Comments received on poems by Garry
The Airman
MendedFences27 said:
It reminds me of all those old newsreels of men and their flying machines, which never flew, and some were killed attempting to do so. Very succinct, great rhyming, and a very thoughtfully planned presentation. Words well chosen to convey the image. I think it\'s about wild carelessness, or insanity, or maybe drug addiction, hopeless causes all. One must try to prepare skillfully before attemping such folly. On the other hand, where would we be without courageous experimenter. - Phil A.
March 20th, 2017 21:00
MendedFences27 said:
It reminds me of all those old newsreels of men and their flying machines, which never flew, and some were killed attempting to do so. Very succinct, great rhyming, and a very thoughtfully planned presentation. Words well chosen to convey the image. I think it\'s about wild carelessness, or insanity, or maybe drug addiction, hopeless causes all. One must try to prepare skillfully before attemping such folly. On the other hand, where would we be without courageous experimenter. - Phil A.
March 20th, 2017 21:00
The Airman
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME GARRY ~ Thanks for your first poem which aptly describes one of the many effects of LSD ~ MAN I feel I can fly ! Thanks for sharing ~ Please check my Poems ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
March 20th, 2017 18:55
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME GARRY ~ Thanks for your first poem which aptly describes one of the many effects of LSD ~ MAN I feel I can fly ! Thanks for sharing ~ Please check my Poems ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
March 20th, 2017 18:55
The Airman
Fay Slimm. said:
A terse and well composed summary in compelling rhyme of tragic results when risks are taken too soon. Welcome Garry and look forward to reading more of your work
March 20th, 2017 17:19
Fay Slimm. said:
A terse and well composed summary in compelling rhyme of tragic results when risks are taken too soon. Welcome Garry and look forward to reading more of your work
March 20th, 2017 17:19
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