Peace Promise
Friendship said:

Well written,,,,,,,

October 9th, 2025 14:04

Dwelling Delight
Neville said:


I was only just saying to my wife that there\'s a guineapig or summat on here wot used to write hymn poems every day .. and just to prove my point I went to prove myself write by showing her .. But then lo and behold, as if by some divine miracle, a fresh one appeared write before our very eyes .. and my wife turned unto me and said .. you f****ng liar, wotever that furry looking thing might be, it still does .. So I said, Oh\' my gosh .. perhaps .. Neville 😎👍

October 9th, 2025 02:58

Dwelling Delight
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Orchi, this is wonderful…you’ve caught that old-world reverence and rhythm perfectly. It reads like it was meant to be sung under stained glass, echoing through time itself. There’s something deeply comforting in that cadence...like a psalm rediscovered.

And you’ll be pleased to know, Ol’ Tom and Obi heard it drifting down the canal while taking the gondola to Wan Ken. Ol’ Tom nearly dropped his pipe trying to hum along—then fell straight into the water and was too tired to swim. Obi didn’t wonder why, but he did fetch ’im out with his special foam float (Jedi foam, that is). Said it reminded him of the “good old liturgical days,” though he still thinks Obi sings flat. Some friend that Tom is, after Obi saved him and all. 😂

October 8th, 2025 19:59

Harvest Hopes
Goldfinch60 said:

Good one Orchi.

October 8th, 2025 01:13

Harvest Hopes
sorenbarrett said:

Now there is a hymn I could sing with clear conscious and open heart Orchi. A hymn painted with beautiful nature. Most lovely my friend

October 7th, 2025 12:11

Prayer Petitions
Doggerel Dave said:

\'Tis the season for a return to orchi form again...KP a distant memory?

October 6th, 2025 18:13

You bounder, you cad, you....!
NafisaSB said:

this poem depicts society dropping open taunting comments to helpless victims - who unfortunately may not be much to look at ,whatever the depth they have..

October 5th, 2025 23:31

You bounder, you cad, you....!
Goldfinch60 said:

KP may get her revenge one day Orchi and you will end up in the kennel LOL

October 5th, 2025 01:21

You bounder, you cad, you....!
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Who lives in some rubbish under the sea...KP Botox! 😂 Hey Popeye, what\'s that stuff floating bye? 😳 WAIT!!! 🛑 Don\'t answer that!

Ah-gah-gah-gah-gah-gah!

October 4th, 2025 09:11

You bounder, you cad, you....!
Friendship said:

Love your humor, your poem satirizes the way people can be deceptively critical while feigning politeness, focusing on the character KP, who is subjected to insidious remarks about her appearance. It highlights societal pressures regarding beauty and self-image, and the cruel impact of seemingly innocuous comments.

October 4th, 2025 08:51

A fatal mistake - or con-fusion?
2781 said:

Oh, I thought, Confucius

October 3rd, 2025 08:48

Awww, no invite!
Tom Dylan said:

Haha! That made me smile! No sign of intelligent life! Bloody hilarious! :-D

September 30th, 2025 06:02

When will you............?
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Who live in a Pineapple Down on the Sea?…Don’t answer that or we’ll have yet another frequent visitor! And what he eats is crusty! 😂🤢

September 29th, 2025 15:02

When will you............?
Doggerel Dave said:

Please ask him to sort those who categorise their work as 18 + for absolutely no reason at all - overwhelming disappointment....

September 29th, 2025 07:55

When will you............?
sorenbarrett said:

Dogs the smartest animal on the planet have convinced us that they are out best friend and trained us to do as they bid while all the time thinking that they are doing our biding a case of the trained being convinced that they are the trainer. After all who can sit around all day get free room and board have someone bath them scratch them behind the ears and rub their belly. Pretty good life I would say.


September 29th, 2025 03:44