Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
Word Struggle.
Michael Edwards said:
And stumble I did - of course I pronounced the aluminium bit correctly - the English way. lol
June 19th, 2019 08:22
Michael Edwards said:
And stumble I did - of course I pronounced the aluminium bit correctly - the English way. lol
June 19th, 2019 08:22
Word Struggle.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks UNCLE ANDY : ANGELA here 9pm : Now the day is over ! Love the spooky Song : G & S our favourite ! Pleases check BRIANS Spooky Saga : *This Old House* there is bit of Blue Grass as well ! Love the Poem ENGLISH will always be the Queen of Languages. I pride myself on my ELOCUTION and managed the last line perfectly (after three tries !) : AMEN
Blessings & Love & Peace to You & Joyce
Yours as always : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
June 19th, 2019 03:00
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks UNCLE ANDY : ANGELA here 9pm : Now the day is over ! Love the spooky Song : G & S our favourite ! Pleases check BRIANS Spooky Saga : *This Old House* there is bit of Blue Grass as well ! Love the Poem ENGLISH will always be the Queen of Languages. I pride myself on my ELOCUTION and managed the last line perfectly (after three tries !) : AMEN
Blessings & Love & Peace to You & Joyce
Yours as always : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
June 19th, 2019 03:00
Word Struggle.
dusk arising said:
Do you pronounce themetal aloominum or al-you-min-ium. I had a technical chat with an american man long ago about aluminium content of something and our convo was illuminating.
June 19th, 2019 01:30
dusk arising said:
Do you pronounce themetal aloominum or al-you-min-ium. I had a technical chat with an american man long ago about aluminium content of something and our convo was illuminating.
June 19th, 2019 01:30
Past and Future - Tanka.
dusk arising said:
Love of life and love of the beauty all around us is a reward for being beautiful of spirit.
June 18th, 2019 12:42
dusk arising said:
Love of life and love of the beauty all around us is a reward for being beautiful of spirit.
June 18th, 2019 12:42
Past and Future - Tanka.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS UNCLE ANDY ~ Lovely Music ~ very brooding ! I love the optimism in your POEM ! The PAST ~ All GOOD ~ the FUTURE ~ All WONDERFUL ~ AMEN So Far Angela & I CAN say the same ! PLEASE check our BALANCED DIET ~ Thanks
BLESSINGS & Peace for NOW & TOMORROW for YOU & JOYCE
Yours as always ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡 🧡 🧡 🧡 🧡
June 18th, 2019 11:12
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS UNCLE ANDY ~ Lovely Music ~ very brooding ! I love the optimism in your POEM ! The PAST ~ All GOOD ~ the FUTURE ~ All WONDERFUL ~ AMEN So Far Angela & I CAN say the same ! PLEASE check our BALANCED DIET ~ Thanks
BLESSINGS & Peace for NOW & TOMORROW for YOU & JOYCE
Yours as always ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡 🧡 🧡 🧡 🧡
June 18th, 2019 11:12
Past and Future - Tanka.
Suresh said:
If true, then their is nothing else to want.....
June 18th, 2019 10:35
Suresh said:
If true, then their is nothing else to want.....
June 18th, 2019 10:35
Past and Future - Tanka.
Laura🌻 said:
Andy,
A short and sweet tanka complemented by an extraordinary video!
After listening to my aunt crying with pain for a few hours, reading your delightful poem and listening to the musical video was heavenly! Thank you for sharing!
My love to Joyce and to you!
~Laura~
June 18th, 2019 02:40
Laura🌻 said:
Andy,
A short and sweet tanka complemented by an extraordinary video!
After listening to my aunt crying with pain for a few hours, reading your delightful poem and listening to the musical video was heavenly! Thank you for sharing!
My love to Joyce and to you!
~Laura~
June 18th, 2019 02:40
Past and Future - Tanka.
Michael Edwards said:
A super write and one of my favourite pieces of music to go with it from way back when - although in danger of being over-played on Classic FM these days
June 18th, 2019 02:03
Michael Edwards said:
A super write and one of my favourite pieces of music to go with it from way back when - although in danger of being over-played on Classic FM these days
June 18th, 2019 02:03
Past and Future - Tanka.
orchidee said:
Good write Gold. That you on that horse?! We were on horses in 1066.
June 18th, 2019 01:50
orchidee said:
Good write Gold. That you on that horse?! We were on horses in 1066.
June 18th, 2019 01:50
Past and Future - Tanka.
