Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60



Reuben had a Brother.
Neville said:

what a lovely gift for those boys, their parents and of course all those of us who visit this page.... Neville

August 6th, 2019 03:33

Reuben had a Brother.
orchidee said:

A lovely tribute Gold.

August 6th, 2019 01:27

Dreamworld Acrostic.
Christina8 said:

An acrostic well done, sir! wonderful read.

August 5th, 2019 21:27

Dreamworld Acrostic.
dusk arising said:

You\'ve lived through many changes and now, relaxed, reflective, rejuvenated (?) a stroll in dreamland... let it take you where it will....
.... where\'s the harm in it - but don\'t fall in the river.

August 5th, 2019 12:42

Dreamworld Acrostic.
PoeticBiscuit said:

Sometimes we just have to disappear into our own dreamworld just to get away for a bit!

August 5th, 2019 11:41

Dreamworld Acrostic.
Suresh said:

I often get lost in my dreamworlds, and wish to never return, but reality is a b****.
Thnx for taking me on this ride

August 5th, 2019 10:51

Dreamworld Acrostic.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Thanks UNCLE ANDY (Brian here) we all seem to be Dreaming today ! You in to Dreamland ~ Katie into Neverland ~ Fay into Loveland ~ Christina into Autumnland and US into Tenderland ! Still in our experience People who cease to Dream ~ also cease to Live ! Thanks for sharing BACH great Piece great Pianist ! Very smooth seamless ACROSTIC ~ AMEN !

Blessings & Peace to You & Joyce
Love ANGELA & BRIAN ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก

August 5th, 2019 09:11

Dreamworld Acrostic.
FineB said:

Hello Goldfinch60,

Thanks for this great mystical write into Dreamworld!

Keep writing
FineB


August 5th, 2019 08:22

Dreamworld Acrostic.
Fay Slimm. said:

Your steps to wonder come through every line dear Andy -- a lovely read.

August 5th, 2019 02:31

Dreamworld Acrostic.
Neville said:

these dont get any better sir... well bloomin done ........ N

August 5th, 2019 02:23

Dreamworld Acrostic.
orchidee said:

I suspect it\'s only partly a dreamworld, and you\'re near to God still, seeing His works in His creation - and He near to you too :).

August 5th, 2019 01:34

Health and Stupidity.
Christina8 said:

I know. It\'s about as bright as listing the nutritional contents on a bottle of water. They think we\'re stupid.

August 4th, 2019 13:57

Health and Stupidity.
dusk arising said:

And on the side of a bus it said \"may contain people\".
But the funniest one i heard about was - at the top of an Irish ladder it says \"stop\".
HASAWA health and safety at work act. I once declined the opportunity to employ an apprentice after he told me his dad was a health and safety inspector and thats true.

August 4th, 2019 08:09

Health and Stupidity.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Thanks for sharing UNCLE ANDY - Angela here ! Loved the Pavoroti Clip very droll ! Brian is a very ample Man - Well proportioned and I like that in a MAN ! Loved the POEM and I agree we have gone H & S Mad. Things are a bit more normal in NZ. When I am massaging I need my bare hand because the Patients Texture speaks to my Fingers - Plastic gloves have NO TOUCH SENSORS ! When I was doing Biochemical Lab Work - There was a 10 page H & S document on H2O ! C\'est La Vie d\'H & S !

Blessings & Peace to YOU & JOYCE
Love ANGELA & BRIAN ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก

August 4th, 2019 04:02

Health and Stupidity.
Neville said:

Funny old world and infuriating at times.....

I know exactly where you are coming from with this my friend

..................................... N :)


August 4th, 2019 03:30

Health and Stupidity.
Michael Edwards said:

Loved this one. Had an experience at a dinner in our village hall recently. Digressing a bit but we started stacking the tables onto the trolleys as I\'ve been doing for over 10 years. . There are two types of tables and each have their own trolley BUT any table fits any trolley - the important thing is to put them away at the end of the function. I was putting them on the trolleys when someone came to me and very officiously told me I was doing it wrong and it really matters to get them right as they were designed to hold specific tables. I\'m afraid I responded by saying it really doesn\'t matter unless you suffer from OCD. A real jobs-worth.

August 4th, 2019 02:35

Health and Stupidity.
orchidee said:

There was a fun column in a paper, entitled \'DBO\' - \'Department of the B******* Obvious!\' (rhymes with \'seeding\').

August 4th, 2019 01:46

Health and Stupidity.
orchidee said:

Oohh, did it contain nuts, or fish? Maybe not, as it said \'MAY contain.....\'?! Best to be sure about these things. lol.
I run a whisky-making factory. The labels say \'may contain water\'. Actually, they do contain 95% water! heehee.

August 4th, 2019 01:44

Mary Had a Little Lamb 12
Suresh said:

The lamb was still on training wheels!

August 3rd, 2019 19:16

At One With Nature.
FineB said:

Hello Goldfinch60.

A great write.

The beauty of nature has truly been captured by you.

Keep writing FineB



August 3rd, 2019 10:43

Mary Had a Little Lamb 12
dusk arising said:

Mary had another lamb
I thought i\'d keep this random
And everywhere that Mary went
It joined her on her tandem

Good to have a bit of fun on here my freind.

August 3rd, 2019 07:06

Mary Had a Little Lamb 12
Poetic Dan said:

Little giggle indeed! Thank you

August 3rd, 2019 04:00

Mary Had a Little Lamb 12
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Oooooo UNCLE ANDY - ANGELA here (9pm Saturday another great day sailing in the Bay !) For me this was a triple whammy ! My fave Singer (NKC) Comedian (CC) and Language (Portugese - so so romantic !) Loved the Ditty too ! We have many Poems about Lambs in NZ !

Blessings & Peace to YOU & JOYCE
Yours as always ANGELA ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿงก๐Ÿงก๐Ÿงก๐Ÿงก

August 3rd, 2019 03:58

Mary Had a Little Lamb 12
Michael Edwards said:

I don\'t ride a bike - well not these days - you wouldn\'t get me wearing one of those silly looking helmets - I prefer the ones I wore in 1066.

August 3rd, 2019 03:01

Mary Had a Little Lamb 12
Neville said:

short and sweet and what\'s more, to the point.... it gave me a big smile , first thing..... Neville

August 3rd, 2019 01:50

Mary Had a Little Lamb 12
orchidee said:

Oh lol, good write Gold, and not a swoony tale of Mary and her lamb!

August 3rd, 2019 01:31

At One With Nature.
moordykspot2 said:

Superb Writing my friend as you know I love nature and this verse is at the top of the tree. Thank you

August 2nd, 2019 13:45

At One With Nature.
Christina8 said:

What a wonderful scene you painted with your words. I am jealous you went fishing and I didn\'t! lol Glad you got to go!!

August 2nd, 2019 13:28

At One With Nature.
Fay Slimm. said:

Great to know you have a chance to cast again Andy - -- whether a fish bites or not all that glory there will be enough whenever you walk round the lake again.

August 2nd, 2019 07:27

At One With Nature.
dusk arising said:

Envious of your finding such places.

August 2nd, 2019 07:15



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