oneupmanship
Craftily avoiding
Krass language with
Subtlety

February 17th, 2022 05:13

Filthy Acrostic.
L. B. Mek said:

lol
the futility of enlightenment...
see, now even the very utility of swear words
is being wiped out..
swearing, was an actual tool
of dealing with life
when thing\'s get f\'ckd up
and your exasperation needed
an outlet, you could swear
and express yourself with that much more, feeling or passion
but now
it\'s all:
\'a fck\'n good morning ain\'t it?\'...?
\'I\'m so sh\'t fc\'d tired!\'...?
\'oh how I luv you, b\'ich\'...?
and on
to the point where
nowadays the more exasperated we become
speaking with eloquent decorum
is our new outlet, for expending
our frustrations and heated feelings...
\'Why Sir
how aggravating it is
to feel your fist, grace
my cheeks\'
lol

February 17th, 2022 05:01

Filthy Acrostic.
Michael Edwards said:

Without swearing I,m afraid most of the so-called modern comedians would be out of a job. Reminds me of one of my Dad\'s sayings on hearing a foul mouthed rant: if every swear word was an inch each sentence would be a yard long.

February 17th, 2022 03:09

Filthy Acrostic.
orchidee said:

My verbal diarrhoea is my singing - so they say! Aww, they are horrible to me, whoever \'they\' are. lol.

February 17th, 2022 03:05

Filthy Acrostic.
spilleronsheet said:

The new normal
Speak whatever bullshit you want, without caring a least about others
But this isn’t normal
Being unkind isn’t normal
Being harsh and rude isn’t pride
Cursing others isn’t pride
So tragic

February 17th, 2022 02:33

Test Of Faith.
truman.anderson said:

Haha, this one threw me for a loop. Nice job

February 16th, 2022 21:48

Each Day Is Special.
spilleronsheet said:

My boost of positivity
The exact booster dose of optimism that I am lacking
The cure for sad soul
Thanks so much for such endearing lines dear Andy

February 16th, 2022 13:45

Each Day Is Special.
Crowns4Christ said:

Very positive uplifting, every day is truly a gift from God, especially if you spend it with the one you love.god bless you Andy

February 16th, 2022 11:20

Each Day Is Special.
Rocky Lagou said:

I love the uplifting tone of this poem. Everyday IS a blessing which we should be more grateful for. Thanks for the reminder! 💕👏

February 16th, 2022 09:52

Each Day Is Special.
Rozina said:

I agree with this. So uplifting. Always looking forward. Thank you

February 16th, 2022 08:58

Each Day Is Special.
dusk arising said:

A lovely sentiment indeed but.... you lucky people.... who among us can compare with you when it comes to the excitement and pure joy a new love can bring to each day. Enjoy life old son... you deserve to and she must be a saintly lady to have captured your heart. Good on you both.

February 16th, 2022 08:26

Test Of Faith.
Rozina said:

Had a good laugh with this one. Nice one Andy.

February 16th, 2022 03:40

Each Day Is Special.
orchidee said:

Good write Gold.

February 16th, 2022 03:11

Test Of Faith.
spilleronsheet said:

A mixed emotions spilled inside
One that Kept me smiling
As well as advising
Leap with caution
Not blinded by emotions
Good one dear Andy

February 15th, 2022 15:17

Test Of Faith.
Crowns4Christ said:

I love this Andy, it\'s funny.like Dion said,keep the faith,I second that.
Congratulations on finding love again,I\'m really happy for you

February 15th, 2022 13:49

Test Of Faith.
Rocky Lagou said:

Oh this was priceless! I love this one so much. Humorous and enticing! Great poem! 👏💕

February 15th, 2022 12:11

Test Of Faith.
ForeverJesus7 said:

Keep the faith my friend. Continue to fight the good fight of faith.

February 15th, 2022 11:24

Test Of Faith.
Garth Rakumakoe said:

LOL! - I had such a good laugh at this one hey! - Nice one sir. Very nice...

February 15th, 2022 08:20

Test Of Faith.
dusk arising said:

Is there a hidden message here Andy..... those carefully placed stepping stones of goodwill which led one to here?

February 15th, 2022 05:42

Test Of Faith.
Paul Bell said:

Oops, did you not mention the stones to the poor chap. Love it, and that\'s before the water has been changed to a pint of John Smiths. Kudos to you.

February 15th, 2022 05:23

Test Of Faith.
L. B. Mek said:

lmao

February 15th, 2022 05:21

Test Of Faith.
orchidee said:

Doh! Good write Gold. lol.
Now some may explain Jesus\' walking on the water as stepping stones. But I\'ve not checked out the distance that was involved.

February 15th, 2022 02:51

Love To Eternity.
Crowns4Christ said:

Sounds like you\'ve found a special someone Andy,may your love blossom and may God bless you both.
Love Melissa Crown

February 14th, 2022 15:28

Love To Eternity.
Rocky Lagou said:

Oh, love! Beautifully written! I laud you ! 💕👏

February 14th, 2022 14:28

Love To Eternity.
spilleronsheet said:

A lovely poetry written with sincerity
Have a wonderful journey on a new chapter dear Andy…..

February 14th, 2022 12:55

Love To Eternity.
Fay Slimm. said:

Simply wonderful this love you have with your chosen lady is immortal and forever - -thank you for sharing it dear Andy

February 14th, 2022 09:37

Love To Eternity.
L. B. Mek said:

we know there\'s at least one lady
smiling from ear to ear
this valentine\'s day, hey Andy?
lol
(btw have you seen
\'The tomorrow man\'
with Joh Lithgow and Blythe Danner,
a fun watch and its theme
one you\'ll relate with, I think)
hope you have a great day!

February 14th, 2022 06:08

Love To Eternity.
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:


Wow a lovely timely sentimental offering to your spouse, she\'s with you right, the mention of heaven on earth right? Kudos for this beautiful tribute.

Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
Happy valentines day, poets.

February 14th, 2022 05:23

Love To Eternity.
orchidee said:

A fine write Gold.


February 14th, 2022 04:02



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