Neville said:
so well said and perfectly put... you inspire me my friend....
June 18th, 2019 01:34
Neville said:
so well said and perfectly put... you inspire me my friend....
June 18th, 2019 01:34
Hitchhikers Guide.
Suresh said:
Now we know one is telling the truth and the other......
What a punchline 🤗
You can\'t but smile at your post
June 17th, 2019 11:20
Suresh said:
Now we know one is telling the truth and the other......
What a punchline 🤗
You can\'t but smile at your post
June 17th, 2019 11:20
Lady Lost.
Suresh said:
To experience a loved one suffering is tormenting indeed, but what is even worse is our helplessness-
Your strength is truly commendable
June 17th, 2019 11:13
Suresh said:
To experience a loved one suffering is tormenting indeed, but what is even worse is our helplessness-
Your strength is truly commendable
June 17th, 2019 11:13
Hitchhikers Guide.
dusk arising said:
Hmmm hitch hikers.... i\'m reluctant. You just dont know what you are inviting into your car.
Apart from that, when i tried hitching a lift in my younger days i was mostly out of luck... i\'m big guy and probably looked like trouble.
Loved your piece today. I didn\'t see the punchline coming and it did raise a laugh. Thank you.
June 17th, 2019 05:35
dusk arising said:
Hmmm hitch hikers.... i\'m reluctant. You just dont know what you are inviting into your car.
Apart from that, when i tried hitching a lift in my younger days i was mostly out of luck... i\'m big guy and probably looked like trouble.
Loved your piece today. I didn\'t see the punchline coming and it did raise a laugh. Thank you.
June 17th, 2019 05:35
Hitchhikers Guide.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for scaring UNCLE ANDY : Angela here (10pm) after a hard day in the CLINIC ! Love FILM THEME MUSIC ! First time I saw PSYCHO I wouldn\'t shower (n my own !) for weeks ! Love your very elegant verse. HITCH HIKING is a dying profession ! Iam a RED BELT KARATE so when I HITCH HIKED I knew I could take care iof myself. Peple still hitch in NZ and a Young Nubile Senorita like me has no problem in getting a LIFT ! PSYCHPATHS are interesting people and they now provise their own CYCLE PATHS for them ! We dont get many in NZ : AMEN
Thanks for an interesting BEDTIME read & record !
Blessings & Love to YOU & JOYCE
Yours as always ANGELA : 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please check POSITIVITY ~ Thanks A !
June 17th, 2019 04:16
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for scaring UNCLE ANDY : Angela here (10pm) after a hard day in the CLINIC ! Love FILM THEME MUSIC ! First time I saw PSYCHO I wouldn\'t shower (n my own !) for weeks ! Love your very elegant verse. HITCH HIKING is a dying profession ! Iam a RED BELT KARATE so when I HITCH HIKED I knew I could take care iof myself. Peple still hitch in NZ and a Young Nubile Senorita like me has no problem in getting a LIFT ! PSYCHPATHS are interesting people and they now provise their own CYCLE PATHS for them ! We dont get many in NZ : AMEN
Thanks for an interesting BEDTIME read & record !
Blessings & Love to YOU & JOYCE
Yours as always ANGELA : 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please check POSITIVITY ~ Thanks A !
June 17th, 2019 04:16
Hitchhikers Guide.
Neville said:
Ha ha.. I thought this was going to be a take on Douglas Adams novels... I certainly was not expecting the punchline... I expect the chances would be pretty slim.. but who knows... the most successful serial killers, are those who have not been caught........ we could be surrounded by them..... what a bloomin thought........ N
June 17th, 2019 03:25
Neville said:
Ha ha.. I thought this was going to be a take on Douglas Adams novels... I certainly was not expecting the punchline... I expect the chances would be pretty slim.. but who knows... the most successful serial killers, are those who have not been caught........ we could be surrounded by them..... what a bloomin thought........ N
June 17th, 2019 03:25
Hitchhikers Guide.
Michael Edwards said:
Now this a real grin maker - thanks for starting the day off so well Andy.
June 17th, 2019 02:23
Michael Edwards said:
Now this a real grin maker - thanks for starting the day off so well Andy.
June 17th, 2019 02:23
Hitchhikers Guide.
orchidee said:
Oh lol, a fine write Gold. An old joke now? I was a serial killer - I poisoned people\'s cornflakes - or porridge, or bacon and eggs even!
