Comments received on poems by Garry
The Shadow of my Passing
swingline said:
Must stand under light to cast a shadow .
May 10th, 2017 19:57
swingline said:
Must stand under light to cast a shadow .
May 10th, 2017 19:57
Haiku. Growing darkness
P.X. Vexxus said:
Scary thought. To be completely consumed, enveloped by the thoughts of taking someone\'s life. It can be a maddening, sickening feeling. Driving you to insanity, or even, to murder. Keep your mind busy ~
May 9th, 2017 00:28
P.X. Vexxus said:
Scary thought. To be completely consumed, enveloped by the thoughts of taking someone\'s life. It can be a maddening, sickening feeling. Driving you to insanity, or even, to murder. Keep your mind busy ~
May 9th, 2017 00:28
Haiku. Growing darkness
swingline said:
You missed your calling
Too long in stalling
Should have joined the Royal Marines
They like their men , tall , dark and mean
May 8th, 2017 18:58
swingline said:
You missed your calling
Too long in stalling
Should have joined the Royal Marines
They like their men , tall , dark and mean
May 8th, 2017 18:58
Just Don\'t Film It
Mizzy said:
I laughed so much. This is my kind of poem. Wicked.
May 6th, 2017 17:32
Mizzy said:
I laughed so much. This is my kind of poem. Wicked.
May 6th, 2017 17:32
Just Don\'t Film It
Garry said:
Quite like the friday and weekend verses. Thank you for the input. Really appreciate seeing how other minds work. Cheers. G
May 6th, 2017 16:15
Garry said:
Quite like the friday and weekend verses. Thank you for the input. Really appreciate seeing how other minds work. Cheers. G
May 6th, 2017 16:15
Just Don\'t Film It
Garry said:
He is writing it on Friday. So tense is fine, isn\'t it?
May 6th, 2017 10:59
Garry said:
He is writing it on Friday. So tense is fine, isn\'t it?
May 6th, 2017 10:59
Dancing Eyes
JustABird said:
You can feel the reminiscence in this one. I like that.
May 5th, 2017 09:27
JustABird said:
You can feel the reminiscence in this one. I like that.
May 5th, 2017 09:27
You Left Me
JustABird said:
Haha. Your reply to that other comment is almost as funny as your poem. A hoe for a ho?
May 5th, 2017 09:17
JustABird said:
Haha. Your reply to that other comment is almost as funny as your poem. A hoe for a ho?
May 5th, 2017 09:17
Other People\'s Voices
JustABird said:
I took this to mean romancing her with other people\'s words. I got a vision of Cyrano de Bergerac. And that all her other choices are hidden because you\'re standing in their way. Seems pretty deep to me whichever way you meant it.
May 5th, 2017 09:15
JustABird said:
I took this to mean romancing her with other people\'s words. I got a vision of Cyrano de Bergerac. And that all her other choices are hidden because you\'re standing in their way. Seems pretty deep to me whichever way you meant it.
May 5th, 2017 09:15
Other People\'s Voices
Garry said:
WBL, possibly.
Or she could know he\'s lying and just be using him until something comes along.
Or perhaps the 2nd 2 lines are the cause and the first 2 the effect.
Ie, if someone is halfhearted in dealing with their lover it is because they know their loveris only waiting for something better. (this only just occurred to me.)
May 4th, 2017 01:35
Garry said:
WBL, possibly.
Or she could know he\'s lying and just be using him until something comes along.
Or perhaps the 2nd 2 lines are the cause and the first 2 the effect.
Ie, if someone is halfhearted in dealing with their lover it is because they know their loveris only waiting for something better. (this only just occurred to me.)
May 4th, 2017 01:35
The Last Goodbye
swingline said:
Perhaps you could do those things alone in remembrance of him . After my father died I went fishing alone on the lake he grew up on as a boy , fished as a man and later left in memory to me his being in every creek and point and mountain . As I passed by I felt his soul accompanying me and comforting me and letting me know he is never gone .
May 3rd, 2017 19:37
swingline said:
Perhaps you could do those things alone in remembrance of him . After my father died I went fishing alone on the lake he grew up on as a boy , fished as a man and later left in memory to me his being in every creek and point and mountain . As I passed by I felt his soul accompanying me and comforting me and letting me know he is never gone .
May 3rd, 2017 19:37
Other People\'s Voices
WriteBeLight said:
Very good Garry. Does she know the serenade is coming from other people? If she does, then she is not very deep at all :) Just lazy.
May 3rd, 2017 15:48
WriteBeLight said:
Very good Garry. Does she know the serenade is coming from other people? If she does, then she is not very deep at all :) Just lazy.
May 3rd, 2017 15:48
Other People\'s Voices
swingline said:
Hmm , I can\'t sing so what are her choices ?
May 3rd, 2017 08:03
swingline said:
Hmm , I can\'t sing so what are her choices ?
May 3rd, 2017 08:03
Other People\'s Voices
Garry said:
And the lucky winner of todays \"Spot the deliberate mistake\" is Ephraim Crud.
Thank you for that. Mistake corrected, cheers
May 3rd, 2017 06:52
Garry said:
And the lucky winner of todays \"Spot the deliberate mistake\" is Ephraim Crud.
Thank you for that. Mistake corrected, cheers
May 3rd, 2017 06:52
Other People\'s Voices
Michael Edwards said:
Proverbial with deep dark overtones - yes I\'m with you Garry
May 3rd, 2017 04:12
Michael Edwards said:
Proverbial with deep dark overtones - yes I\'m with you Garry
May 3rd, 2017 04:12
Hand in hand
Garry said:
Written in response to a twitter feed I follow #horrorprompt.
May 3rd, 2017 03:41
Garry said:
Written in response to a twitter feed I follow #horrorprompt.
May 3rd, 2017 03:41
Hand in hand
swingline said:
That relationship I\'m sorry to say was cut short . I heard that happened on the Isle of Arms . I heard of stole my heart but arm ?
May 3rd, 2017 02:21
swingline said:
That relationship I\'m sorry to say was cut short . I heard that happened on the Isle of Arms . I heard of stole my heart but arm ?
May 3rd, 2017 02:21
You Left Me
Garry said:
You do realise that laughing at someone being murdered is so weird. Join the club.
May 1st, 2017 05:27
Garry said:
You do realise that laughing at someone being murdered is so weird. Join the club.
May 1st, 2017 05:27
Dancing Eyes
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Engaging style, realistic yet poetic. Eyes eh. Interesting real life love story. Kudos.
U r most welcome to review my latest poem too. Pleeez do.
April 26th, 2017 01:34
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Engaging style, realistic yet poetic. Eyes eh. Interesting real life love story. Kudos.
U r most welcome to review my latest poem too. Pleeez do.
April 26th, 2017 01:34
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