Comments received on poems by Garry
I hope my Death Comes Unannounced
Doggerel Dave said:
Precisely.... over and out.....
March 22nd, 2022 20:05
Doggerel Dave said:
Precisely.... over and out.....
March 22nd, 2022 20:05
I hope my Death Comes Unannounced
orchidee said:
Aww, you\'ll be missed by some.
\'Live so as to be missed\' (Robert Murray McCheyne).
A bit double-edged. Did he mean \'Live so as to be un-noticed\' or \'Live, so that when you\'re gone, folk will miss you\'? I prefer the latter explanation.
March 22nd, 2022 09:11
orchidee said:
Aww, you\'ll be missed by some.
\'Live so as to be missed\' (Robert Murray McCheyne).
A bit double-edged. Did he mean \'Live so as to be un-noticed\' or \'Live, so that when you\'re gone, folk will miss you\'? I prefer the latter explanation.
March 22nd, 2022 09:11
I hope my Death Comes Unannounced
L. B. Mek said:
thanks for the chuckles
it was a fun rea...
(nope, false alarm
I\'m still around)
March 22nd, 2022 08:00
L. B. Mek said:
thanks for the chuckles
it was a fun rea...
(nope, false alarm
I\'m still around)
March 22nd, 2022 08:00
All Downhill from Here
Goldfinch60 said:
May that path go on for many many more miles Garry.
My wife and I used to walk the Yorkshire Dales back in the day and we have climbed Whernside and Pen-Y-Ghent but we did not do Ingleborough for some reason.
Andy
March 21st, 2022 02:05
Goldfinch60 said:
May that path go on for many many more miles Garry.
My wife and I used to walk the Yorkshire Dales back in the day and we have climbed Whernside and Pen-Y-Ghent but we did not do Ingleborough for some reason.
Andy
March 21st, 2022 02:05
The Last Waltz
Christina8 said:
Oh this is sweet. I love the thought of one last waltz....Great job Garry!!
March 17th, 2022 10:22
Christina8 said:
Oh this is sweet. I love the thought of one last waltz....Great job Garry!!
March 17th, 2022 10:22
My funeral, My Choice .
L. B. Mek said:
your vibrant wit and personality
just shines through, brilliantly..
well executed, such a fun read
thank you!
(fyi, not sure but there might be a typo in this line:
\'I will I fact you all have to cry \')
March 17th, 2022 03:59
L. B. Mek said:
your vibrant wit and personality
just shines through, brilliantly..
well executed, such a fun read
thank you!
(fyi, not sure but there might be a typo in this line:
\'I will I fact you all have to cry \')
March 17th, 2022 03:59
My funeral, My Choice .
Christina8 said:
You SHOULD get to choose! I too have always have that looming fear of a premature death and have arranged for mine. I agree that people should celebrate your life!! Not mourn your death....
March 16th, 2022 18:49
Christina8 said:
You SHOULD get to choose! I too have always have that looming fear of a premature death and have arranged for mine. I agree that people should celebrate your life!! Not mourn your death....
March 16th, 2022 18:49
Night Rhythms
burning-embers said:
This does everything for the subject.
Why do i keep dozing off?
July 5th, 2017 04:42
burning-embers said:
This does everything for the subject.
Why do i keep dozing off?
July 5th, 2017 04:42
Night Rhythms
Michael Edwards said:
My kind of poem - succinct, well constructed, thought provoking, and a darn good read.
July 4th, 2017 23:32
Michael Edwards said:
My kind of poem - succinct, well constructed, thought provoking, and a darn good read.
July 4th, 2017 23:32
Night Rhythms
Fay Slimm. said:
This calming read is the last of my day - - Thanks Gary for a gentle reminder that night\'s slower rhythms are a gift indeed - - - here\'s wishing you sweet dreams too.
July 4th, 2017 16:42
Fay Slimm. said:
This calming read is the last of my day - - Thanks Gary for a gentle reminder that night\'s slower rhythms are a gift indeed - - - here\'s wishing you sweet dreams too.
July 4th, 2017 16:42
Ruins?
Louis Gibbs said:
Your few well chosen words speak volumes ... paint a nostalgic picture. I like this type of poem, well done, Garry!
June 24th, 2017 09:42
Louis Gibbs said:
Your few well chosen words speak volumes ... paint a nostalgic picture. I like this type of poem, well done, Garry!
June 24th, 2017 09:42
Ruins?
Michael Edwards said:
I read the first line and immediately Nina Simone singing \'I think its goin\' to rain today\' came to mind. this is a super haunting piece - going into my favourites
June 24th, 2017 09:05
Michael Edwards said:
I read the first line and immediately Nina Simone singing \'I think its goin\' to rain today\' came to mind. this is a super haunting piece - going into my favourites
June 24th, 2017 09:05
Stealing Mountains
Louis Gibbs said:
I like this appealing, well formatted poem, Garry, and look forward to more!
June 11th, 2017 10:12
Louis Gibbs said:
I like this appealing, well formatted poem, Garry, and look forward to more!
June 11th, 2017 10:12
Stealing Mountains
swingline said:
I thought this could be about strup mining . Kentucky or West Virginia , where they strip away huge mountains , fill in river valleys with the debris . And you wind up with a flat landscape with no soil value unfit for growing anything but scrub pine .
June 11th, 2017 08:00
swingline said:
I thought this could be about strup mining . Kentucky or West Virginia , where they strip away huge mountains , fill in river valleys with the debris . And you wind up with a flat landscape with no soil value unfit for growing anything but scrub pine .
June 11th, 2017 08:00
Breakfast.
Goldfinch60 said:
Everything in moderation is my belief but I always have muesli for breakfast and I look forward to when my son and his wife come to us for a weekend when I can indulge in a full English Breakfast.
June 11th, 2017 01:02
Goldfinch60 said:
Everything in moderation is my belief but I always have muesli for breakfast and I look forward to when my son and his wife come to us for a weekend when I can indulge in a full English Breakfast.
June 11th, 2017 01:02
Breakfast.
Augustus said:
Not familiar with bacon butty. Sounds decadent. Here\'s to your health!
June 10th, 2017 09:49
Augustus said:
Not familiar with bacon butty. Sounds decadent. Here\'s to your health!
June 10th, 2017 09:49
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