Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
Vacancies.
Michael Edwards said:
Yes it ended up dark after starting out light - quite a read - and love the format - yes I really enjoyed it
March 8th, 2017 03:19
Michael Edwards said:
Yes it ended up dark after starting out light - quite a read - and love the format - yes I really enjoyed it
March 8th, 2017 03:19
Morpheus Sings.
Augustus said:
Cavitina is \"small simple song in Italian\". Did not know that . Said so when I looked it up. I loved the guitar version on YouTube. I sang tenor for many years in choirs so can relate to how that would be inspiring. Well done.
March 7th, 2017 19:14
Augustus said:
Cavitina is \"small simple song in Italian\". Did not know that . Said so when I looked it up. I loved the guitar version on YouTube. I sang tenor for many years in choirs so can relate to how that would be inspiring. Well done.
March 7th, 2017 19:14
Morpheus Sings.
willyweed said:
beautiful music to sooth the beast in all , now I guess I do sound like a cat in heat when I sing and play? nice piece golden!
March 7th, 2017 12:03
willyweed said:
beautiful music to sooth the beast in all , now I guess I do sound like a cat in heat when I sing and play? nice piece golden!
March 7th, 2017 12:03
Dementia - Senryu
Augustus said:
Great emotional write, a slipping that is so hard to stop. Don\'t forget to take care of yourself. Hugs.
March 6th, 2017 12:32
Augustus said:
Great emotional write, a slipping that is so hard to stop. Don\'t forget to take care of yourself. Hugs.
March 6th, 2017 12:32
Dementia - Senryu
Tony36 said:
Well written and expressed in such few words. Great write
March 6th, 2017 08:47
Tony36 said:
Well written and expressed in such few words. Great write
March 6th, 2017 08:47
Dementia - Senryu
WriteBeLight said:
Yes, unfortunately true and poignant. I wish her and you the best.
March 6th, 2017 06:38
WriteBeLight said:
Yes, unfortunately true and poignant. I wish her and you the best.
March 6th, 2017 06:38
Dementia - Senryu
willyweed said:
This brings much sadness to my heart & soul I am sorry! ww
March 6th, 2017 05:45
willyweed said:
This brings much sadness to my heart & soul I am sorry! ww
March 6th, 2017 05:45
Dementia - Senryu
Michael Edwards said:
So sorry to hear about your wife - this is such a great Senyu written with such feeling.
March 6th, 2017 03:04
Michael Edwards said:
So sorry to hear about your wife - this is such a great Senyu written with such feeling.
March 6th, 2017 03:04
Face.
willyweed said:
I guess I\'ll have to face it this is wonderful, life is as a face an attitude for joy or sorrow we choose our own medicine. great one here or bloody good ! WW
March 5th, 2017 10:45
willyweed said:
I guess I\'ll have to face it this is wonderful, life is as a face an attitude for joy or sorrow we choose our own medicine. great one here or bloody good ! WW
March 5th, 2017 10:45
Face.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FRIEND ~ For a lovely reminder about how much our faces reveal our inner moods and attitudes. When Moses came down from Mount Sinai after meeting God ~ his face shone like the face of an Angel ! Moses did not know it but the people did ! I greet people every Sunday on the way OUT of Church and they ALWAYS look much happier than when they went in ! INNER happiness is expressed by OUTER JOY ~ AMEN ! Yours BRIAN
March 5th, 2017 04:41
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FRIEND ~ For a lovely reminder about how much our faces reveal our inner moods and attitudes. When Moses came down from Mount Sinai after meeting God ~ his face shone like the face of an Angel ! Moses did not know it but the people did ! I greet people every Sunday on the way OUT of Church and they ALWAYS look much happier than when they went in ! INNER happiness is expressed by OUTER JOY ~ AMEN ! Yours BRIAN
March 5th, 2017 04:41
Face.
Michael Edwards said:
So right the face tells so much. My wife always makes a point of smiling. In restaurants or out shopping she gets great service whereas my hero is Victor Meldrew. (Who is Victor Meldrew I hear our American friends ask) . Love the poem.
March 5th, 2017 03:49
Michael Edwards said:
So right the face tells so much. My wife always makes a point of smiling. In restaurants or out shopping she gets great service whereas my hero is Victor Meldrew. (Who is Victor Meldrew I hear our American friends ask) . Love the poem.
March 5th, 2017 03:49
Searching for Answers.
Augustus said:
I looked. He told me to go pound sand. Heh, heh. Soooo true.
March 4th, 2017 16:50
Augustus said:
I looked. He told me to go pound sand. Heh, heh. Soooo true.
March 4th, 2017 16:50
Searching for Answers.
willyweed said:
yes we must talk to the man in the mirror. good one goldfinch! bravo! ww
March 4th, 2017 09:05
willyweed said:
yes we must talk to the man in the mirror. good one goldfinch! bravo! ww
March 4th, 2017 09:05
Searching for Answers.
rrodriguez said:
Yes, humans need answers because there\'s a lot of questions, but the answers can come if you ask. Job well done!
March 4th, 2017 08:24
rrodriguez said:
Yes, humans need answers because there\'s a lot of questions, but the answers can come if you ask. Job well done!
March 4th, 2017 08:24
Searching for Answers.
Philip said:
I agree totally with the sentiment. Good words. Phil .G
March 4th, 2017 04:47
Philip said:
I agree totally with the sentiment. Good words. Phil .G
March 4th, 2017 04:47
Searching for Answers.
orchidee said:
A fine write. Sometimes saying \'with help from above\' can be an excuse, wanting Him to do it all. And yet somehow I don\'t feel we can do it all on our own. I know you don\'t mean this in a \'selfish\' way.
March 4th, 2017 04:03
orchidee said:
A fine write. Sometimes saying \'with help from above\' can be an excuse, wanting Him to do it all. And yet somehow I don\'t feel we can do it all on our own. I know you don\'t mean this in a \'selfish\' way.
March 4th, 2017 04:03
Searching for Answers.
Michael Edwards said:
Sage advice indeed and well constructed.
March 4th, 2017 02:49
Michael Edwards said:
Sage advice indeed and well constructed.
March 4th, 2017 02:49
Live in Peace - FIBS
MendedFences27 said:
Interesting form. New to me. You\'ve mastered it with this piece. Beautifully structured and flows smoothly to an uplifting conclusion. Nice one - Phil A.
March 3rd, 2017 21:34
MendedFences27 said:
Interesting form. New to me. You\'ve mastered it with this piece. Beautifully structured and flows smoothly to an uplifting conclusion. Nice one - Phil A.
March 3rd, 2017 21:34
Live in Peace - FIBS
willyweed said:
FIBS were I am from means untruthful statements...you must live far from here? plus your poem is shaped like a Christmas tree decoration plus I liked it and will try to do it? WW
March 3rd, 2017 14:56
willyweed said:
FIBS were I am from means untruthful statements...you must live far from here? plus your poem is shaped like a Christmas tree decoration plus I liked it and will try to do it? WW
March 3rd, 2017 14:56
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