Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
Life Book.
Doggerel Dave said:
With that kind of optimism you could go on forever.....You will be into volumes next.
l was engaged. Thanks
April 14th, 2021 08:04
Doggerel Dave said:
With that kind of optimism you could go on forever.....You will be into volumes next.
l was engaged. Thanks
April 14th, 2021 08:04
Life Book.
Accidental Poet said:
And your final chapter will be when you join your wife happily ever after.
Great write Andy. : )
April 14th, 2021 05:36
Accidental Poet said:
And your final chapter will be when you join your wife happily ever after.
Great write Andy. : )
April 14th, 2021 05:36
Life Book.
dusk arising said:
May you never run out of paper to keep making new pages.
April 14th, 2021 02:03
dusk arising said:
May you never run out of paper to keep making new pages.
April 14th, 2021 02:03
Doggerel Dave Limerick.
SureshG said:
For a dime, I’ll bring my cymbals and wind chimes.
April 13th, 2021 22:12
SureshG said:
For a dime, I’ll bring my cymbals and wind chimes.
April 13th, 2021 22:12
Doggerel Dave Limerick.
Jerry Reynolds said:
Can\'t fight
A good write
Mate Andy
Gets randy
April 13th, 2021 19:35
Jerry Reynolds said:
Can\'t fight
A good write
Mate Andy
Gets randy
April 13th, 2021 19:35
Doggerel Dave Limerick.
dusk arising said:
Devoting a poem to rhyme
brings forth enchantments devine
though oft overlooked
and oft over-cooked
their inclusion is surely sublime.
April 13th, 2021 09:45
dusk arising said:
Devoting a poem to rhyme
brings forth enchantments devine
though oft overlooked
and oft over-cooked
their inclusion is surely sublime.
April 13th, 2021 09:45
Doggerel Dave Limerick.
Doggerel Dave said:
Except to owe you a mere one dime
Is I feel, Andy something of a crime:
You are too good for that
When off your own bat
You provide music and occasional rhyme.
Now come on Andy - You are wasting time here when you could be finding another rhyme….. or more music.
Thanks.
April 13th, 2021 07:25
Doggerel Dave said:
Except to owe you a mere one dime
Is I feel, Andy something of a crime:
You are too good for that
When off your own bat
You provide music and occasional rhyme.
Now come on Andy - You are wasting time here when you could be finding another rhyme….. or more music.
Thanks.
April 13th, 2021 07:25
Truthful Lives.
Accidental Poet said:
I think some people lie when they don\'t know what else to say. In the end, it is what it is. AP
April 13th, 2021 07:14
Accidental Poet said:
I think some people lie when they don\'t know what else to say. In the end, it is what it is. AP
April 13th, 2021 07:14
Doggerel Dave Limerick.
L. B. Mek said:
fun and wholesome, nice to be reminded those two words can still co-exist, thanks Andy..
though if \'the toilet seat\' was Doggerel Dave\'s - \'owed dime\', contribution
he may have won this round, lol
April 13th, 2021 05:23
L. B. Mek said:
fun and wholesome, nice to be reminded those two words can still co-exist, thanks Andy..
though if \'the toilet seat\' was Doggerel Dave\'s - \'owed dime\', contribution
he may have won this round, lol
April 13th, 2021 05:23
Truthful Lives.
L. B. Mek said:
such a thought provoking and engaging write Andy, a great stimulus topic for open dialogue!
being true to ourselves and the telling of lies, have differing connotations and impacts..
I feel lying is inevitable to some degree,
some completely delude themselves and proudly boast they never do, while rest of us fidget and mention words like \'white\' and \'bending\' to drape our discomfort with admitting to telling a few lies, now and then..
personally, I think the most important thing is that we don\'t lie to ourselves, its impossible to anticipate all the madness waiting for us in the world, so we\'ve all learnt from childhood to word our \'truths\' in a certain way or for some, just got good at telling lies - outright,
but if we can limit and control the lies we tell ourselves, then we can face our own truth\'s and insure we \'police\' ourselves, then it matters less how everyone else judges our words, because we know we\'re doing the best we can and nothing more can be asked of us..
(but what do I know? I may be deluding myself with these very words I type, lol)
April 13th, 2021 03:17
L. B. Mek said:
such a thought provoking and engaging write Andy, a great stimulus topic for open dialogue!
being true to ourselves and the telling of lies, have differing connotations and impacts..
I feel lying is inevitable to some degree,
some completely delude themselves and proudly boast they never do, while rest of us fidget and mention words like \'white\' and \'bending\' to drape our discomfort with admitting to telling a few lies, now and then..
personally, I think the most important thing is that we don\'t lie to ourselves, its impossible to anticipate all the madness waiting for us in the world, so we\'ve all learnt from childhood to word our \'truths\' in a certain way or for some, just got good at telling lies - outright,
but if we can limit and control the lies we tell ourselves, then we can face our own truth\'s and insure we \'police\' ourselves, then it matters less how everyone else judges our words, because we know we\'re doing the best we can and nothing more can be asked of us..
