Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
Punctuality Spurned.
Neville said:
I feel for you sir... nothing quite so frustrating as waiting for someone who is late.. except for maybe when you just know they are gonna be late... Your concluding two lines are fantastic and certainly resonate ..... Neville
April 16th, 2019 02:35
Neville said:
I feel for you sir... nothing quite so frustrating as waiting for someone who is late.. except for maybe when you just know they are gonna be late... Your concluding two lines are fantastic and certainly resonate ..... Neville
April 16th, 2019 02:35
Punctuality Spurned.
orchidee said:
A good write Gold. I suppose there is lonely in this. But it\'s also very annoying. We have taken the time to be \'on time\', only to have others bumbling about and being late.
Or they are there, but mess about in the background before calling you for your appointment.
Or worse, no-one telling you anything as to why there is a delay.
April 16th, 2019 02:01
orchidee said:
A good write Gold. I suppose there is lonely in this. But it\'s also very annoying. We have taken the time to be \'on time\', only to have others bumbling about and being late.
Or they are there, but mess about in the background before calling you for your appointment.
Or worse, no-one telling you anything as to why there is a delay.
April 16th, 2019 02:01
Where Are You God?
Poetic Dan said:
This was very controlled but powerful rant my friend.
I did shed a tear but won\'t we all in the end
Thank you for sharing this
April 15th, 2019 11:53
Poetic Dan said:
This was very controlled but powerful rant my friend.
I did shed a tear but won\'t we all in the end
Thank you for sharing this
April 15th, 2019 11:53
The Foggy, Foggy Dew.
Fay Slimm. said:
That number is now going round in my head now dear Goldy -- your words fit the music so well.
April 15th, 2019 10:21
Fay Slimm. said:
That number is now going round in my head now dear Goldy -- your words fit the music so well.
April 15th, 2019 10:21
The Foggy, Foggy Dew.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks UNCLE ANDY ~ Finished teaching for the day and just visiting MPS with my Mug o\' Char (which says BEST SCIENCE TEACHER EVER !) and a toasted bun. I have a Toaster & a Microwave in my Office ~ Tousjours Pret ! Thanks for a very nostalgic post ! My Maternal Grandparents had a wind-up gramaphone with thorn needles you had to sharpen ~ very hightech ! We used to sing ruder versions of the FOGGY FOGGY DEW @ Scout Camp along with Green Grow the rushes o and Gin Gan Goolie Goolie etc ! The good ones never die like ~ Sailing along in the crest of the Wave etc. Love your version of FOGGY thanks for sahring !
Blessings and Peace to YOU & JOYCE
Love in the SPIRIT ~ Brian & Angela 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
April 15th, 2019 10:02
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks UNCLE ANDY ~ Finished teaching for the day and just visiting MPS with my Mug o\' Char (which says BEST SCIENCE TEACHER EVER !) and a toasted bun. I have a Toaster & a Microwave in my Office ~ Tousjours Pret ! Thanks for a very nostalgic post ! My Maternal Grandparents had a wind-up gramaphone with thorn needles you had to sharpen ~ very hightech ! We used to sing ruder versions of the FOGGY FOGGY DEW @ Scout Camp along with Green Grow the rushes o and Gin Gan Goolie Goolie etc ! The good ones never die like ~ Sailing along in the crest of the Wave etc. Love your version of FOGGY thanks for sahring !
Blessings and Peace to YOU & JOYCE
Love in the SPIRIT ~ Brian & Angela 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
April 15th, 2019 10:02
The Foggy, Foggy Dew.
moordykspot2 said:
GoodWrite my friend Covers several aspects of emotion and song inspired. Don\'t know the song but the poem stands alone. Thank you
April 15th, 2019 06:42
moordykspot2 said:
GoodWrite my friend Covers several aspects of emotion and song inspired. Don\'t know the song but the poem stands alone. Thank you
April 15th, 2019 06:42
The Foggy, Foggy Dew.
Michael Edwards said:
Darn you Andy - now I won\'t be able to get the tune out of my mind all day long.
