Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
The Green Disappears – Haiku.
Doggerel Dave said:
Not fond of haikus generally, Andy - but this one gave me a clear vision. So...
February 9th, 2021 04:45
Doggerel Dave said:
Not fond of haikus generally, Andy - but this one gave me a clear vision. So...
February 9th, 2021 04:45
The Green Disappears – Haiku.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Autumn pulls a silky blanket over its head and sleeps again
Great capture of nature today Andy
February 9th, 2021 03:52
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Autumn pulls a silky blanket over its head and sleeps again
Great capture of nature today Andy
February 9th, 2021 03:52
The Green Disappears – Haiku.
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
We got a slight covering, but the green has not completely disappeared.
February 9th, 2021 02:49
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
We got a slight covering, but the green has not completely disappeared.
February 9th, 2021 02:49
Love For Eternity.
dusk arising said:
It\'s written in the stars. You only need look to the heavens at night and it is as plain as day and written in your heart.
One day we shall all share the bliss of the love we have lived.
February 8th, 2021 07:49
dusk arising said:
It\'s written in the stars. You only need look to the heavens at night and it is as plain as day and written in your heart.
One day we shall all share the bliss of the love we have lived.
February 8th, 2021 07:49
Love For Eternity.
DesertWords said:
Soon I will share a 60th anniversary with my Love. Your poem reminds me to celebrate each day, each moment. Thank you.
February 8th, 2021 07:00
DesertWords said:
Soon I will share a 60th anniversary with my Love. Your poem reminds me to celebrate each day, each moment. Thank you.
February 8th, 2021 07:00
Love For Eternity.
L. B. Mek said:
just beautiful, I will never tire of reading your wonderful depiction of that love, life so fit - to gift, you and your treasured wife..
\'emotive\' doesn\'t even begin to do your dedication\'s justice Andy
February 8th, 2021 06:36
L. B. Mek said:
just beautiful, I will never tire of reading your wonderful depiction of that love, life so fit - to gift, you and your treasured wife..
\'emotive\' doesn\'t even begin to do your dedication\'s justice Andy
February 8th, 2021 06:36
Love For Eternity.
JonathanB said:
Just beautiful. I can really relate to that after 37 years of marriage to the love of my life.
February 8th, 2021 05:17
JonathanB said:
Just beautiful. I can really relate to that after 37 years of marriage to the love of my life.
February 8th, 2021 05:17
It Is Back.
L. B. Mek said:
forgive me Andy, I\'m not the biggest cricket fan, but your write still took me back - in-time...
as I used to work at Lord\'s and Twickenham in my adventurous teens, and yes I ticked-off Wembley as well but try as I might Wimbledon - actually had standard\'s to uphold,
so my grand-slam stadia dreams
dissipated in straight sets, before
I got anywhere near centre court... lol
February 8th, 2021 05:14
L. B. Mek said:
forgive me Andy, I\'m not the biggest cricket fan, but your write still took me back - in-time...
as I used to work at Lord\'s and Twickenham in my adventurous teens, and yes I ticked-off Wembley as well but try as I might Wimbledon - actually had standard\'s to uphold,
so my grand-slam stadia dreams
dissipated in straight sets, before
I got anywhere near centre court... lol
February 8th, 2021 05:14
Love For Eternity.
Fay Slimm. said:
Your beautiful words are indeed reminders that love last forever - - love never fails as it is part of the permanent and therefore love never dies - what a wonderful gift is love --- thank you so much for sharing that happy dream with us dear Andy.
February 8th, 2021 02:55
Fay Slimm. said:
Your beautiful words are indeed reminders that love last forever - - love never fails as it is part of the permanent and therefore love never dies - what a wonderful gift is love --- thank you so much for sharing that happy dream with us dear Andy.
February 8th, 2021 02:55
It Is Back.
Jerry Reynolds said:
Sports on TV always a call to party Andy. Good write,
February 7th, 2021 16:37
Jerry Reynolds said:
Sports on TV always a call to party Andy. Good write,
February 7th, 2021 16:37
It Is Back.
willow tree said:
It’s the small pleasures in life that bring us joy ! Cricket , poetry walking in nature ! I’m Glad some goodness showed up for you
February 7th, 2021 05:44
willow tree said:
It’s the small pleasures in life that bring us joy ! Cricket , poetry walking in nature ! I’m Glad some goodness showed up for you
February 7th, 2021 05:44
It Is Back.
Poetic Dan said:
I\'m glad something came around as we can\'t spend all our by the river!
I hope you get to that green soon my friend
February 7th, 2021 03:35
Poetic Dan said:
I\'m glad something came around as we can\'t spend all our by the river!
I hope you get to that green soon my friend
February 7th, 2021 03:35
Led To Wagner.
FredPeyer said:
Very well penned, Andy. So often we hear music as a background without actually listening. But when we listen, that same music can become something much more beautiful.
February 6th, 2021 18:05
FredPeyer said:
Very well penned, Andy. So often we hear music as a background without actually listening. But when we listen, that same music can become something much more beautiful.
February 6th, 2021 18:05
Led To Wagner.
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
You put that music on full blast, cos I said \'I\'m about to sing\'? lol.
February 6th, 2021 02:57
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
You put that music on full blast, cos I said \'I\'m about to sing\'? lol.
February 6th, 2021 02:57
Numbers Do Not Exist.
dusk arising said:
We all are children of the universe and all it\'s wonderful mystery.
February 5th, 2021 10:10
dusk arising said:
We all are children of the universe and all it\'s wonderful mystery.
February 5th, 2021 10:10
Numbers Do Not Exist.
