Comments received on poems by SquareGirl



The Prince with no Crown
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

hello squaregirl ,this is a very engaging and entertaining piece of writing , i very much enjoyed reading this :-)

you tell a very good story , of a girl stuck in a bad situation with a bad man , she has hope after meeting the man with the flute but her hopes are shot down by the truth about his wife .. a great story !

February 26th, 2018 06:26

Beyond Repair
Christina8 said:

Devastating but great write. I can relate from a time long ago. Hope your heart heals!

November 25th, 2017 00:00

I\'m sorry
SorrowfullyHappy said:

well written i could feel the emotion and I\'m sure your kids love you just as much as you love them

April 24th, 2017 12:20

I\'m sorry
jdblake said:

This is a good write and emotional. This poem must mean a lot to you and if this is true then it means you really do love your kids. You still have beauty within and life is only judged from here on. You have to forget about the past and live for the future because you can create beautiful things.

April 24th, 2017 11:14

I\'m sorry
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

April 24th, 2017 10:50

I\'m sorry
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write.

April 24th, 2017 01:46

I can feel
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Ohhhhhhhhh \"P\" a very fatalistic poem ! I love PEPPERMINTS ~ so I will never let you go ! I am praying each day for GOD to get you back on track and full strength MINTY again ! Spearmint Hugs ~ BRIAN ~ Please check my Poem and my Cities FUSION ~ Thanks B.

April 23rd, 2017 10:54

The Darkness
SorrowfullyHappy said:

Beautiful write I could feel the emotion
i can relate

March 6th, 2017 13:56

The Bird
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write. I do hope that your wings heal soon.

March 6th, 2017 09:08

The Bird
Tony36 said:

Wonderfully written and expressed Great write

March 6th, 2017 08:42

The Bird
WriteBeLight said:

Oh. So, sad and relatable. Great job.

March 6th, 2017 08:41

The Bird
willyweed said:

climb on my back I \'ll lift you and you can launch from there? very good rhyme scheme write on WW

March 6th, 2017 07:55

The Darkness
Goldfinch60 said:

Good, powerfully emotive write. Welcome to MPS.

March 6th, 2017 02:19