April 15th, 2019 02:55
Michael Edwards said:
Darn you Andy - now I won\'t be able to get the tune out of my mind all day long.
April 15th, 2019 02:55
The Foggy, Foggy Dew.
Neville said:
there are certain songs, or tunes that have a very special meaning and impact on us.. I think we each have our own personal The Foggy, Foggy Dew.... I know I do.... m gonna play it after breakfast... cheers my friend.. N
April 15th, 2019 01:58
Neville said:
there are certain songs, or tunes that have a very special meaning and impact on us.. I think we each have our own personal The Foggy, Foggy Dew.... I know I do.... m gonna play it after breakfast... cheers my friend.. N
April 15th, 2019 01:58
The Foggy, Foggy Dew.
dusk arising said:
I\'d never heard this before. It certainly reminded me of my fathers ever diminishing collection of brittle 78\'s.
Nowadays the nearest i get is watching recordings of Foggy, Compo and Clegg getting up to their antics in \'Last of the summer wine\' of which i have become quite a fan.
April 15th, 2019 01:32
dusk arising said:
I\'d never heard this before. It certainly reminded me of my fathers ever diminishing collection of brittle 78\'s.
Nowadays the nearest i get is watching recordings of Foggy, Compo and Clegg getting up to their antics in \'Last of the summer wine\' of which i have become quite a fan.
April 15th, 2019 01:32
Slither Moon.
dusk arising said:
As we age and wisdom plays a sweeter tune, the word \'love\' expands to encompass so much more than we ever imagined. Love teaches love.
April 15th, 2019 00:13
dusk arising said:
As we age and wisdom plays a sweeter tune, the word \'love\' expands to encompass so much more than we ever imagined. Love teaches love.
April 15th, 2019 00:13
Slither Moon.
moordykspot2 said:
A beautiful Vision is the moon I never tire of viewing it I wonder as you wonder . Your phrasework consise full of unasked question. Great read thank you
April 14th, 2019 08:39
moordykspot2 said:
A beautiful Vision is the moon I never tire of viewing it I wonder as you wonder . Your phrasework consise full of unasked question. Great read thank you
April 14th, 2019 08:39
Slither Moon.
Michael Edwards said:
The moon sure has a magical quality - fine write Andy.
April 14th, 2019 08:11
Michael Edwards said:
The moon sure has a magical quality - fine write Andy.
April 14th, 2019 08:11
Slither Moon.
Suresh said:
Yes MOONSHINE does influence all of us, leaves us giddy as well
April 14th, 2019 02:48
Suresh said:
Yes MOONSHINE does influence all of us, leaves us giddy as well
April 14th, 2019 02:48
Slither Moon.
orchidee said:
I don\'t agree with any spooky or \'magnetic\' influences, that the moon may have on us. But maybe it\'s some picture of how life is, sometimes anyway, as it \'waxes and wanes\' as a hymn says.
It goes in a cycle - smaller, gradually to a new moon (shown as black dot in diaries,etc), then enlarges to full moon (shown as white circle), and so on again and again.
April 14th, 2019 02:30
orchidee said:
I don\'t agree with any spooky or \'magnetic\' influences, that the moon may have on us. But maybe it\'s some picture of how life is, sometimes anyway, as it \'waxes and wanes\' as a hymn says.
It goes in a cycle - smaller, gradually to a new moon (shown as black dot in diaries,etc), then enlarges to full moon (shown as white circle), and so on again and again.
April 14th, 2019 02:30
Slither Moon.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD MORNING UNCLE ANDY : Love Beethovens Moonlight one of the most played peices on Classic FM which I have on my bedside radio : when Im in the UK ! Its one of the few classical pieces I can play correctly on Piano because it is so so beautifully slow ! Thanks for your gentle Poem and the concept ! The influence that Sister Moon has on our Love Life is both Mystery & History. My senses are heightend this week because on Saturday (after eight months) BRIAN & I will be TOGETHER AGAIN (see Todays Poem !) AMEN !
