Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60



Have the Aliens Landed?
WriteBeLight said:

That is so very true Goldfinch. I was on a cruise boat years ago that allowed gambling. It would sail out for a few miles and people could then gamble in the casino. I was not in the casino, but topside (one of two passengers, there) and the others below missed the most beautiful sunset ever! I will never forget that. So, mobile devices are like gambling in a way ... very addictive. And, some are gambling with their lives, as they are in danger of just walking right out into traffic. Your words are spot on!

May 6th, 2017 06:37

Have the Aliens Landed?
Fay Slimm. said:

Ha ha - - a wonderful comparison - talking it seems to themselves I have thought the same too - Aliens at least to my way of life - great read..

May 6th, 2017 04:44

Have the Aliens Landed?
Michael Edwards said:

There are such great feats of architure all around us if we only look up, there is beautiful bird song to be heard, there are meals to be enjoyed and celebrated, there are people to talk to, there is the wonder of nature. They must be aliens missing out on all this with their heads buried in their gadgets listening to what some refer to as music.

May 6th, 2017 02:20

Have the Aliens Landed?
Rajkumar said:

A nice comparison of us as aliens..I liked it gold

May 6th, 2017 01:59

Have the Aliens Landed?
orchidee said:

I suppose it\'s needed in this technological age, but not ALL the time. A fine write. G. Did they have such things in 1066?!

May 6th, 2017 01:28

Remembering Natures Wonder.
Goldfinch60 said:

My imagination just cannot conceive what it will be like.

May 5th, 2017 14:50

Remembering Natures Wonder.
swingline said:

Can you even imagine the gift of Heaven and what it will be . Such memories prepare you .

May 5th, 2017 14:40

Remembering Natures Wonder.
Michael Edwards said:

Just returned from a cross country walk with my wife - scenes such as this - magical.

May 5th, 2017 10:54

Remembering Natures Wonder.
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed. I love living on a farm, because of Nature is all around me

May 5th, 2017 10:30

Remembering Natures Wonder.
orchidee said:

A fine write. I suppose it\'s not only the \'good old days\'. We can have \'good present days\' or times, or even moments, if they may seem more fewer, and far and between now. Though we might have many good days and times still, even now.


May 5th, 2017 02:21

Raindrop.
swingline said:

A gentle rain is so soothing to everything it touches .

May 4th, 2017 05:17

Raindrop.
kevin browne said:

keep those rippling laughters flowing through your life and your beautiful poetry. good score on this one.

May 4th, 2017 04:31

Raindrop.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks ANDY ~ \"GOD touched the CLOUDS formed the RAIN from the RAIN formed the SEA ~ from the SEA formed the CLOUDS to give us life abundantly !\" Planet Earth is a very wet Planet and the abundance of liquid water (H2O) is one of the main reasons it is a living planet. The ambient temperature of 16C and the energy of the Sun drives the Water Cycle which is an important design factor to keep Planet Earth functional & fertile. Thanks for your anthropomorphic poem love it ! Please check my Numbers Poem & Fruit Fusion ~ BRIAN

May 4th, 2017 04:21

Raindrop.
orchidee said:

A fine write. Sounds like King Solomon - some of his words. he said, though not his exact words, that life goes on in cycles. I suppose he only had an Old Testament / Old Covenant view, as he called everything vanity - things going round in circles!
Yet the symbol for infinity has no beginning or end - that sideways thingy like an \'8\'. And we\'re both very old - of an infinite age. Since 1066 anyway! heehee.

May 4th, 2017 02:24

Raindrop.
Myjoyisfull79 said:

Beautifully detailed! as I read, the visual played in my mind

May 4th, 2017 01:46

Island of Acceptance.
Jane Frye said:

A fine read. Thank you.

May 3rd, 2017 22:00

Jazz was Born.
Jane Frye said:

Like your style. Good subject too.

May 3rd, 2017 21:59

Island of Acceptance.
Jane Frye said:

A fine read. Thank you.

May 3rd, 2017 21:50

Island of Acceptance.
WriteBeLight said:

Like the metaphor seeing something that looks promising, but as you get closer the wrinkles appear and it is not for you :)

May 3rd, 2017 15:52

Island of Acceptance.
Goldfinch60 said:

Thank you for your comments O, you are so right.

May 3rd, 2017 11:53

Island of Acceptance.
Michael Edwards said:

A dream voyage to a magical destination only found in dreams - now there\'s a poem starter for ten - well expressed -

May 3rd, 2017 04:10

Island of Acceptance.
swingline said:

Let your search not be limited to this world . Just a tiny speck of the cosmos . Reach for the stars as we are already stardust once removed from home .

May 3rd, 2017 01:58

Island of Acceptance.
orchidee said:

Erm, will you have to sail around the world to find it? And will you find it on the trip round the world? A fine write.

May 3rd, 2017 01:53

Covenant Arc.
Michael Edwards said:

Yet another great write.

May 2nd, 2017 11:42

Covenant Arc.
Goldfinch60 said:

Thanks Orchi. I saw it yesterday and saw the complete arc which is very unusual.

May 2nd, 2017 09:09

Covenant Arc.
orchidee said:

Ahh, you saw a rainbow - just when I was recently including it in one of my poems! A fine write!

May 2nd, 2017 08:28

Covenant Arc.
Tony36 said:

Great write

May 2nd, 2017 07:01

Jazz was Born.
Mandi said:

I Love it ❤

May 2nd, 2017 03:11

Covenant Arc.
felio123 said:

Thank you for this

May 2nd, 2017 02:01

Walking Into The Wood.
Fay Slimm. said:

A lovely read and so pleased you have a wood to walk in - such a magical place is found among trees.

May 1st, 2017 11:58



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