Comments received on poems by SquareGirl
The Prince with no Crown
Caring dove said:
hello squaregirl ,this is a very engaging and entertaining piece of writing , i very much enjoyed reading this :-)
you tell a very good story , of a girl stuck in a bad situation with a bad man , she has hope after meeting the man with the flute but her hopes are shot down by the truth about his wife .. a great story !
February 26th, 2018 06:26
Caring dove said:
hello squaregirl ,this is a very engaging and entertaining piece of writing , i very much enjoyed reading this :-)
you tell a very good story , of a girl stuck in a bad situation with a bad man , she has hope after meeting the man with the flute but her hopes are shot down by the truth about his wife .. a great story !
February 26th, 2018 06:26
Beyond Repair
Christina8 said:
Devastating but great write. I can relate from a time long ago. Hope your heart heals!
November 25th, 2017 00:00
Christina8 said:
Devastating but great write. I can relate from a time long ago. Hope your heart heals!
November 25th, 2017 00:00
I\'m sorry
SorrowfullyHappy said:
well written i could feel the emotion and I\'m sure your kids love you just as much as you love them
April 24th, 2017 12:20
SorrowfullyHappy said:
well written i could feel the emotion and I\'m sure your kids love you just as much as you love them
April 24th, 2017 12:20
I\'m sorry
jdblake said:
This is a good write and emotional. This poem must mean a lot to you and if this is true then it means you really do love your kids. You still have beauty within and life is only judged from here on. You have to forget about the past and live for the future because you can create beautiful things.
April 24th, 2017 11:14
jdblake said:
This is a good write and emotional. This poem must mean a lot to you and if this is true then it means you really do love your kids. You still have beauty within and life is only judged from here on. You have to forget about the past and live for the future because you can create beautiful things.
April 24th, 2017 11:14
I can feel
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhhhhhhh \"P\" a very fatalistic poem ! I love PEPPERMINTS ~ so I will never let you go ! I am praying each day for GOD to get you back on track and full strength MINTY again ! Spearmint Hugs ~ BRIAN ~ Please check my Poem and my Cities FUSION ~ Thanks B.
April 23rd, 2017 10:54
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhhhhhhh \"P\" a very fatalistic poem ! I love PEPPERMINTS ~ so I will never let you go ! I am praying each day for GOD to get you back on track and full strength MINTY again ! Spearmint Hugs ~ BRIAN ~ Please check my Poem and my Cities FUSION ~ Thanks B.
April 23rd, 2017 10:54
The Darkness
SorrowfullyHappy said:
Beautiful write I could feel the emotion
i can relate
March 6th, 2017 13:56
SorrowfullyHappy said:
Beautiful write I could feel the emotion
i can relate
March 6th, 2017 13:56
The Bird
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. I do hope that your wings heal soon.
March 6th, 2017 09:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. I do hope that your wings heal soon.
March 6th, 2017 09:08
The Bird
willyweed said:
climb on my back I \'ll lift you and you can launch from there? very good rhyme scheme write on WW
March 6th, 2017 07:55
willyweed said:
climb on my back I \'ll lift you and you can launch from there? very good rhyme scheme write on WW
March 6th, 2017 07:55
