Comments received on poems by orchidee
All Things New
sorenbarrett said:
A hymn from Revelations Orchi at least this is not the scary part of the book. Good write my friend
January 27th, 2026 04:07
sorenbarrett said:
A hymn from Revelations Orchi at least this is not the scary part of the book. Good write my friend
January 27th, 2026 04:07
Marvellous Marriage
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great write, Orchi! very beautiful.
That said...I am not sure Olive Oyl is so sure the marriage is THAT marvelous!
Glug.
🤣
January 26th, 2026 08:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great write, Orchi! very beautiful.
That said...I am not sure Olive Oyl is so sure the marriage is THAT marvelous!
Glug.
🤣
January 26th, 2026 08:59
Marvellous Marriage
Paul Bell said:
Nice for a dreary Monday morning.
I\'ve noticed hallelujah gets spelt in all different ways, is there a real one.
January 26th, 2026 05:06
Paul Bell said:
Nice for a dreary Monday morning.
I\'ve noticed hallelujah gets spelt in all different ways, is there a real one.
January 26th, 2026 05:06
Marvellous Marriage
sorenbarrett said:
Another lovely hymn Orchi it sings to me off the page. Well done
January 26th, 2026 03:50
sorenbarrett said:
Another lovely hymn Orchi it sings to me off the page. Well done
January 26th, 2026 03:50
The Final Trumpet
Tristan Robert Lange said:
You\'ve instructed us on the final Trumpet, and did very well in it, dearest Orchi! The question remains, and you\'re certainly silent on it...what happens at the final glug? Definitely, don\'t answer that, or swooning might be the least of our problems! 🤣
January 25th, 2026 10:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
You\'ve instructed us on the final Trumpet, and did very well in it, dearest Orchi! The question remains, and you\'re certainly silent on it...what happens at the final glug? Definitely, don\'t answer that, or swooning might be the least of our problems! 🤣
January 25th, 2026 10:56
The Final Trumpet
Thomas W Case said:
This carries the weight of scripture without losing its human pulse.
Reverent, thunderous, and steady—faith spoken with conviction, not noise.
January 25th, 2026 07:35
Thomas W Case said:
This carries the weight of scripture without losing its human pulse.
Reverent, thunderous, and steady—faith spoken with conviction, not noise.
January 25th, 2026 07:35
The Final Trumpet
sorenbarrett said:
A hymn meant to be scarry for the enemy \"great voices, angry nations, fear, lightnings and thundering\'s, earthquakes, hail. Quite the power move.
January 25th, 2026 03:33
sorenbarrett said:
A hymn meant to be scarry for the enemy \"great voices, angry nations, fear, lightnings and thundering\'s, earthquakes, hail. Quite the power move.
January 25th, 2026 03:33
Conserving Caretakers
James Michael said:
Well done again. Bear with me. I do believe Angels and Saints are living beings to be found in our lives. Definitely in the afterlife guiding us. Creatures and children are the closest to God. Eden exists in the humanly untamed natural world.
Told ya to “Bear with me.”. It’s good to see you write psalm like words again.
January 24th, 2026 22:24
James Michael said:
Well done again. Bear with me. I do believe Angels and Saints are living beings to be found in our lives. Definitely in the afterlife guiding us. Creatures and children are the closest to God. Eden exists in the humanly untamed natural world.
Told ya to “Bear with me.”. It’s good to see you write psalm like words again.
January 24th, 2026 22:24
Conserving Caretakers
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Orchi… Popeye, Obi, Tom, and Company stumble in first. Popeye is absolutely holding his own in a glugging contest…conserving nothing, obviously. Obi is calmly knitting tube socks like this is a normal Tuesday…until Obi Wan, oi be, mistook one for a lightsaber sheath and, well…that incinerated fast. Conserving Caretakers? More like Unconserving Sock Takers for a hot second. 🤣
But then the poem pulls me back. The gravity settles. What you’ve done with Psalm 8 here is reverent without being stiff…faithful without being fragile. The care-taking role lands with real weight, and the closing returns us to awe where we belong. Beautifully held, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 24th, 2026 10:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Orchi… Popeye, Obi, Tom, and Company stumble in first. Popeye is absolutely holding his own in a glugging contest…conserving nothing, obviously. Obi is calmly knitting tube socks like this is a normal Tuesday…until Obi Wan, oi be, mistook one for a lightsaber sheath and, well…that incinerated fast. Conserving Caretakers? More like Unconserving Sock Takers for a hot second. 🤣
But then the poem pulls me back. The gravity settles. What you’ve done with Psalm 8 here is reverent without being stiff…faithful without being fragile. The care-taking role lands with real weight, and the closing returns us to awe where we belong. Beautifully held, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 24th, 2026 10:19
Conserving Caretakers
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of reflection where man questions why his creator would take such notice of him. In todays world it seems a bit self deprecatory but in the old days this deference was and expected sign of humility. Nicely done Orchi
January 24th, 2026 04:01
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of reflection where man questions why his creator would take such notice of him. In todays world it seems a bit self deprecatory but in the old days this deference was and expected sign of humility. Nicely done Orchi
January 24th, 2026 04:01
Evening Prayer
Friendship said:
Beautifully said. The bedtime prayer my father used to recite, \'Thank you for sharing,\' brought back fond memories for me.