(but what do I know? I may be deluding myself with these very words I type, lol)
April 13th, 2021 03:17
Light In Our Lives.
L. B. Mek said:
what a timely picture, wonderful of you to share and even better, ink a few hope filled lines for us to appreciate it, that much more..
and yes, music has me tap-tapping away on a cloudy monday morning
good read, thanks for sharing Andy
April 12th, 2021 04:10
L. B. Mek said:
what a timely picture, wonderful of you to share and even better, ink a few hope filled lines for us to appreciate it, that much more..
and yes, music has me tap-tapping away on a cloudy monday morning
good read, thanks for sharing Andy
April 12th, 2021 04:10
Truthful Lives.
dusk arising said:
Speaking the truth in response to a direct question has landed me with all sorts of problems in the past. Is this where white lies comfortably creep into our lives of daily compromise.
April 12th, 2021 04:00
dusk arising said:
Speaking the truth in response to a direct question has landed me with all sorts of problems in the past. Is this where white lies comfortably creep into our lives of daily compromise.
April 12th, 2021 04:00
Truthful Lives.
Doggerel Dave said:
I don\'t think I lie - and I do know it has got me into much trouble over the years...Sometimes I wonder what is wrong with me....
Good little poem, Andy.
If it weren\'t for one intervening entry, you would be ready for a rhymer hat trick tomorrow....
April 12th, 2021 02:46
Doggerel Dave said:
I don\'t think I lie - and I do know it has got me into much trouble over the years...Sometimes I wonder what is wrong with me....
Good little poem, Andy.
If it weren\'t for one intervening entry, you would be ready for a rhymer hat trick tomorrow....
April 12th, 2021 02:46
Truthful Lives.
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
Would we have courage to always be truthful? Would everyone accept what we say, if we were always truthful? Would WE always accept what others say to us?
There is sneakiness, \'white lies\', etc where we \'get through life\' at times, I suppose. Then we may have to maintain the lie, if we start one.
April 12th, 2021 01:44
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
Would we have courage to always be truthful? Would everyone accept what we say, if we were always truthful? Would WE always accept what others say to us?
There is sneakiness, \'white lies\', etc where we \'get through life\' at times, I suppose. Then we may have to maintain the lie, if we start one.
April 12th, 2021 01:44
Truthful Lives.
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I wander how many people think about what they say . Sometimes it seems easier for some people to lie ...
Sometimes the truth can be painful , but then again so can lies
April 12th, 2021 01:21
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I wander how many people think about what they say . Sometimes it seems easier for some people to lie ...
Sometimes the truth can be painful , but then again so can lies
April 12th, 2021 01:21
Light In Our Lives.
MendedFences27 said:
Thoroughly enjoyable, both poem and music. Yes I was toe tapping. Finding the light is everyone\'s end game. Some do and some never will. In nature, as brutal as it can be, somehow it seems to shine that light everywhere all the time.A very nice poem. - Phil A.
April 11th, 2021 16:37
MendedFences27 said:
Thoroughly enjoyable, both poem and music. Yes I was toe tapping. Finding the light is everyone\'s end game. Some do and some never will. In nature, as brutal as it can be, somehow it seems to shine that light everywhere all the time.A very nice poem. - Phil A.
April 11th, 2021 16:37
Light In Our Lives.
Accidental Poet said:
That light never dims. I half expected to see Orchi\'s footprints all over this page. Well done Andy.
April 11th, 2021 08:52
Accidental Poet said:
That light never dims. I half expected to see Orchi\'s footprints all over this page. Well done Andy.
April 11th, 2021 08:52
Light In Our Lives.
dusk arising said:
Yes, there is always light for those who will see it, even in the darkest of times. A light which lifts our spirit.
April 11th, 2021 03:13
dusk arising said:
Yes, there is always light for those who will see it, even in the darkest of times. A light which lifts our spirit.
April 11th, 2021 03:13
Light In Our Lives.
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely words 🙂 always light outside in nature ...
April 11th, 2021 01:28
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely words 🙂 always light outside in nature ...
April 11th, 2021 01:28
Island Heaven.
Accidental Poet said:
Very impressive Andy. And yes, you will be with her again.
April 10th, 2021 19:15
Accidental Poet said:
Very impressive Andy. And yes, you will be with her again.
April 10th, 2021 19:15
Island Heaven.
dusk arising said:
Rare to see you producing rhyme like this. It\'s as if you were doodling whilst in a dream of your destiny.
April 10th, 2021 11:06
dusk arising said:
Rare to see you producing rhyme like this. It\'s as if you were doodling whilst in a dream of your destiny.
April 10th, 2021 11:06
Island Heaven.
Doggerel Dave said:
You know what I\'m going to put here , even before...
Yep - thanks for the rhythm and rhyme.
And after reading I can have no doubt you will be whole on your star, never slowing, you both.
The magic of poetry, Andy
April 10th, 2021 01:43
Doggerel Dave said:
You know what I\'m going to put here , even before...
Yep - thanks for the rhythm and rhyme.
And after reading I can have no doubt you will be whole on your star, never slowing, you both.
The magic of poetry, Andy
April 10th, 2021 01:43
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