Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
Morning Present.
FredPeyer said:
I just love your uplifting messages. Well done Andy!
March 20th, 2021 21:14
FredPeyer said:
I just love your uplifting messages. Well done Andy!
March 20th, 2021 21:14
Morning Present.
Brimelow said:
Lovely Goldfinch.
What is the first thing you do every day? Is it the opening of that present, and the release of that joy, or is it more mundane and routine?
Maybe it isn\'t that formulaic (honestly my mind struggles to see how it could be), but I ask because I am curious, and want to know more about that first hour :)
March 20th, 2021 17:31
Brimelow said:
Lovely Goldfinch.
What is the first thing you do every day? Is it the opening of that present, and the release of that joy, or is it more mundane and routine?
Maybe it isn\'t that formulaic (honestly my mind struggles to see how it could be), but I ask because I am curious, and want to know more about that first hour :)
March 20th, 2021 17:31
Morning Present.
Olivia. said:
Every day is a blessing that’s for sure! Lovely poem x
March 20th, 2021 10:25
Olivia. said:
Every day is a blessing that’s for sure! Lovely poem x
March 20th, 2021 10:25
Morning Present.
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Glad you are feeling joyful . We all wish to feel that way ... and when we don’t , days can feel difficult
March 20th, 2021 02:51
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Glad you are feeling joyful . We all wish to feel that way ... and when we don’t , days can feel difficult
March 20th, 2021 02:51
My Life With Nature.
Fay Slimm. said:
So good to read of your walks with nature and feeling at one with the wonderful array of plants birds and animals - thank you for sharing the awe with us Andy - - humanity was intended to find joy in these glorious things.
March 19th, 2021 16:52
Fay Slimm. said:
So good to read of your walks with nature and feeling at one with the wonderful array of plants birds and animals - thank you for sharing the awe with us Andy - - humanity was intended to find joy in these glorious things.
March 19th, 2021 16:52
My Life With Nature.
L. B. Mek said:
as I read, a part of me remembered Monet\'s Japanese footbridge, though I have no idea how my uncultured self came up with that comparison, still
thanks for the wonderful journey within words Andy
March 19th, 2021 06:35
L. B. Mek said:
as I read, a part of me remembered Monet\'s Japanese footbridge, though I have no idea how my uncultured self came up with that comparison, still
thanks for the wonderful journey within words Andy
March 19th, 2021 06:35
My Life With Nature.
orchidee said:
A lovely write Gold.
I wanted such a day, though: Into the wood I walked, and it rained! \' Doh! Well, the trees were some shelter.
March 19th, 2021 02:55
orchidee said:
A lovely write Gold.
I wanted such a day, though: Into the wood I walked, and it rained! \' Doh! Well, the trees were some shelter.
March 19th, 2021 02:55
One Day More.
Brimelow said:
Goldfinch this is bittersweet and filled me with emotion - thank you for sharing the beauty of your words. They are eternity.
March 18th, 2021 15:40
Brimelow said:
Goldfinch this is bittersweet and filled me with emotion - thank you for sharing the beauty of your words. They are eternity.
March 18th, 2021 15:40
One Day More.
L. B. Mek said:
\'One day more without her,\'..
but also, dear friend
one day more of her memory
filling-up all the empty holes
in life\'s horizons
so this one day more, however painful
is yet another gift she\'s bestowed upon your life
that some other\'s will never get to experience..
March 18th, 2021 06:03
L. B. Mek said:
\'One day more without her,\'..
but also, dear friend
one day more of her memory
filling-up all the empty holes
in life\'s horizons
so this one day more, however painful
is yet another gift she\'s bestowed upon your life
that some other\'s will never get to experience..
March 18th, 2021 06:03
A Single Flower.
L. B. Mek said:
much deeper in meaning than a first readthrough would reveal..
a layered write Andy, indeed
however miniscule - in scale, we may represent against the endless magnitude of existence: we all, make a meaningful impact in our own subtle way
(admittedly not always positive, but impactful all the same)
March 18th, 2021 04:31
L. B. Mek said:
much deeper in meaning than a first readthrough would reveal..
a layered write Andy, indeed
however miniscule - in scale, we may represent against the endless magnitude of existence: we all, make a meaningful impact in our own subtle way
(admittedly not always positive, but impactful all the same)
March 18th, 2021 04:31
One Day More.
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely words but sad ....
March 18th, 2021 02:42
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely words but sad ....
March 18th, 2021 02:42
Feeling Poetry.
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I like this poem . I found a book once , about writing but it said to write from your heart and not to think about it too much ... because the mind sometimes gets in the way .
March 18th, 2021 02:36
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I like this poem . I found a book once , about writing but it said to write from your heart and not to think about it too much ... because the mind sometimes gets in the way .
March 18th, 2021 02:36
Duty Of Love.
