Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
Time? What Time?
dusk arising said:
Lucky you! You wouldn\'t have it any other way.
August 13th, 2019 04:36
dusk arising said:
Lucky you! You wouldn\'t have it any other way.
August 13th, 2019 04:36
Time? What Time?
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Great observation Andy
Where does the time go?
Where does the rubber go from car tyres?
Where do the clouds go when it doesn\'t rain
Where do odd socks go
I guess we\'ll never know
August 13th, 2019 03:43
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Great observation Andy
Where does the time go?
Where does the rubber go from car tyres?
Where do the clouds go when it doesn\'t rain
Where do odd socks go
I guess we\'ll never know
August 13th, 2019 03:43
Time? What Time?
Poetic Dan said:
Love this my friend and feel that time slipping through my hand! Funny that this was the last one I have time to read lol
August 13th, 2019 01:55
Poetic Dan said:
Love this my friend and feel that time slipping through my hand! Funny that this was the last one I have time to read lol
August 13th, 2019 01:55
Time? What Time?
orchidee said:
You enjoying yourself then? Does time go quickly when one is enjoying oneself, as the saying goes?
All I know is time went very slowly in 1066. Not an enjoyable time, cos I turned up!
August 13th, 2019 01:44
orchidee said:
You enjoying yourself then? Does time go quickly when one is enjoying oneself, as the saying goes?
All I know is time went very slowly in 1066. Not an enjoyable time, cos I turned up!
August 13th, 2019 01:44
Time? What Time?
Michael Edwards said:
Where time goes no man knows
Day then night
dark then light
Or is it the other way round?
August 13th, 2019 01:33
Michael Edwards said:
Where time goes no man knows
Day then night
dark then light
Or is it the other way round?
August 13th, 2019 01:33
Fed With Music.
Suresh said:
In reality, the part of brain that is responsible for music, is also responsible for mathematics and sciences, and thus the saying, \"great mathematicians make for great musicians \"
Irrespective, the vibrations of music has a direct impact on the brain, and implores its listener into a specific rythm.
Thnx for the post.
August 12th, 2019 18:37
Suresh said:
In reality, the part of brain that is responsible for music, is also responsible for mathematics and sciences, and thus the saying, \"great mathematicians make for great musicians \"
Irrespective, the vibrations of music has a direct impact on the brain, and implores its listener into a specific rythm.
Thnx for the post.
August 12th, 2019 18:37
Fed With Music.
Christina8 said:
I don\'t know what I\'d do without music. It is the life which sustains us all. Without it, I think we get depressed....
August 12th, 2019 13:16
Christina8 said:
I don\'t know what I\'d do without music. It is the life which sustains us all. Without it, I think we get depressed....
August 12th, 2019 13:16
Fed With Music.
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh yes - - music is from and to the soul - -- a wonderful gift to lift us at any moment from the mundane to the highest of heights........... a great number you chose today too Andy.
August 12th, 2019 03:52
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh yes - - music is from and to the soul - -- a wonderful gift to lift us at any moment from the mundane to the highest of heights........... a great number you chose today too Andy.
August 12th, 2019 03:52
Fed With Music.
orchidee said:
A fine write Gold. A pity my singing is not the solution! Well, it might be partly. C\'mon Orchi, it\'s not that bad!
August 12th, 2019 01:31
orchidee said:
A fine write Gold. A pity my singing is not the solution! Well, it might be partly. C\'mon Orchi, it\'s not that bad!
August 12th, 2019 01:31
Fed With Music.
Michael Edwards said:
With you all the way Andy - music is part of my life.
August 12th, 2019 01:08
Michael Edwards said:
With you all the way Andy - music is part of my life.
August 12th, 2019 01:08
Fed With Music.
dusk arising said:
Music is the human interpretation of the audible environment you might say. Taking the feeling a blackbirds evesong places in your soul and transposing it to orchestra for example. Or even the bang and crunch of the city into funk and grunge.
Yes i so agree... music really gets into your soul and motivates the mood.
Not many people say they don\'t like music do they. I couldn\'t live with out it.
August 12th, 2019 00:33
dusk arising said:
Music is the human interpretation of the audible environment you might say. Taking the feeling a blackbirds evesong places in your soul and transposing it to orchestra for example. Or even the bang and crunch of the city into funk and grunge.
Yes i so agree... music really gets into your soul and motivates the mood.
Not many people say they don\'t like music do they. I couldn\'t live with out it.
August 12th, 2019 00:33
But Not Yet.
Christina8 said:
Great write Andy! It\'s awesome knowing you are so at peace with yourself and everything that is going on.
August 11th, 2019 20:02
Christina8 said:
Great write Andy! It\'s awesome knowing you are so at peace with yourself and everything that is going on.
August 11th, 2019 20:02
Modesty Acrostic.
Suresh said:
We can only hope, for that will make everybody\'s dream come true
August 11th, 2019 11:18
Suresh said:
We can only hope, for that will make everybody\'s dream come true
August 11th, 2019 11:18
But Not Yet.
Michael Edwards said:
I am prepared but not ready - so much to do - it\'s a wonderful life.
August 11th, 2019 09:04
Michael Edwards said:
I am prepared but not ready - so much to do - it\'s a wonderful life.
August 11th, 2019 09:04
But Not Yet.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
NO NO there work to do yet young man!
Great write Andy
Or as they say in the NE
\"A Reet Greet Reet
August 11th, 2019 09:02
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
NO NO there work to do yet young man!