Jerry Reynolds said:
Talking points over pints with mates.
Dear God - I do miss them.
Thanks, Andy.
February 5th, 2021 09:14
Jerry Reynolds said:
Talking points over pints with mates.
Dear God - I do miss them.
Thanks, Andy.
February 5th, 2021 09:14
Numbers Do Not Exist.
John Prophet said:
Well done Andy. Yup, this is just one island in a sea of infinite islands. JP
February 5th, 2021 08:02
John Prophet said:
Well done Andy. Yup, this is just one island in a sea of infinite islands. JP
February 5th, 2021 08:02
Numbers Do Not Exist.
L. B. Mek said:
\'It is like putting ink into water
And we expand from this tiny world\'
wonderful imagery, Andy
February 5th, 2021 06:02
L. B. Mek said:
\'It is like putting ink into water
And we expand from this tiny world\'
wonderful imagery, Andy
February 5th, 2021 06:02
Numbers Do Not Exist.
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
Yet numbers exist in some things. People in jobs-worth jobs meeting targets, sometimes meeting targets in terms of numbers of people, even if the people they number as treated as trash.
February 5th, 2021 03:04
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
Yet numbers exist in some things. People in jobs-worth jobs meeting targets, sometimes meeting targets in terms of numbers of people, even if the people they number as treated as trash.
February 5th, 2021 03:04
No Holidays.
Michael Edwards said:
I still smile at the words of Ricky Gervaise - there are 3000 gods in the this world, Christians only believe in one - atheists and Christians are, therefore, only one god apart.
Now that\'s interesting - Christians with a capital C yet the word atheist with a lower case \'a\'. A clear case of inequality.
February 4th, 2021 09:11
Michael Edwards said:
I still smile at the words of Ricky Gervaise - there are 3000 gods in the this world, Christians only believe in one - atheists and Christians are, therefore, only one god apart.
Now that\'s interesting - Christians with a capital C yet the word atheist with a lower case \'a\'. A clear case of inequality.
February 4th, 2021 09:11
Steps Into My River.
L. B. Mek said:
may we all find solace in what \'rivers\' we can excavate from whatever meaning we glean of life and then, learn the wisdom to carry our \'rivers\' with us, wherever our path may lead...
let those \'rivers\' be our liberators and never, be warped into our \'settling cocoon\' of anchors...
onwards, one step at a time to what next awaits,
till what\'s next is revealed as our final sip: of a lifetime\'s treasured breath...
onwards! my friend, let us dwell as much in our today\'s while cherishing each straining tug of our beloved yesterday\'s, let us \'choose\' to search out those adventures - waiting, for us to realise: how brief a second takes to blink-by...
thanks for inspiring my little reply Andy, a wonderfully thought provoking read
February 4th, 2021 05:24
L. B. Mek said:
may we all find solace in what \'rivers\' we can excavate from whatever meaning we glean of life and then, learn the wisdom to carry our \'rivers\' with us, wherever our path may lead...
let those \'rivers\' be our liberators and never, be warped into our \'settling cocoon\' of anchors...
onwards, one step at a time to what next awaits,
till what\'s next is revealed as our final sip: of a lifetime\'s treasured breath...
onwards! my friend, let us dwell as much in our today\'s while cherishing each straining tug of our beloved yesterday\'s, let us \'choose\' to search out those adventures - waiting, for us to realise: how brief a second takes to blink-by...
thanks for inspiring my little reply Andy, a wonderfully thought provoking read
February 4th, 2021 05:24
No Holidays.
Doggerel Dave said:
\"Just a thought\"??? Go on Andy - you keep thinking if that keeps you occupied. But I\'m both an atheist and an agnostic. So do come back and we can have a chat - after which you can have more thoughts as you sort that lot out. :-)
Agreed - no holidays. Though it is immaterial now you\'ve retired. So this is your big chance....
February 4th, 2021 03:18
Doggerel Dave said:
\"Just a thought\"??? Go on Andy - you keep thinking if that keeps you occupied. But I\'m both an atheist and an agnostic. So do come back and we can have a chat - after which you can have more thoughts as you sort that lot out. :-)
Agreed - no holidays. Though it is immaterial now you\'ve retired. So this is your big chance....
February 4th, 2021 03:18
No Holidays.
orchidee said:
I only read recently of one in an accident. He said he came out of it a stronger atheist. Doh! that\'s just digging oneself deeper into a hole, I say.
Jehovah\'s Witnesses don\'t put up Christmas trees, I heard.
February 4th, 2021 02:55
orchidee said:
I only read recently of one in an accident. He said he came out of it a stronger atheist. Doh! that\'s just digging oneself deeper into a hole, I say.
Jehovah\'s Witnesses don\'t put up Christmas trees, I heard.
February 4th, 2021 02:55
Steps Into My River.
orchidee said:
Has Cally (Caliope) got any welly boots?!
February 4th, 2021 02:43
orchidee said:
Has Cally (Caliope) got any welly boots?!
February 4th, 2021 02:43
Steps Into My River.
willow tree said:
I can hear your affection for the path along come through this poem is full of love . Keep up the loving life
February 3rd, 2021 15:37
willow tree said:
I can hear your affection for the path along come through this poem is full of love . Keep up the loving life
February 3rd, 2021 15:37
Steps Into My River.
SureshG said:
Mankind from inception has been drawn to the River, just as you have poetically taken the steps to yours.
February 3rd, 2021 13:01
SureshG said:
Mankind from inception has been drawn to the River, just as you have poetically taken the steps to yours.
February 3rd, 2021 13:01
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