Comments received on poems by Garry



Wasted On the Young
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, would we have learned from our mistakes or were our mistakes the fun part of being young, in my case it was a very long time ago.

April 18th, 2017 08:00

Wasted On the Young
Michael Edwards said:

So do I - can we do it together?

April 18th, 2017 03:33

A Haiku a Day
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write.

April 18th, 2017 01:21

A Haiku a Day
Michael Edwards said:

I eat an apple a day - and I went to the doctors a couple of weeks ago - but perhaps the saying is right - he\'s never come to me. Great little haiku - I love them as well

April 17th, 2017 22:41

A Haiku a Day
capt.looselip said:

Emotional rheumatism isn\'t fun

April 17th, 2017 18:31

Daft Enough to Die
Goldfinch60 said:

The body might go but our Spirit lives on to infinity.

Good write.

April 17th, 2017 00:38

Daft Enough to Die
P.H.Rose said:

I like this Gary,
You and me both
How the mind
Works that is...
The most unusual
Thoughts go through
My head at the most
weird times... I\'ve just
Posted some while
Waiting for Chinese
Takeaway....
There won\'t be anyone
At my funeral Gary,
As I\'m gonna live forever
Ha ha ha...


April 16th, 2017 15:35

Daft Enough to Die
Michael Edwards said:

For me I\'d wait until Friday - I\'m doing a watercolour demonstration for a local art group on Thursday and I\'d want time to cash the cheque before I pop my clogs. Great couple of stanzas.

April 16th, 2017 14:03

Silence is Golden? . . (haiku?)
WriteBeLight said:

Silence can be lousy, sometimes Garry. Good write.

April 16th, 2017 06:09

Silence is Golden? . . (haiku?)
P.H.Rose said:

Ha ha.. Love this
Garry...

April 15th, 2017 09:40

Silence is Golden? . . (haiku?)
Garry said:

Thank you.

April 15th, 2017 06:58

Silence is Golden? . . (haiku?)
orchidee said:

Good write. Be long if you wish! Don\'t waffle though. OK - you can, seeing as I do! heehee.

April 15th, 2017 06:29

Silence is Golden? . . (haiku?)
Jabberwocky said:

Nice :)

April 15th, 2017 06:14

Silence is Golden? . . (haiku?)
Garry said:

Gross.

April 15th, 2017 03:32

Silence is Golden? . . (haiku?)
Michael Edwards said:

Good un Garry - golden or ear wax yellow?

April 15th, 2017 03:32

Words of Love
Garry said:

What did that silence say i wonder

April 14th, 2017 05:51

Words of Love
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write. The silences can be so loud.

April 14th, 2017 00:32

Words of Love
Fay Slimm. said:

A fine summary of how former relationships create and bind. The heart speaks through silence so clearly at times and listening to the spaces between is a gem of a phrase to remember - -a perceptive write and a lovely first read of my day. Thanks for sharing it Garry.

April 13th, 2017 23:31

Words of Love
P.H.Rose said:

Really good poem Gary
Enjoyed it very much

April 13th, 2017 17:48

Words of Love
WriteBeLight said:

Sometimes just a look can say a thousand words. Very good work, Garry

April 13th, 2017 15:43

Words of Love
soydanrb said:

I really enjoyed your poem!

April 13th, 2017 14:11

Feeling Ill. (A haiku)
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Well GARY ~ I do keep warning you !
SHAM-PAIN at night ~ REAL-PAIN in he morning ~ Yous BRIAN

April 12th, 2017 18:03

Feeling Ill. (A haiku)
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Well GARY ~ I do keep warning you !
SHAM-PAIN at night ~ REAL-PAIN in he morning ~ Yous BRIAN

April 12th, 2017 18:03

Feeling Ill. (A haiku)
P.H.Rose said:

Ha ha.. Well done Garry
Perfect discription

April 12th, 2017 15:45

Feeling Ill. (A haiku)
Alethia said:

I didn\'t really get this one

April 12th, 2017 14:34

Feeling Ill. (A haiku)
willyweed said:

nice hang over Garry!

April 12th, 2017 14:20

Feeling Ill. (A haiku)
Michael Edwards said:

Good one Garry - you might find it hard to believe but I\'ve only ever been drunk once in my life - boring old fart I hear you say.

April 12th, 2017 14:10

Dead Red Limerick.
Goldfinch60 said:

Good fun write.

April 12th, 2017 00:20

Dead Red Limerick.
elchupacabra said:

hahaha well done

April 11th, 2017 21:05

I Wish My Friends Were Like sausages
elchupacabra said:

hahaha i have to say, this is really funny and clever. nice to have a lighthearted simile that kinda... cheers up... something a bit less cheery.

April 11th, 2017 17:15

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