Comments received on poems by orchidee
Fresh First Fruits
Goldfinch60 said:
Nobody should hunger in our world Orchi.
Andy
October 13th, 2025 01:04
Goldfinch60 said:
Nobody should hunger in our world Orchi.
Andy
October 13th, 2025 01:04
Fresh First Fruits
Doggerel Dave said:
Nah - it woz always called Harvest Sunday and occurred in October when I went to Sunday School....... You are just making it complicated to ensure I don\'t pop up there again... (they made me mouth the words but make no sound when I woz in the choir)....
October 13th, 2025 00:07
Doggerel Dave said:
Nah - it woz always called Harvest Sunday and occurred in October when I went to Sunday School....... You are just making it complicated to ensure I don\'t pop up there again... (they made me mouth the words but make no sound when I woz in the choir)....
October 13th, 2025 00:07
Fresh First Fruits
sorenbarrett said:
Well Orchi that is why I love your hymns not only historic and educational but meet the criteria for me saying I went to church today. Loved it
October 12th, 2025 12:29
sorenbarrett said:
Well Orchi that is why I love your hymns not only historic and educational but meet the criteria for me saying I went to church today. Loved it
October 12th, 2025 12:29
Peace Promise
arqios said:
Ooh! Saved by the bell 🔔 I was considering posting up a hymn or two but you’ve filled that empty space quite elegantly yet again🕊️🙏🏻
October 10th, 2025 17:00
arqios said:
Ooh! Saved by the bell 🔔 I was considering posting up a hymn or two but you’ve filled that empty space quite elegantly yet again🕊️🙏🏻
October 10th, 2025 17:00
Peace Promise
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great write, Orchi! Popeye promises peace pie peppers pop pretentiously. Why? Don\'t answer that! Hehehe!
October 9th, 2025 20:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great write, Orchi! Popeye promises peace pie peppers pop pretentiously. Why? Don\'t answer that! Hehehe!
October 9th, 2025 20:08
Peace Promise
sorenbarrett said:
Another great poem or should I say hymn. Feels like old times. Keep it going Orchi
October 9th, 2025 12:14
sorenbarrett said:
Another great poem or should I say hymn. Feels like old times. Keep it going Orchi
October 9th, 2025 12:14
Dwelling Delight
Neville said:
I was only just saying to my wife that there\'s a guineapig or summat on here wot used to write hymn poems every day .. and just to prove my point I went to prove myself write by showing her .. But then lo and behold, as if by some divine miracle, a fresh one appeared write before our very eyes .. and my wife turned unto me and said .. you f****ng liar, wotever that furry looking thing might be, it still does .. So I said, Oh\' my gosh .. perhaps .. Neville 😎👍
October 9th, 2025 02:58
Neville said:
I was only just saying to my wife that there\'s a guineapig or summat on here wot used to write hymn poems every day .. and just to prove my point I went to prove myself write by showing her .. But then lo and behold, as if by some divine miracle, a fresh one appeared write before our very eyes .. and my wife turned unto me and said .. you f****ng liar, wotever that furry looking thing might be, it still does .. So I said, Oh\' my gosh .. perhaps .. Neville 😎👍
October 9th, 2025 02:58
Dwelling Delight
Goldfinch60 said:
Good one Orchi. It is good to see you writing these again.
Andy
October 9th, 2025 01:17
Goldfinch60 said:
Good one Orchi. It is good to see you writing these again.
Andy
October 9th, 2025 01:17
Dwelling Delight
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Orchi, this is wonderful…you’ve caught that old-world reverence and rhythm perfectly. It reads like it was meant to be sung under stained glass, echoing through time itself. There’s something deeply comforting in that cadence...like a psalm rediscovered.
And you’ll be pleased to know, Ol’ Tom and Obi heard it drifting down the canal while taking the gondola to Wan Ken. Ol’ Tom nearly dropped his pipe trying to hum along—then fell straight into the water and was too tired to swim. Obi didn’t wonder why, but he did fetch ’im out with his special foam float (Jedi foam, that is). Said it reminded him of the “good old liturgical days,” though he still thinks Obi sings flat. Some friend that Tom is, after Obi saved him and all. 😂
October 8th, 2025 19:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Orchi, this is wonderful…you’ve caught that old-world reverence and rhythm perfectly. It reads like it was meant to be sung under stained glass, echoing through time itself. There’s something deeply comforting in that cadence...like a psalm rediscovered.
