Comments received on poems by orchidee
Boo hoo!
sorenbarrett said:
Now Orchi you made me laugh and that is worth a Fave and then you impressed me with your hidden knowledge and that is worh another fave but they will only let me give you one. That is unfair. So I will wish you a good day my friend
April 14th, 2026 09:56
sorenbarrett said:
Now Orchi you made me laugh and that is worth a Fave and then you impressed me with your hidden knowledge and that is worh another fave but they will only let me give you one. That is unfair. So I will wish you a good day my friend
April 14th, 2026 09:56
Boo hoo!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Orchi… my friend, this is a cry from the depths…a soul wrestling with the vast, impenetrable machinery of poetic language itself. The confusion is real…meters, forms, meanings slipping through the fingers like smoke. You’ve captured that honest bewilderment…that moment where language feels bigger than the one trying to hold it. Truly…this is the human condition laid bare…
…and then Fido shows up like a tenured professor barking footnotes while the entire academy collapses into GLUGS…endless, echoing GLUGS spilling down the corridors of iambic columns as Obi ignites his saber with calm precision and Ol’ Tomás—bless him—just stands there slapping a hand-knitted tube sock like it’s supposed to do something… “Is it a pull cord?!” he cries as the beam refuses to unsheath, GLUG GLUG GLUG, the scholars retreating, the haikus sneezing themselves into existence, “Hai-choo?!” ringing across the chamber while Fido howls citations into the void… absolute chaos, my friend. 🤣 🧠🔥🪞🙏
April 14th, 2026 09:15
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Orchi… my friend, this is a cry from the depths…a soul wrestling with the vast, impenetrable machinery of poetic language itself. The confusion is real…meters, forms, meanings slipping through the fingers like smoke. You’ve captured that honest bewilderment…that moment where language feels bigger than the one trying to hold it. Truly…this is the human condition laid bare…
…and then Fido shows up like a tenured professor barking footnotes while the entire academy collapses into GLUGS…endless, echoing GLUGS spilling down the corridors of iambic columns as Obi ignites his saber with calm precision and Ol’ Tomás—bless him—just stands there slapping a hand-knitted tube sock like it’s supposed to do something… “Is it a pull cord?!” he cries as the beam refuses to unsheath, GLUG GLUG GLUG, the scholars retreating, the haikus sneezing themselves into existence, “Hai-choo?!” ringing across the chamber while Fido howls citations into the void… absolute chaos, my friend. 🤣 🧠🔥🪞🙏
April 14th, 2026 09:15
Boo hoo!
Kevin Hulme said:
Know what you mean. Sometimes I have to look at the \'Poem Analysis\' to see what it\'s about. Dylan Thomas. Sylvia Plath etc.
Good one.
April 14th, 2026 09:13
Kevin Hulme said:
Know what you mean. Sometimes I have to look at the \'Poem Analysis\' to see what it\'s about. Dylan Thomas. Sylvia Plath etc.
Good one.
April 14th, 2026 09:13
Boo hoo!
Abdullah123 said:
Finally, some sympathy😅😭🥳
The some of the folks on \'ere do baffle the 2 brain cells I have (at least you have 3🤣)
Great write
April 14th, 2026 08:27
Abdullah123 said:
Finally, some sympathy😅😭🥳
The some of the folks on \'ere do baffle the 2 brain cells I have (at least you have 3🤣)
Great write
April 14th, 2026 08:27
Strength Supplied
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Orchi… this carries a real sincerity…steady, grounded, and held together with that sense of trust throughout. But I’m not buying the full innocence here…somewhere between those gates and that “everlasting strength,” you’ve got Popeye stationed with a crate of contraband glugs, nodding like it’s all perfectly scriptural. Always a trip with that dude, you know? 🤣 🧠🔥🪞🙏
April 14th, 2026 08:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Orchi… this carries a real sincerity…steady, grounded, and held together with that sense of trust throughout. But I’m not buying the full innocence here…somewhere between those gates and that “everlasting strength,” you’ve got Popeye stationed with a crate of contraband glugs, nodding like it’s all perfectly scriptural. Always a trip with that dude, you know? 🤣 🧠🔥🪞🙏
April 14th, 2026 08:01
Strength Supplied
Goldfinch60 said:
Good one Orchi.
As to you Fibonacci sequence i I have added one and I have many more that I have written over the years.
Andy
April 14th, 2026 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Good one Orchi.