June 17th, 2019 01:58
orchidee said:
Oh lol, a fine write Gold. An old joke now? I was a serial killer - I poisoned people\'s cornflakes - or porridge, or bacon and eggs even!
June 17th, 2019 01:58
Lady Lost.
orchidee said:
I ain\'t seen any \'fireworks\' at many churches - maybe they are asleep?! But better, that they have true understanding of situations.
June 16th, 2019 08:11
orchidee said:
I ain\'t seen any \'fireworks\' at many churches - maybe they are asleep?! But better, that they have true understanding of situations.
June 16th, 2019 08:11
Lady Lost.
Neville said:
I do so hope you are wrong.. but suspect you know far better than me ... I guess those who will be doing the talk are well intentioned but are not adequately equipped with first hand experience... A poem filled to the point of overflowing with both love and understandable frustrations.... Neville
June 16th, 2019 03:56
Neville said:
I do so hope you are wrong.. but suspect you know far better than me ... I guess those who will be doing the talk are well intentioned but are not adequately equipped with first hand experience... A poem filled to the point of overflowing with both love and understandable frustrations.... Neville
June 16th, 2019 03:56
Lady Lost.
Laura🌻 said:
Andy,
A beautiful, loving write about the love of your life! You are an amazing man!
A great and truthful author’s comment!
My love to Joyce and to you!❤️
~Laura~
June 16th, 2019 02:48
Laura🌻 said:
Andy,
A beautiful, loving write about the love of your life! You are an amazing man!
A great and truthful author’s comment!
My love to Joyce and to you!❤️
~Laura~
June 16th, 2019 02:48
Lady Lost.
Michael Edwards said:
Only a person who has seen it at first hand could write such touching words.
June 16th, 2019 02:06
Michael Edwards said:
Only a person who has seen it at first hand could write such touching words.
June 16th, 2019 02:06
Lady Lost.
dusk arising said:
There you go Goldfinch. You know already that the church will just dance around the periphery of the subject, like they do with everything, making polite \'kindness\' noises for the detail deaf flock (of sheep). I hope you will not be annoyed by them and i hope im wrong in my prejudice in this instance.
June 16th, 2019 01:45
dusk arising said:
There you go Goldfinch. You know already that the church will just dance around the periphery of the subject, like they do with everything, making polite \'kindness\' noises for the detail deaf flock (of sheep). I hope you will not be annoyed by them and i hope im wrong in my prejudice in this instance.
June 16th, 2019 01:45
Imagination Managing.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks UNCLE ANDY ~ The frantic trumpet seems to me to be a good complement to the frantic toungue twisting poem ~ great verbal & aural sensation !
Blessings & Peace to You & Joyce
Yours as always BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please check ANGELAS PAPA ~ Thanks B !
June 15th, 2019 18:43
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks UNCLE ANDY ~ The frantic trumpet seems to me to be a good complement to the frantic toungue twisting poem ~ great verbal & aural sensation !
Blessings & Peace to You & Joyce
Yours as always BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please check ANGELAS PAPA ~ Thanks B !
June 15th, 2019 18:43
Imagination Managing.
Suresh said:
It\'s tongue twisting teasers like this that my tongue twistingly twanged - now what was I trying to say😋
June 15th, 2019 12:26
Suresh said:
It\'s tongue twisting teasers like this that my tongue twistingly twanged - now what was I trying to say😋
June 15th, 2019 12:26
Imagination Managing.
dusk arising said:
Amazing virtuoso piece and soooo long. Truly proving he is a master of both double tonguing and circular breathing.
Clever and entertaining wordplaying from you today.
June 15th, 2019 10:51
dusk arising said:
Amazing virtuoso piece and soooo long. Truly proving he is a master of both double tonguing and circular breathing.
Clever and entertaining wordplaying from you today.
June 15th, 2019 10:51
Imagination Managing.
FineB said:
Hello Goldfinch60,
A wonderful imaginative poem that certainly got me thinking.
Keep writing
FineB
June 15th, 2019 10:50
FineB said:
Hello Goldfinch60,
A wonderful imaginative poem that certainly got me thinking.
Keep writing
FineB
June 15th, 2019 10:50
Imagination Managing.
Neville said:
ouch... in trying to read this out loud, you just shredded my tongue... or was it me....
a really enjoyed tongue teazer GF60...
June 15th, 2019 04:21
Neville said:
ouch... in trying to read this out loud, you just shredded my tongue... or was it me....
a really enjoyed tongue teazer GF60...
June 15th, 2019 04:21
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