And you’ll be pleased to know, Ol’ Tom and Obi heard it drifting down the canal while taking the gondola to Wan Ken. Ol’ Tom nearly dropped his pipe trying to hum along—then fell straight into the water and was too tired to swim. Obi didn’t wonder why, but he did fetch ’im out with his special foam float (Jedi foam, that is). Said it reminded him of the “good old liturgical days,” though he still thinks Obi sings flat. Some friend that Tom is, after Obi saved him and all. 😂
October 8th, 2025 19:59
Dwelling Delight
sorenbarrett said:
Another great hymn Orchi I can see that you are back in the swing of it
October 8th, 2025 11:42
sorenbarrett said:
Another great hymn Orchi I can see that you are back in the swing of it
October 8th, 2025 11:42
Harvest Hopes
sorenbarrett said:
Now there is a hymn I could sing with clear conscious and open heart Orchi. A hymn painted with beautiful nature. Most lovely my friend
October 7th, 2025 12:11
sorenbarrett said:
Now there is a hymn I could sing with clear conscious and open heart Orchi. A hymn painted with beautiful nature. Most lovely my friend
October 7th, 2025 12:11
Prayer Petitions
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful job, my friend! A hymn-poem that even Popeye, bless his heart, can\'t ____________ during. Don\'t fill that in! 🤣
October 6th, 2025 20:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful job, my friend! A hymn-poem that even Popeye, bless his heart, can\'t ____________ during. Don\'t fill that in! 🤣
October 6th, 2025 20:40
Prayer Petitions
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Tis the season for a return to orchi form again...KP a distant memory?
October 6th, 2025 18:13
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Tis the season for a return to orchi form again...KP a distant memory?
October 6th, 2025 18:13
Prayer Petitions
sorenbarrett said:
For a non believer I find myself very pleased to hear your hymns again my friend. Lovely and missed
October 6th, 2025 14:39
sorenbarrett said:
For a non believer I find myself very pleased to hear your hymns again my friend. Lovely and missed
October 6th, 2025 14:39
You bounder, you cad, you....!
NafisaSB said:
this poem depicts society dropping open taunting comments to helpless victims - who unfortunately may not be much to look at ,whatever the depth they have..
October 5th, 2025 23:31
NafisaSB said:
this poem depicts society dropping open taunting comments to helpless victims - who unfortunately may not be much to look at ,whatever the depth they have..
October 5th, 2025 23:31
You bounder, you cad, you....!
Neville said:
I reckon she\'s gonna have your guts for garters .. 😎
October 5th, 2025 11:05
Neville said:
I reckon she\'s gonna have your guts for garters .. 😎
October 5th, 2025 11:05
You bounder, you cad, you....!
Goldfinch60 said:
KP may get her revenge one day Orchi and you will end up in the kennel LOL
October 5th, 2025 01:21
Goldfinch60 said:
KP may get her revenge one day Orchi and you will end up in the kennel LOL
October 5th, 2025 01:21
You bounder, you cad, you....!
Doggerel Dave said:
Stap me vitals - I\'m done for the rest of the day after that.....
October 4th, 2025 18:51
Doggerel Dave said:
Stap me vitals - I\'m done for the rest of the day after that.....
October 4th, 2025 18:51
You bounder, you cad, you....!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Who lives in some rubbish under the sea...KP Botox! 😂 Hey Popeye, what\'s that stuff floating bye? 😳 WAIT!!! 🛑 Don\'t answer that!
Ah-gah-gah-gah-gah-gah!
October 4th, 2025 09:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Who lives in some rubbish under the sea...KP Botox! 😂 Hey Popeye, what\'s that stuff floating bye? 😳 WAIT!!! 🛑 Don\'t answer that!
Ah-gah-gah-gah-gah-gah!
October 4th, 2025 09:11
You bounder, you cad, you....!
sorenbarrett said:
Orchi you and I know that you need someone to dump on and so do we all. it sure is lucky that you got Fido to take your back. We all need such a friend. Sometimes we do but them with good meals. Good write Orchi
October 4th, 2025 09:11
sorenbarrett said:
Orchi you and I know that you need someone to dump on and so do we all. it sure is lucky that you got Fido to take your back. We all need such a friend. Sometimes we do but them with good meals. Good write Orchi
October 4th, 2025 09:11
You bounder, you cad, you....!
Friendship said:
Love your humor, your poem satirizes the way people can be deceptively critical while feigning politeness, focusing on the character KP, who is subjected to insidious remarks about her appearance. It highlights societal pressures regarding beauty and self-image, and the cruel impact of seemingly innocuous comments.
October 4th, 2025 08:51
Friendship said:
Love your humor, your poem satirizes the way people can be deceptively critical while feigning politeness, focusing on the character KP, who is subjected to insidious remarks about her appearance. It highlights societal pressures regarding beauty and self-image, and the cruel impact of seemingly innocuous comments.
October 4th, 2025 08:51
When will you............?
Poetic Licence said:
Loving that contribution to the fusion, nice one
October 4th, 2025 02:16
Poetic Licence said:
Loving that contribution to the fusion, nice one
October 4th, 2025 02:16
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