Comments received on poems by orchidee
Glad for Graces
sorenbarrett said:
Another good hymn my friend the hymnal will have new material this Sunday.
January 12th, 2026 03:54
sorenbarrett said:
Another good hymn my friend the hymnal will have new material this Sunday.
January 12th, 2026 03:54
Sure Seeking
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Orchi, this is prayer anchored in endurance. It doesn’t rush God, it waits with courage and keeps speaking anyway. And then, somewhere after the last verse, Popeye’s off to the side muttering “I yam waitin’, I yam,” Obi Wan nods wisely about patience being the way of the Force, and it all dissolves into gulpy, reverent glugs (can such a thing be?)…faith, spinach, holy water…all of the above? Take your pick. 🤣 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 11th, 2026 09:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Orchi, this is prayer anchored in endurance. It doesn’t rush God, it waits with courage and keeps speaking anyway. And then, somewhere after the last verse, Popeye’s off to the side muttering “I yam waitin’, I yam,” Obi Wan nods wisely about patience being the way of the Force, and it all dissolves into gulpy, reverent glugs (can such a thing be?)…faith, spinach, holy water…all of the above? Take your pick. 🤣 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 11th, 2026 09:25
Sure Seeking
Dominic Windram said:
A poem wrapped in a prayer...wonderful stuff!
January 11th, 2026 05:40
Dominic Windram said:
A poem wrapped in a prayer...wonderful stuff!
January 11th, 2026 05:40
Sure Seeking
sorenbarrett said:
Call on God the theme of this hymn that repeats the admonishment to call on God and recognize him. Well done my friend
January 11th, 2026 03:43
sorenbarrett said:
Call on God the theme of this hymn that repeats the admonishment to call on God and recognize him. Well done my friend
January 11th, 2026 03:43
Character Considered
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent hymn-poem my friend! Jeesh, they really were glugging original with the surnames, no? I can see how Smith came to be a popular one...and how Hymnographer...well...did not! LOL! Stick with poet or Sir Songwriter! Ah-gah--gah-gah-glug-glug.
Honestly, I tried to stop Mr. Glugging P up there...but he just won\'t. 🤣
January 10th, 2026 10:45
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent hymn-poem my friend! Jeesh, they really were glugging original with the surnames, no? I can see how Smith came to be a popular one...and how Hymnographer...well...did not! LOL! Stick with poet or Sir Songwriter! Ah-gah--gah-gah-glug-glug.
Honestly, I tried to stop Mr. Glugging P up there...but he just won\'t. 🤣
January 10th, 2026 10:45
Character Considered
sorenbarrett said:
A hymn post biblical one can tell in its style and wording but spiritual none the less. Well done Orchi
January 10th, 2026 04:03
sorenbarrett said:
A hymn post biblical one can tell in its style and wording but spiritual none the less. Well done Orchi
January 10th, 2026 04:03
Judgment of Joy
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Orchi, this starts solemn and lands joyful…then my brain does a funny thing. Somewhere between verses I hear Popeye muttering “I yam what I yam” as strength returns, and Obi Wan quietly nodding, saying the glug was with him all along. Then more glugs…holy water, spinach juice...or (don\'t add that!) whatever’s on tap. Serious praise, honest hope, and a wink that says joy is allowed too. Love the poem, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 9th, 2026 10:38
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Orchi, this starts solemn and lands joyful…then my brain does a funny thing. Somewhere between verses I hear Popeye muttering “I yam what I yam” as strength returns, and Obi Wan quietly nodding, saying the glug was with him all along. Then more glugs…holy water, spinach juice...or (don\'t add that!) whatever’s on tap. Serious praise, honest hope, and a wink that says joy is allowed too. Love the poem, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 9th, 2026 10:38
Judgment of Joy
sorenbarrett said:
At first I thought that this applied to present day Washington but apparently they had similar problems in the old days as well. A good read Orchi
January 9th, 2026 03:52
sorenbarrett said:
At first I thought that this applied to present day Washington but apparently they had similar problems in the old days as well. A good read Orchi
January 9th, 2026 03:52
Problems of a Prophet
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent hymn-poem, Orchi. We know the prophet\'s problems, but do certain gluggers have problems? Or are they the prophet\'s problems too! LOL! Actually, don\'t answer that!
January 8th, 2026 09:44
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent hymn-poem, Orchi. We know the prophet\'s problems, but do certain gluggers have problems? Or are they the prophet\'s problems too! LOL! Actually, don\'t answer that!
January 8th, 2026 09:44
Problems of a Prophet
arqios said:
A moving write and hopefully on tablets that we may run with it’s message!
