Comments received on poems by orchidee
New Jerusalem Joys
FredPeyer said:
Orchi, I don\'t have a clue about meters, 8-7, 15-21, or any other numbers. I just like the way you write!
December 20th, 2020 12:01
FredPeyer said:
Orchi, I don\'t have a clue about meters, 8-7, 15-21, or any other numbers. I just like the way you write!
December 20th, 2020 12:01
New Jerusalem Joys
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
Oops - forgot you\'re in the UK. Hymns Ancient & Modern Revised 279 and 573. All my references to the tune have different texts.
December 20th, 2020 10:01
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
Oops - forgot you\'re in the UK. Hymns Ancient & Modern Revised 279 and 573. All my references to the tune have different texts.
December 20th, 2020 10:01
New Jerusalem Joys
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
Some readers will know the tune REGENT SQUARE as a Christmas carol beginning \"Angels from the realms of glory\" (Episcopal hymnal 93, UMC hymnal 220). Long meter with refrain, or 87.87.87. Your text doesn\'t follow this meter.
December 20th, 2020 09:56
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
Some readers will know the tune REGENT SQUARE as a Christmas carol beginning \"Angels from the realms of glory\" (Episcopal hymnal 93, UMC hymnal 220). Long meter with refrain, or 87.87.87. Your text doesn\'t follow this meter.
December 20th, 2020 09:56
Angelic Alighting
FredPeyer said:
Orchi, I can see you are getting ready for Christmas!
December 19th, 2020 12:12
FredPeyer said:
Orchi, I can see you are getting ready for Christmas!
December 19th, 2020 12:12
Bethlehem Birth
FredPeyer said:
Looks like you are finished with your ranting and back to hymning! Well done, Orchi!
December 18th, 2020 20:58
FredPeyer said:
Looks like you are finished with your ranting and back to hymning! Well done, Orchi!
December 18th, 2020 20:58
Bethlehem Birth
FineB said:
A beautiful write Orchidee.
You have captured the beauty of Jesus\'s birth- the birth of the Messiah.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
December 18th, 2020 16:55
FineB said:
A beautiful write Orchidee.
You have captured the beauty of Jesus\'s birth- the birth of the Messiah.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
December 18th, 2020 16:55
Bethlehem Birth
Jerry Reynolds said:
Well written Orchi. Have a safe and Happy Holiday
December 18th, 2020 15:11
Jerry Reynolds said:
Well written Orchi. Have a safe and Happy Holiday
December 18th, 2020 15:11
Timeless Not Temporal
FredPeyer said:
And the writer of this hymn will be a poet laureate one day!
December 16th, 2020 12:08
FredPeyer said:
And the writer of this hymn will be a poet laureate one day!
December 16th, 2020 12:08
Timeless Not Temporal
Jerry Reynolds said:
Nice write Orchi. Happy Holidays.
December 16th, 2020 09:26
Jerry Reynolds said:
Nice write Orchi. Happy Holidays.
December 16th, 2020 09:26
Timeless Not Temporal
dusk arising said:
By heck Mr O... you don\'t half pen them.
December 16th, 2020 05:07
dusk arising said:
By heck Mr O... you don\'t half pen them.
December 16th, 2020 05:07
Timeless Not Temporal
Michael Edwards said:
Timeless - that\'s the name of the Dulux colour which all the walls in our house are painted with. Fine write by the way Orchi.
December 16th, 2020 04:10
Michael Edwards said:
Timeless - that\'s the name of the Dulux colour which all the walls in our house are painted with. Fine write by the way Orchi.
December 16th, 2020 04:10
Beneficent Beholder
FredPeyer said:
Orchi, your continued output of these well written hymn-poems is incredible. How many did you write so far? Love to read them.
December 15th, 2020 12:41
FredPeyer said:
Orchi, your continued output of these well written hymn-poems is incredible. How many did you write so far? Love to read them.
December 15th, 2020 12:41
Beneficent Beholder
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Happy Tuesday UNCLE STEVE ! Great Folksy Hymn to kickstart the Day ! I was singing along with one hand on my left ear ! Love PSALM 33 in the AV !
V 17. An Horse is a vain thing for saftey !
