Comments received on poems by Garry
The Last Goodbye
P.H.Rose said:
Gary this so good,
I absolutely love it.
It is my kind of poem
So very well done sir....
April 4th, 2017 16:28
P.H.Rose said:
Gary this so good,
I absolutely love it.
It is my kind of poem
So very well done sir....
April 4th, 2017 16:28
The Last Goodbye
Fay Slimm. said:
Sad but true Garry that the kind and softly spoken often have much more to tell. You will his good qualities stored in memory for always and as your poem relates things left undone maybe there for a reason. An endearing read .
April 4th, 2017 16:10
Fay Slimm. said:
Sad but true Garry that the kind and softly spoken often have much more to tell. You will his good qualities stored in memory for always and as your poem relates things left undone maybe there for a reason. An endearing read .
April 4th, 2017 16:10
Did he Fall or...... ?
Garry said:
I have to admit the librarian at school has told me my students are right to think i have issues. But what does she know.
April 4th, 2017 07:10
Garry said:
I have to admit the librarian at school has told me my students are right to think i have issues. But what does she know.
April 4th, 2017 07:10
Did he Fall or...... ?
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write even if the subject is macabre.
April 4th, 2017 01:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write even if the subject is macabre.
April 4th, 2017 01:52
Did he Fall or...... ?
WriteBeLight said:
It is colorful and with great rhyme, albeit, sad.
April 3rd, 2017 17:38
WriteBeLight said:
It is colorful and with great rhyme, albeit, sad.
April 3rd, 2017 17:38
Reaching out. (a haiku?)
Michael Edwards said:
Absolutely - it\'s spot on - keep em coming.
April 2nd, 2017 22:31
Michael Edwards said:
Absolutely - it\'s spot on - keep em coming.
April 2nd, 2017 22:31
Reaching out. (a haiku?)
Garry said:
Thank you. That was most informative. I will look up senryu and do more research on haikus.
Your support is much appreciated.
April 2nd, 2017 17:19
Garry said:
Thank you. That was most informative. I will look up senryu and do more research on haikus.
Your support is much appreciated.
April 2nd, 2017 17:19
Reaching out. (a haiku?)
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks GARRY ~ Great HAIKU ~ 17 syllables in three line 5~7~ 5 syllable pattern. Each line is complete in itself and there is an action (line one) and a reaction (line two) and a finality (line three). Strictly speaking because it is about people it is a SENRYU ~ but most MPS Members call all 5~7~5 three line ~ free verse (non~rhyming) poems HAIKU so it is OK. Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN (UK). Please check my poems ~ Thanks B
April 2nd, 2017 17:12
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks GARRY ~ Great HAIKU ~ 17 syllables in three line 5~7~ 5 syllable pattern. Each line is complete in itself and there is an action (line one) and a reaction (line two) and a finality (line three). Strictly speaking because it is about people it is a SENRYU ~ but most MPS Members call all 5~7~5 three line ~ free verse (non~rhyming) poems HAIKU so it is OK. Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN (UK). Please check my poems ~ Thanks B
April 2nd, 2017 17:12
To Sleep?
Goldfinch60 said:
Ah , a whisky drinker! My favourite is Laphroaig.
Good write.
April 2nd, 2017 00:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Ah , a whisky drinker! My favourite is Laphroaig.
Good write.
April 2nd, 2017 00:41
To Sleep?
Garry said:
I am out of whisky so recently my tipple has been a glass of homemade mead. A light refreshing version based on Sima, a Finnish mead drunk usually at mid summer festivals
April 1st, 2017 09:31
Garry said:
I am out of whisky so recently my tipple has been a glass of homemade mead. A light refreshing version based on Sima, a Finnish mead drunk usually at mid summer festivals
April 1st, 2017 09:31
To Sleep?
WriteBeLight said:
Very interesting Garry. I am not a whiskey drinker. But, I understand it is very warming on its own. Nice rhyme.
