Comments received on poems by orchidee
Grace Upon Grace
NafisaSB said:
they say that our destiny is chalked out when we are born, and yet prayers can change it....
June 2nd, 2026 02:13
NafisaSB said:
they say that our destiny is chalked out when we are born, and yet prayers can change it....
June 2nd, 2026 02:13
Trinity Trouble?
Goldfinch60 said:
Completely understand waht you are saying Orchi but if the chucg have a choir they would have learned the music,
Andy
June 2nd, 2026 01:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Completely understand waht you are saying Orchi but if the chucg have a choir they would have learned the music,
Andy
June 2nd, 2026 01:45
Trinity Trouble?
arqios said:
Ah, the woes of church music and worshipful adoration 🙏🏻🕊️
June 1st, 2026 19:50
arqios said:
Ah, the woes of church music and worshipful adoration 🙏🏻🕊️
June 1st, 2026 19:50
Trinity Trouble?
Friendship said:
Well done. Your poem touches on the simple yet profound nature of the Trinity and contrasts it with the more mundane difficulties of church life, particularly the awkwardness of singing unknown tunes.
June 1st, 2026 18:15
Friendship said:
Well done. Your poem touches on the simple yet profound nature of the Trinity and contrasts it with the more mundane difficulties of church life, particularly the awkwardness of singing unknown tunes.
June 1st, 2026 18:15
Trinity Trouble?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Haha, Orchi, this is great. The unknown Psalm tune is a universal church experience. Everyone starts bravely, nobody knows where the melody is headed, and somehow we all emerge on the other side together. Meanwhile Popeyeus Glug Maximus Solus, now performing under his stage name Popeyeus Glug Maximus Solo, is standing in the choir loft confidently singing an entirely different tune while Scooby assures everyone it is going \"Roh-Kay\". Sadly, Tom can\'t knit because Obi Wan thought his needle was safer to conduct with. \"You can\'t knit with just one, Oi be, You just can\'t!\" He keeps screaming over the glugs, but not one soul hears him. Thank you Popeye. Loved this one, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 1st, 2026 17:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Haha, Orchi, this is great. The unknown Psalm tune is a universal church experience. Everyone starts bravely, nobody knows where the melody is headed, and somehow we all emerge on the other side together. Meanwhile Popeyeus Glug Maximus Solus, now performing under his stage name Popeyeus Glug Maximus Solo, is standing in the choir loft confidently singing an entirely different tune while Scooby assures everyone it is going \"Roh-Kay\". Sadly, Tom can\'t knit because Obi Wan thought his needle was safer to conduct with. \"You can\'t knit with just one, Oi be, You just can\'t!\" He keeps screaming over the glugs, but not one soul hears him. Thank you Popeye. Loved this one, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 1st, 2026 17:49
Trinity Trouble?
sorenbarrett said:
A good write Orchi forgiveness is always easier to get than permission so don\'t tell em what you\'re going to do just sing it.
June 1st, 2026 04:21
sorenbarrett said:
A good write Orchi forgiveness is always easier to get than permission so don\'t tell em what you\'re going to do just sing it.
June 1st, 2026 04:21
Grace Upon Grace
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, “grace upon grace in this” really stood out to me. It feels like the heartbeat of the hymn…God’s purpose unfolding not through merit, but through grace continually given. Beautiful work, Orchi. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
And, of course, Tom read “predestined” and immediately asked whether it was located near the Paraclete Swimwear Outlet. 👟😂 Meanwhile Popeye was quietly glugging from the Judge’s spinach port again, apparently having learned absolutely nothing. 🥣🖤
May 29th, 2026 23:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, “grace upon grace in this” really stood out to me. It feels like the heartbeat of the hymn…God’s purpose unfolding not through merit, but through grace continually given. Beautiful work, Orchi. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
And, of course, Tom read “predestined” and immediately asked whether it was located near the Paraclete Swimwear Outlet. 👟😂 Meanwhile Popeye was quietly glugging from the Judge’s spinach port again, apparently having learned absolutely nothing. 🥣🖤
May 29th, 2026 23:30
Grace Upon Grace
Paul Bell said:
Forgiven sinners, pardoned free, I\'m in.
Okay, what is this form I need to sign.