Great write Andy
Or as they say in the NE
\"A Reet Greet Reet
August 11th, 2019 09:02
But Not Yet.
dusk arising said:
The elements humble us into our deepest thoughts when we observe them alone.
Unanswered questions abound but within you i know resides the faith that life remains wholesome and your spirit will endure all.
Tomorrrow i will publish something i wrote using a quite different style borrowed from some of the great writers. I had for gotten about it being a nineties piece but on reading it i immediately thought of you and your beliefs which are similar to mine. Please don\'t miss it.
August 11th, 2019 05:20
dusk arising said:
The elements humble us into our deepest thoughts when we observe them alone.
Unanswered questions abound but within you i know resides the faith that life remains wholesome and your spirit will endure all.
Tomorrrow i will publish something i wrote using a quite different style borrowed from some of the great writers. I had for gotten about it being a nineties piece but on reading it i immediately thought of you and your beliefs which are similar to mine. Please don\'t miss it.
August 11th, 2019 05:20
But Not Yet.
Fay Slimm. said:
Thank you for letting us readers into your very deep feelings when walking with nature dear Andy - the moon resurrects so much mystery for us to contemplate when we are alone and you write it so well.
August 11th, 2019 03:14
Fay Slimm. said:
Thank you for letting us readers into your very deep feelings when walking with nature dear Andy - the moon resurrects so much mystery for us to contemplate when we are alone and you write it so well.
August 11th, 2019 03:14
But Not Yet.
Neville said:
A heartfelt and uplifting wright in its very own right ...
Nice one sir.....
Neville
August 11th, 2019 02:02
Neville said:
A heartfelt and uplifting wright in its very own right ...
Nice one sir.....
Neville
August 11th, 2019 02:02
But Not Yet.
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
Pity it was a new moon (all black, not seen) in 1066 on that day at Hastings. I should have known - it would have saved me mucking everything up! heehee.
August 11th, 2019 01:44
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
Pity it was a new moon (all black, not seen) in 1066 on that day at Hastings. I should have known - it would have saved me mucking everything up! heehee.
August 11th, 2019 01:44
Modesty Acrostic.
Neville said:
what a wonderful acrostic poem you have crafted here Goldie..
Not an easy thing to craft but it fits ya like a glove ..
August 10th, 2019 15:58
Neville said:
what a wonderful acrostic poem you have crafted here Goldie..
Not an easy thing to craft but it fits ya like a glove ..
August 10th, 2019 15:58
Modesty Acrostic.
FineB said:
Hello Goldfinch60,
What a wonderful write.
You\'ve captured the beauty of Modesty a beautiful quality in itself in a person.
Keep writing
FineB
August 10th, 2019 09:34
FineB said:
Hello Goldfinch60,
What a wonderful write.
You\'ve captured the beauty of Modesty a beautiful quality in itself in a person.
Keep writing
FineB
August 10th, 2019 09:34
Modesty Acrostic.
dusk arising said:
You define goodwill to mankind (and animals) here and modesty rules it all.
August 10th, 2019 02:55
dusk arising said:
You define goodwill to mankind (and animals) here and modesty rules it all.
August 10th, 2019 02:55
Modesty Acrostic.
Fay Slimm. said:
A good and needed acrostic on a rare word in these days of me-first. Thank you Andy.
August 10th, 2019 02:35
Fay Slimm. said:
A good and needed acrostic on a rare word in these days of me-first. Thank you Andy.
August 10th, 2019 02:35
Modesty Acrostic.
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
I read a similar story.
Woman says to Minister: \'I haven\'t sinned for some time now\'.
Minister: \'You must feel very proud of that\'.
Woman: \'Oh yes I do!\'(And so she sins in her immodest sort of pride. Doh!).
Not the pride of genuine appreciation, etc.
August 10th, 2019 01:48
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
I read a similar story.
Woman says to Minister: \'I haven\'t sinned for some time now\'.
Minister: \'You must feel very proud of that\'.
Woman: \'Oh yes I do!\'(And so she sins in her immodest sort of pride. Doh!).
Not the pride of genuine appreciation, etc.
August 10th, 2019 01:48
Modesty Acrostic.
Christina8 said:
An excellent write Andy!! Acrostics can be difficult to write....great job! Christina
August 10th, 2019 01:17
Christina8 said:
An excellent write Andy!! Acrostics can be difficult to write....great job! Christina
August 10th, 2019 01:17
Modesty Acrostic.
Michael Edwards said:
Great stuff Andy - if only everyone was as modest as me!!
August 10th, 2019 01:09
Michael Edwards said:
Great stuff Andy - if only everyone was as modest as me!!
August 10th, 2019 01:09
Modesty Acrostic.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Excellent Andy have a great weekend
August 10th, 2019 01:03
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Excellent Andy have a great weekend
August 10th, 2019 01:03
Walking Home.
Laura🌻 said:
Andy,
That last line gave me the heebie-jeebies!
Other than that, I enjoyed the read! LOL
My love to Joyce and to you!
~Laura~
P.S.-The 🎶clip🎶was delightful to listen to!
August 9th, 2019 23:19
Laura🌻 said:
Andy,
That last line gave me the heebie-jeebies!
Other than that, I enjoyed the read! LOL
My love to Joyce and to you!
~Laura~
P.S.-The 🎶clip🎶was delightful to listen to!
August 9th, 2019 23:19
Walking Home.
PoeticBiscuit said:
I love it! That last comedic line tying the pieces together, very well done.
August 9th, 2019 19:55
PoeticBiscuit said:
I love it! That last comedic line tying the pieces together, very well done.
August 9th, 2019 19:55
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