Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60



Second Gift.
L. B. Mek said:

\'A passion that surprises us,
A passion and love that gets stronger,
Gets stronger each time we are together.\'
so happy for you my friend
its always a joy, to share in the happiness
of those around you, that deserve
all the kindness
fate has, to spare...

March 3rd, 2022 05:37

Second Gift.
Neville said:


Two things automatically spring to mind .. well my mind at least ...

1) that\'s love for ya
2) Because ya both worth it ..
3) I was never any good at math .. :)

March 3rd, 2022 04:59

Second Gift.
dusk arising said:

I can remember that feeling you lucky man. I bet you feel young and i hope you are enjoying being silly with it too. It\'s so good of you to share your joy with us.... it brings a light of spring into my doddery old heart.

March 3rd, 2022 04:41

Second Gift.
Doggerel Dave said:

What\'s to understand ? Get on with it and enjoy!

March 3rd, 2022 04:08

Second Gift.
orchidee said:

A fine write Gold.

March 3rd, 2022 03:04

Second Gift.
Vamsi Sudha said:

Love is in the Air !! Enjoy this great Feeling. Nothing in the world can replace the beautiful feeling of Love and being Loved.

March 3rd, 2022 02:21

Space And Time.
Bella Shepard said:

I love the music that you choose to accompany your poem. It is elegant and haunting, it conveys the beautiful message of your piece. So simple yet powerful, your words and music stir the soul. Thank You!

March 2nd, 2022 17:48

Space And Time.
FallenAngel1πŸ•Š said:

Both time and space in our lives need to be decorated. And sometimes we rearrange the furniture.Good write Andy.πŸŒžβœŒοΈπŸ•Š

March 2nd, 2022 14:21

Space And Time.
AuburnScribbler said:

A wonderfully written poetic question and answer here Andy.

Though I also agree with dusk arising, actual love, not fake love, can also comprise both the space and time we have.

Bravo, and I hope that all is well!

March 2nd, 2022 12:34

Space And Time.
Rozina said:

Wish we would all do this. How wonderful.

March 2nd, 2022 09:18

Space And Time.
John Prophet said:

Works for me. πŸ˜ƒ

March 2nd, 2022 07:39

Space And Time.
Michael Edwards said:

Sadly time to fill the space grows in short supply the older we get - make the most of everything.

March 2nd, 2022 05:52

Space And Time.
Fay Slimm. said:

love the thought andy and thanks for sharing it

March 2nd, 2022 03:30

Space And Time.
orchidee said:

Good write Gold.
It\'s poor decoration from me, when I start singing! lol.

March 2nd, 2022 02:57

Space And Time.
dusk arising said:

Or maybe just purely through love, we can decorate space with seeing and decorate time with being. Maybe too abstract... I don\'t know.

March 2nd, 2022 02:32

Searching.
spilleronsheet said:

Beautiful solution to the problems we have
A wonderful idea to cope up with loneliness inside…

March 2nd, 2022 01:59

Searching.
Rozina said:

Yes very true. We have to help ourselves. A powerful message.

March 1st, 2022 18:22

Searching.
dusk arising said:

My dad? staring back at me from the mirror.....LOL

Seriously i know youre right. But it is sad to see so many (here on mps too) who seem to enjoy telling the world how hard done by they are rather than realise that they are the only ones who can help themselves.

March 1st, 2022 13:29

Searching.
Rocky Lagou said:

Ohhhhh the ending made me smile! So lovely! I LOVE LOVE this message. Self-upliftment! We must love ourselves first to then love others! What a beautiful message! ✨

March 1st, 2022 10:57

Searching.
L. B. Mek said:

indeed, so very true dear Poet
helping hands, can only do so much
in the end
its only us, that make
those difference making, choices
in our lives...

March 1st, 2022 05:23

Searching.
Michael Edwards said:

Spot on Andy - our fate is in our own hands - something to reflect on.

March 1st, 2022 03:05

Searching.
orchidee said:

Dang it! The mirror cracked. Seven years bad luck? Phew, I don\'t believe in luck, so no! lol.

March 1st, 2022 02:45

Searching.
Neville said:


Maybe tomorra mate .. I get where you are coming from and under other circumstances would agree wholeheartedly .. but not today sir .. nah .. its not a pretty sight .. :)


March 1st, 2022 02:17

Symbols Of Music.
Doggerel Dave said:

An education is mine, provided I stick around long enough.
Thanks for the tutorial - looking forward to the rest of the series, Andy.

February 28th, 2022 20:11

Symbols Of Music.
Rocky Lagou said:

Wow this TOOK ME BACK! I used to be in my middle school\'s orchestra and I played the viola and this literally transported me to them musical days! I love classical orchestras and the notation is so beautiful to learn as it\'s like learning a new language. I definitely felt this message and the \"pp\'s\" and \"mf\'s\" have a special place in my heart! πŸ’–

February 28th, 2022 11:35

Symbols Of Music.
Crowns4Christ said:

Very good piece Andy

February 28th, 2022 10:35

Hooked.
Rocky Lagou said:

Croquet is such a fun pastime. Lovely to see the way it uplifted you through the lonesome days and the days of romantic unity! πŸ’–


February 28th, 2022 09:37

Symbols Of Music.
Neville said:



well I never ... what the f ...... N :)

February 28th, 2022 09:20

Symbols Of Music.
L. B. Mek said:

how informative, yet still
captivatingly poetic
a lovely read Andy, thank you
\'music symbols
as the second set
in the poem.\'
what a beautiful interpretation
(\'tonality\' is Queen
in Poetry in Music: in all Artistry..)
\'in my humble opinion\'

February 28th, 2022 06:28

Symbols Of Music.
Rozina said:

So much easier to remember now that you have given alternative interpretations. Thank you Andy for this poem.

February 28th, 2022 04:14



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