Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
Another Drug?
orchidee said:
I see what you mean Gold. I may do the same if I was in your situation.
We may think some hymns seem potty, such as:
\'Make me a captive Lord
And then I shall be free\'
and it continues along those lines.
Yet it\'s only restrictions to self, I feel - the \'bad\' parts of us. Not that we have to be all miserable and caught up in \'religious rules\'.
A light still shines for you I believe. Otherwise you would abandon church and other Christians, and indeed Christ, altogether. :)
January 30th, 2020 02:57
orchidee said:
I see what you mean Gold. I may do the same if I was in your situation.
We may think some hymns seem potty, such as:
\'Make me a captive Lord
And then I shall be free\'
and it continues along those lines.
Yet it\'s only restrictions to self, I feel - the \'bad\' parts of us. Not that we have to be all miserable and caught up in \'religious rules\'.
A light still shines for you I believe. Otherwise you would abandon church and other Christians, and indeed Christ, altogether. :)
January 30th, 2020 02:57
What Shall I do?
Fay Slimm. said:
You made the wise choice by playing your croquet and watching other games later my friend.
January 29th, 2020 17:37
Fay Slimm. said:
You made the wise choice by playing your croquet and watching other games later my friend.
January 29th, 2020 17:37
What Shall I do?
Michael Edwards said:
Decisions decisions - - and the potatoe wins.
January 29th, 2020 14:01
Michael Edwards said:
Decisions decisions - - and the potatoe wins.
January 29th, 2020 14:01
What Shall I do?
dusk arising said:
Well here\'s hoping your TV doesn\'t fail you.
January 29th, 2020 10:03
dusk arising said:
Well here\'s hoping your TV doesn\'t fail you.
January 29th, 2020 10:03
What Shall I do?
anongirl47 said:
Hi Goldfinch 60.
I enjoyed reading this poem :)
Awesome write!
January 29th, 2020 07:36
anongirl47 said:
Hi Goldfinch 60.
I enjoyed reading this poem :)
Awesome write!
January 29th, 2020 07:36
What Shall I do?
FineB said:
Hello Goldfinch60!
A good write.
Hope everything is resolved!
Keep writing FineB
January 29th, 2020 06:48
FineB said:
Hello Goldfinch60!
A good write.
Hope everything is resolved!
Keep writing FineB
January 29th, 2020 06:48
What Shall I do?
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Angela here - Just off to Work - first Clinic 10am ! Thanks for sharing - Love SQ they have vitalised me for the Morning ! DOWN DOWN DEEPER & DOWN ~ AGAIN ~ AGAIN ~ DEEPER & DOWN is a good lyric to masage to ! I might ask ALEXA to play it while I have my First Client (A Rugby Player !) on the Table (visulise it !).
Your poem does hilite a 21st C dilemma which our GParents never had - How to be in two places @ once ! In your mind CROQUET (a sign of Old Age ?) & RUGBY are both sacred ! However your dilemma is solved by the Space Time continuum ! Einstein tells me that *It vould be impossible to be videoing ze Croquet (in real time) while simultaneously vatching ze Rugby* So you have no option ! Speil ze Croquet und vatch ze Rugby auf TV - OK.
However ACHTUNG ! Ich habe deiner MOBILENOMMER ! If you dont add a comment to *FIVE SENSES* Ich vill du gefone immediatzung after ZE MATCH ~ OK !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love ANGELA 🧡🤍💙🧡🤍💙
January 29th, 2020 03:45
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Angela here - Just off to Work - first Clinic 10am ! Thanks for sharing - Love SQ they have vitalised me for the Morning ! DOWN DOWN DEEPER & DOWN ~ AGAIN ~ AGAIN ~ DEEPER & DOWN is a good lyric to masage to ! I might ask ALEXA to play it while I have my First Client (A Rugby Player !) on the Table (visulise it !).
Your poem does hilite a 21st C dilemma which our GParents never had - How to be in two places @ once ! In your mind CROQUET (a sign of Old Age ?) & RUGBY are both sacred ! However your dilemma is solved by the Space Time continuum ! Einstein tells me that *It vould be impossible to be videoing ze Croquet (in real time) while simultaneously vatching ze Rugby* So you have no option ! Speil ze Croquet und vatch ze Rugby auf TV - OK.
