Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60



Stop and Look Back.
Michael Edwards said:

So well put - yes appreciate the now and the view from where you are but always make sure there are rungs to be climbed - the moment you stop looking forward there can be no enjoyment left in life.

April 20th, 2017 02:10

Stop and Look Back.
orchidee said:

With pushing on, etc, there\'s the ridiculous matter of \'giving 110% - always impossible of course!

April 20th, 2017 01:44

Stop and Look Back.
orchidee said:

As long as I\'m not up a literal ladder. I would get vertigo and fall off if I looked back then! Good write.

April 20th, 2017 01:42

False Politicians.
Goldfinch60 said:

Thank you Diamond, the last two lines say it all.

April 19th, 2017 11:40

False Politicians.
WriteBeLight said:

I agree with the lips moving line. So very true!

April 19th, 2017 05:28

False Politicians.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WOW ANDY ~ You are cross this Morning ~ especially with MOTHER THERESA ! I am not a TORY ~ BUT ~ I believe she is the best POLITICIAN to lead us out of EUROPE (with a minimum of fuss) and she is worth following ! You know more about the DAUGHTERS of EVE than I do ~ but in my (limited) book she didn\'t LIE ~ she just changed her mind ~ which is every Lady\'s prerogative. She\'s still at the top of my Prayer List ~ is she still at the top of yours ? BLESSINGS ~ Brother BRIAN

April 19th, 2017 02:16

False Politicians.
orchidee said:

I thought the PM was a fiery character. But does not seem as tough as Maggie was. Maybe we\'ll see, whoever we end up with.

April 19th, 2017 01:48

False Politicians.
Michael Edwards said:

Gave me a smile but I must say am pleased she has called it - I might be in the minority on this one but whatever your views on Brexit the country voted and its now up to us to get the best deal we possibly can. Brexit is a cross party issue and it has been grieving me that the other parties instead of working with the Government to achieve the best deal have been constantly sniping and bitching effectively undermining the process. Lets hope that a definitive result will enable the PM (whoever that is) to negotiate from a position of strength rather than weakness as is the current case.

April 19th, 2017 01:27

Feathers.
Goldfinch60 said:

Thank you WBL.

April 18th, 2017 12:38

Feathers.
WriteBeLight said:

Nice little write Goldfinch!

April 18th, 2017 11:49

Feathers.
Goldfinch60 said:

Thank you WW.

April 18th, 2017 11:02

Feathers.
willyweed said:

nice style to this one GF.

April 18th, 2017 10:30

Feathers.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks ANDY ~ A quintisensial quatrain and a perfect picture ~ thanks. If you voice be silences ~ then let you quill quiver with indignation ! BRIAN

April 18th, 2017 04:03

Feathers.
Michael Edwards said:

Yes I enjoyed this - well written.

April 18th, 2017 02:37

Feathers.
Garry said:

Well done. A fine example of the classic 4-liner. A much underated form. Certainly not enough of them on MPS.
Short, vivid and creates an image in very few words.

April 18th, 2017 02:32

Feathers.
orchidee said:

Oh yes, we both had them at school, didn\'t we, millions of years ago? Well, around 1066 anyway. Did you get a quill from that pterodactyl?! Good write.

April 18th, 2017 01:42

Gnossienne.
willyweed said:

sounds like beautiful music to me, nice write goldfinch.

April 17th, 2017 08:56

Gnossienne.
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed Great write

April 17th, 2017 07:42

Gnossienne.
Michael Edwards said:

He certainly wrote some really superb piano pieces sadly much of his work overlooked by his famous Gymnopedie - well complemented by your verse.

April 17th, 2017 02:51

Gnossienne.
orchidee said:

A fine write.

April 17th, 2017 01:57

Finding Words.
P.H.Rose said:

Very well done GF60
Perfect words....

April 16th, 2017 15:42

Finding Words.
Goldfinch60 said:

Thank you Diamond, much appreciated.

April 16th, 2017 12:04

Finding Words.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Very true BROTHER in the end the PEN (or PC) is much mightier than the SWORD ! What is poetry ? Just WORDS ~ but WORDS coined an arranged by the mind of the POET. What is the BIBLE ? Just words but words arranged by the mind of GOD ~ AMEN ~ Your Friend BRIAN

April 16th, 2017 07:08

Finding Words.
WriteBeLight said:

Words are wonderful, especially verbs! Great poetry Goldfinch!

April 16th, 2017 05:55

Finding Words.
SadInterior said:

Man, wish I could be as good as a poet as you. great job

April 16th, 2017 02:29

Finding Words.
SadInterior said:

Man, Wish I could be as good as a poet as you

April 16th, 2017 02:29

Finding Words.
orchidee said:

I dunno what words I may say after me sherries! oohhh heehee.

April 16th, 2017 01:40

Finding Words.
orchidee said:

Good write. Not to deny the value of words, though I suppose there\'s times too when we may have no words, and \'just being there\' can be enough.

April 16th, 2017 01:39

Finding Words.
SheWasTheSun said:

Your words are powerful. Love this

April 16th, 2017 01:32

The Roar of Silence.
Goldfinch60 said:

Thank you Brian, silence can be so special, in our Good Friday service people were remarking on how moving the periods of silence were during the service.

April 15th, 2017 13:18



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