Blessings & Joy to you BOTH
Its 8pm Sunday Evening here so I have enjoyed PALM SUNDAY
Much Love to you BOTH : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
April 14th, 2019 01:55
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD MORNING UNCLE ANDY : Love Beethovens Moonlight one of the most played peices on Classic FM which I have on my bedside radio : when Im in the UK ! Its one of the few classical pieces I can play correctly on Piano because it is so so beautifully slow ! Thanks for your gentle Poem and the concept ! The influence that Sister Moon has on our Love Life is both Mystery & History. My senses are heightend this week because on Saturday (after eight months) BRIAN & I will be TOGETHER AGAIN (see Todays Poem !) AMEN !
Blessings & Joy to you BOTH
Its 8pm Sunday Evening here so I have enjoyed PALM SUNDAY
Much Love to you BOTH : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
April 14th, 2019 01:55
Where Are You God?
Suresh said:
your pain, just like \'dusk arising\' and mine in case of my daughter, are all very personal.
I have offered mine for my daughters well being, but there are no takers.
I have challenged HIM to a game of chance, but all I can hear is HIS thunderous laughter
And then I realize is unfair of me to additionally burden HIM with my pain as well, and so I must silently go it alone.
And so my friend, I wish that you and all her loved ones may find the strength to comfort her and that a cure may be found soon to cure her.
April 13th, 2019 20:00
Suresh said:
your pain, just like \'dusk arising\' and mine in case of my daughter, are all very personal.
I have offered mine for my daughters well being, but there are no takers.
I have challenged HIM to a game of chance, but all I can hear is HIS thunderous laughter
And then I realize is unfair of me to additionally burden HIM with my pain as well, and so I must silently go it alone.
And so my friend, I wish that you and all her loved ones may find the strength to comfort her and that a cure may be found soon to cure her.
April 13th, 2019 20:00
Where Are You God?
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for caring & sharing Uncle ANDY ~ We pray for you and Your Beloved Joyce every Day that you will both have PEACE of MIND. When I face similar situations with older freinds of my Parents who were one Stalwarts for the Lord ~ Teachers ~ Pastors ~ Missionaries etc ~ But now unable to comprehend and unable to Pary ~ but in a Paradoxical Way ~ LOVE TO BE PRAYED WITH & FOR ~ Amen. Joyce is still the Lovely & Loving Girl you married and GOD does not change and our Faith in Him should never waver. As CHRISTIANS we all have our Cross to BEAR bu yours (and Joyce\'s) is a particularly difficult one 24/7. As I have said before the Agony & Ecstasy in your POEMS gives Angela & I the Courage and Spiritual Strength to face together~ with GOD ~ whatever fate might throw at us ~ todays Poem will help us when We too face lifes tempests.
Every Blessing & Love to you both
Thank you for being you & baring & sharing your heart !
Love & Peace of mind ~ BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
April 13th, 2019 08:54
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for caring & sharing Uncle ANDY ~ We pray for you and Your Beloved Joyce every Day that you will both have PEACE of MIND. When I face similar situations with older freinds of my Parents who were one Stalwarts for the Lord ~ Teachers ~ Pastors ~ Missionaries etc ~ But now unable to comprehend and unable to Pary ~ but in a Paradoxical Way ~ LOVE TO BE PRAYED WITH & FOR ~ Amen. Joyce is still the Lovely & Loving Girl you married and GOD does not change and our Faith in Him should never waver. As CHRISTIANS we all have our Cross to BEAR bu yours (and Joyce\'s) is a particularly difficult one 24/7. As I have said before the Agony & Ecstasy in your POEMS gives Angela & I the Courage and Spiritual Strength to face together~ with GOD ~ whatever fate might throw at us ~ todays Poem will help us when We too face lifes tempests.
Every Blessing & Love to you both
Thank you for being you & baring & sharing your heart !
Love & Peace of mind ~ BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
April 13th, 2019 08:54
Where Are You God?
Neville said:
If I could pop over and give you a man hug, I would do just that my friend...
This is one of the most powerful and emotionally charged pleas I have read in a very long time...and penned so cleverly too...
