Comments received on poems by Bibbeck
Loveless
Kesha said:
I really enjoyed this piece quite a bit! It\'s always sad when a relationship reaches that point and is no longer happy.
August 4th, 2017 17:04
Kesha said:
I really enjoyed this piece quite a bit! It\'s always sad when a relationship reaches that point and is no longer happy.
August 4th, 2017 17:04
Loveless
FredPeyer said:
Well written Bibbeck, one does get the feeling of two ex-lovers, now more like strangers \'sleeping with eyes wide open\'.
August 4th, 2017 16:07
FredPeyer said:
Well written Bibbeck, one does get the feeling of two ex-lovers, now more like strangers \'sleeping with eyes wide open\'.
August 4th, 2017 16:07
Loveless
myself and me said:
Relationship is a special kind of business involving two, it has up and downs, all depends how you run it. Nice writing.
August 4th, 2017 15:00
myself and me said:
Relationship is a special kind of business involving two, it has up and downs, all depends how you run it. Nice writing.
August 4th, 2017 15:00
My Shadow
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, nightmares can be so shocking sometimes.
July 27th, 2017 02:39
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, nightmares can be so shocking sometimes.
July 27th, 2017 02:39
The Runner
FredPeyer said:
Bibbeck you won! Great Poem!
I used to run cross country and distance races in my teens and and you reminded me of the feeling of coming in first.
July 2nd, 2017 17:36
FredPeyer said:
Bibbeck you won! Great Poem!
I used to run cross country and distance races in my teens and and you reminded me of the feeling of coming in first.
July 2nd, 2017 17:36
Oh Baby!
FredPeyer said:
It is a little bit dark, but good. And don\'t worry, I don\'t know where half of my stuff comes from.
June 21st, 2017 20:29
FredPeyer said:
It is a little bit dark, but good. And don\'t worry, I don\'t know where half of my stuff comes from.
June 21st, 2017 20:29
Oh Baby!
onepauly said:
great ending
I\'m not saying its good or bad
its just a great ending
June 21st, 2017 18:31
onepauly said:
great ending
I\'m not saying its good or bad
its just a great ending
June 21st, 2017 18:31
Oh Baby!
P.H.Rose said:
This is brilliant I love it
Very sad subject but
Does not detract from
It\'s quality... well done
June 21st, 2017 16:47
P.H.Rose said:
This is brilliant I love it
Very sad subject but
Does not detract from
It\'s quality... well done
June 21st, 2017 16:47
Train Journey
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. It is great to watch people on the trains, and with the UK trains we have plenty of time so to do!
June 14th, 2017 00:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. It is great to watch people on the trains, and with the UK trains we have plenty of time so to do!
June 14th, 2017 00:35
Nightmares
The Invisible said:
Woah.. You are really an amazing writer. I love this poem I mean yes it is somewhat dark but like it\'s usually the dark times we shine the brightest. Hope you keep writing, you got the talent you should let others see that.
June 2nd, 2017 16:25
The Invisible said:
Woah.. You are really an amazing writer. I love this poem I mean yes it is somewhat dark but like it\'s usually the dark times we shine the brightest. Hope you keep writing, you got the talent you should let others see that.
June 2nd, 2017 16:25
Growing Old
Goldfinch60 said:
Age is wonderful, looking back on your life you can chose to remember the best bits an the best bits far out weigh the bad bits.
Good write.
May 9th, 2017 01:02
Goldfinch60 said:
Age is wonderful, looking back on your life you can chose to remember the best bits an the best bits far out weigh the bad bits.
Good write.
May 9th, 2017 01:02
Growing Old
swingline said:
Old age beats dying young . When you\'re
young you try to stay up all day and night . When you\'re old you stay up all night and day . The young think old people can\'t see . Old prople don\'t want to see . When you\'re young you ask mommy to tell you a tale . Then when she get\'s old she tells you the same tale 10,000 times . Young people wear t-shirts saying they will inherit the world . Old people go to casinos wearing t-shirts saying I\'m spending my kid\'s inheritance . Young people eat raisins . Old people eat prunes . When asked , the old say you\'re as young as you feel , but lately I haven\'t felt anything .Young people drive curvaceous sports cars . Old people drive RV\'s as big as a bus with a sign on the back,\"Ashes to Ashes , Dust to Dust , It\'s Las Vegas baby or bust.\"
May 8th, 2017 16:50
swingline said:
Old age beats dying young . When you\'re
young you try to stay up all day and night . When you\'re old you stay up all night and day . The young think old people can\'t see . Old prople don\'t want to see . When you\'re young you ask mommy to tell you a tale . Then when she get\'s old she tells you the same tale 10,000 times . Young people wear t-shirts saying they will inherit the world . Old people go to casinos wearing t-shirts saying I\'m spending my kid\'s inheritance . Young people eat raisins . Old people eat prunes . When asked , the old say you\'re as young as you feel , but lately I haven\'t felt anything .Young people drive curvaceous sports cars . Old people drive RV\'s as big as a bus with a sign on the back,\"Ashes to Ashes , Dust to Dust , It\'s Las Vegas baby or bust.\"
May 8th, 2017 16:50
Nightmares
MendedFences27 said:
This is very well done, especially for such an early age. You most definitely should continue writing. Not too dark at all, just a coming to terms with our own thoughts. I think everyone has passed through such a stage in life, where it\'s difficult to face what is before us. Some dream or have nightmares, some write about them, some do other things. Good use of the 3rd person, here. In 1st person it would have lost much of its impact. - Phil A.
May 6th, 2017 20:32
MendedFences27 said:
This is very well done, especially for such an early age. You most definitely should continue writing. Not too dark at all, just a coming to terms with our own thoughts. I think everyone has passed through such a stage in life, where it\'s difficult to face what is before us. Some dream or have nightmares, some write about them, some do other things. Good use of the 3rd person, here. In 1st person it would have lost much of its impact. - Phil A.
May 6th, 2017 20:32
Nightmares
swingline said:
This is a powerful look into our nightmares from youth to adulthood . Maybe we have been able to stuff them into our subconscience but the fears are still there lurking waiting for an opportunity .
May 6th, 2017 13:36
swingline said:
This is a powerful look into our nightmares from youth to adulthood . Maybe we have been able to stuff them into our subconscience but the fears are still there lurking waiting for an opportunity .
May 6th, 2017 13:36
Nightmares
Ace-of-spades said:
This is beautiful... Dreams are scary things that haunt the dark for some.
May 6th, 2017 12:35
Ace-of-spades said:
This is beautiful... Dreams are scary things that haunt the dark for some.
May 6th, 2017 12:35
Behind the Farce
WriteBeLight said:
I can relate to this poem. Great job. Reality is not sweet. It is very real and can be so full of bitterness. Try to focus on the sweet, as there is some there as well. Great poem.
May 5th, 2017 05:38
WriteBeLight said:
I can relate to this poem. Great job. Reality is not sweet. It is very real and can be so full of bitterness. Try to focus on the sweet, as there is some there as well. Great poem.
May 5th, 2017 05:38
The Storm
Bibbeck said:
Thanks Swingline. I\'m the opposite, I love the storm, and I\'m fascinated by the lightening, but the boom of the thunder... aarrghh!
May 4th, 2017 15:50
Bibbeck said:
Thanks Swingline. I\'m the opposite, I love the storm, and I\'m fascinated by the lightening, but the boom of the thunder... aarrghh!
May 4th, 2017 15:50
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