Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
Butterfly Mind.
Caring dove said:
Lovely writing , Andy 🙂 really like this . Sometimes we are like butterflies .. not staying still for too long , and our minds can get bored and want to move onto the next idea or thought..
December 18th, 2021 02:44
Caring dove said:
Lovely writing , Andy 🙂 really like this . Sometimes we are like butterflies .. not staying still for too long , and our minds can get bored and want to move onto the next idea or thought..
December 18th, 2021 02:44
Butterfly Mind.
dusk arising said:
Did you speak to soon
under this rising moon
suddenly awake
with a thirst to slake
and drawing near
to fridgeload of beer
once you\'ve started to quaff
one is never enough
no wonder you\'re tired
after all, you\'re re-tired
life\'s not hokey-cokey
you\'re knackered from croquet.
December 18th, 2021 02:26
dusk arising said:
Did you speak to soon
under this rising moon
suddenly awake
with a thirst to slake
and drawing near
to fridgeload of beer
once you\'ve started to quaff
one is never enough
no wonder you\'re tired
after all, you\'re re-tired
life\'s not hokey-cokey
you\'re knackered from croquet.
December 18th, 2021 02:26
Butterfly Mind.
spilleronsheet said:
In resonance with your butterfly
Though it maybe humour but it’s reality of mine
The mind fluttering to its own tunes not willing to stop till noon
Yet no work done till afternoon
Well penned dear Andy
Can’t help that it’s similar on this side
Mind like a butterfly
A good simile you build upon
December 18th, 2021 02:13
spilleronsheet said:
In resonance with your butterfly
Though it maybe humour but it’s reality of mine
The mind fluttering to its own tunes not willing to stop till noon
Yet no work done till afternoon
Well penned dear Andy
Can’t help that it’s similar on this side
Mind like a butterfly
A good simile you build upon
December 18th, 2021 02:13
Cards Sent.
SureshG said:
So many to remember, and yet still some forgotten - still it’s good to be remembered
December 17th, 2021 19:28
SureshG said:
So many to remember, and yet still some forgotten - still it’s good to be remembered
December 17th, 2021 19:28
Cards Sent.
Coyote said:
LOL...Sounds like your keeping the post office busy Andy. Nice write.
December 17th, 2021 17:20
Coyote said:
LOL...Sounds like your keeping the post office busy Andy. Nice write.
December 17th, 2021 17:20
Cards Sent.
Rozina said:
So much nicer to receive and send real cards than virtual cards. Enjoyed reading this.
December 17th, 2021 04:35
Rozina said:
So much nicer to receive and send real cards than virtual cards. Enjoyed reading this.
December 17th, 2021 04:35
Cards Sent.
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
If someone upsets us, do we cross them off our Christmas card list?! lol.
And what about if they have never sent us a card for donkey\'s years?
December 17th, 2021 03:07
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
If someone upsets us, do we cross them off our Christmas card list?! lol.
And what about if they have never sent us a card for donkey\'s years?
December 17th, 2021 03:07
Cards Sent.
Neville said:
it happens dont it ... glad you saved the memory and shared .. priceless N
December 17th, 2021 02:24
Neville said:
it happens dont it ... glad you saved the memory and shared .. priceless N
December 17th, 2021 02:24
Cards Sent.
spilleronsheet said:
Ohhhh
Wow
That’s a nice ritual
Sending and receiving postcards is so cool
December 17th, 2021 02:21
spilleronsheet said:
Ohhhh
Wow
That’s a nice ritual
Sending and receiving postcards is so cool
December 17th, 2021 02:21
Shining Life Tanka.
Rozina said:
With just a few lines you have made this scene so real. And happy! Thanks.
December 16th, 2021 20:32
Rozina said:
With just a few lines you have made this scene so real. And happy! Thanks.
December 16th, 2021 20:32
Shining Life Tanka.
spilleronsheet said:
The positivity gushes inside
Thanks to the lovely message hidden in this tanka you place
Marvellous dear poet
December 16th, 2021 12:17
spilleronsheet said:
The positivity gushes inside
Thanks to the lovely message hidden in this tanka you place
Marvellous dear poet
December 16th, 2021 12:17
Shining Life Tanka.
L. B. Mek said:
gloomy skies in London, all week
but I reflect the sunshine
your poetry, gifts me
by choosing to smile
and enjoy, my life...
thank you, Andy
dear Paragon of Positivity!
December 16th, 2021 06:18
L. B. Mek said:
gloomy skies in London, all week
but I reflect the sunshine
your poetry, gifts me
by choosing to smile
and enjoy, my life...
thank you, Andy
dear Paragon of Positivity!
December 16th, 2021 06:18
Shining Life Tanka.
woundedheart said:
Jazzy poem or maybe a skatty poem, such beautiful moonlit imagery you paint serenely with your words.☺
December 16th, 2021 04:06
woundedheart said:
Jazzy poem or maybe a skatty poem, such beautiful moonlit imagery you paint serenely with your words.☺
December 16th, 2021 04:06
Shining Life Tanka.
orchidee said:
....And then it rained?!
Well, no, not if the sky was clear.
Good write Gold.
December 16th, 2021 03:08
orchidee said:
....And then it rained?!
Well, no, not if the sky was clear.
Good write Gold.