January 8th, 2026 05:10
arqios said:
A moving write and hopefully on tablets that we may run with it’s message!
January 8th, 2026 05:10
Problems of a Prophet
sorenbarrett said:
Isn\'t it funny Orchi how prophesies seem to apply to different times. Maybe nothing ever changes. Well I guess the nature of people never changes always greedy, lustful, lascivious, lazy, violent and those are the good qualities. Good write Orchi
January 8th, 2026 04:16
sorenbarrett said:
Isn\'t it funny Orchi how prophesies seem to apply to different times. Maybe nothing ever changes. Well I guess the nature of people never changes always greedy, lustful, lascivious, lazy, violent and those are the good qualities. Good write Orchi
January 8th, 2026 04:16
Light And Dark
Paul Bell said:
This is the bright we need for January.
Why can\'t we cope with snow anymore.
January 7th, 2026 11:31
Paul Bell said:
This is the bright we need for January.
Why can\'t we cope with snow anymore.
January 7th, 2026 11:31
Light And Dark
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Orchi, this feels reverent and steady. The cadence carries Scripture with care, letting the light unfold without force. It reads as devotion meant to be sung as much as read...it\'s a hymn-poem at all. Fantastic write! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
Speaking of steadiness...did you just hear that...?
Glug!
January 7th, 2026 09:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Orchi, this feels reverent and steady. The cadence carries Scripture with care, letting the light unfold without force. It reads as devotion meant to be sung as much as read...it\'s a hymn-poem at all. Fantastic write! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
Speaking of steadiness...did you just hear that...?
Glug!
January 7th, 2026 09:24
Light And Dark
Friendship said:
Well written.Your poem revolves around the transformation from darkness to light that occurs through faith in the Lord. It emphasizes living a life that reflects the values of goodness, righteousness, and truth as children of light. The poet urges believers to reject the unfruitful works of darkness and to embrace a life filled with the Spirit of God, calling for awareness, wisdom, and active engagement with faith.
January 7th, 2026 07:12
Friendship said:
Well written.Your poem revolves around the transformation from darkness to light that occurs through faith in the Lord. It emphasizes living a life that reflects the values of goodness, righteousness, and truth as children of light. The poet urges believers to reject the unfruitful works of darkness and to embrace a life filled with the Spirit of God, calling for awareness, wisdom, and active engagement with faith.
January 7th, 2026 07:12
Light And Dark
sorenbarrett said:
This is another great hymn poem Orchi where light just as it is used in other verses is a metaphor for knowledge, truth and through them vision. This seems to align with Gnostic beliefs that knowledge alone could save one. That sect being excluded from the main stream and the acceptance that grace was the main saving power. Now I\'m going to have to look for that church in the caves where the dead sea scrolls were found. Good one Orchi
January 7th, 2026 03:46
sorenbarrett said:
This is another great hymn poem Orchi where light just as it is used in other verses is a metaphor for knowledge, truth and through them vision. This seems to align with Gnostic beliefs that knowledge alone could save one. That sect being excluded from the main stream and the acceptance that grace was the main saving power. Now I\'m going to have to look for that church in the caves where the dead sea scrolls were found. Good one Orchi
January 7th, 2026 03:46
Prayer Plea
Dominic Windram said:
A profoundly religious & spiritual poem...I really enjoyed reading it.
January 7th, 2026 03:16
Dominic Windram said:
A profoundly religious & spiritual poem...I really enjoyed reading it.
January 7th, 2026 03:16
Epiphany Enlightening
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great hymn-poem, Orchi! On the 12th day of Glugmas, no less! 😂
January 6th, 2026 13:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great hymn-poem, Orchi! On the 12th day of Glugmas, no less! 😂
January 6th, 2026 13:17
Epiphany Enlightening
sorenbarrett said:
Ah yes Orchi the famous story that sets the foundation for the New Testament and also the thematic conflict that gives great tension and interest to the story that old rascal Herod. I like your economy of words in this hymn making it so much easier to sing.
January 6th, 2026 04:09
sorenbarrett said:
Ah yes Orchi the famous story that sets the foundation for the New Testament and also the thematic conflict that gives great tension and interest to the story that old rascal Herod. I like your economy of words in this hymn making it so much easier to sing.
January 6th, 2026 04:09
Epiphany Enlightening
Dominic Windram said:
Nice write....really like the rhyme scheme & the vivid imagery.
January 6th, 2026 03:34
Dominic Windram said:
Nice write....really like the rhyme scheme & the vivid imagery.
January 6th, 2026 03:34
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