Comments received on poems by Bibbeck



MASTERMIND
Goldfinch60 said:

There was a time
When you could Double Your Money
As you Take Your Pick
On Criss Cross Quiz
But now you can Only Connect
When you win University Challenge.

April 10th, 2018 01:21

MASTERMIND
Maxine Smith said:

Great write.

April 9th, 2018 16:23

SALT IN HER WOUNDS
Daveyboyz said:

Short, sweet and nicely said.

April 8th, 2018 00:45

SALT IN HER WOUNDS
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write.

April 8th, 2018 00:42

SALT IN HER WOUNDS
Michael Edwards said:

A beauty of a write - and as Lawless says it\'s so refreshing especially so since it is about something other than personal angst which seems to predominate much of the work posted - please do write more.

April 8th, 2018 00:37

Snowy Day
grange_m said:

Love the poem ! Being from

Derbyshire I can relate to this’s much.

April 8th, 2018 00:04

Help for Heroes
WriteBeLight said:

Great write!

August 25th, 2017 12:19

Help for Heroes
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write and tribute. As Fred has said ALL are heroes, those that send them to war are to be despised.

August 25th, 2017 00:47

Help for Heroes
dusk arising said:

I think that if you spoke to the returning heros my friend you would hear stories of their heros who came home in bags with parts missing or who disappeared. Thats if you can find one who is willing to talk about it with someone who didnt go through it. Often you will hear a veteran say he wears a medal for his dead colleagues not himself. A respectful and deeply meaningful piece of writing my friend.

August 24th, 2017 19:33

Help for Heroes
FredPeyer said:

Bibbeck, this is a beautiful ode to the fallen soldier. In my mind they are ALL heroes.

August 24th, 2017 18:25

Shattered Reality
FredPeyer said:

Dark and abstract, just the way I like it! Maybe one day I will try my hands on an abstract write, but for now I think I better leave it to accomplished writers like you.

August 23rd, 2017 19:53

Shattered Reality
Egyptianqt79 said:

Beautifully written.

August 23rd, 2017 19:00

Snowy Day
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write but as far as I am concerned snow is best seen in pictures.

August 15th, 2017 00:35

Snowy Day
WriteBeLight said:

Brrrrr is right. But, it is hot and humid here so this is a refreshing read.

August 14th, 2017 15:42

Snowy Day
FredPeyer said:

Bibbeck, I used to live in Montreal. Love to look at snow, but believe me, Hawaii is better!
Love your poem though!

August 14th, 2017 15:10

Snowy Day
Heather T said:

Love this frosty work in the grip of Summer! Gives me something to look forward to. I enjoyed your playfulness with \"floating\" and \"droplets\".

August 14th, 2017 14:59

Ditty Lines
FredPeyer said:

There are gems in your ditty lines, Bibbeck!

August 13th, 2017 16:07

Katrina dials 911
Michael Edwards said:

Yes imaginative and a good write at that - enjoyed it Bibbeck.

August 13th, 2017 04:51

Katrina dials 911
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write. The people will always pull together when trouble looms.

August 13th, 2017 02:08

Katrina dials 911
O.G. Tone said:

Good one bro!!!

August 12th, 2017 22:19

Katrina dials 911
Accidental Poet said:

When compassion comes together in times of tragic losses, the world becomes closer to God. Great write Bibbeck.

August 12th, 2017 17:01

Katrina dials 911
FredPeyer said:

Quite imaginative bringing the two tragedies together, but then that is what a poet is all about.
Well written.

August 12th, 2017 16:50

Katrina dials 911
Louis Gibbs said:

A dark review of disasters well stated in your poem, Bibbeck! Strength does indeed grow from adversity.

August 12th, 2017 15:04

Loneliness
WriteBeLight said:

Very poignant!

August 7th, 2017 09:28

The Wood
Accidental Poet said:

Yes, trees have voices too. Great write.

August 6th, 2017 18:13

Loneliness
FredPeyer said:

Great writing, Bibbeck. I like how you alternate between low (tramp) and high (business), short (boy) and tall (man). Somehow you manage for the poem to be relevant to all of us.
I do like it.

August 6th, 2017 18:13

Loneliness
Accidental Poet said:

Some people can be their own worst enemy. Excellent poem.

August 6th, 2017 18:09

Autumnal
WriteBeLight said:

I used to not enjoy the Fall and Winter, but your poem reminds me how much I love the seasons!

August 6th, 2017 10:15

Autumnal
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, certainly better than the lesson.

August 6th, 2017 01:58

Autumnal
FredPeyer said:

You are painting a vivid word picture of autumn, I do like it. Brings up memories of the beautiful maple leaf colors every fall in Quebec.

August 5th, 2017 17:09

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