Comments received on poems by Gesenia Burley
I am Creation
dusk arising said:
Whereas I don\'t buy the genesis theme written by men, when the world was thought to be flat, I like the \"I am created perfect/imperfect by god\" theme.
Let us not forget that same god creates those with birth defects, creates virus\'s, storms which kill thousands too.
Fear or worship? Or have they become the same thing for some?
February 22nd, 2021 04:24
dusk arising said:
Whereas I don\'t buy the genesis theme written by men, when the world was thought to be flat, I like the \"I am created perfect/imperfect by god\" theme.
Let us not forget that same god creates those with birth defects, creates virus\'s, storms which kill thousands too.
Fear or worship? Or have they become the same thing for some?
February 22nd, 2021 04:24
I am Creation
jarcher54 said:
I am not religious, but your faith translates beautifully. Retelling the Genesis creation story from a personal perspective at first seems a little egotistical, but your joy is so authentic it is infectious. I love the last line.
February 22nd, 2021 02:17
jarcher54 said:
I am not religious, but your faith translates beautifully. Retelling the Genesis creation story from a personal perspective at first seems a little egotistical, but your joy is so authentic it is infectious. I love the last line.
February 22nd, 2021 02:17
2020
Bragee said:
Great writing and Iām glad you are a beacon of positivity and hope as this truly has been a trying year.
December 30th, 2020 14:05
Bragee said:
Great writing and Iām glad you are a beacon of positivity and hope as this truly has been a trying year.
December 30th, 2020 14:05
What\'s The Answer?
Accidental Poet said:
Very well said Gesenia. When will people learn that violence solves nothing. Violence feeds upon itself. Great write.
June 20th, 2020 12:28
Accidental Poet said:
Very well said Gesenia. When will people learn that violence solves nothing. Violence feeds upon itself. Great write.
June 20th, 2020 12:28
Coronavirus
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening GESENIA - Angela here.Thanks for a very upliftung Poem & Testimony. As a Fellow Christian I have no fear of Death I know God is always in control. I am a Physiotherapist and work in a Hospital ! Ive only been married two weeks - I do trust the Lord I wont get COVID 19 ~ Pray for me we live in perilous times ! I love the positives in the second half of your elegant Poem. God always provides Positives for lifes Negatives like COVID 19 ! Home Cookin* - Prayer Meetings & Bible Study on line & People hearing Preachin* on line etc - AMEN. Easter is a great time to remember the Crucifixion as Gods answer to Mans Sin. COVID 19 will come & go - but JESUS is consistent *The Same - Yesterday - Today & Forever* AMEN ! Thanks for sharin* please check our site !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love ANGELA & BRIAN ššššš
April 3rd, 2020 16:03
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening GESENIA - Angela here.Thanks for a very upliftung Poem & Testimony. As a Fellow Christian I have no fear of Death I know God is always in control. I am a Physiotherapist and work in a Hospital ! Ive only been married two weeks - I do trust the Lord I wont get COVID 19 ~ Pray for me we live in perilous times ! I love the positives in the second half of your elegant Poem. God always provides Positives for lifes Negatives like COVID 19 ! Home Cookin* - Prayer Meetings & Bible Study on line & People hearing Preachin* on line etc - AMEN. Easter is a great time to remember the Crucifixion as Gods answer to Mans Sin. COVID 19 will come & go - but JESUS is consistent *The Same - Yesterday - Today & Forever* AMEN ! Thanks for sharin* please check our site !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love ANGELA & BRIAN ššššš
April 3rd, 2020 16:03
Coronavirus
orchidee said:
It\'s true Genesia. Hopefully a renewed surge of faith at the Easter season, though it may be the strangest Easter we ever experience.
We\'re on the winning side (Christ\'s) in the battle, aren\'t we?!
April 3rd, 2020 02:22
orchidee said:
It\'s true Genesia. Hopefully a renewed surge of faith at the Easter season, though it may be the strangest Easter we ever experience.
We\'re on the winning side (Christ\'s) in the battle, aren\'t we?!
April 3rd, 2020 02:22
Difference Exist
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. I have a philosophy which says if anybody has a problem with the way I am that is their problem - not mine.
May 27th, 2017 01:01
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. I have a philosophy which says if anybody has a problem with the way I am that is their problem - not mine.
May 27th, 2017 01:01
Play Ball!
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Great poem GESINA ~ elegant structure (rhyme & rhythm !) and a very important topic ! If at first you don\'t succeed TRY TRY and TRY again ! That is how the Game of Life must be played out every day ~ Blessings BRIAN (UK). Please check my poems ~ Thanks B
March 22nd, 2017 02:15
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Great poem GESINA ~ elegant structure (rhyme & rhythm !) and a very important topic ! If at first you don\'t succeed TRY TRY and TRY again ! That is how the Game of Life must be played out every day ~ Blessings BRIAN (UK). Please check my poems ~ Thanks B
March 22nd, 2017 02:15
Sunflower
Tony36 said:
Sunflowers are a wonderful plant, got a few of them myself. Great write
February 28th, 2017 09:04
Tony36 said:
Sunflowers are a wonderful plant, got a few of them myself. Great write
February 28th, 2017 09:04
Fighting Weary Obstacles
RRYOUNG08 said:
Inspiring and Lovely poetry. Romans 8 is a very inspirational verse that reminds us all to \"Stay In\". Thanks for sharing this and yes blessings are on the way...
February 27th, 2017 12:36
RRYOUNG08 said:
Inspiring and Lovely poetry. Romans 8 is a very inspirational verse that reminds us all to \"Stay In\". Thanks for sharing this and yes blessings are on the way...
February 27th, 2017 12:36
Why Me, the Sun?!
willyweed said:
you said you saw a drawing your friend did? them\'s be the one\'s me thinks but maybe not my head hurts if Me thinks too much...I mean often.. I mean oh I don\'t know what I mean now...you know what I mean? ww
February 27th, 2017 04:36
willyweed said:
you said you saw a drawing your friend did? them\'s be the one\'s me thinks but maybe not my head hurts if Me thinks too much...I mean often.. I mean oh I don\'t know what I mean now...you know what I mean? ww
February 27th, 2017 04:36
Why Me, the Sun?!
willyweed said:
go look at some more pictures and report back here! go on now go! and hurry back I miss you already? good stuff you penned here my dear hey that rhymes? ww
February 27th, 2017 04:13
willyweed said:
go look at some more pictures and report back here! go on now go! and hurry back I miss you already? good stuff you penned here my dear hey that rhymes? ww
February 27th, 2017 04:13
Why Me, the Sun?!
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, small can be wonderful.
February 27th, 2017 02:31
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, small can be wonderful.
February 27th, 2017 02:31
