Comments received on poems by orchidee
A Ruler To Reign - OT/NT Series 2
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh no, there\'s no ruler to reign!
Why did she ever run away?
Turns out a glugging sailor came by,
Spinach and cream spray gone astray!
Ah-gah-gah-gah-glug-glug!
Geesh. I just let him get it out of the way. There...good job on this Orchi! Now if we could reign in Mr.\'s P & T, it would be a miracle of Advent proportions! 🤣
November 29th, 2025 09:18
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh no, there\'s no ruler to reign!
Why did she ever run away?
Turns out a glugging sailor came by,
Spinach and cream spray gone astray!
Ah-gah-gah-gah-glug-glug!
Geesh. I just let him get it out of the way. There...good job on this Orchi! Now if we could reign in Mr.\'s P & T, it would be a miracle of Advent proportions! 🤣
November 29th, 2025 09:18
A Ruler To Reign - OT/NT Series 2
Friendship said:
Well written. The poem revolves around the birth of Jesus Christ, specifically focusing on the prophetic announcement of His coming as the King of the Jews. It highlights the reactions of Herod and the people of Jerusalem, the inquiry of the chief priests and scribes, and the fulfillment of prophecy regarding Jesus\' birthplace in Bethlehem.
November 29th, 2025 07:31
Friendship said:
Well written. The poem revolves around the birth of Jesus Christ, specifically focusing on the prophetic announcement of His coming as the King of the Jews. It highlights the reactions of Herod and the people of Jerusalem, the inquiry of the chief priests and scribes, and the fulfillment of prophecy regarding Jesus\' birthplace in Bethlehem.
November 29th, 2025 07:31
A Ruler To Reign - OT/NT Series 2
Doggerel Dave said:
Sounds like there was dirty work at the crossroads when Herod had a go... but who won??
November 29th, 2025 04:15
Doggerel Dave said:
Sounds like there was dirty work at the crossroads when Herod had a go... but who won??
November 29th, 2025 04:15
A Ruler To Reign - OT/NT Series 2
sorenbarrett said:
Well that is pretty Christmassy Orchi and it\'s not even December yet. Another good one my friend
November 29th, 2025 03:39
sorenbarrett said:
Well that is pretty Christmassy Orchi and it\'s not even December yet. Another good one my friend
November 29th, 2025 03:39
A Son Brings Salvation - OT/NT Series 1
Bella Shepard said:
You set the stage my friend, the season is upon us. A beautiful story that never grows old, thank you!
November 28th, 2025 12:49
Bella Shepard said:
You set the stage my friend, the season is upon us. A beautiful story that never grows old, thank you!
November 28th, 2025 12:49
A Son Brings Salvation - OT/NT Series 1
Tristan Robert Lange said:
On another note, the whole virgin vs. young woman debate is actually pretty fascinating. In the Septuagint...the oldest full compilation of the Hebrew Scriptures translated into Greek...the translators chose the word παρθένος (parthenos) meaning virgin. But that was a mistranslation of the original Hebrew, which uses עַלְמָה (‘almāh), meaning young woman of marriageable age, not necessarily a virgin. That translation slip is one of the big reasons the Jewish community later produced their own standardized Hebrew Bible — the Tanakh — to preserve the original wording and avoid theological misunderstandings created by the Greek translation.
November 28th, 2025 10:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
On another note, the whole virgin vs. young woman debate is actually pretty fascinating. In the Septuagint...the oldest full compilation of the Hebrew Scriptures translated into Greek...the translators chose the word παρθένος (parthenos) meaning virgin. But that was a mistranslation of the original Hebrew, which uses עַלְמָה (‘almāh), meaning young woman of marriageable age, not necessarily a virgin. That translation slip is one of the big reasons the Jewish community later produced their own standardized Hebrew Bible — the Tanakh — to preserve the original wording and avoid theological misunderstandings created by the Greek translation.
November 28th, 2025 10:40
A Son Brings Salvation - OT/NT Series 1
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great Orchi. A fave! A Song brings Salvation, part 1. Spinoff: A sailor brings_________. Don\'t fill in THAT blank! 🤣 Glug!