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely words . I especially like the last line “ listen to our combined soul “
March 18th, 2021 02:31
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely words . I especially like the last line “ listen to our combined soul “
March 18th, 2021 02:31
A Single Flower.
AuburnScribbler said:
Beautiful Andy, simply beautiful!
Bravo, and hope all is well!
March 17th, 2021 09:54
AuburnScribbler said:
Beautiful Andy, simply beautiful!
Bravo, and hope all is well!
March 17th, 2021 09:54
A Single Flower.
Fay Slimm. said:
Wonderful voices to add to your positive words on climbing into the light - - a fine read dear Andy
March 17th, 2021 06:43
Fay Slimm. said:
Wonderful voices to add to your positive words on climbing into the light - - a fine read dear Andy
March 17th, 2021 06:43
A Single Flower.
Classicmister said:
Very good write Andy - I hope that the seeds I have just sown burst forth into beautiful flowers - but it\'s a bit too cold at the moment for quick germination!
March 17th, 2021 05:50
Classicmister said:
Very good write Andy - I hope that the seeds I have just sown burst forth into beautiful flowers - but it\'s a bit too cold at the moment for quick germination!
March 17th, 2021 05:50
A Single Flower.
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
It\'s very spiritual too: \'Unless a grain of wheat falls into the ground and dies, it abides alone: but if it die, it brings forth much fruit\' (John 12 v.24).
March 17th, 2021 02:56
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
It\'s very spiritual too: \'Unless a grain of wheat falls into the ground and dies, it abides alone: but if it die, it brings forth much fruit\' (John 12 v.24).
March 17th, 2021 02:56
Roadwork Gods.
Jerry Reynolds said:
Oh My, Andy. I have been there. Good write about it.
March 16th, 2021 10:00
Jerry Reynolds said:
Oh My, Andy. I have been there. Good write about it.
March 16th, 2021 10:00
Roadwork Gods.
Doggerel Dave said:
It\'s obvious to me Andy, that your whole problem is embodied in the line \'Driving in unity with the road\'. Your blind faith in the bitumen is what lead you astray. You are a poet - let the power of your poetry allow you to abandon your attachment and raise yourself above all such petty restrictions....or something.
March 16th, 2021 06:40
Doggerel Dave said:
It\'s obvious to me Andy, that your whole problem is embodied in the line \'Driving in unity with the road\'. Your blind faith in the bitumen is what lead you astray. You are a poet - let the power of your poetry allow you to abandon your attachment and raise yourself above all such petty restrictions....or something.
March 16th, 2021 06:40
Daily Door.
Mizgeen Berzinari said:
That door awaits you. Go for it proudly.
I loved it.
March 16th, 2021 05:44
Mizgeen Berzinari said:
That door awaits you. Go for it proudly.
I loved it.
March 16th, 2021 05:44
Roadwork Gods.
Fay Slimm. said:
The same assembly hits these parts too - traffic is held in their grip as holes are dug here and there..... hope your journey went better when heading home Andy.
March 16th, 2021 05:26
Fay Slimm. said:
The same assembly hits these parts too - traffic is held in their grip as holes are dug here and there..... hope your journey went better when heading home Andy.
March 16th, 2021 05:26
Roadwork Gods.
L. B. Mek said:
ah, dear poet
demonstrating the gateway to that \'woosah\' mindset, writing can represent
indeed, let it all out..
still, kinda crazy how obstacles will present themselves in the most random of situations,
guess that\'s why all those \'great thinkers\' try to convince people they can only control their reaction\'s to existence,
seldom can we enact the exact actions we want, without slight hiccups awaiting in our path..
I\'m sorry but I found this a rather humorous read, Andy
though mainly because as a Londoner, I relate to your frustration so much I think,
its the case of either laugh or cry, at this point.. lol
March 16th, 2021 05:21
L. B. Mek said:
ah, dear poet
demonstrating the gateway to that \'woosah\' mindset, writing can represent
indeed, let it all out..
still, kinda crazy how obstacles will present themselves in the most random of situations,
guess that\'s why all those \'great thinkers\' try to convince people they can only control their reaction\'s to existence,
seldom can we enact the exact actions we want, without slight hiccups awaiting in our path..
I\'m sorry but I found this a rather humorous read, Andy
though mainly because as a Londoner, I relate to your frustration so much I think,
its the case of either laugh or cry, at this point.. lol
March 16th, 2021 05:21
Daily Door.
Fay Slimm. said:
Doors are there for us to open where ventures await and you show such a fine example of taking each door at a time....... love the Moody Blues number you chose too.........
March 16th, 2021 03:20
Fay Slimm. said:
Doors are there for us to open where ventures await and you show such a fine example of taking each door at a time....... love the Moody Blues number you chose too.........
March 16th, 2021 03:20
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