I shall refine my embu later and include both you and your dear wife in it and my thoughts..... Neville
April 13th, 2019 03:17
Neville said:
If I could pop over and give you a man hug, I would do just that my friend...
This is one of the most powerful and emotionally charged pleas I have read in a very long time...and penned so cleverly too...
I shall refine my embu later and include both you and your dear wife in it and my thoughts..... Neville
April 13th, 2019 03:17
Where Are You God?
Michael Edwards said:
Super comment from Tepo - I find it so hard to imagine the despair and anguish in your circumstances for someone who believes - a real test to the faith.
April 13th, 2019 02:08
Michael Edwards said:
Super comment from Tepo - I find it so hard to imagine the despair and anguish in your circumstances for someone who believes - a real test to the faith.
April 13th, 2019 02:08
Where Are You God?
orchidee said:
If this helps at all, the Psalmists also have rants at God, of sorts, if contained within certain language. They are not all praisey Psalms.
Somehow they (David did not write ALL the Psalms) find a way through, even in Old Testament days. It\'s said we have much more in New Testament days
Of course it\'s OK to believe, for who seem to \'have it all together\', no suffering, etc.
April 13th, 2019 02:07
orchidee said:
If this helps at all, the Psalmists also have rants at God, of sorts, if contained within certain language. They are not all praisey Psalms.
Somehow they (David did not write ALL the Psalms) find a way through, even in Old Testament days. It\'s said we have much more in New Testament days
Of course it\'s OK to believe, for who seem to \'have it all together\', no suffering, etc.
April 13th, 2019 02:07
Where Are You God?
dusk arising said:
This is terrible for you. An awful cry out of anger and disappointment.
Years ago i found myself doing a similar thing for my beautiful daughter who was born severely mentally handicapped and autistic. My rant was heartfelt and my faith in a benevolent god died.
Nowadays i hold a spiritual faith similar to your own.
More and more are coming to realise that the god of christianity is not the nice guy we were taught about and the church itself is a questionable establishment.
Heartfelt sympathy for you in this painful part of your life Goldfinch.
April 13th, 2019 01:05
dusk arising said:
This is terrible for you. An awful cry out of anger and disappointment.
Years ago i found myself doing a similar thing for my beautiful daughter who was born severely mentally handicapped and autistic. My rant was heartfelt and my faith in a benevolent god died.
Nowadays i hold a spiritual faith similar to your own.
More and more are coming to realise that the god of christianity is not the nice guy we were taught about and the church itself is a questionable establishment.
Heartfelt sympathy for you in this painful part of your life Goldfinch.
April 13th, 2019 01:05
Something Missing.
MendedFences27 said:
GF60 you\'re making me hungry. Maybe wife and I will hit a breakfast restaurant,tomorrow for a treat. Thanks for wetting my appetite. Nice poem. - Phil A.
April 12th, 2019 14:50
MendedFences27 said:
GF60 you\'re making me hungry. Maybe wife and I will hit a breakfast restaurant,tomorrow for a treat. Thanks for wetting my appetite. Nice poem. - Phil A.
April 12th, 2019 14:50
Something Missing.
Suresh said:
I so often reminise about my days at Dacorum College, in Hemel Hempstead, Hertfordshire, and the cottage I rented in the village of Bovingdon, for that period.
I love global cuisine - from Japan to Hawaii, and I love to cook, but that\'s a tentacle for another story.
I can still smell what I often had with Mrs. Sharpe, my landlady - the main house was just across the garden.
Bacon cooked in lard, and then fried toast, and who can forget the English sausage (still love it).
Somehow don\'t remember the black pudding though.
Then on my million trips to London, always enjoyed the English sausage at the intercontinental, at Hyde Park.
Thnx for taking me there.
April 12th, 2019 10:59
Suresh said:
I so often reminise about my days at Dacorum College, in Hemel Hempstead, Hertfordshire, and the cottage I rented in the village of Bovingdon, for that period.
I love global cuisine - from Japan to Hawaii, and I love to cook, but that\'s a tentacle for another story.
