Comments received on poems by Bibbeck
Behind the Farce
swingline said:
The connection between mother and daughter is an unbreakable bond no matter what the circumstances of reality .
My sister died of breast cancer in 2005 and every year on the anniversary of her birthday mom always says ,\"It\'s Beverly\'s birthday today \" as if she was still alive .
Should utube the song ,\'Dancing on our graves\' by the Cave Singers .
May 3rd, 2017 19:02
swingline said:
The connection between mother and daughter is an unbreakable bond no matter what the circumstances of reality .
My sister died of breast cancer in 2005 and every year on the anniversary of her birthday mom always says ,\"It\'s Beverly\'s birthday today \" as if she was still alive .
Should utube the song ,\'Dancing on our graves\' by the Cave Singers .
May 3rd, 2017 19:02
On the Other Side
swingline said:
Sadly it happens eveyday where children are discarded and abused and those in the best position to help could care less .
May 3rd, 2017 01:45
swingline said:
Sadly it happens eveyday where children are discarded and abused and those in the best position to help could care less .
May 3rd, 2017 01:45
On the Other Side
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write and so very true.
This need not happen in our world!
May 3rd, 2017 00:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write and so very true.
This need not happen in our world!
May 3rd, 2017 00:50
On the Other Side
LML said:
I\'ve felt a lot of that before the invisible unloved part
love your rhymes. Love this poem
May 2nd, 2017 16:36
LML said:
I\'ve felt a lot of that before the invisible unloved part
love your rhymes. Love this poem
May 2nd, 2017 16:36
Another Statistic
Bibbeck said:
Thanks. I couldn\'t have done it without outlet of my poetry.
April 29th, 2017 11:46
Bibbeck said:
Thanks. I couldn\'t have done it without outlet of my poetry.
April 29th, 2017 11:46
Silence!
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. Silence can be so powerful in our lives.
April 23rd, 2017 00:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. Silence can be so powerful in our lives.
April 23rd, 2017 00:53
Nuclear What?
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, if it happens the world is finished.
April 21st, 2017 00:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, if it happens the world is finished.
April 21st, 2017 00:40
Reality Check
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write but even if you take away the gun the memories still haunt you.
April 20th, 2017 01:07
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write but even if you take away the gun the memories still haunt you.
April 20th, 2017 01:07
Reality Check
Naeners said:
I really enjoyed this. It flows so smoothly and the power of it gets across quite well. Good work.
April 19th, 2017 15:33
Naeners said:
I really enjoyed this. It flows so smoothly and the power of it gets across quite well. Good work.
April 19th, 2017 15:33
Applying for a Rose
Garry said:
Veey good. Loved the structure and some lovely sounding phrases and great ideas
April 10th, 2017 15:19
Garry said:
Veey good. Loved the structure and some lovely sounding phrases and great ideas
April 10th, 2017 15:19
Applying for a Rose
Goldfinch60 said:
Good juxtaposition, reminded me of Henry Reeds poem \"Naming of Parts.
Very good write Bibbeck.
April 10th, 2017 03:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Good juxtaposition, reminded me of Henry Reeds poem \"Naming of Parts.
Very good write Bibbeck.
April 10th, 2017 03:41
Abstract
Bibbeck said:
Thanks all for your comments. I\'m flattered for being my first one published. I should\'ve stated that this was reflection on some 35 years ago (aged 15). I DID survive and break the chain \'mostly\' - this will become apparent through future publishing. I only wish I was strong enough to use experiences to guide others away from becoming abstract dust.
April 5th, 2017 14:50
Bibbeck said:
Thanks all for your comments. I\'m flattered for being my first one published. I should\'ve stated that this was reflection on some 35 years ago (aged 15). I DID survive and break the chain \'mostly\' - this will become apparent through future publishing. I only wish I was strong enough to use experiences to guide others away from becoming abstract dust.
April 5th, 2017 14:50
Abstract
Goldfinch60 said:
Sad emotive write, as WW has said break the chain and move forward
April 3rd, 2017 00:29
Goldfinch60 said:
Sad emotive write, as WW has said break the chain and move forward
April 3rd, 2017 00:29
Abstract
willyweed said:
all you can do is brake the chain. good write and welcome! ww
April 2nd, 2017 15:54
willyweed said:
all you can do is brake the chain. good write and welcome! ww
April 2nd, 2017 15:54
Abstract
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME BB # Thanks for your first and very poignant poem. All our backgrounds on MPS are different and some have very sad beginnings but have survived (just !). I was brought up in a working class home ~ not much LOLLY but a lot of LOVE ! I am grateful for that and empathise with you because of my lack of material things ! I have known people ~ who because of the lack of love in their childhood and teens ~ lost all hope and expired in abstract dust ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ BRIAN (UK) Please check my poems ~ Thanks B
April 2nd, 2017 09:39
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME BB # Thanks for your first and very poignant poem. All our backgrounds on MPS are different and some have very sad beginnings but have survived (just !). I was brought up in a working class home ~ not much LOLLY but a lot of LOVE ! I am grateful for that and empathise with you because of my lack of material things ! I have known people ~ who because of the lack of love in their childhood and teens ~ lost all hope and expired in abstract dust ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ BRIAN (UK) Please check my poems ~ Thanks B
April 2nd, 2017 09:39
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