However ACHTUNG ! Ich habe deiner MOBILENOMMER ! If you dont add a comment to *FIVE SENSES* Ich vill du gefone immediatzung after ZE MATCH ~ OK !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love ANGELA 🧡🤍💙🧡🤍💙
January 29th, 2020 03:45
My River of Joy.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Love that river Andy such a metaphor for positivist for you
Great write
January 28th, 2020 05:01
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Love that river Andy such a metaphor for positivist for you
Great write
January 28th, 2020 05:01
My River of Joy.
kevin browne said:
Meanwhile keep your finger dipped in the river of positibity and if you beleive in it enough that river will lift you up take you down or any place where you wish to be. Good work GF...
January 28th, 2020 04:45
kevin browne said:
Meanwhile keep your finger dipped in the river of positibity and if you beleive in it enough that river will lift you up take you down or any place where you wish to be. Good work GF...
January 28th, 2020 04:45
My River of Joy.
dusk arising said:
The future is beautiful too and your river will always be there to spur you on. All around is beauty and soon the spring will be here. New opportunities to do new things lay ahead.
January 28th, 2020 04:35
dusk arising said:
The future is beautiful too and your river will always be there to spur you on. All around is beauty and soon the spring will be here. New opportunities to do new things lay ahead.
January 28th, 2020 04:35
My River of Joy.
Michael Edwards said:
And it will - fine write Andy - love your positivity.
January 28th, 2020 03:18
Michael Edwards said:
And it will - fine write Andy - love your positivity.
January 28th, 2020 03:18
My River of Joy.
orchidee said:
A fine write Gold. I read part of a book. A character in it looked into a river. Looking ever deeper, he somehow saw at the bottom of the river-bed the primeval river that was in the Garden of Eden. Though book was a bit spooky. I did not read it all.
January 28th, 2020 03:10
orchidee said:
A fine write Gold. I read part of a book. A character in it looked into a river. Looking ever deeper, he somehow saw at the bottom of the river-bed the primeval river that was in the Garden of Eden. Though book was a bit spooky. I did not read it all.
January 28th, 2020 03:10
Stay Weird.
FineB said:
A great write Goldfinch60.
Beauty as seen by the singer Julia Fordham is about being yourself.
We are all unique divine masterpieces created by the Lord God Almighty all special in our own way.
Keep writing FineB
January 27th, 2020 15:56
FineB said:
A great write Goldfinch60.
Beauty as seen by the singer Julia Fordham is about being yourself.
We are all unique divine masterpieces created by the Lord God Almighty all special in our own way.
Keep writing FineB
January 27th, 2020 15:56
Stay Weird.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ! Thanks for sharing Uncle Andy ~ Loved *The World is Waiting for the Sunrise* by George Lewis. I have played Acoustic Steel Guitar in a trad Jazz Band ~ loved the Guitar Solos but could never match DJANGO ! I agree with the sentiments in your Poem ! We are all born different (WEIRD ?) and the Good Book says *Dont let this World press you into its Mold !* Some people consider ALL POETS are WEIRD ~ AMEN
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love BRIAN & ANGELA 💙🧡💙
We are having a bit of a drive on FUSIONS. There was
a complaint that ours were too SIMPLISTIC !
Latest one is MAJOR HISTORICAL SCIENTIFIC ACHIEVEMENTS
Please add a POEM ~ Please ~ Thanks A & B 🧡💙🧡
January 27th, 2020 15:18
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ! Thanks for sharing Uncle Andy ~ Loved *The World is Waiting for the Sunrise* by George Lewis. I have played Acoustic Steel Guitar in a trad Jazz Band ~ loved the Guitar Solos but could never match DJANGO ! I agree with the sentiments in your Poem ! We are all born different (WEIRD ?) and the Good Book says *Dont let this World press you into its Mold !* Some people consider ALL POETS are WEIRD ~ AMEN
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love BRIAN & ANGELA 💙🧡💙
We are having a bit of a drive on FUSIONS. There was
a complaint that ours were too SIMPLISTIC !