Neither shall he deliver any by his great strength !
Men put their trust in Horses (especially in the Betting Shop) and in IRON HORSES (TANKS) in modern warfare ~ instead of trusting in the LORD !
Bl essings & JOY to You & Faithful Fido
Spirit Love Angela Brian & Il Gatto Fumoso !!!
December 15th, 2020 04:18
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Happy Tuesday UNCLE STEVE ! Great Folksy Hymn to kickstart the Day ! I was singing along with one hand on my left ear ! Love PSALM 33 in the AV !
V 17. An Horse is a vain thing for saftey !
Neither shall he deliver any by his great strength !
Men put their trust in Horses (especially in the Betting Shop) and in IRON HORSES (TANKS) in modern warfare ~ instead of trusting in the LORD !
Bl essings & JOY to You & Faithful Fido
Spirit Love Angela Brian & Il Gatto Fumoso !!!
December 15th, 2020 04:18
Beneficent Beholder
Michael Edwards said:
So who is Ben E Ficient?
Related to Inn E Ficient?
December 15th, 2020 03:12
Michael Edwards said:
So who is Ben E Ficient?
Related to Inn E Ficient?
December 15th, 2020 03:12
Heraldic Harbinger
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening Uncle STEVE we love the KARYOKE video. WE know the tune ~ but not the words ~ we have enjoyed singing along to it ~ AMEN Love the Scriture *JOHN THE BAPTIST* is one of our fave NT Characters ! Thanks for sharing ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Joy to you & Fesyive Fido !
Spirit Love ~ Angela Brian & El Gato ! ! !
December 14th, 2020 17:35
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening Uncle STEVE we love the KARYOKE video. WE know the tune ~ but not the words ~ we have enjoyed singing along to it ~ AMEN Love the Scriture *JOHN THE BAPTIST* is one of our fave NT Characters ! Thanks for sharing ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Joy to you & Fesyive Fido !
Spirit Love ~ Angela Brian & El Gato ! ! !
December 14th, 2020 17:35
Heraldic Harbinger
Dove said:
I agree with Robert, yes keeping the syllables to the set amount can be tricky! I usually add Oh, or Yes!
December 14th, 2020 06:16
Dove said:
I agree with Robert, yes keeping the syllables to the set amount can be tricky! I usually add Oh, or Yes!
December 14th, 2020 06:16
Heraldic Harbinger
dusk arising said:
And the lord seth unto Moses
come forth
but he came fifth
and won a bag of peanuts
December 14th, 2020 04:38
dusk arising said:
And the lord seth unto Moses
come forth
but he came fifth
and won a bag of peanuts
December 14th, 2020 04:38
Heraldic Harbinger
orchidee said:
I was there (verse 3), making sure John had no strong drink. I added water to it of course!
December 14th, 2020 03:03
orchidee said:
I was there (verse 3), making sure John had no strong drink. I added water to it of course!
December 14th, 2020 03:03
Eternal Enfranchisement
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ The Transfiguration great event and great Hymns to sing along to ! Love JOHNS descriptin of the HOLY CITY with all the GEMSTONES ! We teach GEMMOLOGY in my Department (Applied Science) and have a modest collection ! Some of the Churches we have visited in Russia (which are now very active !) are lavishly decoarated with semi-precious GEMSTONES like Lapis Lapuli etc. Just as COVID cant destroy CHRISTMAS so Communism could not supress Christianity ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Peace to YOU & Inspector Hound !
Spiritual Love A & B & Il Gatto Fumoso ! ! !
December 13th, 2020 04:58
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ The Transfiguration great event and great Hymns to sing along to ! Love JOHNS descriptin of the HOLY CITY with all the GEMSTONES ! We teach GEMMOLOGY in my Department (Applied Science) and have a modest collection ! Some of the Churches we have visited in Russia (which are now very active !) are lavishly decoarated with semi-precious GEMSTONES like Lapis Lapuli etc. Just as COVID cant destroy CHRISTMAS so Communism could not supress Christianity ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Peace to YOU & Inspector Hound !
Spiritual Love A & B & Il Gatto Fumoso ! ! !
December 13th, 2020 04:58
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