Comments received on poems by orchidee
Matthias\' Mention
Doggerel Dave said:
Perfect account (names changed to protect the guilty) of our management committee\'s actions as we underwent a minor crisis and had to find a replacement for a disgraced member in order to maintain a quorum.
May 14th, 2026 16:03
Doggerel Dave said:
Perfect account (names changed to protect the guilty) of our management committee\'s actions as we underwent a minor crisis and had to find a replacement for a disgraced member in order to maintain a quorum.
May 14th, 2026 16:03
Matthias\' Mention
sorenbarrett said:
A write that does not sound like a hymn this time Orchi. Maybe it\'s the topic. Well done though
May 14th, 2026 12:09
sorenbarrett said:
A write that does not sound like a hymn this time Orchi. Maybe it\'s the topic. Well done though
May 14th, 2026 12:09
Matthias\' Mention
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I really liked the inclusion of the “lots” note at the end. It adds a thoughtful little historical touch…though I now picture Popeye insisting he lost the vote due to “anti-glug bias” among the apostles. It never really ends, does it? Oh...got to go for now and stop him from singing in the key of glug...I hear him glugging up as I type! 😂🖤🙏
May 14th, 2026 11:38
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I really liked the inclusion of the “lots” note at the end. It adds a thoughtful little historical touch…though I now picture Popeye insisting he lost the vote due to “anti-glug bias” among the apostles. It never really ends, does it? Oh...got to go for now and stop him from singing in the key of glug...I hear him glugging up as I type! 😂🖤🙏
May 14th, 2026 11:38
Ascension Aspirings
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I really liked how naturally the Acts passage settles into the hymn structure here…especially “Men of Galilee / Why do you gaze earnestly.” Though admittedly I now picture poor Scooby trying to howl “Alleluia” in proper meter while Mr. P. Solus insists the cloud imagery is “deeply gluggological” 🤣☁️🖤🙏
May 14th, 2026 11:15
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I really liked how naturally the Acts passage settles into the hymn structure here…especially “Men of Galilee / Why do you gaze earnestly.” Though admittedly I now picture poor Scooby trying to howl “Alleluia” in proper meter while Mr. P. Solus insists the cloud imagery is “deeply gluggological” 🤣☁️🖤🙏
May 14th, 2026 11:15
Ascension Aspirings
sorenbarrett said:
A very different feel to this hymn Orchi I like it
May 13th, 2026 16:26
sorenbarrett said:
A very different feel to this hymn Orchi I like it
May 13th, 2026 16:26
Persistent Prayers
Neilton said:
\"For every one that asks receives
They that seek find, believe \"
Exactly what i try to remind myself when i feel out of place! Great poem with an even Greater meaning
May 13th, 2026 04:18
Neilton said:
\"For every one that asks receives
They that seek find, believe \"
Exactly what i try to remind myself when i feel out of place! Great poem with an even Greater meaning
May 13th, 2026 04:18
Persistent Prayers
David Wakeling said:
One of the most powerful messages of the Christian faith.Knock and the door shall be opened.Beautiful poem
May 12th, 2026 17:33
David Wakeling said:
One of the most powerful messages of the Christian faith.Knock and the door shall be opened.Beautiful poem
May 12th, 2026 17:33
Persistent Prayers
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Orchi, I really enjoyed the warmth and simplicity of this retelling. The hymn-like rhythm makes the parable feel approachable and alive, and the persistence of friend A comes through clearly all the way to the end. Meanwhile, somewhere offstage, Popeyeus Glug Maximus Solus is probably still trying to barter spinach root beer for the three loaves while scooby supervises the negotiations over, yup, Scooby snaks. Tom is knitting Shaggy some shaggy socks. Why shaggy? WCAT! 🤣 Nicely done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
May 12th, 2026 14:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Orchi, I really enjoyed the warmth and simplicity of this retelling. The hymn-like rhythm makes the parable feel approachable and alive, and the persistence of friend A comes through clearly all the way to the end. Meanwhile, somewhere offstage, Popeyeus Glug Maximus Solus is probably still trying to barter spinach root beer for the three loaves while scooby supervises the negotiations over, yup, Scooby snaks. Tom is knitting Shaggy some shaggy socks. Why shaggy? WCAT! 🤣 Nicely done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
May 12th, 2026 14:06
Daily Bread
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What really stayed with me here, Orchi, is “But not forsake nor scorn.” That turn gives the whole piece its heart for me. Correction paired with compassion instead of condemnation. Lovely and deeply needed sentiment, my friend.