April 1st, 2017 06:06
WriteBeLight said:
Very interesting Garry. I am not a whiskey drinker. But, I understand it is very warming on its own. Nice rhyme.
April 1st, 2017 06:06
To Sleep?
Fay Slimm. said:
A snack as you described sounds like sleep will not be far away Garry.
April 1st, 2017 04:35
Fay Slimm. said:
A snack as you described sounds like sleep will not be far away Garry.
April 1st, 2017 04:35
To Sleep?
Michael Edwards said:
Pills and alcohol - you\'ll sleep well. Nice write.
April 1st, 2017 03:43
Michael Edwards said:
Pills and alcohol - you\'ll sleep well. Nice write.
April 1st, 2017 03:43
I Wish My Friends Were Like sausages
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good fun write. My excuse for having a Full English Breakfast is arriving this weekend my son, partner and grandson are coming up for the weekend so Full English here I come!
April 1st, 2017 00:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good fun write. My excuse for having a Full English Breakfast is arriving this weekend my son, partner and grandson are coming up for the weekend so Full English here I come!
April 1st, 2017 00:58
I Wish My Friends Were Like sausages
Philip said:
A very tasty poem well done. Phil.G.
March 31st, 2017 16:10
Philip said:
A very tasty poem well done. Phil.G.
March 31st, 2017 16:10
I Wish My Friends Were Like sausages
WriteBeLight said:
The students have wild imaginations! This is a very clever piece that rhymes so well. I like the chicken kind with seasonings. :)
March 31st, 2017 15:46
WriteBeLight said:
The students have wild imaginations! This is a very clever piece that rhymes so well. I like the chicken kind with seasonings. :)
March 31st, 2017 15:46
I Wish My Friends Were Like sausages
Michael Edwards said:
Great fun read - taken out of their skins (why are their skins so tough?) and chopped up, into the fry pan and simmered with tomato paste, tomato chunks herbs and seasoning they make a great sauce with pasta for a quick meal. Amazing what you get out of this site.
March 31st, 2017 15:16
Michael Edwards said:
Great fun read - taken out of their skins (why are their skins so tough?) and chopped up, into the fry pan and simmered with tomato paste, tomato chunks herbs and seasoning they make a great sauce with pasta for a quick meal. Amazing what you get out of this site.
March 31st, 2017 15:16
I Wish My Friends Were Like sausages
Garry said:
Broski. Never been called that before. I shall check it out with the kids at school.
I too think food, including sausages, rocks. I really don\'t want to eat my friends though, cooked or otherwise, no matter what my pupils might think
March 31st, 2017 13:35
Garry said:
Broski. Never been called that before. I shall check it out with the kids at school.
I too think food, including sausages, rocks. I really don\'t want to eat my friends though, cooked or otherwise, no matter what my pupils might think
March 31st, 2017 13:35
I Wish My Friends Were Like sausages
Discreation said:
You nailed it broski. Food rocks.
March 31st, 2017 13:29
Discreation said:
You nailed it broski. Food rocks.
March 31st, 2017 13:29
To a Road Sign.
Michael Edwards said:
Love this.
Let me assure you, something I\'d hate,
is to bear the name of the Bogside Estate
I\'d rather be known as Pilkington Flinck
A far better name I\'m inclined to think.
March 31st, 2017 04:46
Michael Edwards said:
Love this.
Let me assure you, something I\'d hate,
is to bear the name of the Bogside Estate
I\'d rather be known as Pilkington Flinck
A far better name I\'m inclined to think.
March 31st, 2017 04:46
I Looked Away
lovelydarkanddeep said:
wow this made me stop and think for a minute. thank you, at this moment, this was exactly what i needed!
March 30th, 2017 17:49
lovelydarkanddeep said:
wow this made me stop and think for a minute. thank you, at this moment, this was exactly what i needed!
March 30th, 2017 17:49
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