May 29th, 2026 06:39
Paul Bell said:
Forgiven sinners, pardoned free, I\'m in.
Okay, what is this form I need to sign.
May 29th, 2026 06:39
Grace Upon Grace
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely freeing message Orchi although I am not religious I still hold the thought that all things happen for the best because true or not it leaves me happier. A very nice write my friend
May 29th, 2026 04:39
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely freeing message Orchi although I am not religious I still hold the thought that all things happen for the best because true or not it leaves me happier. A very nice write my friend
May 29th, 2026 04:39
Grace Upon Grace
David Wakeling said:
A well constructed piece, discussing the power of God and Christ.Well done
May 29th, 2026 02:40
David Wakeling said:
A well constructed piece, discussing the power of God and Christ.Well done
May 29th, 2026 02:40
Acquitting Advocate
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is a wonderfully faithful adaptation. The progression from justification by faith to peace with God, then to grace, hope, and Christ as Advocate, gives the hymn a strong sense of movement and purpose. I especially liked the inclusion of the Paraclete note, which adds depth without interrupting the flow. Warm, encouraging, and thoughtfully crafted work, Orchi. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
One more thing… I appreciate the footnote for Paraclete…because otherwise Thomas would still be wondering why Romans 5 suddenly started talking about a pair of cleats. 👟😂
As for Popeye…well…after getting caught glugging the Judge’s spinach port reserves, the acquittal seems to have been withdrawn. The glugging has officially become gulping. 🥣😳😂🖤
May 28th, 2026 20:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is a wonderfully faithful adaptation. The progression from justification by faith to peace with God, then to grace, hope, and Christ as Advocate, gives the hymn a strong sense of movement and purpose. I especially liked the inclusion of the Paraclete note, which adds depth without interrupting the flow. Warm, encouraging, and thoughtfully crafted work, Orchi. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
One more thing… I appreciate the footnote for Paraclete…because otherwise Thomas would still be wondering why Romans 5 suddenly started talking about a pair of cleats. 👟😂
As for Popeye…well…after getting caught glugging the Judge’s spinach port reserves, the acquittal seems to have been withdrawn. The glugging has officially become gulping. 🥣😳😂🖤
May 28th, 2026 20:34
Acquitting Advocate
sorenbarrett said:
Orchi the wording of this poem is most reminiscent of traditional church hymns and I would expect to hear it in most any Christian church. Well done my friend
May 28th, 2026 03:52
sorenbarrett said:
Orchi the wording of this poem is most reminiscent of traditional church hymns and I would expect to hear it in most any Christian church. Well done my friend
May 28th, 2026 03:52
Hope of Help
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Orchi, there’s something deeply comforting and sorrowful intertwined through this. The old hymn structure gives the lament a steady heartbeat...like faith trying to stay upright while grief and exhaustion pull at it from every side. Really beautiful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
And now, as foretold in the Third Book of Glugonicles...Saint Snoutius of the Sacred Mire took wing upon the Dove of Perpetual Soup and delivered unto Orchi the First Chalice of Eternal Glug. The clouds parted. The hymn modulated unexpectedly into kazoo.Zoohoozooo.....And lo, the heavenly choir sang in 4/4 time while Popeyeus Glug Maximus Solus nodded solemnly from atop the Misty Spinach Steppes. 🥣🕊️⚰️📡🖤
May 27th, 2026 21:48
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Orchi, there’s something deeply comforting and sorrowful intertwined through this. The old hymn structure gives the lament a steady heartbeat...like faith trying to stay upright while grief and exhaustion pull at it from every side. Really beautiful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
And now, as foretold in the Third Book of Glugonicles...Saint Snoutius of the Sacred Mire took wing upon the Dove of Perpetual Soup and delivered unto Orchi the First Chalice of Eternal Glug. The clouds parted. The hymn modulated unexpectedly into kazoo.Zoohoozooo.....And lo, the heavenly choir sang in 4/4 time while Popeyeus Glug Maximus Solus nodded solemnly from atop the Misty Spinach Steppes. 🥣🕊️⚰️📡🖤
May 27th, 2026 21:48
Hope of Help
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic reassurance and admonition in this hymn for a people used to travail. Well done Orchi
May 27th, 2026 04:26
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic reassurance and admonition in this hymn for a people used to travail. Well done Orchi
May 27th, 2026 04:26
Pentecost Promise
Paul Bell said:
Okay, had to google pentecost.