December 16th, 2021 03:08
Shining Life Tanka.
dusk arising said:
Thats the positivity i love to read, the same positivity flows through me too in these troubled times though i wish i had such a moon to welcome my waking..... LOL my body clock is all over the place. Often i ignore normal hours and sleep well into the daylight... there\'s little harm in it whilst the pandemic is rife.
December 16th, 2021 02:41
dusk arising said:
Thats the positivity i love to read, the same positivity flows through me too in these troubled times though i wish i had such a moon to welcome my waking..... LOL my body clock is all over the place. Often i ignore normal hours and sleep well into the daylight... there\'s little harm in it whilst the pandemic is rife.
December 16th, 2021 02:41
Shining Life Tanka.
Neville said:
Tanka you for posting my golden friend .. excellent optimism displayed for all to see ....................... N
December 16th, 2021 02:23
Neville said:
Tanka you for posting my golden friend .. excellent optimism displayed for all to see ....................... N
December 16th, 2021 02:23
Shining Life Tanka.
Saxon Crow said:
.... And then I went back to bed
Sleep is good
December 16th, 2021 02:23
Saxon Crow said:
.... And then I went back to bed
Sleep is good
December 16th, 2021 02:23
Bigger Than We Can Imagine.
Coyote said:
Staying positive and having hope is the key. Nicely put Andy🙂
December 15th, 2021 14:29
Coyote said:
Staying positive and having hope is the key. Nicely put Andy🙂
December 15th, 2021 14:29
Bigger Than We Can Imagine.
Michael Edwards said:
And it\'s a day at a time for me as well but there are always glimmers of hope on the horizon - Jeanne is doing well and my son\'s travel agency is busy but how much that will translate into firm bookings is still in the lap of the gods.
December 15th, 2021 11:24
Michael Edwards said:
And it\'s a day at a time for me as well but there are always glimmers of hope on the horizon - Jeanne is doing well and my son\'s travel agency is busy but how much that will translate into firm bookings is still in the lap of the gods.
December 15th, 2021 11:24
Bigger Than We Can Imagine.
dusk arising said:
A poem for our times indeed.
I take it a day at a time but the future has a warm glow. It seems Ive been shielding for about 18 months now.
December 15th, 2021 09:44
dusk arising said:
A poem for our times indeed.
I take it a day at a time but the future has a warm glow. It seems Ive been shielding for about 18 months now.
December 15th, 2021 09:44
Bigger Than We Can Imagine.
Vamsi Sudha said:
The Poem could have also been named \"What if\" the keywords of your poem.
Wonderful thoughtful one Gold !!
December 15th, 2021 09:33
Vamsi Sudha said:
The Poem could have also been named \"What if\" the keywords of your poem.
Wonderful thoughtful one Gold !!
December 15th, 2021 09:33
Bigger Than We Can Imagine.
spilleronsheet said:
And I believe in your words
Entrust my hope to take a plunge
Maybe these are the stepping stones for me
Hope shall never die
Thanks dear Andy for the hopeful words you wrote by
December 15th, 2021 07:42
spilleronsheet said:
And I believe in your words
Entrust my hope to take a plunge
Maybe these are the stepping stones for me
Hope shall never die
Thanks dear Andy for the hopeful words you wrote by
December 15th, 2021 07:42
Bigger Than We Can Imagine.
John Prophet said:
Nice write Andy…. One can always hope! JP
December 15th, 2021 07:04
John Prophet said:
Nice write Andy…. One can always hope! JP
December 15th, 2021 07:04
Bigger Than We Can Imagine.
Paul Bell said:
You maybe right, Andy.
I\'m sure the Brits in 39 longed for the day they could get back to normal. We just have to do the same.
December 15th, 2021 06:32
Paul Bell said:
You maybe right, Andy.
I\'m sure the Brits in 39 longed for the day they could get back to normal. We just have to do the same.
December 15th, 2021 06:32
Trilby Lady.
dusk arising said:
People watching poetry from your reserved seat in that coffee house.
A trilby and why not if it looks good. Was she also sporting a pair of 14 lace hole Doc Martins as well. An attractive woman can wear anything with confidence.
December 14th, 2021 09:52
dusk arising said:
People watching poetry from your reserved seat in that coffee house.
A trilby and why not if it looks good. Was she also sporting a pair of 14 lace hole Doc Martins as well. An attractive woman can wear anything with confidence.
December 14th, 2021 09:52
Trilby Lady.
dusk arising said:
People watching poetry from your reserved seat in that coffee house.
A trilby and why not if it looks good. Was she also sporting a pair of 14 lace hole Doc Martins as well. An attractive woman can wear anything with confidence.
December 14th, 2021 08:46
dusk arising said:
People watching poetry from your reserved seat in that coffee house.
A trilby and why not if it looks good. Was she also sporting a pair of 14 lace hole Doc Martins as well. An attractive woman can wear anything with confidence.
December 14th, 2021 08:46
Trilby Lady.
Doggerel Dave said:
Flash mob? You\'ve probably seen it, however:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SXh7JR9oKVE
Trilby lady did for me - bought back a memory....
Thanks Andy
December 14th, 2021 06:23
Doggerel Dave said:
Flash mob? You\'ve probably seen it, however:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SXh7JR9oKVE
Trilby lady did for me - bought back a memory....
Thanks Andy
December 14th, 2021 06:23
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