Latest one is MAJOR HISTORICAL SCIENTIFIC ACHIEVEMENTS
Please add a POEM ~ Please ~ Thanks A & B 🧡💙🧡
January 27th, 2020 15:18
Stay Weird.
Jeremy Leach said:
My philosophy exactly ! Nicely put and written. It\'s very easy to feel you have to mold to others wishes but I don\'t think it ever helps in the long run.
January 27th, 2020 13:48
Jeremy Leach said:
My philosophy exactly ! Nicely put and written. It\'s very easy to feel you have to mold to others wishes but I don\'t think it ever helps in the long run.
January 27th, 2020 13:48
Stay Weird.
Fay Slimm. said:
Great number set me tapping my feet Andy as I read your urging for folk to stay ourselves - yup - - count me in with the weirdos too.
January 27th, 2020 11:13
Fay Slimm. said:
Great number set me tapping my feet Andy as I read your urging for folk to stay ourselves - yup - - count me in with the weirdos too.
January 27th, 2020 11:13
Stay Weird.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Thanks for the words of wisdom today Andy. I will take note.
\'Never do a wrong to make or keep a friend; The man who requires you to do so is a dearly purchased sacrifice\'.
~ General Robert E. Lee
Ex animo, Alan
January 27th, 2020 07:03
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Thanks for the words of wisdom today Andy. I will take note.
\'Never do a wrong to make or keep a friend; The man who requires you to do so is a dearly purchased sacrifice\'.
~ General Robert E. Lee
Ex animo, Alan
January 27th, 2020 07:03
Stay Weird.
dusk arising said:
My world of music is/was filled with weird eccentric artists e.g. stanley clarke, jaco pastorius, charlie parker who each were doing it differently in their day. Now their styles and statements have become commonplace in our everyday music.
I have always been a bit of an oddball i suppose. I wholeheartedly support your message today. Every flock needs a renegade.
January 27th, 2020 05:53
dusk arising said:
My world of music is/was filled with weird eccentric artists e.g. stanley clarke, jaco pastorius, charlie parker who each were doing it differently in their day. Now their styles and statements have become commonplace in our everyday music.
I have always been a bit of an oddball i suppose. I wholeheartedly support your message today. Every flock needs a renegade.
January 27th, 2020 05:53
Stay Weird.
Michael Edwards said:
Weird? Me? I\'ll stay as I am - eccentric accrding to my family. Love the write AND the clip - great music.
January 27th, 2020 03:40
Michael Edwards said:
Weird? Me? I\'ll stay as I am - eccentric accrding to my family. Love the write AND the clip - great music.
January 27th, 2020 03:40
Stay Weird.
orchidee said:
Good write Gold. Have we stayed weird since about 1066?!
January 27th, 2020 02:50
orchidee said:
Good write Gold. Have we stayed weird since about 1066?!
January 27th, 2020 02:50
Where Roses Grow.
FineB said:
Hello Goldfinch60,
A beautiful write.
These dark moments in our lives are temporary but light and roses always prevail in our lives.
Keep writing FineB
January 26th, 2020 15:04
FineB said:
Hello Goldfinch60,
A beautiful write.
These dark moments in our lives are temporary but light and roses always prevail in our lives.
Keep writing FineB
January 26th, 2020 15:04
Where Roses Grow.
Michael Edwards said:
You flatter me with such a super response - and now I look to cutting the first rose of the year wit its promise of what\'s to come.
January 26th, 2020 04:54
Michael Edwards said:
You flatter me with such a super response - and now I look to cutting the first rose of the year wit its promise of what\'s to come.
January 26th, 2020 04:54
Where Roses Grow.
dusk arising said:
Wheh i was a keen photographer my theme was to capture how nature reclaims what mankind has discarded. Nature prevails.
The roses will surely grow again for they have a rich soil in which to live and bring joy.
January 26th, 2020 04:25
dusk arising said:
Wheh i was a keen photographer my theme was to capture how nature reclaims what mankind has discarded. Nature prevails.
