Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60



My Spirit.
dusk arising said:

Absolutely!!! You dont have to be a victim of some man made church/religion to know there is a \'god/force/enegy/overseer/guardians/positive force\' within and around us all.
Its awful to see christians claiming this is \'theirs\' as if it didn\'t exist until they created it.

June 23rd, 2019 09:01

My Spirit.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

Very, Very well expressed Andy
I have had a quiet period lately and this sums up a lot of my feelings too
BRAVO YOU!

June 23rd, 2019 07:37

My Spirit.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Thanks UNCLE ANDY : ANGELA here : nearly midnight in Auckland ! I guess BRIAN is in Church ! We both adore Classical Guitar and Brian plays well enough to convince My PAPA to let me be HIS WIFE ~ AMEN ALBINEZ is an awesoem Composer and JOHN WILLIAMS is one of His greatest interpreters. He is 86 and Brian met Him recently at a Concert in Essex ! His touch has still its Ancient Power ! Thanks for the POEM also ! We all have an inner Spirit that can be touched by the Hand of GOD ! The POWER of Your Inner Spirit is evidenced by you loving care of JOYCE 24/7 ! That is a great example & encouragement to each of US : AMEN. Please check our Collaboration on HELIUM which we know you will enjoy

BLESSINGS & LOVE to YOU & JOYCE
Yours as always ANGELA & BRIAN XOX

June 23rd, 2019 05:55

My Spirit.
Poetic Dan said:

Power and moving my friend! Only we know what\'s inside us and words just mess it up, but yours are very clear.

My Spirit is the force that created the Big Bang and that force, My Spirit, will be there to infinity and beyond.

This I will hang on my wall my friend

June 23rd, 2019 04:21

My Spirit.
Michael Edwards said:

Well expressed Andy

June 23rd, 2019 03:16

My Spirit.
orchidee said:

A fine write Gold. It is the person of the Holy Spirit living in hearts (and lives) of Christian believers, I believe. However great or small the flame may be, or great or small the flowing stream - both metaphors of the Holy Spirit. I would call Him (includes aspects of Her) God, though there are other gods (small g).

June 23rd, 2019 01:27

Modesty? Moi?
SerenWise said:

Very cute little poem

June 22nd, 2019 22:06

Word Choice.
FineB said:

Hello Goldfinch60.

An excellent write.

Thanks.

Its so interesting when one creates a poem its an interesting voyage of words that one takes in order to write the completed work.

Keep writing FineB

June 22nd, 2019 15:59

Word Choice.
dusk arising said:

Now look what you have done... was that the right way to start off? You had so many other choices but look what you have been and gone and done.

June 22nd, 2019 13:33

Wall of Power.
Suresh said:

The harder you hit, the faster it comes back, or gets lost forever

Nice post, then

June 22nd, 2019 08:45

Word Choice.
Suresh said:

supercalifragilisticexpialidocious

now take that, and good luck

June 22nd, 2019 07:36

Word Choice.
Michael Edwards said:

Take the other - an inspiring word for a poem.

June 22nd, 2019 01:55

Word Choice.
orchidee said:

A fine write Gold. Wish I had not uttered those words in 1066 - you know the ones!

June 22nd, 2019 01:10

Modesty? Moi?
marijoy said:

You might not be modest but at least you are sincere. We are what we think we are. It pays to believe in yourself. Nice one Gold.

June 21st, 2019 21:36

Modesty? Moi?
dusk arising said:

How far do you travel to find a milliner who can handle your requirements?

June 21st, 2019 11:59

Modesty? Moi?
Suresh said:

She does knoweth how to tickle your fancy, -
Who\'s your Daddy? Who\'s your Daddy? SHE IS.

Good one

June 21st, 2019 10:43

Modesty? Moi?
orchidee said:

Yes, and \'No one is perfect - except me\' we may say! The we need to eat humble pie. How do we make it?!

June 21st, 2019 02:11

Modesty? Moi?
Fay Slimm. said:

Am still chuckling at this read Andy - - Inner satisfaction coming to the fore in a loving relationship can raise a few laughs and thanks for sharing it my (modest) friend.

June 21st, 2019 02:02

Modesty? Moi?
Michael Edwards said:

Actually there\'s an underlying truth in this - be proud of who you are and what you have achieved BUT don\'t flaunt it.

June 21st, 2019 01:46

Modesty? Moi?
Neville said:

gotta laugh dont ya squire... nice to share too.......... N

June 21st, 2019 01:22

Life\'s Choices.
Neville said:

keep thinking sir.. you do it so eloquently & a credit to the species..

June 21st, 2019 00:42

Life\'s Choices.
Laura🌻 said:

Andy,

You’ve penned such wonderful words! You inspire us to always look at the bright side of life in spite of the problems we might have in our lives! Very inspirational! Thank you for sharing!

My love to Joyce and to you!

~Laura~🌻

P.S.- love the musical piece. That young lady looks like my daughter at one of her performances!

June 21st, 2019 00:09

Life\'s Choices.
Suresh said:

Do the best you know how, that\'s how one should chose

June 20th, 2019 10:09

Life\'s Choices.
marijoy said:

Our mind is a fine instrument if used on a good way. I like to stop my thinking to observe my thoughts. It is like putting your thoughts on the right direction. I would say it is for thinking with a purpose. Thanks for your poem because it made me think how to think.

June 20th, 2019 10:02

Life\'s Choices.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

THNAKS FOR ANOTHER GEM UNCLE ANDY ! Love the Nocturne one of my favourite pieces of soul soothing music ! Love the advice in your elegant ODE ! To deal with situations ~ AS THEY ARISE ~ and then to move ONWARDS & UPWARDS ~ We know it makes sense ! Angela have Faith in GOD and always optimistic ! WE have no regrets and deal with situations AS and WHEN they arrive. We have planned our WEDDING for next Year (if I can extract ANGELA for AUCKLAND ~ I have booked in for a WHOLE WEEK) in an Evangelical Church ~ Honeymoon in SEVILLA and a Blessing in the Catholic Cathedral ~ Buying or renting a House in Essex and starting a Family ~ AND THEN ~ WHO KNOWS ? Much could go wrong between now & next Summer ! Your testimony & example against adversity ~ Prepares us to face everything & anything ~ with *A Wing & A Prayer* AMEN

Blessings & Joy & Peace & Love for YOU & JOYCE
Yours as always ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡

June 20th, 2019 09:33

Life\'s Choices.
dusk arising said:

Nil illegitimus carborundum innit. Or from \'The Life of Brian\' - Always look on the bright side of life.

June 20th, 2019 07:52

Life\'s Choices.
Michael Edwards said:

Don\'t fight the things that come your way,
work with them - that\'s the better way.

June 20th, 2019 06:42

Life\'s Choices.
Poetic Dan said:

Yet that choice can be so hard if all you have seen is harsh world, but to live is to put meaning into something.

Great write

June 20th, 2019 02:34

Life\'s Choices.
orchidee said:

A fine write Gold. Is thinking dangerous? Or too much of it? Well, it was, when I thought too much in 1066, then said to Harold...….heehee.

June 20th, 2019 01:55

Life\'s Choices.
thelonelypoet said:

Nice

June 20th, 2019 01:41



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