Comments received on poems by orchidee



Pentecost Proclamation
Neville said:

78.488 ainโ€™t bad going for any rodent ๐Ÿ‘

January 5th, 2026 23:15

Pentecost Proclamation
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Glug job, Orchi! Good job! Wait...P\'s proclamation is what now? Actually, don\'t answer that! ๐Ÿ˜œ ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ›

January 5th, 2026 16:06

Pentecost Proclamation
Paul Bell said:

Happy new year to you.
Is it Pentecostal festival time or does that come later.
I\'m going to make an effort to churchify myself this year. l

January 5th, 2026 09:44

Pentecost Proclamation
Friendship said:

Your poem reflects the prophetic vision of the future, emphasizing the outpouring of the Spirit of God upon all people, leading to divine revelations, signs, and the promise of salvation for those who call upon the Lord.

January 5th, 2026 07:37

Pentecost Proclamation
arqios said:

In one accord! Mighty and rushing and windy๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป

January 5th, 2026 06:52

Pentecost Proclamation
sorenbarrett said:

A rather well known excerpt there my friend that moon to blood thing I mean. I guess it was a rather graphic image that stuck in the mind of many. A good hymn that has to end on that last positive of being safe or everyone would go home and board up their windows. Nicely done Orchi

January 5th, 2026 04:06

For New Year...
Neville said:



You should go wash your nib out in hot soapy water sir ๐Ÿ˜Ž

January 4th, 2026 14:06

Returning Reconciliation
Thomas W Case said:

The natural imageryโ€”dew, roots, branchesโ€”works well with the scripture. It gives the hymn a gentle flow.

January 4th, 2026 09:41

Returning Reconciliation
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Excellent, Orchi. I really do love your hymn-poemns.

Glug.

Uh-oh. He\'s got something to say...you knowing who he be...

\"After last night\'s...glug...I be returning regurgitation! Ah-gah-gah-gah-glug-glug! ๐Ÿคฎ ๐Ÿคฃ

January 4th, 2026 09:26

Returning Reconciliation
Friendship said:

well worded, God\'s promise โค๏ธ

January 4th, 2026 08:16

Returning Reconciliation
Neville said:


This is very topical & whilst I know it won\'t go down all round and with everyone .. I fear it will take a very long time before Israel will be forgiven for taking vengeance far too far

January 4th, 2026 06:07

Returning Reconciliation
sorenbarrett said:

God\'s promise to his people according to Biblical account. Very nicely worked into hymn form as a poem Orchi.

January 4th, 2026 03:42

Restoration Rejoicing
arqios said:

Joy in restoration! Still canโ€™t believe itโ€™s a national anthem. (Aside) ๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป

January 3rd, 2026 18:00

Restoration Rejoicing
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Orchi, this is praise rooted in memory and hope together. You honor the text while letting it sing forward, reminding the listener that renewal follows scarcity. A beautiful, faithful rendering. ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ›

Now, do tell I pray thee, was P and co restored too?

Glug.

I guess not! ๐Ÿคฃ

January 3rd, 2026 12:39

Restoration Rejoicing
Friendship said:

Your poem addresses themes of agricultural abundance, divine favor, and the joy of the community in response to God\'s restoration. It invokes agricultural imagery to symbolize spiritual and material prosperity, portraying a vision of renewal and celebration.

January 3rd, 2026 09:28

Restoration Rejoicing
sorenbarrett said:

Wow Orchi I don\'t know about the locust thing I have tasted grasshopper but locust goes too far the legs have to be removed like stems from a cherry and the head is a bit mushy while the wings stick in one\'s throat. All kidding aside nicely done my friend well imaged and written

January 3rd, 2026 03:54

Ground Of Our Lives
Kevin Hulme said:

A lesson for us all. Good Poem.

January 2nd, 2026 21:13

Prayer Plea
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Great hymn-poem, Orchi! But good thing I didn\'t just look at the title...or I might of thought it was you desperately and publicly pleading for the glugging to stop! I wouldn\'t blame the desperation...they really don\'t know how to quit! ๐Ÿคฃ

January 2nd, 2026 08:56

Prayer Plea
arqios said:

A prayer of many prayers enshrined in hymn ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ

January 2nd, 2026 08:17

Prayer Plea
Friendship said:

Nicely worded.

January 2nd, 2026 06:45

Prayer Plea
sorenbarrett said:

A poem, a hymn, a credo all in one. Nicely done Orchi it seems very Christian indeed and has tinges of the Catholic to it my friend. Lovely

January 2nd, 2026 03:47

Ground Of Our Lives
Tristan Robert Lange said:

A powerful poem and, yes, I concur on your note too. One thing is for sure, we know it does not mean ZZZZ ZZZ GLUG! ๐Ÿ˜ฎโ€๐Ÿ’จ And there he, Obi and company go again! ๐Ÿคฃ

January 1st, 2026 09:33

Ground Of Our Lives
Friendship said:

Well done, Happy New Year

January 1st, 2026 08:57

Ground Of Our Lives
arqios said:

Sowing and reaping, good stuff here๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ

January 1st, 2026 05:49

Ground Of Our Lives
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of promise for reward for labors and deeds at the coming of God. Nicely done Orchi and a Happy New Year to you

January 1st, 2026 04:59

For New Year...
Jerry Reynolds said:

A fine, fun write. Orchidee.

December 31st, 2025 09:15

For New Year...
Tristan Robert Lange said:

LOL! Woof, woof, oof oof, glug glug...wait!?! That didn\'t rhyme...there he goes again! Thanks for the laugh my daft friend! Happy New Year to you, your hammy guinnea) pigs, Fido, and even KP too! ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ›

December 31st, 2025 09:05

For New Year...
arqios said:

Fun read, O

December 31st, 2025 07:43

For New Year...
Friendship said:

Happy New Year,orchidee.I can\'t wait to read them.๐Ÿ˜‚ Enjoy your humor.

December 31st, 2025 06:52

For New Year...
sorenbarrett said:

Now Orchi you are going to leave me smiling on this last day of the year. You are on the dot for the first line, put me in a coma with a comma, got my ass kicked by an asterisk. Oh oh I\'ll have to rate this comment +18. Good one Orchi you get a high poetic rating for originality in symbolism.

December 31st, 2025 03:51

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