January 23rd, 2026 06:43
Friendship said:
Beautifully said. The bedtime prayer my father used to recite, \'Thank you for sharing,\' brought back fond memories for me.
January 23rd, 2026 06:43
Evening Prayer
Doggerel Dave said:
Nostalgia - the first stanza is reminiscent of a prayer I was taught when very very young..
Thanks Orchi.
January 23rd, 2026 05:08
Doggerel Dave said:
Nostalgia - the first stanza is reminiscent of a prayer I was taught when very very young..
Thanks Orchi.
January 23rd, 2026 05:08
Evening Prayer
sorenbarrett said:
The shortness of each line together with the AA BB rhyme scheme gave this gave a very rapid and coherent feel to this hymn Orchi. loved this one
January 23rd, 2026 04:20
sorenbarrett said:
The shortness of each line together with the AA BB rhyme scheme gave this gave a very rapid and coherent feel to this hymn Orchi. loved this one
January 23rd, 2026 04:20
Worthy Worship
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ochi, this is layered and quietly sharp. There’s real depth here, even as everything threatens to unravel…which is exactly when Popeyus, Obi, and Ol’ Tom kick the door in, socks in hand, glugging like prophets of nonsense. The fact that the poem survives that and The Baters roll into season 1,000,001 says a lot about its strength. Me...I\'m swooning over here! 🤣 Brilliant chaos. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 22nd, 2026 09:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ochi, this is layered and quietly sharp. There’s real depth here, even as everything threatens to unravel…which is exactly when Popeyus, Obi, and Ol’ Tom kick the door in, socks in hand, glugging like prophets of nonsense. The fact that the poem survives that and The Baters roll into season 1,000,001 says a lot about its strength. Me...I\'m swooning over here! 🤣 Brilliant chaos. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 22nd, 2026 09:30
Worthy Worship
Friendship said:
Well done! I always feel like I\'m back in school with you in the morning.
January 22nd, 2026 06:03
Friendship said:
Well done! I always feel like I\'m back in school with you in the morning.
January 22nd, 2026 06:03
Worthy Worship
sorenbarrett said:
A most symbolic picture of metaphors for a man that claims not to understand them. Come on now Orchi you sly dog you been holding out on us here. I really liked this one Orchi it paints a word picture that could be hung in any cathedral and a hymn that could be sung by most any denomination. Lovely
January 22nd, 2026 04:10
sorenbarrett said:
A most symbolic picture of metaphors for a man that claims not to understand them. Come on now Orchi you sly dog you been holding out on us here. I really liked this one Orchi it paints a word picture that could be hung in any cathedral and a hymn that could be sung by most any denomination. Lovely
January 22nd, 2026 04:10
Eternal Exaltation
Dominic Windram said:
Another lovely hymn poem. I\'m entranced by your lines about the angels, \'...and everyone tells/ Of His Eternity.\' They are powerful lines that William Blake would have been proud to have produced, certainly. Anyway, your poem is my new fave.
January 22nd, 2026 03:05
Dominic Windram said:
Another lovely hymn poem. I\'m entranced by your lines about the angels, \'...and everyone tells/ Of His Eternity.\' They are powerful lines that William Blake would have been proud to have produced, certainly. Anyway, your poem is my new fave.
January 22nd, 2026 03:05
Eternal Exaltation
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautiful, my hymnodic friend! Another wonderful hymn-poem that inspires exaltation. Truly reverent and holy, my friend.
Unfortunately, it also stirs in a few glugging-type (you know them, methinks) lots of Eternal E…nope, I’m not finishing that. 🤣
January 21st, 2026 19:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautiful, my hymnodic friend! Another wonderful hymn-poem that inspires exaltation. Truly reverent and holy, my friend.
Unfortunately, it also stirs in a few glugging-type (you know them, methinks) lots of Eternal E…nope, I’m not finishing that. 🤣
January 21st, 2026 19:37
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