I can still smell what I often had with Mrs. Sharpe, my landlady - the main house was just across the garden.
Bacon cooked in lard, and then fried toast, and who can forget the English sausage (still love it).
Somehow don\'t remember the black pudding though.
Then on my million trips to London, always enjoyed the English sausage at the intercontinental, at Hyde Park.
Thnx for taking me there.
April 12th, 2019 10:59
Something Missing.
dusk arising said:
Since my op last year i would not be able to eat a full english but i do recall the pleasure of breakfasting \'out\', the meals arrival and consumption.
Truly happy food to start the day off right.
April 12th, 2019 10:51
dusk arising said:
Since my op last year i would not be able to eat a full english but i do recall the pleasure of breakfasting \'out\', the meals arrival and consumption.
Truly happy food to start the day off right.
April 12th, 2019 10:51
Something Missing.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
WOW UNCLE ANDY ~ Highbrow today WAGNER & The VALKARIES ~ awesome ! Loved it especially Den Grossen Frauen ! Im back from teh Field Trip ! We did have BLACK PUDDING with Full English @ the Hostel so there is a GOD. Loved the Poem its not the abundance of the things we have that makes us satisfied it is the ONE thing that is missing (in this case BP) that makes us SAD. That is a Principle in so many walks of life ~ and even to my mind there is a sense of \"incompletness\" in the 21st C ~ English Mustard ~ HP Sauce ~ Lump Sugar ~ Porrige ~ Leaf Tea ~ Suet Puddings ~ Thick Toast ~ Full Cream Milk & Tangerines that peel easily and taste sweet & Stoneless Dates in long thin Boxes @ Christmas. At 35 I must be getting middle-aged and nostalgic for the 20th C ! When I moved in Ultra Evangelical Circles (Open Bretheren) many of the Elders would not eat BLACK PUDDING because it contained BLOOD (Acts 15 v 29) !
Thanks for your POST it stirred memories of BP Butties in Liverpool !
Blessings & much JOY to You and JOYCE
Love in the Spirit BRIAN & ANGELA (4pm ~ Sleeping !) 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
April 12th, 2019 09:26
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
WOW UNCLE ANDY ~ Highbrow today WAGNER & The VALKARIES ~ awesome ! Loved it especially Den Grossen Frauen ! Im back from teh Field Trip ! We did have BLACK PUDDING with Full English @ the Hostel so there is a GOD. Loved the Poem its not the abundance of the things we have that makes us satisfied it is the ONE thing that is missing (in this case BP) that makes us SAD. That is a Principle in so many walks of life ~ and even to my mind there is a sense of \"incompletness\" in the 21st C ~ English Mustard ~ HP Sauce ~ Lump Sugar ~ Porrige ~ Leaf Tea ~ Suet Puddings ~ Thick Toast ~ Full Cream Milk & Tangerines that peel easily and taste sweet & Stoneless Dates in long thin Boxes @ Christmas. At 35 I must be getting middle-aged and nostalgic for the 20th C ! When I moved in Ultra Evangelical Circles (Open Bretheren) many of the Elders would not eat BLACK PUDDING because it contained BLOOD (Acts 15 v 29) !
Thanks for your POST it stirred memories of BP Butties in Liverpool !
Blessings & much JOY to You and JOYCE
Love in the Spirit BRIAN & ANGELA (4pm ~ Sleeping !) 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
April 12th, 2019 09:26
Something Missing.
Poetic Dan said:
Thank you for sharing although the ends not my cuppa tea!
But when I was told to eat it, ketchup was a must!
April 12th, 2019 05:23
Poetic Dan said:
Thank you for sharing although the ends not my cuppa tea!
But when I was told to eat it, ketchup was a must!
April 12th, 2019 05:23
Something Missing.
moordykspot2 said:
And Quite right too must keep the hotel staff on their toes An enjoyable poem with humerous overtones thankyou
April 12th, 2019 05:22
moordykspot2 said:
And Quite right too must keep the hotel staff on their toes An enjoyable poem with humerous overtones thankyou
April 12th, 2019 05:22
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