The roses will surely grow again for they have a rich soil in which to live and bring joy.
January 26th, 2020 04:25
Where Roses Grow.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGEA HERE - GOOD MORNING UNCLE ANDY - Love FLY ME TO THE MOON - very evocative. Thanks for sharing and for two more excellent Stanzas about Roses a la Uncle Mike !
You do not sorrow
Like those that have NO HOPE
Death doth hide - But not divide
It is as though - The rose that bloomed
Upon your Trellis Fence
Has blossemed on the Other Side
You will see her lovely Face
Some bright Golden Morning
When the clouds have lifted
And the shades have flown
No more darkness Pain or Death
Heart aches gone forever
No more Night only Light
YOU WILL SEE HER FACE - AMEN !
I am sending these words of Comfort & Encouragement
As you face this short period of separation - BUT
With JOYCE not by your side - but ever in your HEART - AMEN
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love ANGELA & BRIAN
January 26th, 2020 03:12
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGEA HERE - GOOD MORNING UNCLE ANDY - Love FLY ME TO THE MOON - very evocative. Thanks for sharing and for two more excellent Stanzas about Roses a la Uncle Mike !
You do not sorrow
Like those that have NO HOPE
Death doth hide - But not divide
It is as though - The rose that bloomed
Upon your Trellis Fence
Has blossemed on the Other Side
You will see her lovely Face
Some bright Golden Morning
When the clouds have lifted
And the shades have flown
No more darkness Pain or Death
Heart aches gone forever
No more Night only Light
YOU WILL SEE HER FACE - AMEN !
I am sending these words of Comfort & Encouragement
As you face this short period of separation - BUT
With JOYCE not by your side - but ever in your HEART - AMEN
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love ANGELA & BRIAN
January 26th, 2020 03:12
Final Parting.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing Uncle Andy ~ We found the music very fitting to the passing of your beloved JOYCE into the Spirit World & appearing as a shining Star. We have read all the comments & your responses ~ very moving. You & Joyce are well loved on MPS. We love the Poem and Your Assurance that You will both be reunited in the Spirit World. We also have that Assurance for each other when the time comes ~ but ours is as yet untested. Yours has been tested & vinicated. The Assurance of life beyond Death & a certain reunion can lessen the sorrow & grief and enable you to face the FUTURE. We have both experienced this in the death of a Sibling. You are always in our prayers as you move forward alone Physically but with Joyce always present in your Heart ~ AMEN. Thanks for sharing it is great comfort to us as we face our own marriage ina few weeks time ~ AMEN !
Love & Peace to You & Yours
Love ANGELA & BRIAN
🧡💙🧡💙🧡
January 25th, 2020 19:54
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing Uncle Andy ~ We found the music very fitting to the passing of your beloved JOYCE into the Spirit World & appearing as a shining Star. We have read all the comments & your responses ~ very moving. You & Joyce are well loved on MPS. We love the Poem and Your Assurance that You will both be reunited in the Spirit World. We also have that Assurance for each other when the time comes ~ but ours is as yet untested. Yours has been tested & vinicated. The Assurance of life beyond Death & a certain reunion can lessen the sorrow & grief and enable you to face the FUTURE. We have both experienced this in the death of a Sibling. You are always in our prayers as you move forward alone Physically but with Joyce always present in your Heart ~ AMEN. Thanks for sharing it is great comfort to us as we face our own marriage ina few weeks time ~ AMEN !
Love & Peace to You & Yours
Love ANGELA & BRIAN
🧡💙🧡💙🧡
January 25th, 2020 19:54
Final Parting.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
No words Andy
Just Love I hope you can feel that?
Just love
January 25th, 2020 10:07
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
No words Andy
Just Love I hope you can feel that?
Just love
January 25th, 2020 10:07
New Chapter.
dusk arising said:
Hey and theres no career path or nine to five toil..... go for it LOL
January 25th, 2020 05:19
dusk arising said:
Hey and theres no career path or nine to five toil..... go for it LOL
January 25th, 2020 05:19
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