Now naturally…Popeyeus Glug Maximus Solus heard “daily bread” and immediately arrived demanding six loaves and a ceremonial barrel of glug green wine for “liturgical purposes only.” Why is it green? You find that out at WCAT.huh? 🍞🍷 🤣🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 11th, 2026 19:42
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What really stayed with me here, Orchi, is “But not forsake nor scorn.” That turn gives the whole piece its heart for me. Correction paired with compassion instead of condemnation. Lovely and deeply needed sentiment, my friend.
Now naturally…Popeyeus Glug Maximus Solus heard “daily bread” and immediately arrived demanding six loaves and a ceremonial barrel of glug green wine for “liturgical purposes only.” Why is it green? You find that out at WCAT.huh? 🍞🍷 🤣🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 11th, 2026 19:42
The Spirit Sent
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What really stayed with me here, Orchi, is “For He shall not speak of Himself.” There’s such humility and theological depth packed into that section. The whole piece feels prayerful without losing its poetic rhythm. Beautifully done, my friend.
Now pass the communion glug chalice before Popeyeus Maximus Solus drinks the entire green liturgy again. 🍷
May 11th, 2026 19:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What really stayed with me here, Orchi, is “For He shall not speak of Himself.” There’s such humility and theological depth packed into that section. The whole piece feels prayerful without losing its poetic rhythm. Beautifully done, my friend.
Now pass the communion glug chalice before Popeyeus Maximus Solus drinks the entire green liturgy again. 🍷
May 11th, 2026 19:11
Daily Bread
David Wakeling said:
A great tribute to the need to earn your keep.God will provide if you work at it
May 11th, 2026 17:32
David Wakeling said:
A great tribute to the need to earn your keep.God will provide if you work at it
May 11th, 2026 17:32
Daily Bread
arqios said:
Wow now that’s a full steak dinner… well it’s at Corinth and one couldn’t expect any less 🥩🙏🏻🕊️
May 11th, 2026 17:09
arqios said:
Wow now that’s a full steak dinner… well it’s at Corinth and one couldn’t expect any less 🥩🙏🏻🕊️
May 11th, 2026 17:09
Daily Bread
Friendship said:
Well written, your poem revolves around the importance of hard work and community responsibility within the framework of faith.
May 11th, 2026 12:14
Friendship said:
Well written, your poem revolves around the importance of hard work and community responsibility within the framework of faith.
May 11th, 2026 12:14
Who writes this rubbish?!
GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀 said:
lol 😂 I think 🤔 all your work gets more faves than you realize
May 11th, 2026 07:30
GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀 said:
lol 😂 I think 🤔 all your work gets more faves than you realize
May 11th, 2026 07:30
The Spirit Sent
Doggerel Dave said:
* to ask = from \' rogare\', for Rogation Sunday.
Relax O Wise One - your task is complete. You have completely confused a recalcitrant heathen who has not the slightest notion of that about which you sing.
How does a simple unambiguous word like \'ask\' get to rogate, is wot I wanter know....
May 10th, 2026 16:39
Doggerel Dave said:
* to ask = from \' rogare\', for Rogation Sunday.
Relax O Wise One - your task is complete. You have completely confused a recalcitrant heathen who has not the slightest notion of that about which you sing.
How does a simple unambiguous word like \'ask\' get to rogate, is wot I wanter know....
May 10th, 2026 16:39
The Spirit Sent
arqios said:
Ah, tharr she blows! Pentecost is coming and the gear up is rogating 🕊️🙏
May 10th, 2026 16:13
arqios said:
Ah, tharr she blows! Pentecost is coming and the gear up is rogating 🕊️🙏
May 10th, 2026 16:13
Who writes this rubbish?!
Doggerel Dave said:
You are a real conformist ain\'t yer? With the rest of the world so daft and dotty, why not you too?
May 9th, 2026 20:23
Doggerel Dave said:
You are a real conformist ain\'t yer? With the rest of the world so daft and dotty, why not you too?
May 9th, 2026 20:23
Who writes this rubbish?!
sorenbarrett said:
Marvelous Orchi you bring smiles to sullen faces and a bit of joy to an old curmudgeon like me.
May 9th, 2026 18:44
sorenbarrett said:
Marvelous Orchi you bring smiles to sullen faces and a bit of joy to an old curmudgeon like me.
May 9th, 2026 18:44
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