November 28th, 2025 10:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great Orchi. A fave! A Song brings Salvation, part 1. Spinoff: A sailor brings_________. Don\'t fill in THAT blank! 🤣 Glug!
November 28th, 2025 10:35
I\'m \'orrible!
Paul Bell said:
KP me thinks is someone you don\'t bring back an opened pay packet, and you can\'t leave her cos she\'s like a sniffer dog on heat.
Fido on the other hand is a friend for life, but even he knows what side his bread is pedigree chummed.
November 28th, 2025 09:00
Paul Bell said:
KP me thinks is someone you don\'t bring back an opened pay packet, and you can\'t leave her cos she\'s like a sniffer dog on heat.
Fido on the other hand is a friend for life, but even he knows what side his bread is pedigree chummed.
November 28th, 2025 09:00
A Son Brings Salvation - OT/NT Series 1
orchidee said:
Thank you SB. It\'s the run up to Christmas that I don\'t like. Yes, oops, what is \'Fer\'? lol. I think you looked about 8 mins after I posted the poem. I returned earlier to correct it to \'bring\'.
Also I hate Christmas morning cos some fat beardy bloke has come down me chimney and I have to spend all morning clearing up the soot in the lounge. Christmas dinner\'s not until Boxing Day! lol.
November 28th, 2025 07:51
orchidee said:
Thank you SB. It\'s the run up to Christmas that I don\'t like. Yes, oops, what is \'Fer\'? lol. I think you looked about 8 mins after I posted the poem. I returned earlier to correct it to \'bring\'.
Also I hate Christmas morning cos some fat beardy bloke has come down me chimney and I have to spend all morning clearing up the soot in the lounge. Christmas dinner\'s not until Boxing Day! lol.
November 28th, 2025 07:51
A Son Brings Salvation - OT/NT Series 1
sorenbarrett said:
Orchi you know I hate Christmas but this is a wonderful hymn for the season that softens the blow of its advent. This is really one of my favorite of yours very well done and a fave. I am not sure but I think there are a couple of typos fourth line Fear for fer, third stanza first line bring for brign
November 28th, 2025 03:40
sorenbarrett said:
Orchi you know I hate Christmas but this is a wonderful hymn for the season that softens the blow of its advent. This is really one of my favorite of yours very well done and a fave. I am not sure but I think there are a couple of typos fourth line Fear for fer, third stanza first line bring for brign
November 28th, 2025 03:40
I\'m \'orrible!
Goldfinch60 said:
She gave me the key to your ball and chain so you wouldn\'t put water in my whisky!
Andy
November 28th, 2025 01:56
Goldfinch60 said:
She gave me the key to your ball and chain so you wouldn\'t put water in my whisky!
Andy
November 28th, 2025 01:56
I\'m \'orrible!
Friendship said:
The poem explores the humorous and somewhat absurd dynamics of a relationship, particularly focusing on the sense of entrapment and the playful banter between the speaker and KP (presumably a partner). The speaker expresses a tongue-in-cheek lamentation about being \"changed\" by marriage, suggesting both a loss of freedom and a playful acceptance of their situation.
November 27th, 2025 08:45
Friendship said:
The poem explores the humorous and somewhat absurd dynamics of a relationship, particularly focusing on the sense of entrapment and the playful banter between the speaker and KP (presumably a partner). The speaker expresses a tongue-in-cheek lamentation about being \"changed\" by marriage, suggesting both a loss of freedom and a playful acceptance of their situation.
November 27th, 2025 08:45
I\'m \'orrible!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
In the wee hours of the mornin\'
Where the cock crows so loudly,
A poet, Orchidee, on the sunrise bornin\'
An escape from KP avowedly.
In nomine Patris, et Filis, et glug glug glug Sancti! Amen!
Damn it P! Couldn\'t you wait seven extra beats? 🤷♂️
He\'s incorrigible I tell you! 🤣
November 27th, 2025 07:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
In the wee hours of the mornin\'
Where the cock crows so loudly,
A poet, Orchidee, on the sunrise bornin\'
An escape from KP avowedly.