As to you Fibonacci sequence i I have added one and I have many more that I have written over the years.
Andy
April 14th, 2026 01:23
Strength Supplied
Doggerel Dave said:
All that singing is a bit of a worry when you are the sponsor...
April 13th, 2026 18:25
Doggerel Dave said:
All that singing is a bit of a worry when you are the sponsor...
April 13th, 2026 18:25
Strength Supplied
Friendship said:
Nicely done. Your poem uses imagery of a strong city to symbolize safety and salvation. It addresses the faithful, portraying them as a righteous nation that is kept in peace by God. Your poem encourages trust in the Lord as a source of everlasting strength and confidence.
April 13th, 2026 11:02
Friendship said:
Nicely done. Your poem uses imagery of a strong city to symbolize safety and salvation. It addresses the faithful, portraying them as a righteous nation that is kept in peace by God. Your poem encourages trust in the Lord as a source of everlasting strength and confidence.
April 13th, 2026 11:02
Blessings of Bread
Doggerel Dave said:
When you put in that order for me, can you make sure thar I have low fat spread on mine please.
April 12th, 2026 00:26
Doggerel Dave said:
When you put in that order for me, can you make sure thar I have low fat spread on mine please.
April 12th, 2026 00:26
Blessings of Bread
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Orchi, this starts in that quiet, grounded place…just letting the promise speak without forcing it. It’s steady, simple, and it lands.
And then knowing you, I can already see Popeyeus and the whole crew stumbling in right after with a full-on glug takeover (aka a full-on glugover). 😂 Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 11th, 2026 11:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Orchi, this starts in that quiet, grounded place…just letting the promise speak without forcing it. It’s steady, simple, and it lands.
And then knowing you, I can already see Popeyeus and the whole crew stumbling in right after with a full-on glug takeover (aka a full-on glugover). 😂 Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 11th, 2026 11:28
Blessings of Bread
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
plain and simple to the point lol
April 11th, 2026 09:34
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
plain and simple to the point lol
April 11th, 2026 09:34
Blessings of Bread
Friendship said:
Great job. I know this was hard to come up with........hahaha🤣you made my day, orchidee 🌹
April 11th, 2026 09:21
Friendship said:
Great job. I know this was hard to come up with........hahaha🤣you made my day, orchidee 🌹
April 11th, 2026 09:21
Gospel Glories
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is classic you…rooted, structured, almost devotional at first glance…then quietly unraveling into something more playful underneath. That blend of sincerity and cheek keeps it from ever feeling stiff. You honor the source, but you don’t lose your voice in it.
And yeah…there’s a hint of glugging in there if you listen close enough. Glugged...erm...love it! 🤣 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 10th, 2026 08:44
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is classic you…rooted, structured, almost devotional at first glance…then quietly unraveling into something more playful underneath. That blend of sincerity and cheek keeps it from ever feeling stiff. You honor the source, but you don’t lose your voice in it.
And yeah…there’s a hint of glugging in there if you listen close enough. Glugged...erm...love it! 🤣 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 10th, 2026 08:44
Gospel Glories
Doggerel Dave said:
Things were going pretty alright round about that there middle stanza wern\'t it? That\'s the spirit!
April 9th, 2026 23:50
Doggerel Dave said:
Things were going pretty alright round about that there middle stanza wern\'t it? That\'s the spirit!
April 9th, 2026 23:50
Gospel Glories
Katie B. said:
I admire the way you so freely share your faith!!
April 9th, 2026 19:31
Katie B. said:
I admire the way you so freely share your faith!!
April 9th, 2026 19:31
Gospel Glories
Neville said:
This is more spiritual than a brace of Scottish distilleries .. Neville 😎👍
April 9th, 2026 17:11
Neville said:
This is more spiritual than a brace of Scottish distilleries .. Neville 😎👍
April 9th, 2026 17:11
Into An Inheritance
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful Hymn Orchi this one seems nondenominational
April 7th, 2026 19:16
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful Hymn Orchi this one seems nondenominational
April 7th, 2026 19:16
Explanations to the Eleven
Doggerel Dave said:
I was so completely unprepared having read the title. Was absolutely certain that at last I would know what it was the coach told the cricket team before the Captain led them to victory.
April 6th, 2026 15:53
Doggerel Dave said:
I was so completely unprepared having read the title. Was absolutely certain that at last I would know what it was the coach told the cricket team before the Captain led them to victory.
April 6th, 2026 15:53
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