Comments received on poems by Garry



Breakfast.
Garry said:

Write it cos i had muesli this morning. Normally just have fruit. Still have coffee. Bacon butties are for mid morning. Going out for an all day full English in a bit at Inglesport cafe.

June 10th, 2017 03:23

Breakfast.
Michael Edwards said:

I go along with that except giving up coffee of course - too early for wine !!

June 10th, 2017 02:59

Breakfast.
Fay Slimm. said:

Doc\'s advice is worth considering Garry - remembering however that sometimes a bit of what you fancy does you good too.

June 10th, 2017 02:52

Back of School.
Goldfinch60 said:

Memories. Good write.

June 3rd, 2017 01:05

Back of School.
Louis Gibbs said:

Uncommon as it is, your poem appeals to me a great deal, Garry. Well done!

June 2nd, 2017 10:57

Back of School.
Michael Edwards said:

Not sure my mind was on ice cream at the time - but it is now!

June 2nd, 2017 10:36

Back of School.
Augustus said:

Adolescence is a disease, from which we eventual overcome. Nicely done.

June 2nd, 2017 10:17

Them and Us
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write. It can be hard to just be ourselves sometimes.

May 22nd, 2017 00:41

Them and Us
Augustus said:

Clever, consistent. Like the message.

May 21st, 2017 12:20

Them and Us
swingline said:

And that cape keeps getting in the way . And that udderwear worn outside the tights gets way to many snickles , snorts and outlandish laughs .

May 21st, 2017 08:24

Poor Kevin
Goldfinch60 said:

We do not see ourselves in the mirror as others see us, we only see a reflection of ourselves.

May 21st, 2017 00:45

Poor Kevin
orchidee said:

Did the mirror crack too?! heehee.

May 20th, 2017 10:43

Poor Kevin
swingline said:

Throw the mirror away . Ignorance is bliss .

May 20th, 2017 05:39

Poor Kevin
Michael Edwards said:

I know the feeling well - good un Garry - or is it Kevin?

May 20th, 2017 05:29

A little longer
swingline said:

Short , but floods my mind with thoughts from the brevity of life to just another day in eternity .

May 17th, 2017 06:50

A little longer
Jabberwocky said:

When it\'s gone it\'s gone.
But on the bright side if your heart were always light where would the poetry come from?
I guess we could all be happy and just write limericks :)

May 17th, 2017 03:56

A little longer
Michael Edwards said:

We\'re both into short ones and this a real good un.

May 17th, 2017 02:55

A little longer
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write. If, such a strong word.

May 17th, 2017 01:42

Two modest haikus
Michael Edwards said:

just like you
I\'m good looking too
and I know its true
cos on inspection
there\'s pure perfection
in the mirror\'s reflection


May 13th, 2017 20:54

Two modest haikus
swingline said:

I believe it all , especially the gasps .

May 13th, 2017 14:16

Two modest haikus
Garry said:

I have a very beautiful mirror. What\'s wrong with yours?

May 13th, 2017 13:53

Revealing Nothing
Garry said:

Dark 30?

May 12th, 2017 01:30

Revealing Nothing
swingline said:

Some secrets are best kept in the dark . (like mushrooms) Long walks at night , in the dark , dark moon , dark cloudy , dark thirty is very romantic .

May 11th, 2017 17:20

Revealing Nothing
Fay Slimm. said:

Such a clever few words which say so much.

May 11th, 2017 13:46

Revealing Nothing
Tony36 said:

Great write

May 11th, 2017 10:14

Revealing Nothing
WriteBeLight said:

Some things are better left unsaid :)

May 11th, 2017 10:07

Revealing Nothing
Garry said:

Short is great. I have a very poor atten...

May 11th, 2017 09:48

Revealing Nothing
Michael Edwards said:

I love these short ones - they often say more than several stanzas - And this a super piece.

May 11th, 2017 09:42

The Shadow of my Passing
Goldfinch60 said:

Live each moment they are so fleeting and so precious.

May 11th, 2017 01:39

The Shadow of my Passing
Fay Slimm. said:

I love the uplift of this optimistic few lines Garry - it worked a treat for me.

May 11th, 2017 00:05

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