Now I realise I did\'nt get the holiday.
Heads will roll.
May 27th, 2026 02:58
Paul Bell said:
Okay, had to google pentecost.
Now I realise I did\'nt get the holiday.
Heads will roll.
May 27th, 2026 02:58
Pentecost Promise
Neville said:
another fine hymn poem from what I imagine must be the worlds largest hymn poem portfolio in the entire uni-verse .. Neville
May 26th, 2026 12:55
Neville said:
another fine hymn poem from what I imagine must be the worlds largest hymn poem portfolio in the entire uni-verse .. Neville
May 26th, 2026 12:55
Pentecost Promise
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this reminded me of those hymns that somehow feel both ancient and alive at the same time…the kind sung softly but carrying enormous weight underneath them. There’s a gentleness here that fits Pentecost beautifully. Also…”encove” sounds delightfully Orchi-esque and now my brain imagines Popeyeus Glug Maximus Solus attempting to sing liturgy while trapped inside a nautical grammar vortex. A certain dog is facepalming, \"Ruh-roh\". 🤣 Strong and heartfelt writing, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 24th, 2026 12:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this reminded me of those hymns that somehow feel both ancient and alive at the same time…the kind sung softly but carrying enormous weight underneath them. There’s a gentleness here that fits Pentecost beautifully. Also…”encove” sounds delightfully Orchi-esque and now my brain imagines Popeyeus Glug Maximus Solus attempting to sing liturgy while trapped inside a nautical grammar vortex. A certain dog is facepalming, \"Ruh-roh\". 🤣 Strong and heartfelt writing, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 24th, 2026 12:01
Pentecost Promise
sorenbarrett said:
Good hymn Orchi and most appropriate. Well done my friend
May 23rd, 2026 12:45
sorenbarrett said:
Good hymn Orchi and most appropriate. Well done my friend
May 23rd, 2026 12:45
A mega poem!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Orchi, hahaha...and there goes Fido again trying to staple reality back together while Popeyeus Glug Maximus Solus and Ol’ Tomás argue over whether the Sacred Carp Scrolls prophesied this exact catastrophe. Meanwhile Scooby has eaten half the evidence, SpongeBob opened the Glug Portal by mistake, and Grape Ape (where the heck did he come from?) is somehow stuck in the fisherman’s annual. Now all that can be heard is, \"I yam what I yam, but I don\'t eat yams, I ams certain,\" followed by intergalactic arguing over socks, \"Ruh-roh,\" and incessant glugs between belch-like cries of \"Grape Ape!\" Absolute chaos, my friend. 🤣🌹🖤🙏
May 23rd, 2026 10:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Orchi, hahaha...and there goes Fido again trying to staple reality back together while Popeyeus Glug Maximus Solus and Ol’ Tomás argue over whether the Sacred Carp Scrolls prophesied this exact catastrophe. Meanwhile Scooby has eaten half the evidence, SpongeBob opened the Glug Portal by mistake, and Grape Ape (where the heck did he come from?) is somehow stuck in the fisherman’s annual. Now all that can be heard is, \"I yam what I yam, but I don\'t eat yams, I ams certain,\" followed by intergalactic arguing over socks, \"Ruh-roh,\" and incessant glugs between belch-like cries of \"Grape Ape!\" Absolute chaos, my friend. 🤣🌹🖤🙏
May 23rd, 2026 10:24
A mega poem!
Kevin Hulme said:
I\'m sure some Philosophy Critic would read this and see it as a Statement on \'Man\'s Relationship to Man\' . And Spout all sorts of things about the \'Subconscious\'. Or \'Duel Realty\'. Or maybe it\'s just all Nonsense.
Enjoyed.
May 22nd, 2026 18:36
Kevin Hulme said:
I\'m sure some Philosophy Critic would read this and see it as a Statement on \'Man\'s Relationship to Man\' . And Spout all sorts of things about the \'Subconscious\'. Or \'Duel Realty\'. Or maybe it\'s just all Nonsense.
Enjoyed.
May 22nd, 2026 18:36
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