In nomine Patris, et Filis, et glug glug glug Sancti! Amen!
Damn it P! Couldn\'t you wait seven extra beats? 🤷♂️
He\'s incorrigible I tell you! 🤣
November 27th, 2025 07:33
I\'m \'orrible!
Doggerel Dave said:
Your domestic dynamics do appear somewhat........................................................
November 27th, 2025 05:45
Doggerel Dave said:
Your domestic dynamics do appear somewhat........................................................
November 27th, 2025 05:45
I\'m \'orrible!
sorenbarrett said:
Always knew you were kind Orchi but double portions exceeds even your measures of kindness. Another fun read.
November 27th, 2025 04:04
sorenbarrett said:
Always knew you were kind Orchi but double portions exceeds even your measures of kindness. Another fun read.
November 27th, 2025 04:04
The Living And The Lifeless
Doggerel Dave said:
When I were young, I worked with an old bloke who summed up nicely far too many of the people around with the dismissal \"They\'re dead but they won\'t lie down\".
November 26th, 2025 18:52
Doggerel Dave said:
When I were young, I worked with an old bloke who summed up nicely far too many of the people around with the dismissal \"They\'re dead but they won\'t lie down\".
November 26th, 2025 18:52
The Living And The Lifeless
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great job Orchi! By the title, I thought you were differentiating between gluggers and knitters if you catch my...never mind! 🤣
November 26th, 2025 11:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great job Orchi! By the title, I thought you were differentiating between gluggers and knitters if you catch my...never mind! 🤣
November 26th, 2025 11:24
The Living And The Lifeless
Paul Bell said:
The best part of church is definitely the hymns.
The sinning part where they shout, and you always think it\'s you they\'re pointing too, is a bit off-putting.
Glad I\'ve got god on my side.
November 26th, 2025 10:04
Paul Bell said:
The best part of church is definitely the hymns.
The sinning part where they shout, and you always think it\'s you they\'re pointing too, is a bit off-putting.
Glad I\'ve got god on my side.
November 26th, 2025 10:04
The Living And The Lifeless
Katie B. said:
Well written, powerful. I enjoyed reading it.
November 26th, 2025 06:13
Katie B. said:
Well written, powerful. I enjoyed reading it.
November 26th, 2025 06:13
The Living And The Lifeless
sorenbarrett said:
This one a hymn and poem of proclamation it rings out in rhyme. Very nicely done Orchi loved it
November 26th, 2025 04:28
sorenbarrett said:
This one a hymn and poem of proclamation it rings out in rhyme. Very nicely done Orchi loved it
November 26th, 2025 04:28
The Temporary And The Eternal
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great hymn poem too. Whew...snuck that in before ....do you hear that clicking sound. Tom?
November 25th, 2025 23:15
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great hymn poem too. Whew...snuck that in before ....do you hear that clicking sound. Tom?
November 25th, 2025 23:15
The Temporary And The Eternal
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Plenty is temporary...Ah-gah-gah-gah-glug-glug....
Sadly, that is not one of them! 🤣 You\'ve now met:
THE ETERNAL GLUGGER
November 25th, 2025 23:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Plenty is temporary...Ah-gah-gah-gah-glug-glug....
Sadly, that is not one of them! 🤣 You\'ve now met:
THE ETERNAL GLUGGER
November 25th, 2025 23:07
The Temporary And The Eternal
Doggerel Dave said:
Temporary is always a waste of time and effort - go for the eternal.....
November 25th, 2025 16:49
Doggerel Dave said:
Temporary is always a waste of time and effort - go for the eternal.....
November 25th, 2025 16:49
The Temporary And The Eternal
sorenbarrett said:
I like this one Orchi it has a ring to it declaring freedom for a people. Nicely done
November 25th, 2025 04:05
sorenbarrett said:
I like this one Orchi it has a ring to it declaring freedom for a people. Nicely done
November 25th, 2025 04:05
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